Wonderful update mansi!
Very nice start!
The Kabir-Adheer convo in the start, Adheer trying to convince a tired Kabir to come with him to the club and his monologue on how determined he was to hook up Kabir with someone, gave a nice insight to the friendship they shared.
The club description, the small Adheer-Ananya moment, the flashback of how Kabir got them together, him teasing Adheer by kissing Ananya's cheek were lovely moments!
The description of the tlc that Kabir craved for was written so amazingly well by you! ❤️
Kabir's reaction on hearing Maria's name, their convo that followed were well written. 👍🏼
Glad that Kabir cleared it to her that he does not reciprocate her feelings and even more glad that she left it at that and did not force herself on him! 😆
Liked the suspense you created about that mysterious boy, for whom Kabir is so worried, in the next scene.
Kabir first smacking Adheer for bringing him to the club and then blaming himself for the boy's condition was sad! 😔. Again, a well written scene!
Kabir's panic stricken state while driving back to the hospital and he trying to calm himself down, him seeing a badly injured person in the middle of the road, his realisation that its a girl and he admiring her beauty despite her injured face, then chiding himself on getting lost in her instead of rushing her to the hospital, him taking her to the hospital and then calling the docs to the OT were wonderful moments! 👏The best part was how you showed that he did this all mechanically! It showed that instant connect he felt with this stranger!
The next Kabir-sister Angela scene was good too. Liked how you showed that slight shock in sister Angela when Kabir asked her to look after the girl in the OT! 👍🏼
Waiting to know about that boy and Kabir's past!
Also, hoping the girl will be alright as we know who it is.
Please continue soon and thanks for pm 😊
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