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Posted: 9 years ago

Hola people... i know i know soch rhe hoge fir se aa gyi pakane... to sahi socha h tm logo ne... 😛 aa gyi fir se ek pyaar bhari kahani lke... 😳 tum lgo ko to pta h shant to mjhse baitha jata nhi h... jaise hi mishri waapas aaye mai bhi aa gyi 😉 chalo bhot bol lia maine ab suno... ye story jyada badi nhi h almost 5-6 part max... baaki mera khaali dimag jo khe... ur ha thoda rona vona pad sakta h isme... par will try to keep the tears at bay.

CHARACTER SKETCH

KABIR KUMAR - Dr kabir is a smart dashing doctor with a kindest heart... has a special place for kids and is adored by everyone. Being grown up with a single mother who is no more with him, he devotes most of his time to hospital. He craves for love but never is greedy for any relationship.

NISHA GANGWAL - A sincere girl of her small family, an obiedient daughter is ready to take the next step in her life. All set to marry a stranger, nisha is trying to figure out what she wanted to do with her life other than being in a marital unit. A girl who never tried to live fully has a complete opposite side in her but no one ever tried to uncover it.

Adheer - kabir's friend and only family... is a fun guy and has only one mission to loosen up kabir a little. He wants the best for his friend.

Daksh - a boy of 15, an imp character for the story...

Baki sab surprise package... not only for u for me too... 🤣

Edited by mansi_as18 - 8 years ago

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@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

PROLOGUE

A silhouette of a man was luring in the moonlight as she tried to raise her hand and call him for her help. A sharp pain shoot through her entire being and left her exhausted. "H...help...pls..." her voice was unidentifiable for herself. A warm liquid started to pour out in her surroundings and there was no one... no one for her help. Something red and black started filling her vision darkening the already dark night. She tried to keep her eyes open as they were heavy enough. Slowly slowly the pain started to subside, filling her with an emptyness. She was light headed... no she is dying... if death has a face then it is the most handsome face she has ever saw in her life time. A death with beauty... what else a girl of 24 need. Its all over in a minute and she was dead.

He looked at the raising hand and ran towards it. A thundering night signalling a heavy rain, he pulled her jacket to himself some more n sat by the pool of red liquid. It wasnt the most fascinating sight but was a sight to memorize due to the enchanting beauty lying in the most horrible condition one can imagine. A part of his heart shattered in zillion pieces with a sharp pain erupting in somewhere in his chest. May be death has engulfed a piece of his future in its depth.

Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago