a nibir story- TU JO MILA *updated 7/9 on page 35* - Page 28

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Buasi Saru aa gayi🤗 Decided to comment on Part 4 to 6 +Epilogue in a single comment😆

First Lemme Say Sorry 4 SUPERLATE comments😆 Sorry😳 Thank U soo Much 4 Waiting Patiently 4 My Comments🤗

Ailaaa😲 Story KHATAM😆🤣 Inni Jaldi???🤣

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Part 4:😳

Superb Buasi👏👏👏

I m dancing as my guess was rt his gussa was 4 Nisha's behaviour & was 4 the fact dat she hide soo much things frm him😉

NiBir's Confront😲

Kabira ka Gusaa😲

Kabira is Hurt both mentally & Physically🤔 Felt bad 4 him🤔

Nisha bhi nah Kinni Stupid haiKabira ke Outburst clearly showed how much genuine was his love & how much Nishu's words hurt him🤔 @BOLD well said👏👏👏

The pain which was reflecting in his expression is now eating her up causing her an unbearable pain

Part 5:😳

Buasi another superb Part👏👏👏

Nishu ne Kabira ko manane ke liye Sari pehni & pic lagayi bedroom mein.. so cuttee😳

NiBir na bache hai bache...🤣 BED tod dii???🤣(Remined me of YHM where Raman ne tod dia BED vo bhi akele akele🤣🤣🤣)

My fav portions on @PINK I was Awwng & Blashingg☺️ Soo PURE LOVE of NiBir Nazar na lageee☯️ KT 4 NiBir relationship I quoted last two para fully as I loved All🤗

Kabir would have walked only a few steps when he was pulled forcibly and was pinned to the adjacent wall. " samajhta kya h tu khud ko ha... yha mai tjhe mnaye ja rhi hu ur tere nakhre hi nhi katam ho rhe h..." an angry nisha gritted from her teeth. Kabir's initial reaction was of shock was soon converted into an angry one. He rolled again as now nisha was pinned to the wall. " achha... ehsaan kar rhi h tu mjhpe... mjhe mnake... jitna hurt kia h na tune mjhe... uske lie mai tjhe itni jaldi maaf nhi karunga." kabir said. Nisha's anger was also on peak now. " achha... esa kya kia h maine... ha... ha manti hu galti ki h maine kisi ki baateon sinkar mjhe ese react nhi karna chahie tga... par iski sza bhi bhugti h na kabir... jitna dard tjhe hue ha utna hi mjhe bhi hua h... ye hi soch soch k jaan nikali jaa rhi thi ki mai esa kar kaise sakti hu esa kh kaise sakti hu... par tu tu mjhe akad dikha rha h..." she screamed pushing him. " achha mai tjhe akad dikha rha hu... ur ye sab kya h galti teri ur sza to maine bhi bugti h nisha... tu akeli nhi tadpi h... mai bhi utna hi roya hu... utne hi dard hua h mjhe bhi... " kabir said grabbing her shoulders. " to kyu itna dard de rha h khud ko... mai galat hu to mjhe sehne de... tu kyu khu ko punish kar rha h" she asked grabbing his collar. " kyuki pyaar karta hu tjhse nisha... paaglo ki tarah pyaar karta hu... tjhe agar ek sui bhi chubhti h na to talwar chalne jitna dard hota h mjhe samjhi... ur jab tu esi baatien karti h na to esa lgta h kisi ne mera dil hi nikal lia h mere seene se... saans lena mushkil ho jata h mera..." he said tears brimming through his eyes. Nisha couldn't taje it anymore and she just crushed herself on him pulling him closer to herself. " ur jab tu baat nhi karta na mjhse to mera jeena bekaar lhne lgta h kabir... man karta h khud ko itni saza du ki jaan nikal jae meri... ur us par jab teri narazgi ki wajah mai khud hu... to khud se hi nafrat ho rhi h kabir... khud se sharam aa rhi h mjhe..." she sobbed harder... " jee karta h khud ko khatam kar du... aazad kar du tjhe apne aap se... teri khamoshi nhi sahi jaati mjhse kabir... nhi sahi jati" she said crying out her heart. " ae... paagal ladki... esa kuch socha bhi h na to mjhse bura koi nhi hoga samjhi" kabir pushed her a little and cupped her face in his palm. " tjhse naaraj hoke mai kha jaaunga nisha... tere siwa mera koi ghar nhi..." kabir said and pulled her in his tight embrace. Tears flowed through their eyes but this time they were conveying love and just love for each other. " Nisha waada kar tu kabhi esa nhi sochegi kabhi khud ko dusro se compare nhi karegi.." kabir asked. " waada kabir.." she said. They stood their in each other's embrace for a long time.

" Waise nisha... vo ladki thi badi hot... h na" kabir came back to his k panti again. " kya... kya bola tne.." nisha jerked him away and glared at him throwing daggers through her eyes. " bus yhi ki vo ladki kitni hot thi" kabir made a cute face. " achha hot thi na... abhi mai yjhe btati hu hot kya hota h.. ruk" she squealed and started running behind him with the pillow. " are nishu dekh... maar mat yaar lag jaegi" he said while running for his life. " lg jaegi to lg jae... aaj mai teri taange tod dungi kabir" nisha hissed. They both kept running in the room and after a time both fall down on the bed with nisha beating him with pillow. But as they landed on the bed with a force the bed broke apart from the middle.

They both looked at each other in horror and then started laughing like maniacs. After some time nisha stopped laughing and looked at him in tears. " m so sorry kabir... I never meant to hurt u... I can never do that... I know I have proved myself unworthy but I luv u kabir I luv u..." she said with her eyes down. " shhh... nisha dare u ever say urself unworthy... ur my treasure nisha... my heart my soul... my everything is from u... I m sorry too nisha... if I have taken care of u... this wouldn't have happened... just remember one thing... no one in this world can replace u in my heart or in my life... samjhi" kabir said lovingly. She just couldn't say anything and hugged him with all her love. She felt so blessed to have him and thanked god for everything. Kabir looked at her and put a kiss on her forehead when he felt she shivered. " Nisha... u r ok?" He asked concerned. " yes kabir... m just.." she couldn't complete as her head throbbed and she fainted.

Waiting 4 my next guess to complete😆 "Khush khabiri"😉 going to read part 6🤣

Part 6:😳

Lemme Dance I guessed Khush khabiri frm the update where Nishu FAINTED for FIRST TIME
Baaki sab tensed the nishu ki haalath toh dekh kar & I was 😈 like this😈
Hehehehe Proud of ME

Superb part Buasi👏 In fact THE BESTEST part of this Story👏

Beautifully Written👏

I loved how K kabira expalined Nishu abt her PREGNANCY😆🤣

Only Our Kabira can do this🤣

My fav @PINK The way he touched her BELLY The KISS☺️ Sab I loved it so quoted all👏

nishu mjhe na tjhe ek bhot imp baat btani h" kabir said in a serious tone. She opened her eyes and looked at him. " Kya" she asked. " vo ye ki... ki... ki mjhe na.. kisi se bhoot pyaar ho gya h... ur mai ab uske bina jee nhi sakta ur ab tjhe uske sath adjust karna padega" he said looking down in such a serious way. Nisha slapped kabir " kya bola tne kabir ek to mai yha bimaar padi hu... upar se tu esi baat kar rha h.." she said and started beating him. " U donkey monkey duffer idiot gadha..." she was in her jhansi ki rani mode. " are are nishu ruk na... hospital m to violence mat kar... ruk" kabir said trapping her hands behind her head. Nisha looked at him angrily. " tjhe jaana nhi h ki vo kaun h" he asked huskily. " bta k to dekh... fir btati hu" she hissed. He smiled wickedly and placed her and his hand on her belly. " ye hai... jisse mai bhot bhot bhot pyaar karta hu..." he said looking in her eyes lovingly. Nisha took some fractions of second to understood what he meant. " sach.?" She asked. " much.." he said placing a kiss on her forehead. A tear of happiness rolled down her cheek and she hugged kabir. " ur pregnant nisha...u gonna be the best mother nishu..." kabir said hugging her back. " and u gonna be the best k father" she said hitting his arm. " u scared me" she said. " nisha... m sorry" kabir said and wiped her tears. " but m angry too... pehle kyu nahi btaya nisha ki teri tabiyat thik nhi h... doc ko bhi nhi dikhaya... ur itna door chali aae" kabir faked anger. " Tere pass ana chahti thi kabir... fir mai kis haal m hu ye mayne nhi rakhta.." she said making him look into her eyes. Kabir looked at her who was looking back at him with all the love in herself for him. Kabir leaned and kissed her juicy lips softly mumbling a thank you. " thank u nisha... mjhe meri zindgi ka best gift dene k lie". Nisha immediately responded and kissed him back hungrily. " Thank u kabir mjhpe itna pyaar lootane k lie" she mumbled. They kissed each other with the high end passion for each other.

