a nibir story- TU JO MILA *updated 7/9 on page 35* - Page 27

Originally posted by: itznimi003

fir se res🤣
unres
loved d way kabira tells nishu abt dat news🤣

kabira k kahin ka 🤣

nishu is preggy😊

loved der kiss❤️😳

ye cousins hmesha galat waqt pe hi tapakte h🤣

congo would be parents😊

loved d way kabir told dolly abt nishu's carelessness n in nxt sec. he says dat m too responsible for dis aww my kabira

loved nibir's terrace scene it was so emotional n romantic❤️

loved d way he kissed his baby awww

epilogue

kabir abhi bhi nhi sudhra...🤣 k kahin ka

loved der romance as dada dadi❤️

nishu abhi b kabira ko us baat k liye sorry bolti h...

nishank awww

Shayad this is what people call
happily ever after... where love never
ends nor the magic.

@pink dis line takes my ❤️ just loved it

awww nimi thank you soo much

Originally posted by: naina.majik

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">story khatm 😲😲itti jaldi 😲</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">beautiful...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">loved it...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">kabir kabhi badal nhi sakta😆😆</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">kabira's K pan😆...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">loved ending and epilogue...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Super happy ending...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">New story jaldi se milegi na😃😃</font>

thanks nishi... milegi milegi jaldi milegi

are res walo... unres kardo yaar

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

ok. So this is my first comment on ur story per say and I m really happy writing this😆I love writing comments on your stories Mansi and this story is again one of my favorites🤗😃I hate making u wait for my comments yaar but u knw I m very busy and uske upar se ek toh I have this bad habit of writing lamba comments iss liye tumhari story pe comment karne mein mujhe time lagta hai😆

Since maine tumhe itna wait karwaya hai iss liye another surprise for u😆😳

Chapter 1- Love the concept and the intro❤️👏👏

Nibir as grandparents is amazing yaar😃

Nisha giggled seeing her grand children's sweet talks. Yes she was none other than nisha... nisha kabir kumar... now in her 70s living with all her cousins and their spouses in gangwal house. And the bunch of these naughty kids are their grandchildren as their parents are out for a function and left them in gangwal house and these kids love their grandparents more than anything. Nisha was still smiling to herself when a little boy came running to her.- Loved ur narration Mansi😃😃

Nisha - are baby... dadi to aap sab ko dekh k muskura rhi h... achha btao u learn counting ki nhi..
Deepu - kya dadi... m only 5... mai itti padhai kaiche kalu...- Choo cute😳😳Nibir ke pote toh unse bhi zyaada adorable hain😳

Here nisha was thinking how the life changed. Once there was a time when she was a tomboy who would have beaten the person black and blue if someone has told her that she will have grandchildren and she would be telling them some story. But no one knows what course the destiny take and now today she had 2 children that too happily married and in a total 11 grandchildren. Everything changed but the love remained the same. The cousins love which was still not changed a bit that is the only reason why all of them are still together and living in their very own house. Their children may have shifted due to their work priorities but they too have the same bond inherited from their parents and what amazed her the most is the love that is still young between her and kabir. They may have been aged but the sparks, the magic was still there. Or one could say it has grown to be more deeper and darker. His one touch still sends an electrical wave through her body. And not forgot he has been aged to be more k than he was before. He still love to be fooling around making everybody smile and adore these kids like anything. - love this part❤️Love ur decription👏👏👏It is adorable to read how Nibir's bond has remained as strong as it was earlier and how their love for each other hasn't changedKaash aisi stories hamari bhi ho

Waise 11 granchildren😆😆Who would have thought Nibir will have so many grandchildren😆😆

Deepu - nhi dadi... I know they are 10 n m 11... dadi where is kabir dadu... he will tell us story... aap to kuch nhi sunate..

Nisha - achha... to go search yaar dadu only.. fir mere pass koi nhi aana jab tmhare dadu tm logo ki chocolate kha le to...- Kisne socha tha ki iss umar mein bhi Nisha will be J of Kabir😆😆Waqt badal gaya magar yeh nahin😆That is the best part about Nibir❤️

Iss story ki shuruat bahut acchi ki hai tumne Mansi👍🏼Cz we readers can imagine ourselves in the place of the baccchas and u can be imagined as Nishu who is telling us her story. U have intrigued ur readers very well👏Waise we r always eager to read ur stories but I love ur narration style in this chapter🤗

thanks mihu... aakhir mere wait ka result mjhe hmesha achha hi milta h...

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Chapter 2- Fabulous chapter yaar👏👏👏

Love all the parts thoroughly❤️

ab kya tareef karoon 😆

Nisha and kabir were household names now where nisha was the best shooter of the country and kabir was the most famous and nationally acclaimed choreographer. They were the best friends cum admirers of each other. Kabir never ever missed any of her event while nisha always tried her best to be with him in his every single venture. He was famous... actually way more famous then nisha and she had always wholeheartedly accepted it. She was happy... happy with him, for him. He was the heartthrob of every girl. He was what any girl could wish for. The cute couple was truly madly and deeply in love with each other and they knew it. All was going smoothly in their life. Kabir being kabir never missed a single chance to annoy nisha and she used to be very angry on him every now and then. She always use to think that never in her life with kabir she had seen him getting angry on someone and here she was... always ready to blast on him.- Love this part😃Ur narration is always on point👍🏼One cannot be in more awe of this amazing couple yaar and the bond and the love they share❤️

" Nisha... nisha... jaldi bahar aa... bhot achhe news leke aaya hu..." kabir was jumping with joy. " Kya hua kabir yaar... itna kyu chilla rhe h " nisha said coming out of their room. " Nisha nisha nisha... " kabir picked her up and started spinning around. " kabir... neeche utar mjhe chakkar aa jaenge yaar " nisha said. He placed her on the floor gently. " Nishu tjhe pta h... mjhe new york m ek live concert ka offer aaya hai... " he exclaimed in joy. " sachhi... " she asked. " Sachhi muchhi kuchhi nisha ki bachhi... m so happy yaar... tjhe pta h ye kitni badi opportunity h... mera career mera dance school sab ek nayi height p hoga..." kabir said dreamily. " Jaroor hoga kabir..." she said and hugged him. He smiled and hugged her back. " nisha next week mjhe new york jana h... ur usi week mera performance bhi h... I know ki tera final h usse pehle but... kya tu..." kabir said. " Shhh... kuch kehne ki jarurat nhi h kabir... mai jarur aaungi... chahe kuch bhi ho jae... mai tere lie vha jarur aaungi..." she said placing a feathery kiss on his cheek. Kabir smiled wider. " I know my nisha never breaks her promises..." kabir said and kissed her softly yet deeply.-❤️❤️❤️Romantic, adorable, cute, lovely, amazing... aur kya kahoon😳Love Kabir's excitement, Nibir's understanding and their love🤗

Felt bad for Nisha when she missed her targetEspecially when she had been waiting for this opportunity for over a year

" Nisha... kya ho gya h tjhe yaar... u have to go... " she said to herself trying to control herself. Her head was spinning again. Her flight was scheduled in 4 hours but here she was a total mess. Her health has deteriorated instead of being better. " nisha... nisha... control urself yaar... remember your kabir is waiting... u have to be there... for him " she said.- U can never stop admiring the love Nibir have for each other😳

Nisha was crying in her bedroom when her phone rang. She saw the caller id and wiped her tears trying to control them. " hello kabir... kaisa h... sab thik chal rha h na... tune kuch khaya na... sara din kaam mat karta rehna... ur tune vo..." she started off. " nisha... kya hua... tu ro rhi thi kya " he asked concerned. " nhi... nhi to mai kyu roungi..." she said. " jhooth bolegi mjhse..?" Kabir said. " Mjhe pta h u missed ur target but koi baat nhi na nisha... next time you will surely win" he tried to cheer her up. But here she was tensed... tensed because she knew if he get to know about her health he will be right back without a second thought. " tjhe kisne btaya... " she asked. " supriya ka phone aaya tha... usne btaya... " kabir replied. " Ur kuch kha usne " she asked in a timid voice. " nhi... kyu kuch hua h kya " he asked. " Nhi to kuch nhi hua... mai to bus ese hi" she said. " Achha nisha I will call u back... mjhe jana padega... ur ha ab rona nhi ur apna dhyaan rakhna... ur tu aaegi na" he asked softly. " ha kabir... tjhe pta h na mai kabhi apna promise nhi todti... ur you too take care ok... parso milte h" she said and hanged up- Love the way Nisha is trying to mask her pain and be strong for Kabir😳The way Kabir understands her is adorableTheir concern for each other and the fact that they can leave anything for each other is just amazing yaar

