Nibir ts - **CINDERELLA** epilogoue on page 15 [completed] - Page 11

What a pleasant surprise this was 🤗

Such a beautiful ending dear it was awesome...

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Bas bahut hua aalas aaj toh main comment likh ke chodungi !🤣

Jaise maine kaha tha, I m writing a comment after ages so keep ur expectations low🤣

So here it goes😆

Aaj pata nahin kyun, koi line ya para copy nahin ho raha hai toh will just spell out the parts which I loved😊

Lovely chapter Mansi👏👏👏

Loved the different flavour u added to the epic old tale of Cinderella and her charming prince😆

A refreshing twist indeed👏👏👏

Your description of the mysterious girl was beautiful and poetic

And the description of the dance was amazing

Ek toh u have become an expert in narrating dance sequences😉

And the way u give meaning to every dance move, it just makes the entire reading process magical for ur reader

That part when Kabir finds Kirti tied up but all he is bothered about is the mystery girl was funny and cute😳

Waise kidnapper kitni cute thi, ki kirti ka kaam kar diya aur uske liye ek sorry letter aur gift chod ke chali gayi😳😆

I m sure aaj tak kisi ka itne cute kidnapper se paala nahin pada hoga😆

Loved that analogy of that dance step and the sun and earth👏👏

The lines about the carved foot, the one about always wanting her to be his arms and the one about the warmth were my favorite

Beautifully penned down indeed👏👏

Love how our Cinderalla was so bold😉😃much different than the boring Cinderalla who is too shy to even talk to the prince😆

Her dialogue that she is the other half was quite cool😃😉

Love how she said Find me soon prince charming😉😃😆

Kabir chodo even I would be in love with such a beautiful, witty, intelligent, talented and cool girl😆

All in all, a truly delightful read😃👏👏

Had fun reading it😉

And u never fail to amaze me with ur stories🤗😃

now this is what i call a good morning... i got a comment yayyy... mihu thanvhu... 😳 about the dance wla comment 😆 i luv dancing and couple dance is one of my ffavso it did come naturally while listening the song... n i m in love with this cinderella too wwaisebhi i didnt like older version cinderella so here is mine 😉 fir se thanku sooo much 🤗

Ufff hayeee maar daaala 😳 😳 😳
Wat a magical epilogue 👏 👏
Beautifully written 😳 😳
Their kiss 😳 😳 the way u described hr pov 😳 😳 😳 lol Maine feel karna start Kar dia tha 🤣 kiss ke emotions me beh gayi thi u know 🤣
Hr longing to b in his arms forever 😳 😳
Haila engagement k din shaadi bhi karli 😆 bichare se wait hi nahi hua 😆 😉
Kiss 😳 hug 😳 😳
Last Pata dt was something magical 😳 😳 last para ne katal kardia 😳 beautifully written

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

So here I am, again at a loss of words/adjectives to aptly describe your story😆

Dimaag ke ghode daurane padenge🤣

A truly amusing, lovely, delightful chapter👏👏😳

Super duper cute, adorable and Nibirilicious😳😳

Aaaj phir se koi para quote nahin ho pa raha hai so just spelling out the parts I loved😉

Loved Kabir's description of Nisha😳

That part where Kirti asks Kabir to decribe Nisha and he goes into this romantic zone while she is trying to find clues that would help them is hilarious🤣

Agar main Kirti ki jagah hoti aur mera koi friend aise behave karta toh main usse dande se maarti🤣

Waise Kabir kaafi poetic lagta hai😆

Kabir dhakkan hai ye toh hum samajh gaye😆na ladki ka naam pata na poori tarah se uska chehra dekha magar usse sheher ke saari dance academy mein nikal pada dhoondne🤣Uss maamle mein he is quite similar to Cinderella's prince jisne apne aadmiyon ko bola tha ki mere liye woh ladki dhoond ke lao jiska pair joote mein fit aa jaaye🤣But at least Kabir khud nilka apni cinderella ko dhoondne😆

Kabir remembering the watchman's words and feeling scared was hilarious🤣

That entire part from the time Kabir enters the academy till he spots Nisha is described beautifully👏

Waise the way they meet reminds me of this scene between Rey and Kriya and their dance sequence😊

As always loved the dance sequence👏😃

Loved that line about the contours matching👏👏👏Actually loved that entire part where Kabir removes Nisha's blindfold and their reactions thereon❤️

Love Nisha's cool attitude and intelligent nature😳She is what I would term as the perfect Cinderella 😉

Kabir pouting like a kid is sooo cute and adorable😳

I just loved Nibir's conversation yaar😳

Loved that line about Kabir meeting Nisha at midnight😃

Dancer and an athlete😆 Ye Nisha toh multi-talented nikli yaar😆

Waise Kabir sach mein dhakkan hai😆Yahan ladki keh rahi hai ki usne sab kuch ladke ke liye kiya tab bhi he wants her to spell it out🤣

Kabir's reaction when Nisha says she likes him is tooo cute😆

Waise loved the conversational style of the story😃

Love how Kabir keeps rebuking himself for his stupid thoughts😆

The kiss was

All in all, it was a thoroughly entertaining and truly enjoyable read🤗

Loved reading it❤️

😲 😲 mihu... heart attack de dia 😆 thank uuu sooo much... u know how much it means to me... so i wont tell u that again 😆 and so as to conclude u cant imagine that undying grin on my face 😃 and the wierd lools people are giving me 🤣

awesome epilouge ... thanku for it ... 😊 and superbly written nisha's pov was so good ... no words i have ... just keep writing ... to read something form u makes my day 😃

Mansi yaar sry fr late comment

this epilogue was a pleasant surprise fr me as i didnt expected it

it was wow yaar
loved the fact that u wrote it in nisha's pov
we got to know her love story
she loved him from long but stayed in bg as he needed spotlight more than her but came when she was needed

i loved this modern condrella yaar
the last lines wre awesome

It was a wow epi 😳

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Res b4 pm

Unres

Awesome epilogue Mansi...😳

NIBIR KISS...☺️😳

Just luved it Mansi...😉🤗

Superb...👍🏼

Thanx for the epilogue...😃🤗

thanks roopsz

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Mansi you seriously rocks 👏
In a single day you have given 2 updates seriously it's a miracle 😆
Epilogue was superb 👏
Mind blowing
Loved it
Beautifully written

thanks sujoy