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NAUC-TSC
EPI- 354
WRITTEN BY- SARTHAK

Scene - 1 At the studio

Sukku was rehearsing for a important scene it was the only scene were he had to perform solo .
He very well knew that this was the golden opportunity to show his acting skills and grab eyeballs...but he was fumbling with lines and the memories of last shot where director scolded him were continuously haunting him.

He took a deep breath and remembered his mother's advice and said to himself -
" Maa ne kaha tha..dhairya rakho..so sukku be patient..and relax.."

The shoot started .

Sukku- kya karoon mai...ek taraf mera bachpan ka dost hai aur doosri taraf ek ladki jise mai 3 mahine pehle mila tha..kya karoon bata do...usse ki mera dost uske saath sirf pyaar ka natak Kar raha hai apni insult ka badla lene ke liye,
galat ka saath do toh dosti hai, sahi ka saath do toh dosti hai nahi.

Dil ki suno toh sach sahi hai , dimaag ki suno toh jhoot hai sahi.
Mai kya karoon , kya karoon nahi.

Director shouted cut and a loud applause of claps followed his voice..

Director- Mr.Gangwal kya shot diya hai..ekdum perfect.

Sukku was shocked with director's words but slowly he realized he did his job fine..and a smile appeared on his face.

Scene -2 Gangwal house courtyard.

The trio of Vimla , Laxmi and Roopan were sitting with their mother in law.

Roopan- aaj rukmavati keh rahi thi ki malhotra sahab ki beti ka rishta tay ho gaya hai..Mithayi bheji hai unhone.mujhe toh apni dono betiyon ki shaadi ki chinta ho rahi hai.

Saroj- arrey bhali Teri kyon had samay fikar karti rehti hai hamari jwala ke toh abhi padne likhne ke din hai aur jaha tak baat rahi kirti ki chori sayani ho gayi hai..ham sab sahi waqt aur rishta dekhkar uski marzi se shaadi Kar denge

Vimla- sahi kaha mummy ji apne.

Laxmi- (panicking) arrey mai toh bhool hi gayi .ab tak toh gas oofan chooki hogi aur chai par fail gayi hogi.

Saroj - lachmi relax me..rukmavati ne dekh liya tha abhi abhi...woh chai dekar aayi hai Ramesh ko.

Laxmi breathed a sigh of relief while others smiled at her innocence.

Scene-3 Jwala's room

Jwala was studying when Bunty entered.
Bunty- jwalu di ..jwalu di..

Jwala- kya hua Bunty...kya kaam hai..??

Bunty- voh jwalu di kal mera science ka test hai..aur...

Jwala- kya!!! tera kal test hai aur tu ab bata raha hai...kaise mai preparation karvaungi ...

Bunty- kya jwalu di aap toh ham gareebo ki Einstein ho !! aap ke liye toh yeh aasaan kaam hoga..

Jwala- Bunty mai jaisa keh rahi hu waise pad nahi toh marks kam aayenge or phir laxmi chachi Teri band bajadegi...

Bunty- kya jwalu di iss chote se bacche ko dara rahi ho..ab mai thodi aapki tarah library mai rishi Bhaiya ke saath baitha rehta hu..Jo sab acche se aa jayega.

Jwala- Bunty ke bacche agar meri jasusi ki bajaye padai par dhyaan diya hota toh itni problem nahi aati. Chal ab mai questions pooch rahi hu answer batana...

Bunty- okk

Jwala- ques- Tell methods of saving water???

Bunty- yeh toh bahut easy hai..- Bath once in a week.

Jwala- pagal ho gaya hai, aise answers likhega toh zero nahi negative marks milenge iska answer mai baadme batati hu..uske pehle 2nd ques ..Tell the relation between various animals in food chain.

Bunty - vo..vo ..nahi aata..

Jwala- 2 itne easy ques puche te and isme yeh halat abhi ke abhi saare ke saare book ke ques and answer ko likh likhkar yaad Kar mai 2 hour mai tera test lungi..agar usme gadbad hui toh phir laxmi chachi...

Bunty- nahi nahi mummy ko mat batana...mai padta hu..

Jwala - okk..Bunty ...koi doubt aaye toh mujh se puch Lena..

Bunty- ek doubt hai..kya mai yeh science ka test skip Kar Sakta hu..

Jwala- laxmi chachi..

Bunty- nahi nahi jwalu di mai pad hi leta hu..
Bunty opened his book while jwala smiled at his childish behavior..

Scene -4 At Nibir house

Nisha returned home and saw kabir was sitting on sofa and reading some magazine.
He noticed nisha

Kabir- tu aa gayi

Nisha- ha , kabir bahut thak gayi hu.

Kabir- woh toh hai kitni mehnat karti hai practice , ghar ka jaan aur phir mujhse baate chupaane ke liye extra mehnat.

Nisha- yeh toh kya keh raha hai kabir mai tujhse koi baat kyon chupaungi.

Kabir- toh phir yeh kya hai . He showed her the pamphlets kept on table.

Nisha- woh..kabir actually mai...hum dono ke liye ek trip plan Kar rahi thi..tujhe sab batane hi waali thi..

Kabir- trip!!! par kyon..

Nisha- woh actually kabir tera mood off ho raha tha na..toh Maine socha..ki

Kabir - kya socha tune mai koi baccha hu Jo ro raha hai and ghar se Bahar ghoomane le jayenge toh chup ho jayega..

Nisha- kabir mera woh matlab nahi tha..

Kabir- toh phir kya matlab tha nisha..do din se mere mood ke piche padi ho..yaar I am fine mai khud woh job chod ke aaya hu...and mai khud ke liye lad sakta hu..job chodi hai dance karna nahi bhoola hu..

Nisha- par kabir mai toh bas..

Kabir- mai toh bas kya nisha ..mujhe koi sympathy ki jarurat nahi hai..baccha nahi hu..ki tum puchkar rahi ho...mai apni ladai khud lad lunga..saying this he stormed out angrily of the house leaving behind nisha in tears

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NAUC-TSC

EPI-355

WRITTEN BY- SHIBU


*Scene 1*

Kabir went to Viraj's house. Viraj was in his study and Vasundhara was resting. Kabir entered Viraj's room surprising him.

Viraj-(surprised) Arey Kabir? Aap?

Kabir- (thinking) Main yahaan aa toh gaya? Par kya Bhai meri baat samajh paayenge?

Viraj- Aap thikh hai?

Kabir- (fumbling)Woh...Bhai...

Viraj-Nisha aur aapke beech sab thikh hai na?

Kabir- (shocked) Aapko kaise pata ki mera aur Nisha ka jhagda hua hai?

Viraj- Chotte janab, yeh mat bhuliye hum aapke bade Bhai hai...

Kabir- Bhai, Nisha ko yeh sab kyun karna hai? Why doesn't she understand that I'll be alright...

Viraj- Kabir, Nisha aisi hi hai...She can't see anyone, specially her loved ones sad..

Kabir- I know that...

Viraj- Toh aap unko kyun nahi samajh rahe...She just wants you to be happy...

Kabir- Aise koi paagalon ki tarah hasega, that doesn't mean that he is happy...

Viraj- Yahin baat toh hum aapse kehna chahte hai...Woh aapse aapka waqt aur aapki hasi hi toh maang rahi hai...unhe aapki yeh jhooti hasi nahi chahiye, aapki dil se nikle hui chotisi muskaan bhi unke liye kaafi hai...

Kabir- Par..

Viraj-(intruppting him) Dekhiye Kabir, woh yeh bilkul nahi expect kar rahi ki aap trip pe unke saath haso-khelo...woh toh bas yeh chahti hai ki aap iss trip ke dauran aapni saari tensions bhool jaaye...

Kabir- Itna aasaan nahi hai...

Viraj- Itna mushkil bhi nahi...Aap nahi jaante Kabir, par aapka sad chehre dekhkar unhe kitni taqleef hoti hai...unka dhyaan nahi hota...har waqt aapke baare mein sochti hai...Kyunki...

Kabir-woh mujhse pyaar karti hai...

Viraj- Agar yeh baat jaante ho, toh unke pyaar ko samjho, hm aapse yeh nahi keh rahe hai ki trip pe unki khushi ke liye jaiye, agar nahi jaana,toh unhe samjhao, aisa jhagda mat karna...Samjhe?

Kabir nodded and sat there for some time. Viraj looked at him and hoped that he would agree to go for the trip.

*Scene 2*

Nisha was standing near the window thinking of their fight.

Nisha- Kyun? Aisa kyun hua? Sab kuch kitna thikh tha? Kaash sab pehle jaisa hota...Mera Kabir pehle jaisa hota...kyun uske dil mein itna gussa aur frustration bhar chuka hai?

She wiped her tears, when she heard her mobile ring. She went and picked it up from the bed. Reading the caller id, she tried to calm herself down.

Nisha- (receiving the call) Hello Papa?

Ramesh- (sensing something wrong) kya hua Nisha? Sab thikh hai?

Nisha- Ji bilkul...

Ramesh- Jab jhoot bolna aata nahi hai, toh kyun bol rahi hai?

Nisha-(trying to control herself) Woh papa...

Ramesh- Ab main yeh toh jaanta hoon ki tu saari baat nahi batayegi...Par itna toh samajh hi chuka hoon ki you need help...

Nisha- Papa, aap mere dil ki baat kaise samajh sakte ho?

Ramesh- Har Papa ke paas magic hota hai bacchu, woh sab samajh sakte hai...

Nisha- Kaash yeh magic sabke paas hota...

Ramesh- Koi nahi, jo tujhe nahi samajh sakte...tu unhe samajhne ki koshish kar... Dekh, ab sabke point of views alag hote hai, sab alag tareke se har situation mein react karte hai...Par problem tab hoti hai, jab koi ek apne problem ka solution nahi dhoondta, aur yeh samajhta hai ki koi usse nahi samajhta...

Nisha- Bilkul sahi kaha aapne...

Ramesh- Ab tu ek kaam kar, thande dimaag se ek naya solution dhoond, aur agar work na kare, toh your Papa is there...

Nisha smiled. Ramesh hanged the call.

Nisha- Kabir, main tujhe trip pe leke jaaungi, matlab jaaungi...chahe jo ho jaaye...Main jaanti hoon ki tu ab bahut jyaada gusse mein hai, par tera gussa kam karke main tujhe le jaaungi...Manali..yeh vaada raha...

*Scene 3*

Kirti was enjoying her Galaxy Chocolate, when her mobie rang. She rolled her eyes as she read the called ID.

Kirti- Hello Mam?

Rashi-(sarcasm in her voice) Oh Ms. Gangwal? Kya aap free hai?

Kirti- Ji Mam, kuch zaroori kaam tha?

Rashi- Main tumhari tarah bekaar nahi hoon, sirf doosron ke attention ke liye tadapti bhi nahi...

Kirti tried to calm herself down.

Kirti- Boliye Mam...

Rashi- I want you in office early tomorrow...

Kirti- But Mam...

Rashi-(intruppting her) Come on...ab bahaane mat maaro..I am sure Boss impress honge, if you come early... You better be early...

Kirti- Ok Mam...

Rashi- Aur suno...there is an important meeting...so you will be accompanying me...

Kirti- Yes Mam...Bye

Rashi hanged the call, before she could continue.

Kirti-(looking at her screen angrily) Kitni akadati hai..Akdoo Rashi...huh...

She kept her phone on the table and sat to draw designs. As she drew the designs, the recent happenings at office flashed infront of her eyes. She kept her pencil down and looked at the family photo frame kept on the table.

Kirti- (picking it up) Thanks for being my strength...

She kept on looking at the frame for some time and kept it back. She then continued drawing the designs.

*Scene 4*

Dolly was arranging the clothes in the cupboard when she heard someone knock the door.It was Virendra.

Dolly- Arrey papa? Aapko kitni baar kaha hai ki door knocks mat kijiye...

Viren- Sorry, bhool gaya...

Dolly-(realizing that something is wrong) Kya baat hai Papa? Sab thikh hai?

Viren- haan...par kya main yeh sawaal tujhse pooch sakta hoon?

Dolly-(confused) matlab?

Viren-Tu khush hai na? Mera matlab, divorce ke baad...

Dolly-(intruppting him) Papa, yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai? Of course I am happy...

Viren- Yeh acchi baat hai, par tere aur Saurav ne aage ke liye kya socha hai?

Dolly- Papa, main jaanti hoon ki aap tensed ho...par yaqeen maaniye, yeh jo time humne ek doosre ko dene ka faisala kiya hai...its perfect, hum sabke liye...aur Saurav? Woh hum dono se bahut jyaada pyaar karta hai... Mujhse aur mere baby se...

Viren- teri khushi hi mere liye sab kuch hai...

Dolly- Ji Papa...aur aapki health bhi utni hi important hai...Isi liye bewajah tension mat lo...

Viren- Tu ek baap ka dil nahi samjhegi...

Dolly- Aur naa hi aap ek beti ka...Aap please apna dhyaan rakhna... Maa keh rahi thi ki aap dawaayiyan waqt pe nahi lete ho...taal dete...

Viren- Aisa kuch nahi hai...

Dolly- Toh ka Maa jhoot bol rahi thi?

Viren- Nahi, mera matlab...Bhool jaata hoon kabhi-kabhi...

Dolly- Aaj ke baad kabhi mat bhiulna, thikh hai?

Viren- Haan meri maa...

Dolly- (holding her baby) Dekho baby, apke Naanu main khush hoon yaa nahi yeh dekhne aaye hai, khud ka dhyaan toh rakhte nahi hai...

Viren smiled as Dolly spoke with her baby. He then left the room, but was surprised to see Saurav standing near the door. He patted his shoulder and walked to his room. Dollly looked at Saurav and smiled, while he had a grim expression.
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NAUC TSC Episode 356

By Niya

KNH

Scene 1

Nisha was busy in the kitchen when Kabir came home.. he tried talking to her but Nisha kept ignoring him

Kabir's monologue : Lagta hai bohut naraz ho gai hai ... Kabire kuch toh kar ...

Kabir kept roaming behind Nisha and blocking her way , Nisha looked at him angrily

Nisha : Kya hai ? Kyun mere aage peeche ghum raha hai ?

Kabir made a cute sad face and caught both his ears ...

Kabir : Sorry Nisha..

Nisha (trying be innocent) : Sorry kis liye ?

Kabir : Vo thode der pehle tujh pe chila diya tha na issliye .. sorry

Nisha looked at him while opening the chocolate in her hand and took a bite ,she just nodded her head positively and left from there leaving a shocked Kabir behind her...

Kabir's monologue : Maine itne pyaar se kaan pakad ke sorry bola aur yeh bas sir hila ke chali gai ? Nisha .. Nisha...

He called her name and followed her to till the room , she was about to open the cupboard but he came stood in between

Nisha (rolled her eyes ) : Abh kya hua ?

