Nibir ts - **CINDERELLA** epilogoue on page 15 [completed] - Page 9

Originally posted by: Amina...

<font color="#9966ff" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">Awe !!!
Such A Cute Update It Was😳😛😳
So Beautiful
So Lovely❤️❤️
So Dreamy
So Sweet😳😳
So Beautifully Written 👏

OUTSTANDING👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

I M Feeling Like , Like In A Beautiful Fairy Tale , Where Everything Is Perfect ... Like A Person's Most Beautiful Dream

Loved It Sooo Much Mansi ... You Are Amazing Dear⭐️👏⭐️
Thanks For Writing This ... But I Wanna Read More Of It , Plz Plz Plz Write An Epilogue😛😳😛</font>

thanks ami.. yes will give u an epilogue 😉

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Wow fabulous👏

thanks

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Beautiful update!

Kabir's feelings, eagerness, determination and at the same time dissapointment on not finding his princess yet, was so beautifully written! 👏

Kirti helping Kabir to find his princess was a very nice moment!

Kabir forgetting his keys and coming back to the academy to fetch it was a good idea to make him meet Nisha.👍🏼

Now my favourite part of the whole update, Him meeting his princess!

You have shown it so wonderfully Mansi!

She being in the light and him watching her from the dark was so symbolic of how the situation and time has changed now. Before she was in the background and he wasn't noticing her.

Coming to the dance, right from the song selection to the dance steps : it was so so beautifully written❤️.

Each step of hers was in sink with the lyrics, clearly reflecting Nisha's feelings, though it was Kabir's POV!

Him joining her at the end, the hug on her demand, and their conversation that followed were all very well written👍🏼

Also loved how you showed Kabir's thought process for each and every thing Nisha did, be it her smile, laugh or her warm up.

The Kiss at the end along with Kabir's monologue was so cute!😳

A very different, dreamy and beautiful TS! ❤️

Thanks for pm😊

Do write more if you get time😉

thanks vishru 🤗 i surely will write... nibir p likhne se mai khud ko apne aap bhi nhi rok sakti

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Wow Mansi...

Awesome update...😳

Luved it...❤️

It was so so so so so beautiful...

Thanx for the pm...😊

thanks roopz

Finally kabira found his Cinderella description of d moves [:D/] blindfold dance in dt white dress hw beautiful she must b looking no wonder kabira was mesmerized 😆 😉 😆
Dy confessed 😳 😳 last scene 😳 😳
Beautiful ending 👏 👏
Loved it

unres...


I am speechless... you are such a great writer... it was fabulous...


<3

sorry for delay...

finally Prince ko uski Cinderella mil hi gyi ... amazing update and happy ending 😊

Epilogue as requested 😉 though i too thought to write it after the last update 😳


Nisha PoV

He kissed me... Oh my god did he really kissed me. I was shocked will be an understatement of the century, i was flabbergasted. But why is he not moving, did he regret doing it, did he not want to kiss me... or he just acted on an impulse... m i not good enough... what if he too is scared like me... or may be overthinking like me... yeah that explains. So as my conscience hit me, i started kissing him back moving my lips against his. He still didnt moved so i tried to put a pace. I dont know what to do else... its my first kiss after all... i was still thinking when finally... yes finally he moved moving his lips against mine in sync. It felt so good i tell u... its perfect. But again i dont know a single thing about kissing and was about to panic when he suddenly licked my lower lip out of nowhere. I dont know what he meant by that so i copied him and he opened his mouth for me. Oh!thats all i can think when i gasped against his lips and he invaded me like he own my mouth. I felt his hand on the back of my head as he pulled my hair onto a fist and tasted me thoroughly. I had to wrap my hands around his neck to maintain my balance as i suddenly felt dizzy at his passionate kiss. The pleasure reached its height as he sucked on my lower lip. A moaned escaped through me without me knowing... did i just made that sound. Oh boy... it felt good. Suddenly i heard a growl from him. So sexy... As much as of a pervert i sound but i wanted to be kissed like this every hour every min by this one man in my arm. Soon after we felt a need of fresh air, and he parted himself from me making me miss his warmth immediately. Yes... i want him wrapped around me so what. He looked at me beneath his hooded eyes giving me that scortching look that left me melted. "kabir..." i leaned at his shoulder seeking his warmth and hiding myself from this sudden shyness. "u r so beautiful cinderella... so beautiful" he caressed my back and an unknown current surged through me making me want his touch more. "i luv u sooo much cinderella..." he whispered. U cant even imagine how much i have dreaded to hear this. I have loved him so much since i had first laid my eyes on him. The first time i had seen him dancing in front of me... i have lost myself to him. He is my knight in the shining armour since the day he saved me from a mishap in this very acadamy. He is my secret since long. "i luv u too kabir... since when i dont know" i breathed. Oops... its slipped from my tongue. I wanted to kick myself so badly. He quickly separated himself from me making me pout. "since when???" he asked and i know i was caught. "what..." yes i will play dumb. "since when are u in love with me princess... tell me" he cupped my face. I sighed in defeat "do i need to tell u...". "ofcourse u do..." he smiled assuringly. "do u remember u saved a girl when a flashlight was about to hit her in this same academy, some 5 years ago" i said and looked at him expectantly if he still had some idea about it. I saw various expressions crosing his face confusion,wonder,pain,shock and at last a hint of realisation. "u... u were that girl...?" he asked and gasped as i confirmed it. "oh damn... do u know how many days i spent in finding u back then..." he told me that. "why were u looking for me... n i was on a bed rest as i had a broken leg and couldnt make it to come here" i replied. "i wanted to see u... to make sure u were good" he sounded concerned. "i was... n i m" i assured him. "so back to the story... i fell in love with u that very moment i think... but then never had that guts to come to tell u this so i decided to fade in the background as u deserved that spotlight more than me... i told u before about me coming here... though i left dancing proffesionally but i still used to dance for me... as it made me feel connected to u in a different level... then when i came to know how imp this event was for u and didnt hesitate in taking that step and did what i needed to... thats all" i stopped after telling him my biggest secret. "u took such a big risk for me??" he asked and i simply nodded. "oh girl! How come i m so lucky..." he crashed me to his body again. "m so sorry i didnt bothered to find u again... if only i would have found u back then... we would have been together for long" he sighed painfully and i hated to see that remorse on his face. "but u found me now... n m glad u did..." i kissed his eyes and felt him getting relaxed. "yeah... n now i will never let u go anywhere" he kissed my nose making me chuckle. "pls do that..." i breathed. "i will" he replied.

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From that day to till now, he never let me go. Today being my oops our wedding day right after 5 months from that night, we have been together. He made his academy a hit and i won the best archer award. He proposed me on the stage on a national wide channel and who m i to say no to such a man. So today we are getting married in less than two hours and he is bugging me to come out and meet him.
"kabir..."
"pls princess... u r my cinderella na... pls come out on the terrace"
"ok kabir... but this is the last time m doing this for u"
"i swear... i promise"
"ok... hold on"

I sneak out of my room and reached terrace in less than 2 min. I opened the door and locked it behind my back. "princess..." his voice hit me like a calming music and i felt relaxed. Soon i was in those familiar pair of arms which were my home now. "i missed u nisha" he whined making me laugh "kabir its only been like what 5 hours after our engagement... u r being impatient" i poked his chest. "so what... i cant take breath without seeing u... its been 5 hours..." he exclaimed. I cant help but laugh at him "kirti is such a bad influence on u... u know.. u r being dramatic".
"watever..." he grimaced so i had to hug him close to cheer him up. "m here with u... n after 2 hour i will be urs forever..." i mumbled in his chest. "2 HOURS u know" he hugged me closer. "kabir we are getting married in a single day because u cant wait... i didnt even have proper wedding functions not that m complaining but pls be patient for these 2 hours... pls prince" i batted my eyelashes at him. I know i look cute doing that and he cant resist me. Hehawww... i know its evil. "ohk fine... i cant say no when u look so cute" he poked my cheek. "but before that let savour ur taste so that i can survive without u for next 2 hours" he traced my lower lip and soon diminished the gap between us. I sighed as he kissed me with that same passion of that our first time and let him devour me. How much i deny... but i too cannot take this 2 hours of gap between us as cheesy or clingy as that sound. I dont care.

Love know its way around, u dont have to find it... it will come around the corner sooner or later. U may think that there is no one for u but there is always someone for someone. No one is alone. And when u will find out ur missing piece, all things will fall in place. U just need to look out for love around u and u will find it right beside u at places u never thought about looking. Treasure ur love and never let it go.

A/N - SORRY FOR PAKAOFYING ENDLESSLY... ITS THAT AFTER YESTERDAY'S MATCH I SERIOUSLY HAVE LOST SOME SCREWS OF MY SKULL 😆

Res b4 pm

Unres

Awesome epilogue Mansi...😳

NIBIR KISS...☺️😳

Just luved it Mansi...😉🤗

Superb...👍🏼

Thanx for the epilogue...😃🤗

Mansi you seriously rocks 👏
In a single day you have given 2 updates seriously it's a miracle 😆
Epilogue was superb 👏
Mind blowing
Loved it
Beautifully written