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Posted: 10 years ago
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TSC Episode 342

Scene 1(by Niya)

KNH

Nisha and Kabir both woke up at the same time and saw each other's face with a pleasant smile which turned into a small laughter when they realised that both of them woke up at the same time...

Kabir stopped laughing and started admiring her ... her smile was like a music for him.. he smiled and noticed that her fringes were coming on her face disturbing his view of her beautiful face... he used his free hand to tug them behind her ears...

Nisha stopped laughing and took a deep breath at his sudden touch... Kabir leaned in and was about to kiss her when his phone started ringing...

He closed his eyes in frustration and Nisha laughed at his expressions...

Kabir started searching his phone and said..

Kabir : Kon hai jo subah subah mujhe disturb kar raha hai...

Nisha : Kyun raat kafi nahi thi kya...

He finally found his phone it was Vasundara's phone before answering he looked at Nisha and replied...

Kabir : Raat ho ya subah tere saath time spend karne ke liye bohut kaam hai.. he winked at her and answered the call...

Kabir : Good Morning Maa..

Vadundara : Good Morning Jojo.. aaj toh bohut khush sound kar rahe ho...?

Kabir wrapped his arm around Nisha's neck and pulled her close to him...

Kabir : Haan Maa.. itne time baad apne ghar aake bohut acha laga...

Vasundara : Oho.. sirf yehi baat hai ya kuch aur ?

She asked him in a teasing voice and Kabir blushed abit ... sseing his expressions Nisha guessed that Vasundara was teasing him and she tried to get out of his hold but Kabir didn't let her move...

Kabir : Kya Maa aap bhi.. subah subah taang keechai ke liye phone kiya hai kya ?

Vasundara : Nahi.. waise toh hum jante hai ki tumne apne ghar ke new look pe bilkul bhi dhyaan nahi diya hoga but still hume yeh jana tha ki tumhe kaisa laga apne ghar ka new look...

Kabir tried to lie and said : Nahi Maa.. humne dekha pura ghar ache se ... aur hume bohut acha laga...

Vasundara : Jante hai hum kitna dekha hai tumne... par hum khush hai ki tum aur Nisha ek dusre se itna pyaar karte ho.. hum umeed karte hai ki yeh kabhi kaam na ho...

Kabir looked in Nisha eyes and replied...

Kabir : I promise Maa... hum hamesha aise hi rehnge...

Nisha smiled at his words.. she knew how genuine and true these words were...

Vasundara understood that she might have disturbed them and she cut the call...

Kabir threw the phone on the other side of the bed and started cherishing Nisha's face with his free hand...

Kabir : Toh hum kahan the ?

He asked in a husky and mischievous voice...

Nisha pushed him a bit and said..

Nisha : Kabir bas kar subah hogai hai.. mujhe ready hona hai...

Kabir tightened his hold on her and pulled her closer to him...

Kabir : Aise nahi... mujhe meri morning kiss chahiye...

Nisha slapped his cheek...

Nisha : Yeh milega tujhe... chod abh mujhe..

She started blushing and tried freeing herself from his hold... Kabir chuckled at her and let her go.. Nisha wrapped a bedsheet around her and went to the washroom and Kabir shouted from outside...

Kabir : I love you...

Nisha blushed and replied : I love you too K ...

Scene - 2 (By Sarthak )



Ramesh laxmi and suketu were having their breakfast when suketu's mobile rang.He attended the call and slowly as his conversation progressed a smile appeared on his face. After the call got over

Ramesh- kya baat hai..itna khush lag rahe ho aakhir hame bhi toh pata chale tumhari khusi ka raaj.

Sukku- vo darasl baat yeh hai ki mujhe dance competition mai hamare judge Mittal Sir ke PA se call aaya tha un logo ko mere dance ke dauran expressions kaafi pasand aaye isliye unhone mera naam ek role ke liye kisi C-star production house ko refer kiya tha unhone mujhe select Kar liya hai, kal shaam ko mail aaya tha offer ke baare mai. Ek ongoing movie mai ek dancer ka role hai..Role chota hai..par..

Ramesh- arrey pagal koi role chota nahi hota insaan choti choti seedhiyon ko chadkar hi top par pahuchta hai.

Laxmi- beta yeh toh bahut hi khusi ki baat hai and she hugged him Ramesh joined them and all three of them shared a hug.

