a nibir story- TU JO MILA *updated 7/9 on page 35*

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<font size="5">hi peeps... yes m back once again...😆 i know i know.. abhi meri story katam hue jyada din nhi hue h ur mai phir aa gyi...🤣 par kya karu... u people know me na...😉 rha hi nhi jata na... ya phir dmm (saru style)😆😳 waise ye dil hai ki manta nhi na...🤣 achha enough of my blabbering... coming to the story... the idea of this story is niha's baby... n m its nurturing mother🤣... kyuki it is with a twist...😆 mai ise ese start karungi ye maine bhi nhi socha tha par idea h kabhi bhi aa sakta h.. to aa gya ur maine likh dia... ab tm log imagine kar pao to kar lena...🤣

Nibir story - TU JO MILA

A lady in her 70s was sitting in the verandah of a big house and was surrounded by her grandchildren who were continually asking her to tell them a story.

Tanu - nishu dadi.. pls story sunao na... dekho we r sitting for so long... pls na dadi...

Nishank - tanu... dadi ka naam nhi lete...

Tanu - kya nish bhai... ab hmare itne saare dadu dadi h to... naam lie bina kaise pta chalega...

Her other siblings supported her while nishank glared at her.

Nisha giggled seeing her grand children's sweet talks. Yes she was none other than nisha... nisha kabir kumar... now in her 70s living with all her cousins and their spouses in gangwal house. And the bunch of these naughty kids are their grandchildren as their parents are out for a function and left them in gangwal house and these kids love their grandparents more than anything. Nisha was still smiling to herself when a little boy came running to her.

Deepu - kya dadi... aap aiche kyu hach rhe ho.. mjhe bhi joke sunna h..

Nisha picked him up and settle him in her lap.

Nisha - are baby... dadi to aap sab ko dekh k muskura rhi h... achha btao u learn counting ki nhi..

Deepu - kya dadi... m only 5... mai itti padhai kaiche kalu...

Nisha laughed out loud at him.

Nisha - ok baby... dadi will teach you... dekho ye aapke saare didi bhaiya h na hm inhe count karte h... ok..

Deepu - nhi dadi... I know they are 10 n m 11... dadi where is kabir dadu... he will tell us story... aap to kuch nhi sunate..

Nisha - achha... to go search yaar dadu only.. fir mere pass koi nhi aana jab tmhare dadu tm logo ki chocolate kha le to...

The little naughty kids made face at her and ran towards nisha's room to find their fav dadu.

Here nisha was thinking how the life changed. Once there was a time when she was a tomboy who would have beaten the person black and blue if someone has told her that she will have grandchildren and she would be telling them some story. But no one knows what course the destiny take and now today she had 2 children that too happily married and in a total 11 grandchildren. Everything changed but the love remained the same. The cousins love which was still not changed a bit that is the only reason why all of them are still together and living in their very own house. Their children may have shifted due to their work priorities but they too have the same bond inherited from their parents and what amazed her the most is the love that is still young between her and kabir. They may have been aged but the sparks, the magic was still there. Or one could say it has grown to be more deeper and darker. His one touch still sends an electrical wave through her body. And not forgot he has been aged to be more k than he was before. He still love to be fooling around making everybody smile and adore these kids like anything.

She was in her thoughts when the army of kids were back in front of her sitting quietly. Nisha came out of her trance when someone pulled her clothes.

Nisha - are... kyu kya hua...waapas kaise aa gye tm log... mile nhi tmhe tmhare fav dadu..
Riti - kyuki dadu room m nhi h... dolly dadi said ki he has gone on a walk... (she pouted)

Nisha - achha... to islie ye paltan mere samne baithi hai...

Everybody nodded in a yes.

Tia - dadi pls story sunao na... dekho na no one is here sab kaam m lge h... aap hi kuch bolo na...

Rudra - ha dadi... aap apni ur kabir dadu ki story sunao na pls...

Nisha - usme kya sunana h... jaise tmhare dadu abhi h na waise hi pehle bhi the... utne hi k...

Riti - ur aap j... hai na dadi...

Everybody giggled while nisha looked at her shocked.

