Chapter 4- Wonderful Chapter Mansi 👍🏼
Loved the intensity in this part 👏
The overwhelming emotions of Nibir were the highlight of this chapter👏👏👏
You know throughout this chapter, I was just thinking about my favorite Arjun-purvi😆
Arvi had the same intensity and if at all any other couple can match their intensity it is Nibir😆
U know I have always dreamt of Nibir having a high intensity scene and u made it possible😃
I m happy Kabir got to know how Nisha had been insulted by those girls😡 God bless Jiya😆
He entered the room and stood behind nisha. " nisha mjhe sach janna h..." he said. " kaunsa sach..." she asked. " ur jhuth nhi sunna mjhe nisha... tu kaise kisi ki bhi baat p ese behave kar sakti h" kabir screamed. Nisha was dumbstruck. " ha nisha sab pta h mjhe" kabir said. She turned towards him and moved away. "Kuch galat to nhi kha na un lgo ne kabir... jo kha vo sach hi to tha... dekh mjhe... ur dekh khud ko... did I match u... no... " she said. Kabir was baffled at what he heard. "What..." he screamed. " ha kabir... vo kya sab yhi sochte h... ur sahi hi h... mai hu hi kya... kuch bhi nhi... tere layak nhi hu mai " she screamed. " Nishaa... " kabir shouted. He moved forward and grabbed her shoulders. " how dare u... how dare u say that... " kabir said. " I didn't dare kabir it is a truth... jab tjhe ye realise hoga tb tk..." she couldn't complete her words as they got lost in a loud noise. " CHUP... EK DUM CHUP NISHA... EK SHABD UR NHI SAMJHI... SAMAJHTI KYA H TU KHUD KO... JO TERE MAN ME AAEGA BOLTI JAEGI... JRA SA DIMAG H KI NHI TUJME... YE SAB BOLNE SE PEHLE... TUNE EK BAAR... EK BAAR NHI SOCHA..." kabir was out of his senses now. She was standing rooted to her spot. His eyes were bloodshot red... anger dripping from them. It seemed he would create a havoc in a minute and his voice was unbearably painful. " MERE BAARE M YHI SOCHTI H TU... KI YEH PAISA FAME DEKHKE... CHHOD DUNGA MAI EK DIN TJHE... YHI JAAN PAYI H TU AAJ TAK MERE BAARE M... KABHI SAMJHA NHI TUNE MJHE???... TJHE JRA BHI BHAROSA NHI H MJHPE... MERE PYAAR P?????... " kabir yelled at her. He hit the wall behind nisha with such a force that his hand started bleeding. Nisha closed her eyes due to its impact. " Kabir tere haath se khoon..." nisha was trying to hold his hand when he pulled it away with a jerk. " koi jarurat nhi h meri fikar karne ki... hu kaun mai ha... koi maayne to h nhi mere tere lie... to ye fikr kyu nisha... jab tjhe mjhpe bharosa hi nhi tu mjhe apna samjhti hi nhi to fir ye chinta kyu?... koi jarurat nhi h is sab ki"... he hissed bitterly yet painfully. He turned and walked towards the door crashing another glass vase into the ground deepening his wound further. But his mind never registered the pain and he banged the door leaving behind a shattered nisha. Nisha slid down the wall with never ending tears in them.- Absolutely loved this part❤️ 👏 Phenomenal👏 👏 👏Every emotion of Nibir has been captured so well through your narration Everything from Kabir's anger to his despair to his hurt and the complexity of the emotions was well penned down😃 Nisha's pain, her shock when Kabir questioned her, her, disbelief in herself and denial of the fact that she was worthy of Kabir's love, he pain when she saw Kabir harm himself and the guilt and bafflement that followed after Kabir left the house- everything was described so beautifully and perfectly 👍🏼👍🏼
Sach kahoon toh its impossible for me to point out few lines which I loved the most in that part cz I just love each and every line in that part
His words has pricked her heart and soul. Kabir was on the terrace when nisha came running and tried to get hold of him. " mna kia h na tjhe... samajh nhi aata kya..." he said. " kabir dekh tu kitna bhi naraz hoja par please ye chot to.." she said. " mna kar dia na nisha... " kabir said jerking her hand. " please kabir... dekh m really sorry... mjhe kya hua tha mjhe khud samaj nhi aaya kabir par dekh I'm really sorry don't hurt urself for me..." her tears blinding her when she felt her head spinned again but she tried hard to control herself. " kya samjhu mai nisha... mujhe sirf itna hi samj aa rha h ki tjhe mjhpe bharosa nhi h... warna tu esa kyu karti kya matlab tha mjhe avoid karne ka.. ese behave karne ka... tune aaj jo kha h use mai kabhi nhi bhulunga nisha" he yelled looking away hiding his tears amidst his anger. " Kabir..." she tried to get hold of him again before her head took her for another ride and this time she couldn't control it and passed out. She would have fallen if kabir hadn't catched her in the nick of time. " nishaa.. nishaa .. kya hua... bol..." kabir cried her name. He quickly picked up her in his arms and ran towards there room. - Again loved this part I love how selfless Nibir's love is that even in their hurt and pain, all they care about is the other's well being and their partner's wound/discomfort just pricks them more than their won sadness No matter how hurt they were and how distraught they were, Nisha was just thinking about Kabir's pain and Kabir thinking about Nisha !
This came as another shock for kabir and his anger now knew no bounds. He softly placed her on the sofa and ran to bring the water. He made nisha drink some water and splashed some on her face. " kabir " she said still in daze. " tmhe pta tha to tmne mjhe phone p kyu nhi btaya supriya" kabir asked in a low but angry voice. " mjhe lga mam aapko khud bta dengi... vo itne mahino se khud ko itna stress kar rhi thi... to " kabir cut off supriya. " yha nisha k sath rehna... mjhe kuch kaam h " kabir said trying to control his anger. Kabir stormed out of the house with blood still dripping through his wound. He wasn't in his senses at all. He drove his car like a mad man nearly hitting two or three things lying on the road side on the odd hour of the day. After a mad ride of almost an hour his car screeched to a halt in front of a ruin. Kabir jumped out of the car and kicked a stone lying near by with full force and screamed out loud. " kyu... kyu... kiya ye sab nisha..." kabir cried. " kya mai kuch jaanane ka hak nhi rakhta... kya sach m mere pyaar m koi kami rh gyi" he thought. " kya jarurat thi ye sab karne ki..." he was broken today.- Mansi u have described Kabir's condition so well 👏 His anger, hurt and despair is brought out so beautifully 👍🏼
She kept weeping remembering how hurt he was.- This selfless quality of Nibir's love is what sets them apart from the other couples
The pain which was reflecting in his expression is now eating her up causing her an unbearable pain. She felt like she would choke to death due to this guilt developing inside he- What a line👏👏👏
nisha's word were still stabbing him like a knife cutting his flesh.- Amazing 👏
I know this chapter hardly had any cute Nibir moments, but this chapter was lovable in a different sense😉
Well to tell u a secret, as much as I love cute, romantic scenes I also love reading such intense emotional scenes (not sad ones but ones with a lot of tension) because of Arvi😆
So all in all, A great chapter Mansi and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it🤗 😆😃😉
Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
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