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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Fantastic update mansi👍🏼
wow !!!! daksh write stories or love to read about literature ... lovely
beautifully described kabir daksh relation or nibir feelings to each other ... loved it ...❤️ ❤️ ❤️
cont soon

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

I'll do postmortem of ur story later bt first have a look on my FF TOO DEAR 😊

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

here nothing is wrong with ur story dear...
everything is just perfectly set in place

let me start commenting on ur character sketch ...
it was fab..ALL characters were well described.
with added surprise package...🤣

coming to the prologue

that was interesting... building up more curiosity...

and lastly

About 1&2nd chap.
Story as well as Kabir&Nisha' POV were well written.
I must say I to enjoyed reading dis story.

AAG DONO TARAF BARABAR KI LAGI H ...coz.Nisha k dimag se b wo chehra ni jara na hi kabir k dimag se...
cs .m waiting kab nisha will open her eyes TO BECOME *NIBIR*

THANX DR.MANSI...
now m getting dis point y readers complaining DAT my chapters of story r TOO small 😉

Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago

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Anmol

@Anmol333

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Wow wow wow mansi another amazing update

As usual beautifully written 👏 👏 👏 👏

Kabir's POV was awesome he was thinking about nisha only very nicely written and then entry of Daksh... Kabir and daksh bonding awesomely portrait 😊

Then Nisha's POV another presentation of your amazing writing skills she want to wake up but can't and remembering about stranger was awesome😳

Adheer and kabir scene was very funny and nice 😆

This is very mysterious and interesting update 😊

Now my doubt when kabir said I miss you mom then a "you miss me too" voice come what was that???? I don't understand... Something in past ???

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Res
Don't known when i will unres 😕
Sorry in advance 😉

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Niharika

@Niha0606

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

u know abb thak ka meri favourite story hai DESTINED TOGETHER but after this update i am just awww after this story

kabiraa in doctor apron

i am going to faint imagining it😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

loved loved Nisha's pov ...i think every girl will think the same after seeing kabiraa😛

daksh ...is me 😆😆😆over romantic genre😆i think he will bring nibir together😉😉😉

lagtha hai nisha ka jagda hua hai apne parivaar ke saath

kabir-daksh conversation was simply cute and sweet😃

kabir's POV the best part

P.S:Nothing is wrong with the updates dear ...i know writer's do feel bad if their is no enough recognition ...but trust me everyone love love love love love love love love love love love love love love

reading ur updates😃infact will wait for them eagerly😃but u know naa it's high time for exams and importantly entrance tests...issliye kam comments mil rahi hai ...aur forum bhi bhooth bhagla ban chuki hai...ek baar sab khatham hone dho paagal family will be back 😃

just remember ur stories and updates are really amazing dil se sab bhol rahi hu😃

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Res

unres

mansi how do you always manage to leave me speechless

The update was amazing

kabir it seems that sometimes he makes some kind of emotional relation with his patients

daksh first and now nisha he have and feel some unknown connection with both of them

The entire talk of daksh and kabir was so nice really liked it

He feels connected and attracted to nisha

The pov of nisha was beautiful written

the pain can be seen even her inability to do things but still she felt him and hid warmth me near her

Adheer he knows kabir well

Waiting for next

still lot to know about all of them

Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago

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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

res!! will unres as soon as i read the update!!

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Wow Amazing Update Mansi...👏👏

Daksh is so cute...his story is published in magazine...thats mean he is very much talented...😊
Kabiraa & Dakhsh's bonding is great...😃

Kabiraa is taking extra care of his mystery girl...😳...he is already thinking about Nishu so much...Nishu ko jab hosh ayega tab Kabiraa kya karega...😉

Nishu's pov was mindblowing...👏👏...u wrote it beautifully...👏👏...even in this state Nishu is thinking about Kabiraa...

Adheer is so funny...😆

Now Nishu us shifted in Dakhsh's room...😊

Very interesting update...continue soon...thanx for the pm...😊

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shrutigaur37

@shrutigaur37

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

fantabulous update
every feeling is perfectly moulded into words..
daksh n Kabir scene was s superb
Kabir n Nisha's POV-mind blowing
dere is intense feeling of care in kabir for nisha which is beautifully portrayed
n even in dis condition nisha's thoughts a about Kabir shows her first sight love..
waiting wen nisha'll in conscious state

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