Nisha - ye kisne bola ki mai j hu... jarur ye kabir ne kha hoga... aane do aaj to iski taang hi tod dungi... k kahi ka...

Kids started laughing.

Nishank - dadi aap hi hmesha itta gussa hote ho kabir dadu to kabhi bhi gussa nhi karte...

Tanu - ha nisha dadi... kabhi kabir dadu ne aap pe gussa kia h.?

Nisha smiled sadly at the kids.

Nisha - ha bachha... vo ruthata to kisi bhi baat p nhi... par bus ek baar hi aaj tk use gussa dekha h... ur vo galti bhi meri hi thi...

She got lost in her thoughts again.

Deepu - esa kya kia tha dadi aapne.. hme bhi sunna h...

Rudra - ha dadi please na btao na...

Everybody started asking for her story while nisha was constantly trying to change the topic but the kids being kids started pleading her in every possible way.

Nisha - no means no... tm sab bhot chote ho...

Kids - no... hme sunna h... sunao na dadi... please please pretty please...

They made cute baby faces and finally nisha had to give in.


dekho i know its chotu sa.. but abhi itne se kaam chalana padega... and nihu baby... this is specially for u... hope tmhe achha lge... ur na lge to tamatar chappal are allowed but dheere se...😆

index-
part-1 above
part-2 on page 8
part-3 on page 15
part-4 on page 24
part-5 on page 29
part-6 and epilogue on page 35
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mansi meri morning to good ho gai..
Thank you new story start karne k liye..
Thanks to niha also..

Now about story...
Title itself is super
Starting to bht hi dhasu h..
Nisha - dadi ...
Kabir - dadu ... Still k
Sounds nice n interesting...
Do continue soon..
PM ane se pahle hi comment karne lage..kya kare khud ko rok hi nhi paye...
Kyu k ab PM aa gya hoga..
Islie thanx for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina.majik

Mansi meri morning to good ho gai..

Thank you new story start karne k liye..
Thanks to niha also..

Now about story...
Title itself is super
Starting to bht hi dhasu h..
Nisha - dadi ...
Kabir - dadu ... Still k
Sounds nice n interesting...
Do continue soon..
PM ane se pahle hi comment karne lage..kya kare khud ko rok hi nhi paye...
Kyu k ab PM aa gya hoga..
Islie thanx for PM


awww thanks naina... pm bhi aa hi gya hoga yaar... mjhe pm send karne m bhot time lagta h... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..mansi...its such a cute story..lovd it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres

Thanx mansi for coming back wid a grwat bang...😊
nisha dadi...awww
kabir ab apne grandchildren ki b chocolate kha leta h🤣🤣
kabir pehle se b jyada k ho gya h...😆
loved d bonding of GC...
& Cousins bonding n love sab waisa hi h awww...
loved k and j wala dialog...
but m curious to know aisi kaunsi baat thi...ki kabira nisha pe gussa hua tha...
plz unfold d mystry soon...
thanx for d pm
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start dr...
but i dont think i will be able to continue reading tis coz i leaving back to hostel today!!
anyway loved ur writing!! 😉
Edited by ..krystal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mansi🤗
morning uttgayi aur dekha tho PM 😃😃u posted it 😃😃
nishu -daadi...kabir -daadu phir bhi K panti nahi chooda😆
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AMAZING YAAR😃
LOVED IT👏
Edited by Niha205 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nisha Dadi
Kabir aaj bhi utna hi K hai 🤣
Samajh gai Nisha kis galti ki baat kar rahi hai
Sorry but I can't imagine NiBir in 70's 🤣
For me they are always in their 20's ... Especailly Kabir ☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res 😊
unres
yay mansi a new story wo bhi itni jaldi
meri good morning aur bhi good ho gayi
nishu dadi n kabir dadu aawweee
kabir apne grandchildrens ki chocolate kha jata h lolz 🤣 🤣
aawweee the bacchas are so cute ☺️
yeh dono abhi bhi K aur J h 😉
thank you for the pm 😊
aur ab jaldi jaldi update karo 😃
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow mansi...new story woh bhi itni jaldi...😃
dil kuhush kar diya tune toh...😳
nisha dadi and kabir dadu...abhi bhi k and j😆
loved it...update soon...👍🏼

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