Mrs. Nisha kabir kumar? " the driver enquired. " Yes " she said smiling at her own name. " how cute my name sounds with his " she thought smiling.- Adorable😳😳

Here kabir was in rehearsal hall doing what he is best in. But his heart wasn't present in it. He was somewhere else. His heart was waiting... waiting for its beat come and make him alive once again . One of his student called him and they started their rehearsal. Kabir was dancing on the beat when he felt nisha's presence. His face was showing his happiness, that gloomy expression vanished and got replaced by his brightest smile. He twirled the lady hard with whom he was rehearsing and freed her. He reached the door and there entered his reason of life his wifey. He immediately took her in his arms and started twirling with her. Nisha was more than happy seeing him and being in his arm was the best feeling. She leaned on him and hugged him like no one's is watching. The music stopped and the crew applaud loudly for the love birds. Nisha realised her surroundings and left him- Loved this part also😆❤️lagta hai favorite parts highlight karte karte post limit khatam ho jaayegi😆Their excitement, their perception of the other's presence, their love for each other...everything is perfect yaar and beyond adorable

" Nisha... tu aa gyi... kitni der lga di... pta h maine tjhe kitna miss kia" kabir said. " kitna miss kia " nisha asked. " itna saa" kabir said showing her a small gap between his fingers. " kabir tu kitna k hai yaar... " she said. " Ur tu mere k se kitti j h yaar " he replied laughing. " Chal hotel chalte h... fir shaam ko concert bhi h na... " kabir said leading the way taking her hand in his. She smiled at him. But she felt she will trip any moment she clutched his hand tightly and gave him her best smile.
" Tu thik h na nisha... " kabir asked concerned. " offo... sil of laxmi... relax me m perfectly fine ok... " she said.- Cuteness overload😳😳

So a perfect chapter once again😳

🤗 thanks mihu... the entry part is my fav too.. ❤️

Unressed on pg 32 and 35🤣

Originally posted by: Itsmeriya

Nice chapter
Kabir itna ghusse mein... 😒

😆

Originally posted by: Itsmeriya

Lovely SS...😳

Epilogue kitna cute tha...

This is for u...👏🤗

thanks riya

Buasi Saru aa gayi🤗 Decided to comment on Part 4 to 6 +Epilogue in a single comment😆

First Lemme Say Sorry 4 SUPERLATE comments😆 Sorry😳 Thank U soo Much 4 Waiting Patiently 4 My Comments🤗

Ailaaa😲 Story KHATAM😆🤣 Inni Jaldi???😲🤣🤣🤣

Shuru kar rahi hu apna Chotu Comment with the prayer IF iss comment ko OVERLIMIT na bol de...🤣

Part 4:😳

Superb Buasi👏👏👏

I m dancing as my guess was rt his gussa was 4 Nisha's behaviour & was 4 the fact dat she hide soo much things frm him😉

NiBir's Confront😲

Kabira ka Gusaa😲

Kabira is Hurt both mentally & Physically🤔 Felt bad 4 him🤔

Nisha bhi nah Kinni Stupid haiKabira ke Outburst clearly showed how much genuine was his love & how much Nishu's words hurt him🤔 @BOLD well said👏👏👏

The pain which was reflecting in his expression is now eating her up causing her an unbearable pain

Part 5:😳

Buasi another superb Part👏👏👏

Nishu ne Kabira ko manane ke liye Sari pehni & pic lagayi bedroom mein.. so cuttee😳

NiBir na bache hai bache...😆🤣🤣🤣 BED tod dii???😲🤣🤣🤣(Remined me of YHM where Raman ne tod dia BED vo bhi akele akele🤣🤣🤣)

My fav portions on @PINK I was Awwng & Blashingg☺️ Soo PURE LOVE of NiBir Nazar na lageee☯️ KT 4 NiBir relationship I quoted last two para fully as I loved All🤗

Kabir would have walked only a few steps when he was pulled forcibly and was pinned to the adjacent wall. " samajhta kya h tu khud ko ha... yha mai tjhe mnaye ja rhi hu ur tere nakhre hi nhi katam ho rhe h..." an angry nisha gritted from her teeth. Kabir's initial reaction was of shock was soon converted into an angry one. He rolled again as now nisha was pinned to the wall. " achha... ehsaan kar rhi h tu mjhpe... mjhe mnake... jitna hurt kia h na tune mjhe... uske lie mai tjhe itni jaldi maaf nhi karunga." kabir said. Nisha's anger was also on peak now. " achha... esa kya kia h maine... ha... ha manti hu galti ki h maine kisi ki baateon sinkar mjhe ese react nhi karna chahie tga... par iski sza bhi bhugti h na kabir... jitna dard tjhe hue ha utna hi mjhe bhi hua h... ye hi soch soch k jaan nikali jaa rhi thi ki mai esa kar kaise sakti hu esa kh kaise sakti hu... par tu tu mjhe akad dikha rha h..." she screamed pushing him. " achha mai tjhe akad dikha rha hu... ur ye sab kya h galti teri ur sza to maine bhi bugti h nisha... tu akeli nhi tadpi h... mai bhi utna hi roya hu... utne hi dard hua h mjhe bhi... " kabir said grabbing her shoulders. " to kyu itna dard de rha h khud ko... mai galat hu to mjhe sehne de... tu kyu khu ko punish kar rha h" she asked grabbing his collar. " kyuki pyaar karta hu tjhse nisha... paaglo ki tarah pyaar karta hu... tjhe agar ek sui bhi chubhti h na to talwar chalne jitna dard hota h mjhe samjhi... ur jab tu esi baatien karti h na to esa lgta h kisi ne mera dil hi nikal lia h mere seene se... saans lena mushkil ho jata h mera..." he said tears brimming through his eyes. Nisha couldn't taje it anymore and she just crushed herself on him pulling him closer to herself. " ur jab tu baat nhi karta na mjhse to mera jeena bekaar lhne lgta h kabir... man karta h khud ko itni saza du ki jaan nikal jae meri... ur us par jab teri narazgi ki wajah mai khud hu... to khud se hi nafrat ho rhi h kabir... khud se sharam aa rhi h mjhe..." she sobbed harder... " jee karta h khud ko khatam kar du... aazad kar du tjhe apne aap se... teri khamoshi nhi sahi jaati mjhse kabir... nhi sahi jati" she said crying out her heart. " ae... paagal ladki... esa kuch socha bhi h na to mjhse bura koi nhi hoga samjhi" kabir pushed her a little and cupped her face in his palm. " tjhse naaraj hoke mai kha jaaunga nisha... tere siwa mera koi ghar nhi..." kabir said and pulled her in his tight embrace. Tears flowed through their eyes but this time they were conveying love and just love for each other. " Nisha waada kar tu kabhi esa nhi sochegi kabhi khud ko dusro se compare nhi karegi.." kabir asked. " waada kabir.." she said. They stood their in each other's embrace for a long time.
" Waise nisha... vo ladki thi badi hot... h na" kabir came back to his k panti again. " kya... kya bola tne.." nisha jerked him away and glared at him throwing daggers through her eyes. " bus yhi ki vo ladki kitni hot thi" kabir made a cute face. " achha hot thi na... abhi mai yjhe btati hu hot kya hota h.. ruk" she squealed and started running behind him with the pillow. " are nishu dekh... maar mat yaar lag jaegi" he said while running for his life. " lg jaegi to lg jae... aaj mai teri taange tod dungi kabir" nisha hissed. They both kept running in the room and after a time both fall down on the bed with nisha beating him with pillow. But as they landed on the bed with a force the bed broke apart from the middle.

