Nibir ff - Mystery( part 9 updated on page 58)

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#381

Very nice update!

Good to read a lighthearted update after a series of serious updates 😉

Kabir's monologue and KN moments were cute

Kabir getting lost in Nisha's smile and unknowingly falling for her, Saurav teasing him about the same (loveria 😆), Nisha feeling slightly jealous of Kirti flirting with Kabir but brushing it off the next moment, Kabir relating his chances of falling in love with India winning football world cup 😆 were all wonderful and very well written!

The cousins conversation that followed was good too.

I feel it is small moments like these that makes the story a and am glad your giving these lighthearted scenes too admist the serious ones 👍🏼

A cliffhanger at the end! Now please disclose this 7 years mystery, I'm getting really curious now 😆

Interesting precap. Another murder for the team to solve and I'm waiting to know the link between these murdered people.

Continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

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Anmol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#382

Fabulous update 👏 👏

Loved it...

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Sarthak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: vishruthaLN
Very nice update!
Good to read a lighthearted update after a series of serious updates 😉
Kabir's monologue and KN moments were cute
Kabir getting lost in Nisha's smile and unknowingly falling for her, Saurav teasing him about the same (loveria 😆), Nisha feeling slightly jealous of Kirti flirting with Kabir but brushing it off the next moment, Kabir relating his chances of falling in love with India winning football world cup 😆 were all wonderful and very well written!
The cousins conversation that followed was good too.
I feel it is small moments like these that makes the story a and am glad your giving these lighthearted scenes too admist the serious ones 👍🏼
A cliffhanger at the end! Now please disclose this 7 years mystery, I'm getting really curious now 😆
Interesting precap. Another murder for the team to solve and I'm waiting to know the link between these murdered people.
Continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

thank you so much for commenting Vishrutha...

You are my favourite reader... Becoz you notice each and every detail...😃 And also give valuable advises ...tysm u make me feel that I can write and at the same time I also feel that I can do much better...ty for encouraging me...

P.S. I intentionally kept the update short...coz after the ending dialogues of this update next scene is all about revelation of a part of the secret😉😆

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Sidhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#384

Superb
Precap is interesting
Waiting to know wat's the link between delicious n the murders
Fanx 4 pm

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Shats

@Shats

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Posted: 9 years ago

#385

Sarthakkk 👏
Supr dude. 👏 👏 👏 kya mind blowing story nikali hai 👏 👏 👏
Supr interesting and thrilling. Yaar haar 1 part me m like Ab kya hoga Ab kya hoga 😲 😲 😲 honestly 1 of d best thriller story till date 👏 👏 👏
Luving d ideas of clues.(ice weapon,note written in 3 shape,clockwise body position 😲 😲 😲 )brilliant ideas 👏 👏 👏
Ur killing it dude
And ofcrse luving d way d story and nibir story is progressing.luving dr nok-jhoks 😆
So sorry fr cmting sooo late

Finally done wid all d updates.lemme dance first 😆
Luved all d updates to d core
Wats wid dis 7 yes old secret 🥱 🥱
Suspense pe suspense 🥱
Nibir slowly falling in luv 😉
Firse murder 😲 😲 omg its scary 😲 😲
Update soon can't wait

Edited by Shats - 9 years ago