Kabir : Maine itna cutely sorry bola aur tu sirf sir hila ke chali aai ?

Nisha : Maine bola tha itna cutely sorry bol ?

Kabir (dramatically) : Waah ek toh main tujhe manu aur tu mujhi ko akad dikha rahi hai ?

Nisha(angrily) : Excuse me , tu mujh pe chilaya tha issliye main tujh se naraz hui thi ... aur tu agar mana raha hai toh koi ehsaan nahi kar raha hai mujh pe samjaha..

Kabir : Haan toh galti hogai usske liye sorry bhi bola na ...

Nisha : Toh maine maaf bhi kar diya na , abh kyun chid raha hai ?

Kabir : Tu mujh se gussa nahi hai ?

Nisha : Nahi hun Kabir ..

Kabir(confused) : Toh phir sirf sar hilake kyun aagai ? kuch bola kyun nahi ?

Nisha (facepalmed) : Vo issliye kyunki tabhi mere muh main chocolate thi ... khate hue baat kaise kar sakti thi Kabir ?

Kabir (scratching his head ) : Oh... mujhe laga toh abhi tak naraz hai ...

Nisha : Kabir.. tu pagal hai ...

Kabir : Janta hun, issliye tujhe bina wajah chila diya

He looked down and made a sad guilty face but yet he was looking so cute

Nisha : Kabir , its ok.. jo hogaya usse bhul ja.. abh jo hone wala hai usspe dhyaan de ...

Kabir looked up at her immediately with a K expression..

Kabir : Kya hone wala hai ?

He winked at her, Nisha understood that he took another meaning of what she said , she hit his arm half blushing and half angry

Nisha : Tu kitna K hai Kabir, one track mind hai tera.. mera matlab tha ki trip ka kya karna hai ?

Kabir (dejectedly) : Oh.. Rukh sochta hun .. he acted as if he was in deep thoughts and Nisha againslapped his arm... Ouch !! Chal main ready hun jaane ke liye..

Nisha got excited and hugged him ...

Kabir : But sirf tere liye ja raha hun, taki tu better feel kare ...

Nisha : Meri fikar mat kar , agar tu khush rehga toh main apne aap khush ho jaungi...

She broke the hug and looked in his eyes.. they were full of love , Kabir cherished her cheek with his thumb ...

Kabir : Tujhe yaad hai maine tujh se kaha tha ki tu jis ladke ki life main hogi vo har din sirf ek question puchega.. yeh sapna toh nahi hai ? Yeh sach hai na Nisha ? Tu sach main meri life main hai na ?

Nisha looked at him in awe , she smiled at him and then stamped his foot ..

Kabir : Ouch !! he bent down and rubbed his foot ... Yeh kya tha ?

Nisha (innocently) : Tune hi pucha na yeh sach hai ya sapna ? Abh yakeen aagaya yeh sach hai ?

Kabir(his usual tone) : Tu kitni K hai Nisha ...

Nisha : Aur mere K se tu kitna J hai Janu.. chal abh main ready hone ja rahi hun , ghar jake sab ko iss bare main batana bhi hai ...

Saying so she went to the washroom and Kabir sat there rubbing his foot ..

Viraj's room

Scene 2

Viraj was talking to his travel agent when Vasundara came to his room and over heard him ..

Vasundara : Viraj .. kahin ja rahe hai aap ?

Viraj : Nahi Maa.. hum kahi nahi ja rahe .. Nisha aur Kabir ja rahe hai Manali...

Vasundara : Waah.. yeh toh bohut achi baat hai ..

Viraj : Jee Maa.. Kabir aapne kaam ko leke bohut stressed the toh Nisha ne socha ki vo unhe kuch dino ke liye Jaipur se bahar le jaye ...

Vasundara : Khayal toh bohut acha hai Nisha ka.. aur issi bahane dono ko thoda time akele bhi mil jayega ...

Viraj : Sahi kaha aapne .. inn dono ko kuch waqt akele bitane ki zaroorat hai.. unki shadi ke baad humne unke saath jo bhi kuch kiya iss trip ko plan karke hum uska thoda guilt kaam karna chahte hai..

He started fidgeting with his phone to avoid any eye contact with his mother but guilt was evident in his voice .. Vasundara came to him and placed her hand on his head

Vasundara : Viraj , beeti baton ko bhul jaiye .. hum jante hai ki aapko aapne kiye pe pachtava hai aur aap iska prayaschit bhi kar rahe hai.. issliye aap please abh khud ko kosna bandh kijiye ..

Viraj nodded his head and kept his head in her lap , Vasundara kept patting his head to make him feel better , she silently prayed to god to bless his children ...

Gangwal House

Scene3

Nisha and Kabir entred the house with a big smile on their faces and Ramesh who was passing by saw them , he felt really happy to see them smile like this

Ramesh : Kya baat hai .. dono bada muskura rahe ho ?

He smiled and went too them and both hugged him..

Kabir : Kya hai na Papa kal aapki beti ko bhaga ke leke ja raha hun yahan se door ...

Nisha gave hima deadly stare while Ramesh looked confused

Ramesh : Kyun bhai bhaga kyun raha hai ? Do do baar shadi ki hai pure haq se leke ja isse

Kabir : Arey mazak kar raha tha main.. haq se hi leke ja raha hun , kuch dino ke liye chutti pe

Ramesh : Oho.. kya baat hai ...biwi ko ghumane leke ja raha hai ...

Nisha was shocked Kabir took the entire credit himself

Nisha : Papa.. yeh idea mera tha ..

Kabir : Jee nahi , yeh idea Bade Bhaiyaa ka tha ...

Nisha : Toh unhe idea meri baton se hi mila tha ...

Kabir : Tu na hamesha har cheez ka credit leti hai..

Ramesh : Time out.. dono chup ho jao... yahan ladne aaye ho ?

They both nodded their head negatively and stood there like small kids who are standing infornt of their teacher

Ramesh : Abh ek kaam karo.. ache bacchon ki tarah ghar jao aur jake packing karo main sab ko bata dunga ki tum log kuch dino ke liye bahar ja rahe ho ? ek minute par mujhe yeh toh batao ki kahan ja rahe ho ?

Both at the same time : Manali ja rahe hai ...

Ramesh smiled at this and shook his head...

Ramesh : Jao abh jake packing kar lo , main sab ko bata dunga...

Both nodded their head and left ...

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Scene 4

Nisha had finished packing her back and now was packing Kabir's bag when Kabir gave her a back hug ..

Nisha (irriated) : Kabir , ek toh tu khud kaam nahi kar raha aur abh jab main kaam kar rahi hun mujhe aake disturb kar raha hai ..

Kabir : Arey yaar almost sara kaam hogaya na.. abh thoda time pati ko bhi de de...

He pulled her closer to him and started kissing her hair, but Nisha was firm , she used her elbow and hit him making him winch in pain...

Kabir : Nisha kya hua hai tujhe , subah se maare ja rahi hai . Hitler kahiki..

Nisha : Kyunki tu subah se mujhe distract kar raha hai.. abh jake so ja.. subah nahi toh tu uthega nahi aur phir late ho jayega.. baki ka kaam main kar lungi..

Kabir tried arguing but Nisha was not ready to listen , finally he gave up and laid on bed admiring her and he didn't realise when he dozed off

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A/N : Tried my level best to compensate for not writing NiBir scenes in my previous epics Hope you guys like it too 😉😳

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NAUC - TSC

EPISODE - 357

Written by - mansi & annie



Scene - 1 (annie)


They finally started their journey as nisha thought and wished, she wanted a car drive till manali,as she felt that they would get some time alone, so how could kabir deny her wishes, so they started their journey from their house, they first went to gangwal house and took everyone's blessings, then they went to rathore house where vasu and viraj wished them good luck and gave them some needies for their journey.Viraj gifted them a convertible BMW for their journey, although kabir denied him, and pleased him not to give the car, but viraj was adamant.


Kabir: bhai...lekin kyun..mere paas meri car hai na...wo bhi itni achchi...to phir kyun,...??? Main aapki car kyun lu..???


Viraj: kabirr..please maan jaaiye naa...humne ye car aap hi ke liye banwaayi hain...hum jabse aapko mile hum chahte the ki hum apne chote bhai ke liye kuch kare...please le lijiye naa..!!


Nisha: viraj sir...lekin...hum ye nhi le sakte...hum dono ke liye aapki wishes hi kaafi hai..!!


Viraj: kabir...nisha...hum jaante hain ki aap kuch nahi lenge humse par...kya hum apne chote bhai ko gift bhi nahi de saktee...jis bhai...ke liye hum bachpan se tadpe hain..kya hum unke liye itna bhi nahi kar saktee...aap iski price kyun dekh rahe ho...aap iske peeche chupi hui hmari aur maa ki feelings dekho na..!!


Kabir: bhai..lekin...


Viraj: aur ye hmara bhi nahi...maa ka plan hai...humne to kuch aur socha tha lekin...maa ka idea humse zyaada achcha tha...so here's your gift..!!


Kabir: bhai...aap sunne ki koshish to karo...!!


Viraj: kabirr...hum ab kuch nahi sunenge...aap bas le lijiye isko...I won't listen to you anymore...aur aap jaaiye...aap ko late ho raha hain...wo rasta waise bhi safe nahi hain..!!


Kabir lost in front of his elder brother...but somewhere he was missing those losses and wins with siblings which he yearned for , since his childhood, today he finally found it...his brother, his long lost sibling...those fights with his brother...he loved the feeling...he said to himself proudly...MY BROTHER IS WITH ME...!!!''


Kabir hugged him...and then took his wishes while nisha gave a side hug to him. And they left jaipur as it was already 6 AM in the morning.


Scene - 2 (mansi)

Gh courtyard


After kn left all the elders went to their rooms while cousins were still sitting.


Sukku - ( yawning) kya yaar ye dno bhi na khamkha itni subah jaga dia... koi is time uthta h kya... khud to ghumne chale gye yha hmari neend kharab kar gye...


Jwalu and dolly laughed while kirti rolled her eyes.


Umesh - sukku tujhe bus apni neend hi pyari h na... tne dekha nhi dno kitne khush the...


Aman - hanji...waise bhi dno ne jabse apne pyaar ka izhaar kia h tab se thik se time bhi nhi spend kia sath m...


Kirti - ha aman bhabhi... u r right... bechare dno hmesha kisi na kisi prblm m atak jate h... finally dno sath m bina tension k time spend karenge... and how blah sukku... tu kitna soega yaar... shoot p nhi jana h kya...


Jwalu - nhi kirti sukku bro to sapne m hi shooting poori kar lete h... hi na sukku bro..


Everybody laughed while sukku made faces.


Dolly - chalo ab sabko apne apne works p nhi jana h kya...


Everyone - works nhi dolly di work...

And laughed in unison as dolly too joined them.


Scene - 3 (mansi)

Viraj's academy


Amit - are sir... aap itni subah subah...


Viraj - ha hme kuch kaam tha isilie aa gye...


Amit - sir kya aap ko pta h nisha kyu nhi aae aaj practice k lie...


Viraj - vo ab kuch din k lie nhi aaengi... leave par h...


Viraj walked off.


Amit - leave par?... how dare she... mjhe btae bina leave par chali gyi... how irresponsible...


Scene - 4 (annie)


While on their way to Delhi, nisha was getting bored as they had not talk to each other for at least half an hour now. Kabir was totally concentrated towards the road...as he wanted no complications in the journey.

Nisha was trying to talk to him.

Nisha: kabiirreee...sunn naa,...!!

Kabir: hmm...bol nisha..!!

Nisha: tu itna pakauuu kyun hain..??

Kabir: aur tujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain...??

Nisha: kabirr...maine na car drive iss liye bola tha ki hume thoda time mile...!!aur tu hai ki unn roads ki taraf ghoore jaa raha hain...!!

Kabir smiled at her cuteness.

Kabir: nishaa...maine kab kahan ki main tujhe nahi dekh raha..???

Nisha: to main kya tujhe waha road pe dikh rahi hun..??

Kabir giggled at her talks.

Kabir: tu ab uss road se bhi j hone lagi..?? not bad huh..!!

Nisha: ab tujh jaisa k kisi ke saath mein ho na...to j bhi hona hi padta hain..!!

Kabir smiled again and side hugged her.

Kabir: nishu..waise ek baat puchu..??

Nisha: pooch...kuch bolega to sahi..!!

Kabir: waise tujhe ye trip ka idea aaya kyun..??

Nisha: kyun nahi aa sakta..? kabhi kabhi ideas mujhe bhi aate hain kabirr..!!

Kabir: maine poocha "kyun" ...maine ye nahi poocha ki kaise..!!

Nisha: mujhe tere saath thoda time spend karna tha...akele...shaayad isliye..!!

Kabir: ohhooo...not bad wifey..!!

Nisha: chaloo ab driving pe dhyaan do...mujhe jaldi pahunchna hai waha...warna hum jo aaj raat 12 clock pohanchne waale hain...wo parso raat pohchenge..!!

Kabir: waisee not a bad idea again...wifey..!!!

Nisha: aaeee...kabir ke bachche...tu kitna bada k hai... chup chap driving pe dhyaan de...!!

Kabir: achcha abhi tak ro rahi thi ki main tujhpe dhyaan nahi de raha...aur ab bol rahi hai ki main road pe dhyaan nahi de raha..!!tu chahti kya hai nisha...??

Nisha grinned at him.

Nisha: kuch bhi nahi...tu road pe hi dhyaan de...bas ek baar...just slid open the roof of the car for me...bas ye kar sakta hain..??

Kabir: nishaa...baahar thandi hawa chal rahi hain..shaayad baarish bhi ho sakti hai...n agar main roof slide kardu to mujhe pakka pata hai ki tujhe thand zaroor lag jaayegi...aur tujhe thand lag gayi to tu behaal ho jaayegi...n hum manali ghumne jaa rahe hain...hospital ke chakkar kaatne nahi..!!

Nisha: awww...kabir...tu meri kitni care karta hain...(saying that she pulled his ear) ..chup chaap...jo main bol rahi hun..wo kar ...samjha..??

Kabir started shouting...while driving the car...!

Kabir: ouchh...nishaa...chod mujhe...main kar raha hun...par tu mujhe chodegi tabhi...!!

nisha left his ear. his ear almost turned as red as a tomato...nisha mumbled sorry.while kabir grinned at first but smiled later seeing her cuteness overloaded face.

Kabir slid opened the roof. And as the cold breeze flew through their faces, Nisha sneezed.

Kabir: dekha maine bola tha na...tu kabhi meri baat nahi maanti..!!

Nisha: mujhe kuch nahi hua hai samja...ek baar sneeze hi kiya hain maine..!!

Kabir: haan...abhi sneeze, thodi der mein cough...n uske baad...headache..and finally fever...aur in sab mein teri sewa to mujhe hi karni hi padegi na..!!!

Nisha: haan..theek hai..theek hain..zyada mat bol!!!

Kabir did not close the roof of the car as he knew that nisha would get angry at this..!!nisha started enjoying the cold breeze ...while kabir adored her beauty while driving.




Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago
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NAUC TSC Episode 358

By Annie and Nimmi

Scene 1

On the road

They almost crossed delhi in about two and a half hours. But they decided to stop at a dhaba for their refreshments .

They stopped near a dhaba, for having some tea and getting fresh. Kabir parked the car outside the dhaba and they both went inside, and sat on one of the charpoys placed there, in the plain area . cool breeze played naughtily around them, they felt tickling sensation all over , as a result of that breeze.nisha was enjoying it, while kabir was overjoyed seeing her.kbir as smiling as he adored her. Nisha looked at him with a confused look.

Nisha looked towards kabir and asked him if he was okay.kabir nodded positively. Kabir odered two teas, as they started enjoying the weather, the weather clearly said that it would be raining heavily in sometime.

Kabir cleared his throat...as if he was trying to attract nisha's attention...nisha looked at him lovingly yet a confused look.

Nisha sat beside kabir...held his hand in hers...kabir was in a trance of her beauty...when nisha blew air on his face to bring him back to the real world.she shook him.

Nisha: kabirrr...tu theek hain..??? kya hogaya tujhe..?? aise kyun ghur raha hain mujhe..???

Kabir: thankyou nishu..!!

Nisha: hain..??? may I know wo kisliye...??

Kabir: mere life mein aane keliye...tu mere life ka sabse bada gift hain..!!

Nisha smiled. While kabir started caressing her hand and continued.,

Kabir: nisha...mujhe pata hain tu ye sab ...ye trip...mere ko happy karna...ye sab kyun kar rahi hain..!!

Nisha: achchaa...to kyun...??

Kabir tucked her hair behind her ears as it was falling on her face due the heavy wind..

Kabir: mujhe pata hain ki tu yee sab mere liye hi karr rahi hain...taaki main phirse normal ho jaaun...nisha...main jaanta hun...ki tu ussi bandar jais humesha jump karte hue kabir ko chahti hain...tu chahti hain ki main phirse waise hi ho jaaun...so nisha...I promise you ki main wo waala kabir tere ko waapas dedunga...I really promise...bas mujhe thoda har cheez ko solve karne keliye thoda sa time chahiye..!!

Nisha had tears in her eyes...she kept her hand on his cheek...and simply said..

Thankyou...so muchh kabir...ki tu mere liye itna karta hain...jabse tu meri life mein aaya hain na...tabse...main kahan se kahan phnch gayii...tune mereko hasna sikhaya...pyaar karna sikhaaya...aur tune mujhe apne darr se ladna bhi sikhaya...tune mujhe unn sab cheezon ki value bataayi jinko main apne darr ki wajah se apne se door kardiya...mujhe kabhi pata hI nahi chala kabir...ki main kab...uss tomboy se ye nisha ban gayii...main kabhi kabhi to ye sochti hun...ki maine aisa kaunsa achcha kaam kardiya ki...ki mujhe tu milgaya...tu mila to meri life hi ban gayi kabir..!!

Kabir just hugged her tight, while she too reciprocated it..!!

Tears fell from kabir and nisha's eyes...they just poured all their love into that hug

Scene 2

In office

Kirti reached office n saw dat rashi havn't reached yet...

Kirti(monologue)- mujhe jaldi bulakar ye akdu kahin ghode bech k to nhi so rhi h...anyways...accha hi h dat she is late wrna office me ghuste hi uski sade hue tamatar jaisi shakal dekhni padti...

Den her colleague Richa comes towards kirti n said...

Richa- kya hua kirti aise akele akele kya badbada rhi ho

Kirti- nothing...yr...mam aati hi hongi mai unke liye coffee le k aati hu...

Richa noded... n kirti left...frm der...

At dat time rashi came in office... n ordered peon to send kirti in her cabin...

Kirti- may i come in mam...

Rashi(without looking at her)- ms. Chirpy...go get me coffee fast...

Kirti(wid smile)-mam coffee is on yr table...

Rashi looked at her wid shocking expression...n said...

Rashi-kk...aur maine tumhe jo jo designs draw krne ko kaha tha...tumne kiya????

Kirti- yes mam n she showed her all d designs which she had made yesterday...wid proudy attitude...

On seeing those designs Rashi was burning wid anger becoz kirti had done her job perfectly...n kirti was adding fuel on her anger by not even giving her a single chance to get angry on her ...

Rashi(monologue)- ye ms chirpi aaj subah subah kya kha k aai h...jo mujhe ispe barasne ka ek mouka bhi nhi de rhi...

While kirti's monologue-aaj jitni koshish krna h krle akdu aaj tujhe mai apna mood off nhi krne dungi...

Finally rashi gave up n said...

Rashi(in frustrated voice)- we r getting late lets go for meeting

Kirti noded n followed her...

Scene 3

On the road

Nisha and Kabir were so lost in each other that they were not able to hear any other voice...while they were busy...a boy, who must be around 17-20 years old, stood there infront of them...with his eyes out its sockets...trying to call them for the umpteenth time...

Boy: bhaiyyyaaa...aree sunoo...bhaiyyaa...aapki chai..!!

He was so irritated that, he now directly patted kabir on his shoulder..kabir and nisha looked at him all confused...

Kabir: kya hua...beta...??

Boy: bhaiyya...aapki chai thandi ho rahi hain...!!

Kabir took his tea cup in his hand...and felt that it was already cold.

Kabir: aree sun ye to pehle se hi thandi hain..!!

Boy: aree bhaiyya...main to ise laaya hi garam tha...par ab thandi hogayi...main poore 5 minutes se yahin to khada hun..aphi...

He did not complete his sentence...while nibir blushed.

Kabir: achcha...chal koyi baat nahi...hum yahin peelenge..!!

Boy: aree bhaiyya...aap chinta mat karo...main chai ko phir garam kardunga...aap aaram karo...aaj to waise bhi lag raha hain ki zordaar baarish hogi...aap chaaye mein aajao...warna bimaar pad jaaoge...

Kabir: achcha...chal theek hain hum abhi aate hain...bas chai peeke hum nikal jaayenge...warna der ho jaayegi...hume manali bhi phnchna hain na..!!

Boy: bhaiyya...aap manali jaa rahe ho..?? he said while he heated the tea. Maine suna wahan bht thand hoti hain...achchi jagah hogi na bhaiyya..!!??

Kabir: haan...chotu...bht achchi jagah hain wo...tu nahi gaya..??

Boy: aree bhaiyya...main kaise jaa sakta hun...main jaunga to ghar me paise kaun dega...??

Nibir felt bad for him..

Nisha: tu chalegaa humaare saath..??

Boy: aree didi...main jaaunga to dukaan kaise chalegii..?? par aap log chinta mat karoo...main na abhi padhayi bhi kar raha hun...ekk din na main bht bada aadmi banunga...aur main poori duniya ghumunga...

Nisha smiled as kabir ruffled his hair...chotu's courage inspired them today...even, whatever state he was in, he did not leave his dreams and hopes..

Nisha and kabir talked to chotu for sometime as they were drinking their tea...after they finished it, they again set out for their journey further...they said that...they would meet him again when they would be returning from there. They sat in their car, chotu waved a bye to them..!!

While on the further journey...kabir was thinking something while driving, which did not go unnoticed by nisha.she touched his shoulder.

Nisha: kya huaa kabir..?? she said calmly...kuch soch raha hain kya..???'' she asked.

"Hmm...''he relpied.

"Kya hua kabir...koyi problem hain kya..??" she asked again.

"Haan...nisha...main hi sabse bada problem hun...main kabhi kuch cheezon ko samajhna hi nahi chahta...aaj chotu ko maine dekha to mujhe aisa laga...ki usne merese zyada duniya dekhi...wo mere se chahe jitna bhi chota ho...uski baatein...uski baaton ne aaj mujhe bht inspire kiya nisha...dekhna nisha...maine mere liye aur humaare liye...bht jald kuch na kuch karke dikhaaunga..!!'' he replied .

Nisha said nothing...she just decided to be calm this time. Let the silence talk though she just smiled...Within a few hours...they had crossed 5-6 cities ...sonipat ... panipat... karnal... ulchana... kurukshetra... around 6-7 hours later...it was around 5-6 in the evening...they reached amabala...it rained heavily throughout the way...they enjoyed the rain..they adored the greenery and beauty of the cities...they thought of resting for a while...as kabir was tired and both of them were hungry too as they did not have their lunch...both of them rested for sometime and had some snacks which vasu packed for them.

They set out for their journey...their destination was just three hours away from there...all the way they played songs on the music system...they enjoyed the songs.. finally after about 2 hours, they reached mandi...and manali was just an hour far away...

Scene 4

In uman's restaurant

Aman was in kitchen...she was busy in doing her work...suddenly she felt 2 muscular arms around her waist...she den turns towards the owner of dat arms n said

Aman- ladoo ye kya kar rha...mujhe kaam krne de na...dekh aaj kitne sare customers aaye h...

Umesh- ha to maine tujhe kab roka tu apna kaam kr aur mujhe mera kaam krne de...

Aman- ladoo teri shaitani kuch jyada hi nhi bad rhi aajkal...

Umesh- sab tere K bhai ki sangat ka asar h...n he winks

Aman starts blushing but somehow she controlled her expression...n said

Aman- tere kaam me thoda break laga aur table no. 4 pe ye dahi de ke aa...

Umesh(wid frustrated expression)- romance me dahi daalna to koi tujhse sikhe n he left...

Aman(monologue)- gusse me bhi kitna cute lagta h mera ladoo n she smiles...

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A/N : Scene
1 and 3 are written by Annie , Scene 2 and 4 are written by Nimmi.. we will see the response for today's epic and then take a decision about the TSC

Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago

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