They both looked at each other in horror and then started laughing like maniacs. After some time nisha stopped laughing and looked at him in tears. " m so sorry kabir... I never meant to hurt u... I can never do that... I know I have proved myself unworthy but I luv u kabir I luv u..." she said with her eyes down. " shhh... nisha dare u ever say urself unworthy... ur my treasure nisha... my heart my soul... my everything is from u... I m sorry too nisha... if I have taken care of u... this wouldn't have happened... just remember one thing... no one in this world can replace u in my heart or in my life... samjhi" kabir said lovingly. She just couldn't say anything and hugged him with all her love. She felt so blessed to have him and thanked god for everything. Kabir looked at her and put a kiss on her forehead when he felt she shivered. " Nisha... u r ok?" He asked concerned. " yes kabir... m just.." she couldn't complete as her head throbbed and she fainted.

Waiting 4 my next guess to complete😆 "Khush khabiri"😉 going to read part 6🤣

Part 6:😳

Lemme Dance I guessed Khush khabiri frm the update where Nishu FAINTED for FIRST TIME🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
Baaki sab tensed the nishu ki haalath toh dekh kar & I was 😈 like this😈
Hehehehe Proud of ME😎🥳🥳🥳🥳

Superb part Buasi👏👏👏👏👏 In fact THE BESTEST part of this Story👏👏👏👏

Beautifully Written👏👏👏👏👏👏

I loved how K kabira expalined Nishu abt her PREGNANCY😆🤣

Only Our Kabira can do this🤣

My fav @PINK The way he touched her BELLY The KISS☺️ Sab I loved it so quoted all👏

nishu mjhe na tjhe ek bhot imp baat btani h" kabir said in a serious tone. She opened her eyes and looked at him. " Kya" she asked. " vo ye ki... ki... ki mjhe na.. kisi se bhoot pyaar ho gya h... ur mai ab uske bina jee nhi sakta ur ab tjhe uske sath adjust karna padega" he said looking down in such a serious way. Nisha slapped kabir " kya bola tne kabir ek to mai yha bimaar padi hu... upar se tu esi baat kar rha h.." she said and started beating him. " U donkey monkey duffer idiot gadha..." she was in her jhansi ki rani mode. " are are nishu ruk na... hospital m to violence mat kar... ruk" kabir said trapping her hands behind her head. Nisha looked at him angrily. " tjhe jaana nhi h ki vo kaun h" he asked huskily. " bta k to dekh... fir btati hu" she hissed. He smiled wickedly and placed her and his hand on her belly. " ye hai... jisse mai bhot bhot bhot pyaar karta hu..." he said looking in her eyes lovingly. Nisha took some fractions of second to understood what he meant. " sach.?" She asked. " much.." he said placing a kiss on her forehead. A tear of happiness rolled down her cheek and she hugged kabir. " ur pregnant nisha...u gonna be the best mother nishu..." kabir said hugging her back. " and u gonna be the best k father" she said hitting his arm. " u scared me" she said. " nisha... m sorry" kabir said and wiped her tears. " but m angry too... pehle kyu nahi btaya nisha ki teri tabiyat thik nhi h... doc ko bhi nhi dikhaya... ur itna door chali aae" kabir faked anger. " Tere pass ana chahti thi kabir... fir mai kis haal m hu ye mayne nhi rakhta.." she said making him look into her eyes. Kabir looked at her who was looking back at him with all the love in herself for him. Kabir leaned and kissed her juicy lips softly mumbling a thank you. " thank u nisha... mjhe meri zindgi ka best gift dene k lie". Nisha immediately responded and kissed him back hungrily. " Thank u kabir mjhpe itna pyaar lootane k lie" she mumbled. They kissed each other with the high end passion for each other.

