Nibir ff - Mystery( part 9 updated on page 58)

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Guys I know...my story (ff- Fulfilling our dreams together with love) abhi bhi chal rahi hai..and I haven't updated it since 8-9 days..sorry for that..I would update it soon...but I have got a fabulous idea of a murder mystery...so I am starting it...hope u guys like...it...
More number of likes and comments...would increase its chances of getting updated soon...

Character Sketch ( special note - relations of all the gangwals is as it is same as shown in the show so I am not again mentioning that they are cousins...and Also their parents name again)

Kabir Rathod - 24 year old ASP(Additional superintendent of Police) in CBI (Central bureau of Investigation)

Viraj Singh Rathod - 31 year old Deputy Inspector general(this is 3 ranks above ASP) in CBI and Kabirs elder brother

Nisha Gangwal - 23 year old ASP in CBI

Umesh Gangwal- 27 year old Senior SP in CBI

Aman Rathod Gangwal- 25 year old ,Umesh's wife and works as a head chef in a restaurant "Delicious"
Also sister of Kabir and Viraj.

Saurav Jain - 24 year old ASP in CBI and neighbour and friend of nisha and her cousins

Kirti Gangwal- 22 year old DSP( a rank lower than ASP) in CBI

Suketu Gangwal- 21 year old a news reporter

Dolly Gangwal- 24 year old editor of the news channel in which suketu works

Jwala Gangwal - 16 year old a brilliant student of class 11th she is a champion in computer related works ..and a secret hacker

Bunty Gangwal- 13 year old youngest cousin of the group

Suresh Sinha - joint director of CBI (2 ranks above Viraj)

Author's note - I haven't decided about the title yet so just naming it mystery . Any suggestions about the title are welcomed.


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Index
Character sketch - page 1

Intro - page 1

Part 1 - page 7

Part 2- page 15

Part 3- page 23

Part4 - page 31

Part 5-page 41

Part6- page 44

Part 7- page 50

Part 8 - page 55

Part 9 - page 58
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res
unres sarthak superb mindblowing concept yr👍🏼

nibir n viraj polic wale😊

aman head shef🤣

suketu reporter

jwalu hacker👏

i love d way u highlighted jwalu's intelligency as a hacker

superb concept yr
continue soon
waiting to read more👏
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intresting yaar
update d part soon
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Intro

Viraj was sitting in his cabin when ..a peon came ...and told him that joint director of CBI is calling him...he goes to joint director's Cabin

Mr. Sinha - So mr. Viraj aaj ham aapko ek bahut hi urgent and important case de rahe hai...A murder of a industrialist... Jo ki kal raat ko apne office mai death paaye gaye..Aap hamare bahut hi Senior aur kabil officer hai...umeed hai aap isse jald solve Kar lenge

Viraj - yes sir

Mr. Sinha- aapki team mai...last time ki tarah Umesh gangwal hai...par iss baar saath mai 4 aur log hai.Senior SP Mr.Umesh Gangwal aur aapko assist karenge
ASP Ms.Nisha Gangwal

ASP Mr. saurav jain

DSP Ms kirti jain
And the new sensation of our department jinhone 6 cases back to back solve Kare hai isliye unhe yaha transfer kiya gaya hai Delhi mai ...
Aapke bhai ASP Mr. Kabir Rathod

Viraj- okk sir par isse koi farak nahi padta ki vo mere bhai hai ya nahi...

Mr. Sinha- ek baat puchu aap apne bhai se itne rukhe rukhe kyon rehte hai...

Viraj- sorry sir par mai personal baatein office mai discuss nahi karta

Mr.Sinha- okk as ur wish aap jaa sakte hai...kal subah 9 baje yeh sab log aapke pass pahuch jayenge...

Viraj- okk sir..jai hind

And he leaves...

I know its short but ..plzz guys comment ur views..




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Originally posted by: itznimi003

res
unres sarthak superb mindblowing concept yr👍🏼

nibir n viraj polic wale😊

aman head shef🤣

suketu reporter

jwalu hacker👏

i love d way u highlighted jwalu's intelligency as a hacker

superb concept yr
continue soon
waiting to read more👏

thanks nimi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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intro mast hai sarthak
Viraj Kabir ke beech kya prblm hai😕

anyway
update first part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bhaiyu🤗
Aapki sis RES ke bina Comment kar rahi hai...😲🤣🤣🤣

First of all a Big Thank U for starting a new FF👍🏼

Its giving me FULL On ASR feels...☺️🥳🤣

CS was superb...👏👏👏

Kabir's designation gave me ASR feels...☺️🤣

Jwalu's Designation gave me Anjali(The choti bachi who was the hacker when Arjun got revamped😉)🤣

Bhaiyu I want to point out sumthings dat catch my eyes & mind tooo😈🤣 Hope U dont mind..😳

Actually When I read the Designations of various characters in CBI, I felt sumthing wrong😉 Mujhe CBI ki designations ke baare main zyada kuch nahi patha...😆 But I very well knew abt the Designations of officers in KERALA POLICE😈 so A/c to dat knowlegde I want to say sumthings😃

1. U said Kabira is ASP & Viraj is DIG which is 3 ranks above ASP😊 But In Kerala Police, ASP is the designation given to dat person who had entered the Police Department with DIRECT IPS😃 with 3 years of Service😉 & DIG is Promoted SP 😆 which means b/w ASP & DIG there is only one rank SP is dere😉 Means DIG is 1 rank above ASP 😉

2. Then U said Kirti is DSP a rank lower to ASP😊 But In Kerala Police, DSP or we call it as DYSP is the designation given to the person who get promoted frm CI(Circle Inspector) of Police..😉 On the other hand ASP ( I explained above) is equal to DSP/DYSP😉 ASP woh hai jo direct IPS officer hai with 3 years of service while DSP is Promoted CI😉. In short, Donom ke Designation name is different but the RANK is Same...😃


I Hope Sarthak Maine kuch zyada detail main explanation nahi dia ki U felt Bored..🤣🤣🤣 Actually I knw the Designation of Kerala Police so when I saw CS, I thought to explain it to U😆 Mujhe nahi patha CBI main aise Designation hothe hai (jaise tumne CS dia) ya nahi???😳
🤣

Ab Tum soch rahe honge ki Teri Sis ko kya hua hai..😲 Itne SERIOUS baatein q kar rahi hai..😕 Its just a Story..🤣 Hain nah??? 😉🤣

As Saru is UNIQUE😈 As I always Says EXPECT UNEXPECTED frm ME😈🤣🤣🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳(I didnt open any PMs.. I m sure aapka PM bhi hoga so Thank U🤣)

Do Write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣


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Bhaiyu This comment for INTRO 😆🤣🤣🤣

Intro gave me Sam-Arjun Feels...😳🤣🤣🤣

Arjun & Sam bhi aise ukhade ukhade the saath main kam karne se...😉🤣 Reminded me Arjun First EPI🤣 Thanks Bhaiyu😃

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: Ek baath poochu?? 😉yeh "LAL RAAT" Kya hai bhaiyu????🤣 I knw its a Typo Error 😉 It shud be "KAL RAAT" nah??😆🤣🤣🤣 Just Kidding🤣🤣🤣
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Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Bhaiyu🤗
Aapki sis RES ke bina Comment kar rahi hai...🤣

First of all a Big Thank U for starting a new FF👍🏼

Its giving me FULL On ASR feels...🤣

CS was superb...👏👏👏

Kabir's designation gave me ASR feels...☺️🤣

Jwalu's Designation gave me Anjali(The choti bachi who was the hacker when Arjun got revamped😉)🤣

Bhaiyu I want to point out sumthings dat catch my eyes & mind tooo😈🤣 Hope U dont mind..😳

Actually When I read the Designations of various characters in CBI, I felt sumthing wrong😉 Mujhe CBI ki designations ke baare main zyada kuch nahi patha...😆 But I very well knew abt the Designations of officers in KERALA POLICE😈 so A/c to dat knowlegde I want to say sumthings😃

1. U said Kabira is ASP & Viraj is DIG which is 3 ranks above ASP😊 But In Kerala Police, ASP is the designation given to dat person who had entered the Police Department with DIRECT IPS😃 with 3 years of Service😉 & DIG is Promoted SP 😆 which means b/w ASP & DIG there is only one rank SP is dere😉 Means DIG is 1 rank above ASP 😉

2. Then U said Kirti is DSP a rank lower to ASP😊 But In Kerala Police, DSP or we call it as DYSP is the designation given to the person who get promoted frm CI(Circle Inspector) of Police..😉 On the other hand ASP ( I explained above) is equal to DSP/DYSP😉 ASP woh hai jo direct IPS officer hai with 3 years of service while DSP is Promoted CI😉. In short, Donom ke Designation name is different but the RANK is Same...😃


I Hope Sarthak Maine kuch zyada detail main explanation nahi dia ki U felt Bored..🤣🤣🤣 Actually I knw the Designation of Kerala Police so when I saw CS, I thought to explain it to U😆 Mujhe nahi patha CBI main aise Designation hothe hai (jaise tumne CS dia) ya nahi???😳
🤣

Ab Tum soch rahe honge ki Teri Sis ko kya hua hai..😲 Itne SERIOUS baatein q kar rahi hai..😕 Its just a Story..🤣 Hain nah??? 😉🤣

As Saru is UNIQUE😈 As I always Says EXPECT UNEXPECTED frm ME😈🤣🤣🤣

Thanks 4 PM😳(I didnt open any PMs.. I m sure aapka PM bhi hoga so Thank U🤣)

Do Write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣


CBI designations are different I checked it on wiki then wrote...so chill and thanks for comment

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