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Posted: 9 years ago
Sarthak u love giving such cliffhangers na
i will kill u fr this
par phir story kaun updaate karega
thanks fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Precap is pretty interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read part 6,7 & 8 together...all the updates were very very interesting...👍🏼...I'm eagerly waiting for the next update...😊

I have a feeling k 7 saal pehle vali case k sath is vale case ka koi to connection hai...🤔

Continue soon & thanx for the pms...😊

Really very very sorry for the super late comment...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi folks , I am back with a surprise update. I had written this 2 months ago but I wasn't able to post it. I still have my exams till 23 may so most probably , u will get the next update after that. Please give your valuable reviews on this update.
Happy reading.

P.S. please ignore the typos , sorry for not proof reading it.

Part 9

Aman- kaira ki death.

Umesh - what!!! ...Yeh Kaira kaun hai???? tum logo ne kabhi bataya nahi.

Kabir - Kaira meri hone wali bhabhi thi , woh aur bade Bhaiya ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte te. Aman di ki best friend thi woh. Mai , aman di aur woh hamesha saath mai rehte te, hamesha kuch na kuch nayi masti sujhti thi hame , bade Bhaiya se who bachati thi hum dono ko. Itna pyaar karti thi hum sabse ki kya batao. Lekin phir jab mai 12th class mai tha tab mujhe Cricket tournament ke liye bahar Jana pada , mai aur aman di 3 din ke liye bahar gaye aur jab hum vaapis aaye toh pata chala ki...(he begins to sob)


Aman hugs him .
Aman - Kaira ki death ho gayi hai , kisi ne uska murder Kar diya . Par uss incident ke baare mai hum aaj tak Viraj bhai ne hum dono ko kuch nahi bataya , kyonki uss ghatna ka zikr bhar hi unhe itni takleef pahuchata hai ki mai bata nahi sakti.

Dolly - sads mat ho bhabhi.

Everyone gives Aman and Kabir a group hug.
Kirti - sorry kabir galti meri hai maine hi office ki baat ghar par discuss kari.

Kabir - its ok kirti , yeh baat toh samne aane hi thi, at least ghar par aane se mujhe di ne sambhal liya.
Umesh - but Kabir uss death ka hamare case se kya relation hai. Ho na ho hame 7 saal purane case ki file check Karne hogi.

Kabir - hmm, right.

Aman- bas ab aur office ki baate nahi hogi. Pure ghar ka environment tense ho gaya hai.

Dolly- bhabhi sahi keh rahi hai.

Jwala - arrey bhabhi aap toh aapke award function ke baare mai batana hi bhul gayi .

Sukku - kaisa award function????

Aman - who darasal hamare restaurant ko best quality food services ke liye felicitate kiya jayega...and since I am the head chef toh along with the owner and manager mujhe bhi award milega.

Umesh - that's great...I am proud of you.
Everyone congratulates Aman and they have a group hug.

Kirti - by the way bhabhi award ceremony kab hai??

Aman- kal shaam ko hamare restaurant mai hi hai and sabko chalna hai and kal koi kaam Ka bahana bhi nahi chalega...

Umesh - aapka hukum sir aankhon par my lord.
Everyone laughs at Umesh's statement. They have a nice time together .

Next day at CBI office.

Viraj - toh combat knife ke baare mai kuch info mili.??

Saurav - Sir Maine aaj subah hi apne local informers se iss baare mai pata kiya unke according iss tarah ka combat knife ki koi illegal trade nahi hui , at least in last 6 months.

Viraj - than maybe killer army background se ho ya phir usne kisi army officer ke yaha se isse churaya ho.

Nisha - and usne socha ho ki agar hum weapon ka source trace karle toh seedha doubt officer par jayega.

Kabir - guys kahin na kahin mujhe mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki weapons ke source ko trace Karne mai apna time waste Kar rahe hai I think we have to switch to plan B.

Kirti - I agree with Kabir . I feel killer ne intentionally yeh sab kiya hai because he wants us to be busy with weapons.

Umesh- but plan B hai kya ??

Viraj - maybe hume uss sketch ko use karna padega.
Kirti - Mr.Rajesh ke case mai killer ka face capture nahi hua.

Nisha - ya maine aur kabir ne khud poore corridor ki CCTV footage check kari thi and phir humne USS video ko cyber cell ke pass bhej diya tha.

Viraj - toh video mai kuch gadbad mili kya??
Kabir - ha aaj hi cyber team ne apni report bheji hai Mr. Rajesh waale case mai corridor ka CCTV camera hack hua tha use 5 minute ke liye stop kiya tha . Due to which hume 5 minutes tak koi activity nahi dikhayi di and video mai uss 5 minutes se pehle ke 30 seconds hi baar baar play hote rahe.

Viraj - And Ms.Priya ke case mai bhi CCTV camera mai koi technical fault aaya tha , both the murders were extremely well planned.
Anyways for now local police ki help se sketch Ka use karke killer ke baare mai information nikalne ki koshish kijiye , I know its difficult to do so but hume yeh case isliye hi mila hai because it is difficult and we are the only one who can solve this. Am I right ???

Everyone together- Yes Sir.

After the meeting gets over, everyone leaves the room except Saurav and Kirti.

Saurav - tujhe kya lagta hai ,sketch ke through hum killer ko trace Kar payenge??

Kirti - I don't know yaar, mai in sab mai kyon phas gayi I never wanted to join this field but sirf isliye ...

Saurav interrupts her.
Saurav - kyonki tujhe Roopan aunty ke samne khud ko proof karna tha. Else woh tujhe kehti ki tu baaki cousins ki jitni kabil nahi hai.

Kirti - exactly. By the way Saurav you know me well.

Saurav - woh toh hai agar kabhi bhi kuch bhi baat ho I am always there for you.

Kirti smiles at his statement.

Saurav - waise tujhe kya lagta hai??

Kirti - kis baare mai?

Saurav - kaira ke baare mai ??

Kirti- kaira ke baare mai , saaf saaf bol kya kehna chah raha hai??

Saurav - dekh Kabir ne Jo bataya uske according Viraj Sir kaira Ka naam sunte hi bahut upset ho jaate hai and kabhi bhi uss baare mai baat nahi karna chahte .

Kirti - ha toh ??

Saurav - viraj Sir exactly same reaction tab bhi de rahe te jab psychokiller ke purane case ki baat aayi.

Kirti - ha but in dono ka aapas mai kya relation hai??

Saurav - arrey yaar wohi toh hume pata lagana hai.

Nisha enters the room.

Nisha - bilkul bhi nahi.

Saurav- tu hamari jasusi kar rahi hai.
Nisha - nahi mai abhi abhi aayi , lekin yeh baat important nahi hai. Important yeh hai ki tum dono Jo pagalpan plan Kar rahe ho usse roka jaaye.

Saurav - Yeh pagalpan nahi hai nishu, I mean jara soch jis reason ki vajah se kabir , Aman bhabhi and Viraj sir pareshan ho ,hume woh reason toh pata hona chahiye.

Kirti - ya Saurav is right, ho sakta hai phir hum kabir ya bhabhi ki koi help Kar sake.

Nisha - dimaag kharab ho gaya hai tum dono ka, jis baat ka naam sunkar hi sab itne stress ho jate hai uske baare mai investigate karna hai tumhe.

Sauarv - yaar nishu baat ko samajh , I know topic bahut sensitive hai but hume unki help karni chahiye. And waise bhi Viraj Sir ka 2 baato par same reaction is awkward , we should find out about this.

Kirti - And waise bhi jis tarah se Viraj sir iss case ko hamare present case se baar baar relate Kar rahe hai , I am sure dono mai kuch na kuch similarities hai.

Nisha - tum dono meri baat samjh kyon nahi rahe ho??

She is interrupted by Kabir's voice.

Kabir - nisha tum baat ko samajh nahi rahi ho.

Saurav - kabir tu yaha... aaj sab meri jasusi kyon Kar rahe ho.

Kabir - woh sab chod yaar, point par aate hai mai tum dono ke saath hu.

Kirti - Kabir matlab tum ne sab kuch sun liya

Nisha - ha Ms.tube light . Anyways Kabir are you sure tum yeh karna chahte ho , I mean this is a sensitive topic.

Kabir- Ha , mujhe bhi yeh raaz jaan na hai and kaira Aman di aur mere bhi bahut close thi , hume poora right hai unki death ke baare mai sab kuch jaan ne ka.Mai khud iss baare mai kal se soch raha hu, I agree thoda initial hesitation thi but ab tum sab saath ho toh I am ready for this.

Saurav - great , ab toh saari problem hi solve, so mission secret pata lagao aaj se chalu. Mai , kabir , kirti and...
He looks at nisha

Nisha - I am also in. Waise bhi mere bina tum duffers ka kuch nahi hona.

Kabir - ek minute, duffer kisse bola??

Nisha - sunayi nahi deta kya ??tumhe bola.

Kabir - dekh agar mai duffer toh ..
Saurav - chup ek dum chup . Shaant ho jao dono waise hi time nahi hai aur tum dono ho ki jab man Kare ladai start Kar doge.

Nisha - OK , but ek baat sab dhyaan rakhna yeh baat hum sab ke beech hi rehni chahiye.

Kabir , Saurav and Kirti (together)- done.

Their discussion was interrupted with Viraj's voice.

Viraj - yeh yaha kya chal raha hai.


To be Continued.



Author's note - I have updated the banner of the story on page 1. Thanks to Shibu for making the banner.

Edited by Sarthak0302 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I love mysterious stories looking forward to it.
Abi tk thoda hi padha h.
so here is my tippani on it 😛

FOR CHARACTER SKETCH

Kya khandan h bhai sab ASP SP&DSP...I mean really amazing 😉
Viraj Rathod -DIG!! 👏
Suresh new character ryt??

Name wo to story padh k samjh ayega.😃




PS.- BTW sab police wale CBI wale hain to criminal kon??! 😕





INTRO


IT was quite interesting.
Viraj kya kuch problem h Kabir se?? kahe inne rukhe sukhe?
Apne bhai se J hora h??! 😲
Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update very nicely written 👏 👏 👏
Finally vo 7 years wala raaz pata chala par pura nhi 😒

Awesome banner 👏
All the best for your exam 👍🏼
Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update ...!!!
Loved it ...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Very interesting story😊
Nice banner
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update sarthak 👏👏
This story is quite different and I'm loving it
All the scenes were very well written
this story is full of suspense
Scenes description was very written 👏
Awesome update loved it
I love suspense thrillers
I can't wait for the next Update
Awesome banner 👏👏
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update as always... M still trying to relate the two cases but u didnt let out much hope nibir and saki will give enough clue 😉

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