Sukku- Maa aaj hi unhone mujhe milkar saari formalities work out Karne ke liye bulaya hai..

Laxmi- beta aaj hi mai school se aakar is khushi ke mauke par tere favourite malpue banaongi.

Ramesh- chal beta tene mera bhi fayda kara diya teacher ji ke haat ke malpue maja aa jayega.

Sukku and Ramesh laughed

Laxmi - toh teacher ji ki ek baat bhi sunlo beta hamesha yeh yaad rakhna jiske paas dhairya hai vo Jo chahe paa Sakta hai.

Suketu smiled and nodded his head in approval.

Scene - 3 At Office of Sunshine pvt. Ltd.

Kirti was patiently waiting for her turn since last 45 minutes.She had got the appointment to meet the Manager Mr.R.K Agarwal

She got up as her name was called by PA.

PA- ms.Kirti gangwal

Kirti- yes mam

PA- ab aapki turn hai Sir se milne ki.

Kirti nodded and went into the cabin

Kirti - may I come in Sir .

Manager - come in , please be seated .

Kirti - Good morning Sir

Manager- Good morning, so Ms.kirti Maine aapki application dekhi hai so you want to join our company but hamne aapko job offer kiya tha and u didn't replied back .

Kirti- I am extremely sorry sir ,actually I was interested in the offer but at that time due to some personal reasons I was not able to take up the job.But sir I am absolutely ready now and I would be highly obliged if you offer me one chance to prove myself.

Manager- I know you are talented ms.kirti and that's why we offered you the job but I am extremely sorry to inform you the post we offered you is not vacant now.

Kirti- Sir I mean please kuch ho Sakta hai toh dekh lijiye , just give me one chance I promise I will not disappoint you . Sir yeh mera portfolio hai just have a look.

Manager patiently saw her portfolio for 5 minutes and made a call and after talking for a couple of minutes He broke the silence between him and kirti.

Manager- Ms.kirti aap bahut talented ho isme koi shak nahi and Our company is always interested in giving chance to talented people but at max. abhi hum aapko ek internship course offer Kar sakte hai. You can join the office as an intern

Kirti thought for a couple of minutes and replied

Kirti- yes sir sure I would love to work in this company , thank you so much.

Manager- okk then I will inform my PA and she will work out the necessary formalities.

Kirti nodded and left his cabin.

Scene-4 At viraj's house

Viraj was doing some paperwork in his study room when nisha entered.

Nisha- sir mai andar aa jao

Viraj - aapko andar aane ke liye permission ki koi jarurat nahi..hai aap hamari family ka hissa hai..

Nisha nodded , entered the room and kept a cup of coffee on the table

Nisha- vo maa se milne aai thi .. unhone aapke liye coffee banayi thi par unhe koi call aa gaya toh unhone mujhe kaha aapko coffee dene ke liye..

Viraj- Thank you, vaise manna padega kal ki aapki performance ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye kam hai, kya accurate shooting thi mindblowing ..

Nisha- sir bas kal din accha tha vaise ab us player ki tabiyat kaisi hai jinki jagah Maine competition mai part liya .

Viraj- she is better now but mujhe kaafi chinta ho rahi hai academy ki.

Nisha- kyon sir ??

Viraj- dekhiye ek player ke health kharab hone se ham kitni badi problem mai phans gaye te , vo toh aapne solve Kar di par..aage future ka kya. Ek vaqt ta jab hamari academy no.1 thi par ab...

Nisha- aap chinta mat kijiye sir ham sab saath mai mehnat karke vaapis Lakshya Academy ko no.1 banayenge aur papa ka sapna pura karenge.

Viraj nodded his head and smiled remembering his father's dream.

Scene- 5 At dance academy


Kabir entered the academy and he was congratulated by everyone for competition win.He heard few peons gossiping that academy has won the dance competition so Kabir will get a reward of hike in salary .Kabir smiled as somewhere in his mind he was also expecting a reward for his hardwork. He was called by his boss. His hopes of getting a increase in salary were becoming high by each passing second.He entered the cabin of his boss.

Kabir - Sir may I come in ???

Kabir's boss- ya sure kabir come in.

Kabir - Sir aapne bulaya ??

Boss- ha kabir sabse pehle toh congratulations tumne vakai mai accha kaam kiya. Maine tumhe yaha yeh batane ke liye bulaya tha ki kuch 3-4 new admission hai toh tum unhe personally mil Lena .Tum jaa sakte ho ab and ya once again congratulations

Kabir - thanks sir

Kabir left the cabin .He was disappointed but he told himself - yaar pehli baar mai thode hi salary badegi and waise bhi tujhe join Kare hi kitna kam time hua hai be patient kabire ...

He met the new admissions and after introduction started teaching them basic steps.

Peon came with a box of sweets

Peon - kabir sir muh meetha kijiye ..Amit sir ne sabko mithayi khilane ko kaha hai.

Kabir - kyon aisa kya hua

Peon- Arre sir woh aap sab ne milkar competition jeeta na toh usse khush hokar bade sir ne Amit sir ko assistant choreographer se senior choreographer bana diya ..unke promotion ki khusi mai hi poore staff ko mithayi baati jaa rahi..hai

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A/N : The first seen is written by Niya and the rest of the scenes are written by Sarthak.

So, we have a new writer today...I.e., sarthak...hope you like his writing...do like and comment..!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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NAUC-TSC

EPI-343

WRITTEN BY- SHIBU



Scene 1

Kabir was shocked. He couldn't believe his ears. The dance team too was in a shock state.

Dance team member 1- Yeh kya hua? Kabir sir ko promotion milni chahiye thi... Uss Amit ne kya kiya?

Dance team member 2- Arrey woh Amit uss boss ki beti ka friend hai naa.. isiliye... But that's so unfair.

Kabir couldn't hear any more of it. He wanted the promotion because he knew that would make his family happy, and now, he wouldn't tell them that he was promoted. He decided to go home, when he got Nisha's message to meet at Gangwal house.

Scene 2

Sukku entered the C-star production house and went to the procuers cabin.

Sukku- May I come in Sir...

Mittal- Sure...

He entered the cabin.

Sukku-(forwarding his hand for a handshake) Suketu Gnagwal.

Mittal- Mihir Mittal... have a seat...

After Sukku sat, mittal told him about his role.

Mittal-Wiase toh mujhe tumhari acting pasand aayi hai.. par you will have to give a screen test...

Sukku- Ji sir...

Mittal- Are you ready now?

Sukku- Haan...

Mittal- (tohis P.A) Saloni, go get everyone for his screen test...

Saloni nodded and walked out. After a few minutes, she told him that everyone was on the set and would like the screen test to be held there.

*On the set*

Sukku was given the script and time of hour to prepare himself.

Scene 3

Ramesh was waiting for his students when Viren entered the terrrece.

Viren- Aaj bacche nahi aaye?

Ramesh- Nahi Bhaiya, todhi der mein aa jaayenge...

Viren- Sukku kahan hai?

Ramesh- (hesitant)Woh... kisi kaam se bahar gaya hai..

Viren- (realizing that he is hiding something)Chote, agar bataana nahi chahte ho toh rehne do...

Ramesh- woh usse ek movie mein ek chotasa role mila hai... bas usi ke liye bahar gaya hai...

Viren smiled.

Viren- Yeh th bahut acchi baat hai.. Dekhna, jald hi Sukku hero banega...

Ramesh smiled proudly.

Scene 4

Mittal- All the best, young man.

Sukku thanked him and faced the camera.

Sukku- Aryan, you can't do this... Tu apni family ko kaise chod sakta hai? Apne sapno ke saath apni family ke baare mein bhi toh soch... Tere liye jitna dance important hai, utna hi tu tere mom-dad ke liye important hai... EK baar aur koshish kar le... Shaad woh teri baat maan le...Apne sapnoke liye sab kuch mat chod... Itna selfish mat ban yaar...

The director and others clapped for Sukku and prased him.

Director- Fantastic... inn dialogues mein jaise jaan aa gayi hai... brilliant!

Sukku thanked.

Director- So kal se... Shooting shuru...

Scene 5

Sukku entered the house with happiness on his face. Jwala noticed this and asked him the reason, to which he asked her to call the family. After a few minutes, the Gangwals were in the courtyard, waiting for Sukku to speak. Sukku told them about the offer to act in a movie. Kirti told them about her job too. All were happy for them and congratulated them. The elders blessed them, while the cousins cheered for them.

Saurav- Wah Suketu and Kirti! Tum dono toh kamaal ho yaar! (He hugged Sukku)

Dolly- Ab hume shopping ke kharche ki...Ab se Sukku and Kirti humara credit card.

Sukku made a face at her while Kirti nodded in a no.

Sukku- Mujhe koi bada role nahi mila hai yaar...

Nisha- Dekhna, ek din isse bhi bada role milega tujhe...

Jwala- Sukku bro, Kirti, ab se no kanjoosi, samjhe?

The cousins were very happy with Sukku when Kabir entered the house disappointed. But when he saw the happy faces, he decided not to spoil their mood.

Kabir- Kya baat hai? Sab logo ke chehre par 32 watt smile kyun n hai? Nisha, tu ghar chodke jaa rhai hai kya?

Dolly- Nahi, choti Nisha aani waali hai... isiliye... (Nisha blushed)

Kabir-(confused) Yeh choti Nisha kaun hai?

All face palmed.

Umesh- Arrey, teri aur Nisha ki baby yaar...

Kabir blushed

Kabir- Uske liye Nisha ready hi nahi ho rahi... main kya kar sakta hoon?

All looked at him shock and then burst out laughing, while Nisha threw daggers at him through her looks.

Sukku-Mujhe movie mein ek role mila aur Kirti ko job mili...

Kabir- (happily) Congrats Yaar! Iss baat pe party...

Jwala- Haan Jiju, sahi kaha... Party toh banti hai...

Sukku- Maine kab mana kiya hai... raat ko 8 baje, Velvet lounge mein...

Hearing Velvet Longue, Nisha and Kabir looked at each other and blushed remembering their first meet.

Scene 6

Kirti was getting ready for the treat. She was happy that she finally got a job and that now no one will underestimate her.

Kirti- Aaj ka din bahut accha hai... Sab kuch jaisa main chahti thi waise hi hua, mujhe job mili aur Sukku ko uska break...

She wore a bracelet and picked her bag. She was about to go out of the room to join her cousins when Rupan entered the room.

Rupan- Kahin jaa rahi ho?

Kirti- Haan Mom, Sukku is giving us a treat... Velvet Lounge mein... Kuch kam tha?

Rupan- Kuch baat karni thi...

Kirti- Boliye na?

Rupan- Tumne mujhe apne job ke baare mein kyun nahi bataya?

Kirti- (defensively) Main sure nahi thi ki mujhe job milega yaa nahi. Isiliye socha ki pehle try karu, phir bata dungi... But maine Dad se baat ki thi...

Rupan- Mujhe bataana zaroori nahi samjha? And ek intern ki job karogi tum?

Kirti- Usmein kya hai? Atleast khud ke pairon pe khadi toh ho jaaungi... Uss din aap hi toh complain kar rahe the...

Rupan- Mujhe laga ki tum kisi acche se firm mein acchi payment ke liye job karogi...

Kirti- How Blah! Main sirf kuch hi dino ke liye internship kar rah hoon... And I am earning naa?

Rupan- Jabaan mat ladaao Kirti... Nisha, Kabir aur Sukku ko dekho... Dolly ko dekho... unki payment pata hai tumhe? Ab toh Nisha ko dukaan aur Lakshya Academy, dono se payment milti hai...

Kirti- Toh kya hua Maa? Nisha always wanted to work in the Academy aur Daadaji ke liye dukaan par kaam kar rahi hai... What's the big deal?

Rupan- Tum meri baat samajh kyun nahi rahi ho?

Kirti- Because you aren't making sense right now. Anyways, mujhe der ho rhai hai...

She went outside the room t hide her tears. She felt very bad that her mom hadn't even praised her, but compared her to her other cousins.

She heard Bunty call her so went downstairs, hoping that her mother will understand her one day.

Scene 5

The cousins, Saurav and Kabir reached at the Velvet Lounge. Nisha and Kabir looked at each other as they thought of their first hug. Their trance was broken when Aman called out to Nisha.

Aman- Nisha, Kabir yahin hai, kahin bhaaga nahi jaa raha hai... Aaram se dekh lena...

NiBir blushed. They all settled down on their reserved table, joking, talking and having fun, but to their surprise Kirti wasn't being an active participant in all this.

Sukku-Kirti, Abhi tujhe job mili hai aur tu itna sad kyun hai?

Kirti- (avoiding) Kuch nahi... so aaj ka kya special?

But to her disappointment, no one failed to notice that she was sad. Kabir blinked his eyes and assured others that he do something and walked away.

*After a few minutes*

The cousins and others were surprised to hear someone say on the mike, "Hey guys and beautiful girls!" and to the cousins' shock, it was Kabir.

Kabir- Hey you! (He said looking at Kirti and she gave him a confused look) Maana ki beautiful ho... par itna bhi bhaav mat khaao yaar...

Nisha looked at him in confusion as her mind recalled the first time he had said these words to her and she had tried to walk away ignoring him.

Kabir went and knelt down infront of Nisha, holding her hand, but his eyes focused on Kirti

Kabir- Waise, kya kisine tumse kaha ki aap aaj bahut pretty dikh rahe ho...par ye maate pe jo tension ki lines hai, woh aapke look ke saath match nahi karti...

Kirti smiled.

Kirti- Bas Jiju, itna bhi flirt mat karo ki sab ko lagega ki main hi aapki girlfriend hoon...

Kabir- Arrey, tu toh meri half girlfriend hai...

Kabir winked, but the cousins noticed the lines of anger on Nisha's forhead. Before the situation could worsen

Umesh-I think hume kuch order karna chahiye...

They then had dinner with their usual dose of fun. Kirti's mood was better. Nisha looked at her husband in awe as he teased Bunty. Kabir felt someone staring at him, and knowing that it was Nisha, he looked at her. She mouthed a thank you and he nodded.

While going to their house,

Nisha- Thanks Kabir, pata nahi Kirti ka achanak se mood kharab kyun ho gaya tha, par you made her mood alright.

Kabir- Nisha, wahaan pe tumhe kaisa laga...

Nisha- Jaise ki we were meeting for the first time...

Kabir- Kitni ajeeb situation thi naa woh...

Nisha- Sahi kaha... par phir bhi we made our way through it...All because you were with me...

Kabir- Aur humesha tumhare saath rahunga...

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Episode - 344

Written by- mansi


Scene - 1

Dolly's office


AR called dolly in her cabin.


AR - miss gangwal aapko do ur nye designs tyar karne h... uski details aapko meri pa de degi... ur mai chahta hu ki ye designs ab tk k sabse achhe designs ho... because the client is very important...


Dolly - ok sir... I will do my best


AR - ek ur baat miss dolly kal mai new york jaa rha hu for a long time as hmari company ne ek branch office wha bhi kholne ka decision lia h... so I have to be there till sab set na ho jae


Dolly - ( confused) oh congratulations sir


AR - I know u r confused ki mai ye aapko kyu bta rha hu... vo islie miss gangwal ki mai chahta hu ki aap designer head bne... I know aap ur jyada months kaam nhi kar paengi but fir bhi I would like it if u will take that position for whatever time u r here...


Dolly - sir... aap... seriously bol rhe h???


AR- kya mai mazak k mood m lg rha hu miss gangwal?


Dolly - nhi vo... mera matlab h ki... mai head karne k lie ready hu...


AR - good... thats what I expected... now u may go...


Dolly left his cabin with mixed feelings.


Scene - 2

Kn house


Kabir was sleeping when nisha came to wake him up.


Nisha - kabirr... kumbhkaran part two... uth na yaar.. 8 bje gye h


Kabir - please na wifey... sone de na


He snuggle in his pillow. Nisha felt like pulling his cheeks at his cuteness but instead pulled his pillow.


Nisha - kabir please yaar... dekh late ho jaega na...


Kabir - kya yaar nisha...


Nisha pushed him up from the bed.


Nisha - kabir yaar academy nhi jana h kya tjhe... kyu naatak kar rha h


Kabir - ( his smile disappeared) hmmm


Nisha noticed that change.


Nisha - kya hua kabir?


Kabir - kuch bhi to nhi


Nisha - jhooth bolega apni wifey se?


She sat beside him


Kabir - ( took a deep sigh) vo kal...


Kabir narrated her whole incidence of yesterday about how he expected a salary rise or a promotion but instead of him someone else got that.


Nisha looked at the saddened face of her dear husband and something pricked her badly.


Nisha - tere boss ki to... chal uth tyar ho kabir... aaj tere boss ki to mai esi band baja baarat nikalungi na ki jindgi bhar yaad rkhega... uski himmat kaise hui esa karne ki tere sath... ruk abhi apni gang ko bulati hu... itna maarungi itna maarungi na use ki apni shakal bhool jaega vo... ur vo kya naam h dusre wale ka ha amit... uski to chatni bna k tere saare office ko khilaungi mai... chamcha khi ka... tu uth kabir... aaj chhodungi nhi mai un dno ko...


She was getting hyper with each word while kabir was busy looking at her first in disbelief and then with a smile.


Nisha - has kya rha h... tu mazak mat samaj... tu dekh mai kya karti hu un dno ka


Kabir - are... o meri jhansi ki rani... shanti... shanti...


Nisha - dekh kabir...


Kabir - ha meri maa samaj gya mai ki tjhe gussa aa rha h par iske lie hm unhe maar k kya kar lenge...


Nisha - (smiling ) hmmm... yhi to mai kh rhi hu kabir... jo ho gya use chhod de... ese muh latka k rakhega to bhi to kuch nhi milega na... koi tera promotion tjhse chhen sakta h par tera talent koi tjhse alag nhi kar sakta... ur yhi talent tjhe tere hisse ka fame ur success dno dilaega...


Kabir smiled at his adorably intelligent wifey and blinked his eyes in assurance.

Kabir - achha to ye sab tu drama kar rhi thi?


Nisha - nhi... koi tjhe itti si bhi takleef deta h na to man karta h ki uska mooh tod du.. ur bas m hota na to tod bhi deti... par tu udaas ho ye mjhse bardasht nhi hota kabir... (tears start brimming)


Kabir took her in a hug and kissed her hair. She hugged him back.


Kabir - isilie to mai tjhse itna pyaar karta hu...



Scene - 3

Shooting studio


Sukku was sitting as it was break time when a girl came and sat beside him.


Girl - hi suketu... m tina...


Suketu - (a little uncomfortable as she sat closer to him) hi...


Tina - to suketu... kaisa lag rha h... tumhara to first day h na aaj..


She shifted a bit more closer as sukku shifted away from her.


Sukku - ha... its great here...


He shifted away but now there was a wall and he couldn't move anymore.


Tina - mere sath rahoge to ur achha lagega...


She shifted more.


Sukku - see tina... udhar kitni space h tum mere upar kyu chad rhi ho... m I looking like a chair...


Tina - how rude...


She went away stomping while sukku felt relieved.


Sukku - ( monologue ) kya ho gya h sukku tjhe... ladki samne se line de rhi thi ur tune use bhaga dia... tu thik to h na...


Suddenly his phone beeped. It was alisha's message about her reaching safely and finding an accommodation. A smile spread on his face as he saw her msg.


Sukku - I don't know why but I miss u alisha...



Scene - 4

Dance academy


Kabir reached his rehearsal hall when he met amit there.


Amit - hi kabir... mjhe congratulate nhi karoge...


Kabir - congratulations amit...


Amit - are mjhe pta h tm apna promotion expect kar rhe the par vo kya h na...


Kabir - ( cutting him off in the middle) mr. Amit... a heartly congratulations for ur promotion par agar aapne ye promotion kisi ki sifarish k badle apni mehnat ur talent ki wajah se lia hota to mjhe jyada khushi hoti... ur waise bhi mjhe bhot kaam h to please can u celebrate ur win with someone else... so I can do my work better.


Kabir smiled at him and felt a little better and went away while amit fumed.


Scene - 4

Dolly's office


Dolly was standing outside waiting for auto when someone came and closed her eyes.


Dolly - saurav kya bachho jaisi harkate karta h...


Saurav - kya dolly yaar... tu bhi na mood kharab kar deti h


Dolly - offo don't spoils ur mood... chal mjhe ice cream khani h... mjhe khilaega na pls...


Saurav - tu kabhi nhi sudhregi...


Dolly nodded in a no and they just took a few steps when someone called them from behind.


AR - miss gangwal...


Saurav and dolly turned around and saw AR.


Dolly - sir aap...


AR - ha miss gangwal... mai... actually mjhe aap dno se kuch kehna tha...


Dolly and saurav looked at each other confused.


AR - ek dusre ko ghoorna band kijie... aap dno ko nhi pta h ki mai kya kehne wala hu...


Saurav and dolly smiled sheepishly.


AR - miss gangwal mjhe aapko... thank you bolna h... aapne unknowingly meri bhot help ki h not only professionally but personally too... mera perspective change karne k lie thank you... ur mr saurav I seriously wish ki aap dno hmesha sath rhe... I hope mai aap lgo ko bore nhi kar rha hu par mai kal subah jaa rha hu to socha aap logo se ye share karta jau... m getting late so bye I hope aap apni responsibility achhe se nibhaenge...


AR didn't wait for their response and left leaving them in a shocked state.

Saurav was the one to recover first.


Saurav - dolly maine sapna dekha ya tera boss sach m yha tha...


Dolly - lgta to sapna jaisa hi h par sach tha...


She pinched him.


Saurav - ahhh... are mjhe pta h tu nishu ki behen h isme sabot dene ki koi jarurat nhi thi...


Dolly glared at him while he mouthed a sorry.


Dolly - ye sir ko kya hua achanak... par m happy shayad ab vo apni life m move on kare...


Saurav - n m proud of u... tu to chha gyi yaar... chal is baat p mai tjhe do ice cream khilaunga...


Dolly - do nhi teen...


Saurav and dolly giggled and left.


Scene - 5

Kn house


The door bell ranged and nisha opened the door.


Nisha - kabir tu aa gya?


Kabir - nhi wifey... abhi raste m hu... thodi der m pahuch jaunga...


Nisha - (rolling her eyes) very funny...


Kabir - thanks for the compliment


Nisha - tu kitta k h kabir... jab dekho mjhe irritate karta rehta h


Kabir - ur tu kitti j h nisha... sath m dumb bhi...


Kabir said and sneaked inside as he knew what was coming back to him.


Nisha - ruk vhi... kya bola tne... mai dumb hu... to tu duffer h...


She said throwing a cushion towards him.


Kabir - tabhi to tjhse shadi ki... vo bhi do baar...


Nisha -( fuming with anger) kya kha tune... ruk kabir abhi btati hu tjhe...


Kabir ran as she started throwing random things on him.


Kabir - dekh nisha... lg jaegi yaar... kyu meri jaan lene p tuli h


Nisha - aaj to tu bachega nhi kabir... ruk ja vhi...


Nisha came towards him while he snatched away the cushion she was holding and pushed her against the wall.


Kabir - tjhse bachna chahta bhi nhi... tere lie kuch laya hu... dekhegi nhi...


Nisha - mjhe nhi dekhna... mai to dumb hu na...


Kabir - ha vo to hai... par fir bhi..


Niaha glared at him while he took a small box out of his pocket.


Kabir - ye tere lie...


Nisha turned her face away.


Kabir - nisha see na please... pls pls...


Nisha - ha ha bus... cute act ki dukaan...


Kabir smiled cheekily and showed her the box.


Nisha - khali box laya h kya..


Kabir - abe dhakkan... is box ka dhakkan khol..


Nisha hit him and opened the box to find a chain and pendent with the letters k and n.


Nisha looked at kabir and then at pendent as her eyes brimmed with tears of joy.


Kabir - itna kharab h kya jo tu rone lagi...


Nisha - kabir (hugging him) paagal... bhot sunder h... par ye...


Kabir - ha ha... ab apna questionnaire mat start karna... mai pehle hi bta deta hu... ye tere lie meri taraf se gift h... teri jeet ka bhi ur...


Nisha - ur???


Kabir - ur mjhe itna pyaar karne k lie thank u ka bhi...


Nisha shook her head at her cute husband.


Nisha - kabir tu sach m itna paagal h ya kuch gir gya tha tere sir p... koi kisi ko thanks bolta h kya is baat k lie...


Kabir pulled her in his embrace.


Kabir - bakio ka to nhi pta but mjhe to kehna h... thank u nisha... aaj k lie kal k lie... meri zindgi k har us pal k lie jisme tu mere sath thi ur aage bhi rhegi hmesha...


Nisha - hamesha...


Nisha and kabir looked at each other with all the love in their eyes. Kabir took that pendent from her hand and made her wear that while nisha touched it and kissed the pendant.


Scene - 6

Viraj's house


Vj prepared the dinner and searched for her elder son.


Vj - ye viraj bhi na... pta nhi aaj kal kha khoye rehte h... study m bhi nhi h pta nhi kha chale gye...


Vj looked for him at the terrace and found him there. Vj moved forward and stood beside him.


Viraj - are maa aap... hme aawaj lga deti hm aa jate...


