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Posted: 9 years ago

#401

Very Interesting Update...Thanx for the pm...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#402

awesome update ... adhe raaz khul gye adhe baki h ... it became more interesting... update soon and atb for exams 😊

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.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#403

Interesting update sarthak!

Kaira's bonding with Aman and Kabir was very well portrayed! 👍🏼

The reader could easily picture how close she must have been to the Rathore siblings.

Liked how you did not let out much about her death, leaving it to the reader's imagination as of now 😆.

The group hug given to Aman and Kabir was such a sweet gesture by the cousins.

Everyone are so hyped for the upcoming award function. But, going by your previous updates, I smell something fishy here! Hope the award function goes smoothly and does not turn out into what I'm guessing

All their interactions were very well written in the next scene!

Their discussion about the combat knife, the tampered cctv footage, and Kabir's suggestion of not wasting their time on the combat knife but instead launch plan B were thoughtfully written moments!

It was nice that you showed Kirti coming to this field was because of her mother and Saurav's assurance of always being there! Why do i sense SaKi in the making? 😉 But, since its a mystery story and the prime focus will be on the case, il keep my expectations on the SaKi aspect low 😆.

The next Saurav-Kirti-Nisha-Kabir moment was very good! Everyone's point was valid and glad that we are gonna get some hints of the connection between Kaira's death and Viraj's reactions to psycho-killers!

You love to end your updates with a cliffhanger, don't you? 😆

Anyways do continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

All the best for advanced 👍🏼

Edited by .vishrutha. - 9 years ago

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shrutigaur37

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Posted: 9 years ago

#404

superb update.
now nibir, Saurav n kirtii hv teamed up to find out about d past incident..
curious to know d mystry!!

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#405

So I hv read all parts finally...

my review:

Excellent, Fantastically written thriller..Wid each part story becomes more & more interesting.👏👏👏

I thoroughly enjoyed reading all parts.🥱🥱

Bt 2cheezin samjh ni ayi ek wo fridge bazu Ka cabin me Tha ya Mr.Shekhawat K hi cabin me Tha,

in dis as u wrote here-

Peon-1- ha madam sir apni table bahut saaf rakhte

te.pehle apni files utha Kar unki right side par shelf

mai rakhte the.phir snacks lete te.or tab tak unki

left side par Jo fridge hai..use ham ice daal dete the

unke milkshake mai.

dusra wo nonfunctional eye means nakli thi ya wo ek eye se dekh nai sakti thi wo actress?

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All n all gajab thi story I suggest name of dis thriller as "DANGEROUS PAHELI" YA " Ek dichasp Paheli(Gutthi)" { nt that gutthi palak wali, Gutthi 😛 oki}

On solving case I guess jo b murderer h 'psyco serial killer'

According to mera jasoos mind- wo zarur aman k restaurant se related h kahin na kahin.

Ya to wo aman k restaurant"Delicious" Ka waiter h ya koi Chef{chef hone k chances zyaada h coz knife Ka sdd upyog sry dur upyog hora h 😉 ...jo b h wohin se related h.coz jinne b murder hue wo sab waha ja k aye phir hue..or meri theory k mutabik wo murderer abi 12am ko murder b karega.coz pehle 6den 9 abi 12...3 Ka table pasand h usko 😛

N wo parts Ka jo cut kar k lejata h..mere hisab se wo unki weakness(concealed wid world) ko collect karing as in... Wo thumb- he was uneducated so angutha lagata hoga har jaga ..use cut kiya...same goes wid eyes of DAT actress.

So how's it bro.I know mene accha solve kiya koi medal dene ki zarurat ni h bs jaldi jaldi update dena coz I wanna see me kinni ryt hun 😉
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EK OR BAAT BHAI...YE TV SERIAL k jaisa hi kiya u ne bhi...
precap kuch or & update kuch or :/
ur
Precap was- Famous doctor Mr. Ajay Sinha presents Aman
with a award in Delicious restaurant.
Later he is found dead in the parking area.
ye to hua hi ni!!?

Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago