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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: nibir143
Awesome update

thank u 😊

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: mishrialways
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mansi how do you always manage to leave me speechless
The update was amazing
kabir it seems that sometimes he makes some kind of emotional relation with his patients
daksh first and now nisha he have and feel some unknown connection with both of them

The entire talk of daksh and kabir was so nice really liked it

He feels connected and attracted to nisha

The pov of nisha was beautiful written
the pain can be seen even her inability to do things but still she felt him and hid warmth me near her

Adheer he knows kabir well

Waiting for next
still lot to know about all of them

thanks ritzy 😳

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Lovely update mansi!!!

Very nice start!

Totally loved how you described Kabir's thoughts when he was washing himself off Nisha's blood! Each word there gave the scene a beautiful touch! ❤️ also loved how he stopped himself from his chain of thoughts, when he thought of coloring his soul came to his mind!

Kabir - Daksh interaction, his past and how Kabir saved him, Kabir rambling about Daksh not taking his meds, him finding daksh intimidating 😆, Kabir's amusement on Daksh's fascination for romantic novels were nice moments. 👍🏼

Sister Angela informing about Nisha's medical complications, and the surgeries she has to undergo, Kabir doubting her chances of survival was very logical and sister Angela reprimanding him on bringing a new book for Daksh, him missing his mom and that 'u miss me too ' was too good! So, Kabir has a past too? Maybe that made him like this? 😳

Kabir wanting Nisha to get through all the surgeries, him wanting to see her awake and with him, and how he rebuked himself for his wayward thoughts were lovely! 👍🏼

Nisha's POV was damn good 😆 Her thinking of the guy's handsome face despite her condition was funny! 😆 Her thoughts were very well penned! 👍🏼

Glad that Nisha is recovering from her injuries (i was scared u might add a twist there 😆)

The kabir - adheer moment was nice! Kabir not so concerned of the ongoing rumours about him and Nisha, him wanting to shift Nisha to 18M and Adheer getting curious on his behaviour were again very nicely written moments!

The last lines of Kabir on how he is getting increasingly attracted towards her was an amazing way to end the update!

Waiting to see Daksh's reaction on seeing Nisha, their interactions and also for some sneek peek into Kabir's past 😉

Continue when free and thanks for pm 😊

P.S: nothing is wrong with your update Mansi! Its very rare that anything can go wrong! Its just that people might have exams or something. I'm very sorry too for such a late comment 😔

Edited by .vishrutha. - 9 years ago

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.
Lovely update mansi!!!
Very nice start!
Totally loved how you described Kabir's thoughts when he was washing himself off Nisha's blood! Each word there gave the scene a beautiful touch!❤️also loved how he stopped himself from his chain of thoughts, when he thought of coloring his soul came to his mind!
Kabir - Daksh interaction, his past and how Kabir saved him, Kabir rambling about Daksh not taking his meds, him finding daksh intimidating😆, Kabir's amusement on Daksh's fascination for romantic novels were nice moments.👍🏼
Sister Angela informing about Nisha's medical complications, and the surgeries she has to undergo, Kabir doubting her chances of survival was very logical and sister Angela reprimanding him on bringing a new book for Daksh, him missing his mom and that 'u miss me too ' was too good! So, Kabir has a past too? Maybe that made him like this?😳
Kabir wanting Nisha to get through all the surgeries, him wanting to see her awake and with him, and how he rebuked himself for his wayward thoughts were lovely!👍🏼
Nisha's POV was damn good😆Her thinking of the guy's handsome face despite her condition was funny!😆Her thoughts were very well penned!👍🏼
Glad that Nisha is recovering from her injuries (i was scared u might add a twist there😆)
The kabir - adheer moment was nice! Kabir not so concerned of the ongoing rumours about him and Nisha, him wanting to shift Nisha to 18M and Adheer getting curious on his behaviour were again very nicely written moments!
The last lines of Kabir on how he is getting increasingly attracted towards her was an amazing way to end the update!
Waiting to see Daksh's reaction on seeing Nisha, their interactions and also for some sneek peek into Kabir's past😉
Continue when free and thanks for pm😊

P.S: nothing is wrong with your update Mansi! Its very rare that anything can go wrong! Its just that people might have exams or something. I'm very sorry too for such a late comment😔

thank u vvishru.. was waiting for ur comment... u know 😊 will give a sneak peak in his past soon 😉

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ANUSKA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Another amazing update of urs mansi this one is really very nice..❤️

Wonderful...👏

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: naucfan
Another amazing update of urs mansi this one is really very nice..❤️
Wonderful...👏

thank u aanz..

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Amina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Awesome update😊
Loved the POV's. It described everything really well😊

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Nibirlove_amu
Awesome update😊
Loved the POV's. It described everything really well😊

thanks amz

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Amina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Awesome update😊
I Read all in one go. Its awesome

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arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Aaj phirse koi line quote nahin kar pa rahi toh I m just going to mention the parts I loved😉

Part 1- Enthralling chapter😃

Very intriguing 😳

So Kabir is a doctor and is friends with Ananya and Adheer😊

Love your description of Kabir and Adheer when they enter the night club😆 That line about them being smoking hot pieces of male specimen really cracked me up🤣 Girls going beserk seing them🤣

Love how Kabir threatened to propose to Ananya in order to push his friend to confess his feelings😆 Nice trick😆

Love the way u penned down Kabir's thoughts and his yearning to be in love and have someone beside him👏👏👏

That part where Kabir pecks Ananya's cheek to annoy Adheer and then does it again to tease him more was hilarious and adorable😳😳

Kabir calling Ananya "my love" was just hilarious🤣 He is a pure K leaving no chance to annoy his friend🤣

Love Kabir's reaction when Maira entered😆 Bechara choked on his drink😆

Love how Kabir explained to Maira that he doesnt love her😊

Love that part where Kabir spots Nisha (well I m already assuming her name is Nisha since its a Nibir story😆) on the road. His emotions while he is looking at this amlost lifeless figure are described so well👏 Love that line- So beautiful yet so painful ❤️

Also love the fact that even though he is a doctor and he is used to seeing deaths and this girl is a mere stranger to him, his mind is occupied with her thoughts and what is she doesnt make it😳

The fact that he is so concerned about her and his enamoured by he beauty and he wants her to wake up is indicative of his attraction and perhaps a deeper connection to her😳

His thoughts at that point are beautifully penned down👏

Am intrigued to know about this scar of the past which is mentioned😉. But I m sure u will reveal it soon😃

All in all, a lovely chapter

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago