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Chapter 5- Fantastic chapter👏
Loved it thoroughly ❤️
The intensity was just too good in this chapter😆
The plethora of emotions and the correct mix of every emotion made this chapter a wonderful read👏👏😃.
Every emotion ranging from anger, hurt, pain to love was so intricately woven into the narration that it made this chapter the best part of the story😳😃
The narration and description was brilliant 👏👏👏
Almost every part that I have highlighted in the story has been my favorite😳 Also havent really pointed out where I loved your writing cz I loved the chapter entirely😉
It's been 3 hours since he had left and now nisha's heart was racing madly thinking about him. " kabir kha h tu... khi kuch... nhi nisha esa kuch nhi hoga.. kabir thik hoga... naraz h na thoda... abhi waapas aa jaega" she tried to console herself. " bhagwan ji pls... pls mere kabir ko waapas bhej do... jo koi saza deni h mjhe de do but pls use waapas bhej do" she folded her hand and started praying, tears still making their way through her cheeks. She was hyperventilating now thinking of every possible possibility. She was marching in her living room in anxiety when she heard a car screeched to a halt. Nisha looked at the door and found kabir coming in. She felt so relieved and happy. She just ran in to him crashing herself in his arms. " koi itna darata h kya kabir... jaan nikal gyi thi meri... pta h kitne bure khayal aa rhe the mjhe... kitna darr gyi thi mai... aage se.." she couldn't complete as he jerked her away. " mjhe neend aa rhi h " kabir said and went to the room without sparing a look at her. she was dumbfounded at what he just did.- Nisha's insecurities and the pain she was going through was very well described in this part. The fact that even in this state, all she could care about was how she had hurt Kabir was indicative of the selflessness of their relationship.
A feeling of getting abandoned washed over her being in a minute. She felt like she was all alone in this big world with no one there by her side.- Loved these lines❤️ Her insecurities and the fear that they could become the reality was portrayed so well Mansi👍🏼
A small sad smile appeared for a microsecond which soon got replaced by an angry expression. - Loved this line❤️
He just stared nisha with mixed emotions of anger pain and love in his eyes. " just move away... " kabir hissed. He moved nisha away from himself softly yet firmly. He just didn't know what to do so he did what was best. He immediately walked away from the room leaving behind nisha deeply rooted in her guilt. " Kyu karti h tu esa nisha... mat kar... mat kar mere lie kuch" he thought when a tear of agony and pain rolled down his cheeks. " kya karu mai kabir... kya karu ki tujhe mna lu... " she asked sliding through the wall letting her grief engulfing her. Kabir was out for the whole day, practicing actually punishing himself for god knows what. The only thing he can think about was her words banging his mind. Here nisha was weeping whole day- Loved the way u described Kabir's state 😊 The fact that even in his anger he ensured that he doesn't hurt Nisha when he moved her away softly speaks so much about his love for her The guilt in Nibir when the other tried to do something nice for them even when they hurt him/her was well brought out and again highlighted the nature of their relationship which was so pure and selfless ❤️
But this time nisha wasn't in a mood to let him go. Kabir would have walked only a few steps when he was pulled forcibly and was pinned to the adjacent wall. " samajhta kya h tu khud ko ha... yha mai tjhe mnaye ja rhi hu ur tere nakhre hi nhi katam ho rhe h..." an angry nisha gritted from her teeth. Kabir's initial reaction was of shock was soon converted into an angry one. He rolled again as now nisha was pinned to the wall. " achha... ehsaan kar rhi h tu mjhpe... mjhe mnake... jitna hurt kia h na tune mjhe... uske lie mai tjhe itni jaldi maaf nhi karunga." kabir said. - Loved this part too 😆 It was my favorite 😉 The tashan and the outburst of the two lovebirds was awesome😆 Finally they decided to put an end to the rona-dhona and confront each other😆
Nisha's anger was also on peak now. " achha... esa kya kia h maine... ha... ha manti hu galti ki h maine kisi ki baateon sinkar mjhe ese react nhi karna chahie tga... par iski sza bhi bhugti h na kabir... jitna dard tjhe hue ha utna hi mjhe bhi hua h... ye hi soch soch k jaan nikali jaa rhi thi ki mai esa kar kaise sakti hu esa kh kaise sakti hu... par tu tu mjhe akad dikha rha h..." she screamed pushing him. " achha mai tjhe akad dikha rha hu... ur ye sab kya h galti teri ur sza to maine bhi bugti h nisha... tu akeli nhi tadpi h... mai bhi utna hi roya hu... utne hi dard hua h mjhe bhi... " kabir said grabbing her shoulders. " to kyu itna dard de rha h khud ko... mai galat hu to mjhe sehne de... tu kyu khu ko punish kar rha h" she asked grabbing his collar. " - The fact that neither of them was ready to back down now was fun and interesting to read😆 Loved their confrontation 😆
Their anger just reflected the love they have for each other 😳And the fact that they were angry on each other not for hurting the other but hurting themselves in the process was adorable😳 I hope this line of mine makes sense to u😆
kyuki pyaar karta hu tjhse nisha... paaglo ki tarah pyaar karta hu... tjhe agar ek sui bhi chubhti h na to talwar chalne jitna dard hota h mjhe samjhi... ur jab tu esi baatien karti h na to esa lgta h kisi ne mera dil hi nikal lia h mere seene se... saans lena mushkil ho jata h mera..." he said tears brimming through his eyes. -Hayye 😳 Main mar jaawan Kya line hai yaar ❤️ So romantic and so touching
Nisha couldn't take it anymore and she just crushed herself on him pulling him closer to herself. " ur jab tu baat nhi karta na mjhse to mera jeena bekaar lhne lgta h kabir... man karta h khud ko itni saza du ki jaan nikal jae meri... ur us par jab teri narazgi ki wajah mai khud hu... to khud se hi nafrat ho rhi h kabir... khud se sharam aa rhi h mjhe..." she sobbed harder... " jee karta h khud ko khatam kar du... aazad kar du tjhe apne aap se... teri khamoshi nhi sahi jaati mjhse kabir... nhi sahi jati" she said crying out her heart.- Hayee😳 Koi kisi se itna pyaar kaise kar sakta hai ❤️❤️❤️ Sach kahoon toh this confrontation reminded me of an Arjun-purvi fight which I loved😳 Love this line yaar👏👏👏 Woh kehte hai na kisi ke gusse mein kisika pyaar jhalakta hai😳
" ae... paagal ladki... esa kuch socha bhi h na to mjhse bura koi nhi hoga samjhi" kabir pushed her a little and cupped her face in his palm. " tjhse naaraj hoke mai kha jaaunga nisha... tere siwa mera koi ghar nhi..." kabir said and pulled her in his tight embrace. Tears flowed through their eyes but this time they were conveying love and just love for each other. " Nisha waada kar tu kabhi esa nhi sochegi kabhi khud ko dusro se compare nhi karegi.." kabir asked. " waada kabir.." she said. They stood their in each other's embrace for a long time.- aww😳 Nibir hug😳
" Waise nisha... vo ladki thi badi hot... h na" kabir came back to his k panti again. " kya... kya bola tne.." nisha jerked him away and glared at him throwing daggers through her eyes. " bus yhi ki vo ladki kitni hot thi" kabir made a cute face. " achha hot thi na... abhi mai yjhe btati hu hot kya hota h.. ruk" she squealed and started running behind him with the pillow. " are nishu dekh... maar mat yaar lag jaegi" he said while running for his life. " lg jaegi to lg jae... aaj mai teri taange tod dungi kabir" nisha hissed. They both kept running in the room and after a time both fall down on the bed with nisha beating him with pillow. But as they landed on the bed with a force the bed broke apart from the middle. -Kabira back to his K panti again 🤣Nibir nok-jhok was Hilarious & adorable as always😆😆😳 Truly Nibirilicious😳 Bed toot gaya 🤣
They both looked at each other in horror and then started laughing like maniacs. After some time nisha stopped laughing and looked at him in tears. " m so sorry kabir... I never meant to hurt u... I can never do that... I know I have proved myself unworthy but I luv u kabir I luv u..." she said with her eyes down. " shhh... nisha dare u ever say urself unworthy... ur my treasure nisha... my heart my soul... my everything is from u... I m sorry too nisha... if I have taken care of u... this wouldn't have happened... just remember one thing... no one in this world can replace u in my heart or in my life... samjhi" kabir said lovingly. She just couldn't say anything and hugged him with all her love. She felt so blessed to have him and thanked god for everything. Kabir looked at her and put a kiss on her forehead - So romantic❤️ Cuteness and adorableness overload😳😳 Lovely indeed
Ab kya kahoon Mansi, this chapter was indeed perfect for me and I loved it to the core🤗
Love u Mansi 🤗🤗
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