Again I loved Cousins teasing NiBir😆 @Blue🤣 NiBir Bachom ke Bacha aane wala hai..🤣
Luk at Kabira still Bacha🤣 now going to have his won Bacha🤣

" waise sab mere romance k dushman h... koi na koi beech m aa hi jata h" he said. " mister agar tmne romance na kiya hota... to ye yha hospital m na hoti samjha " dolly said teasingly. Kabir made a cute baby face. " awww... kabir stop making baby faces... now to grow up... u two gonna have a baby soon" umesh said hitting kabir's head playfully. Kabir and nisha gave them silly smiles while all of them shook their heads.

NiBir Teraace Scene The BESTEST & The Song added more beauty to it + It justified ur story's title too👏

I mquoating alll😆 as I cant chose frm them😆🤗 @PINK

@RED Awww☺️ Soo CuteeeAgain KT 4 NiBir☯️😊

" nishu... " kabir said. " kabir... u don't need to say anything... I understand" she said giving him a side hug. " nhi nishu... kh lene de kuch baatien jo hmesha se kehna chahta tha" he said. " Pta h nisha... ek time tha jb mjhe ye lagta tha ki aakhir mai itna akela kyu hu... kyu koi nhi h mere pass... kabhi nhi socha tha ki mai kisi se itna pyaar karunga ki khud ko hi bhool jaunga... ye pyaar ur shadi hmesha mjhe filmy ur bekaar ki baatien lagti thi... fir jabse tjhse mila... tere sath ladte jhagdte... prblms ko tackle karte karte pta nhi kab... kab tjhse itna pyaar ho gya ki ab tu ur mai alag nhi lgte mjhe... ur ab jab hmara baby is dunia m aane wala h... to itna complete mehsus ho rha h ki... " kabir choked. " ki jaisa pehle kabhi nhi lga... hai na kabir..." she asked softly. Kabir just nodded. " itna sab kehne ki koi jarurat nhi thi... bus ek baar mjhe apne seene se lga leta to mai sab samaj jati kabir" she said. Kabir looked at her with tears.

Kabir took her in a tight bone crushing hug and nisha reciprocated with the equal intensity.

Kabir cupped her face and touched her forehead with his. Nisha let her tears fall at the moment of joy they were sharing.

She kissed his hands and then his forehead wiping away his tears and gesturing him not to cry but just enjoy their new found happiness.

He assured her through his eyes and kissed away her tears too. " u gave me everything nisha... jo maine shayad kabhi socha bhi nhi vo bhi" he said.

Nisha smiled at her loving husband as he bent down and kissed her belly whispering " I love you too baby...". She felt so complete and overwhelmed. Nisha too bent down on her knees and kissed him softly " I love my baby's father" she whispered. Kabir encircled her waist and kissed her back while nisha took support of his arms kissing him to oblivion.

Loved it👍🏼 To the Core🤗❤️

Abt EPILOGUE:😳

Lovely Epilogue dat was filled with K panti of Kabira😆 & Blashing of Nishu😉 Which Is My FAV

Special Claps👏

My fav @PINK🤗

Nisha - tere sath bitaya har pal hmesha meri aankho k saamne rehta h kabir... waqt kitna bhi guzar jae... tera pyaar waisa ka waisa hi h...

Kabir - hmara pyaar nisha...

Nisha smiled at him and he bend and kissed her forehead. She blushed and made him look towards the kids.

Nisha - kabir... kuch to sharam kar yaar

Kabir - poori zindagi sharam nhi ki ab kya karu...

He said and kissed her cheeks again.

Nishank - dadu dadi... aap dno ki love story best h...

Kabir hugged nishank while nisha kissed his forehead. Kabir looked at nisha and they both felt blessed to witness this moment in their life where after all these years they were still together and forever.

Shayad this is what people call happily ever after... where love never ends nor the magic.

@RED True❤️ & NiBir r the BESTEST🤗

Thank U Buasi 4 this lovely Story🤗

Thank U 4 all PMs🤗

It was a PLEASURE to read this story🤗 Like ur previous story This also RACKED👍🏼

Do write More🤗 q ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: Finally I finished reading & writing my Chotu Comment in almost 1 1/2 hr🤣
Now I m RELIEVED🤗 Thank U 4 Ur PATIENCE BUASI🤗❤️

Originally posted by: nibirfever

I was dying to comment on this story from a long time but couldn't as I forgot the password of my account now finally
that was perfect
from the very first word till the end of the story you were brilliant
you are a true writer for me

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

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beautiful update mansi 👏 👏
perfectly n magically described
I felt as if I was watching nibir
I could feel their emotions
I was just lost in the story
u r a perfectionist
no one can write it the way u did 👏

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

I love U too Buasi🤗

Originally posted by: nitika4

Tsm 5

Awesome mansi

You r fabulous

You described every emotion so beautifully kabir anger, nisha and kabir pain , their guilt loved it

Liked bed tootne wala scene

Lovely update