Again I loved Cousins teasing NiBir😆 @Blue🤣 NiBir Bachom ke Bacha aane wala hai..🤣
Luk at Kabira still Bacha🤣 now going to have his won Bacha🤣

" waise sab mere romance k dushman h... koi na koi beech m aa hi jata h" he said. " mister agar tmne romance na kiya hota... to ye yha hospital m na hoti samjha " dolly said teasingly. Kabir made a cute baby face. " awww... kabir stop making baby faces... now to grow up... u two gonna have a baby soon" umesh said hitting kabir's head playfully. Kabir and nisha gave them silly smiles while all of them shook their heads.

NiBir Teraace Scene The BESTEST & The Song added more beauty to it + It justified ur story's title too👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I mquoating alll😆 as I cant chose frm them😆🤗 @PINK

@RED Awww☺️ Soo CuteeeAgain KT 4 NiBir☯️😊

" nishu... " kabir said. " kabir... u don't need to say anything... I understand" she said giving him a side hug. " nhi nishu... kh lene de kuch baatien jo hmesha se kehna chahta tha" he said. " Pta h nisha... ek time tha jb mjhe ye lagta tha ki aakhir mai itna akela kyu hu... kyu koi nhi h mere pass... kabhi nhi socha tha ki mai kisi se itna pyaar karunga ki khud ko hi bhool jaunga... ye pyaar ur shadi hmesha mjhe filmy ur bekaar ki baatien lagti thi... fir jabse tjhse mila... tere sath ladte jhagdte... prblms ko tackle karte karte pta nhi kab... kab tjhse itna pyaar ho gya ki ab tu ur mai alag nhi lgte mjhe... ur ab jab hmara baby is dunia m aane wala h... to itna complete mehsus ho rha h ki... " kabir choked. " ki jaisa pehle kabhi nhi lga... hai na kabir..." she asked softly. Kabir just nodded. " itna sab kehne ki koi jarurat nhi thi... bus ek baar mjhe apne seene se lga leta to mai sab samaj jati kabir" she said. Kabir looked at her with tears.

Kabir took her in a tight bone crushing hug and nisha reciprocated with the equal intensity.

Kabir cupped her face and touched her forehead with his. Nisha let her tears fall at the moment of joy they were sharing.

She kissed his hands and then his forehead wiping away his tears and gesturing him not to cry but just enjoy their new found happiness.

He assured her through his eyes and kissed away her tears too. " u gave me everything nisha... jo maine shayad kabhi socha bhi nhi vo bhi" he said.

Nisha smiled at her loving husband as he bent down and kissed her belly whispering " I love you too baby...". She felt so complete and overwhelmed. Nisha too bent down on her knees and kissed him softly " I love my baby's father" she whispered. Kabir encircled her waist and kissed her back while nisha took support of his arms kissing him to oblivion.

Loved it👍🏼 To the Core🤗❤️

Abt EPILOGUE:😳

Lovely Epilogue dat was filled with K panti of Kabira😆 & Blashing of Nishu😉 Which Is My FAV

Special Claps👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

My fav @PINK🤗

Nisha - tere sath bitaya har pal hmesha meri aankho k saamne rehta h kabir... waqt kitna bhi guzar jae... tera pyaar waisa ka waisa hi h...

Kabir - hmara pyaar nisha...

Nisha smiled at him and he bend and kissed her forehead. She blushed and made him look towards the kids.

Nisha - kabir... kuch to sharam kar yaar

Kabir - poori zindagi sharam nhi ki ab kya karu...

He said and kissed her cheeks again.

Nishank - dadu dadi... aap dno ki love story best h...

Kabir hugged nishank while nisha kissed his forehead. Kabir looked at nisha and they both felt blessed to witness this moment in their life where after all these years they were still together and forever.

Shayad this is what people call happily ever after... where love never ends nor the magic.

@RED True❤️ & NiBir r the BESTEST🤗

Thank U Buasi 4 this lovely Story🤗

Thank U 4 all PMs🤗

It was a PLEASURE to read this story🤗 Like ur previous story This also RACKED👍🏼

Do write More🤗 q ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: Finally I finished reading & writing my Chotu Comment in almost 1 1/2 hr😲🤣🤣🤣
Now I m RELIEVED🤗 Thank U 4 Ur PATIENCE BUASI🤗❤️