Vj - viraj... kha khoye hue h aap... hm kab se dekh rhe h... aap thode pareshan lg rhe h...


Viraj - maa esi koi baat nhi h... vo bus academy ko lke hm thoda stressed h...


Vj - aap sach kah rhe h na viraj... kuch chhupa to nhi rhe na hmse...


Viraj - (fumbled) nhi... nhi.. maa hm aapse kyu kuch chhupaenge... kuch nhi chhupa rhe h hm aapse...


Vj didn't said anything but decided to talk with nibir about this.


Scene - 7

Gangwal house


Moresh brothers were talking and laughing at some jokes when their respective wifes entered with trays of tea and snacks.


Vimla - bde khush lg rhe h... kya baatien chal rhi h aap logo m...


Mohan - are bhabhi... khush hone ki hi to baat h... dekho hmare saare bachhe apni apni life m settle ho rhe h...


Laxmi - ha vo to hai... par bunty...


Ramesh - laxmi relax me... bunty bhi apni padai p dhyaan dne lga h na... tm kyu khamkha tension leti ho...


Viren - ha laxmi... jwalu h na bunty ko sambhalne k lie...


Laxmi smiled as vimla too assured her.

While rupan was standing like she wasn't in the conversation.


Ramesh - are rupan bhabhi... aapko kya hua...


Rupan - mjhe kya hona h... mjhe to bus apne bachho k bhavishya ki fikr h...


Vimla - par rupan... ab to kirti ne bhi office join kar lia h na phir kya fikr h ur jwalu to hai hi itni honhaar...


Rupan - kya didi... vo to bus ek intern hi h na... kha dekho baki sab bachho ko.. ab to sukku ko bhi break mil gya.. ur kirti... maine socha tha ki vo kisi badi firm m kaam karegi...


Mohan - rupan kabhi to achha socha karo... har baar apni beti ko compare karne k bajae usko support karo... kal tmhari wajah se bechari ka mood kharab ho gya tha...


Rupan - ha ha sab meri wajah se hi to hota h...


Laxmi - nhi didi... par agar vo abhi intern bhi h to kya hua... apne pairo par to khadi h na... agar aap use support karoge to uska confidence bdega... waise bhi bachhe sabse pehle yhi chahte h ki unke parents unpe bharosa kare...


All other agreed while rupan look lost in her thoughts.





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EPI-345

WRITTEN BY- lekha


Episode -

Kabir entered the dance room. His frustration was clearly shown on his reflection in every mirror. He still couldn't believe that he hadn't got a promotion. Kabir closed his eyes.
"I know it's hard Kabir", Nisha had told him," It's not fair. I know but you shouldn't go to work this frustrated."
Remember her voice calmed Kabir's mind a little.
"Wherever you feel annoyed and frustrated you should close your eyes and remember your favourite moment."

Kabir knew which memory to cherish. It was the time when he and Nisha were celebrating the fact that he was chosen by London School of Dance for a dance program.

Kabir opened his eyes and felt all better. With a smile on his face he started preparing for his class. Just then the peon walked in.

"Kabir Sir", he said," Your boss is calling. "
Kabir felt his calmness leave him but he held on to the smile that he had and nodded at the peon.

Before long Kabir was at his boss' cabin.
"You called for me sir?", Kabir said.
" Yes I did", his boss said, "There have been complaints about your behavior and attitude towards your co-workers."
"Amit", Kabir thought.
" Such behavior is intolerant so I'll have to let you go. "
"What?!"
"Your behavior is intolerable here-"
"because your daughter's friend doesn't have enough talent to earn a promotion."

Kabir lost his cool and he could feel his blood boiling.
"See. This is the kind of attitude-"
"You have no right to tell me how to behave when you have dropped down to this level. I will not give you the satisfaction of having the final word and firing me so I QUIT!"

Kabir slammed his ID card into the table and left.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Nisha reached the shooting range. Some of the explained shorts I were practicing. Nisha was told that she and two others were getting a new trainer and so she waited for her new teacher as she watched the shooters in practice.

"Nisha Gangwal I assume", came a voice from behind.
Nisha turned around to find a tall, fit man who was at least a foot taller than her.
" It's Nisha Kabir Kumar ", sure says proudly.
" Oh yes. My bad. Sorry ", he said," I'm your new trainer Mr.Amar Dutta. Where are the others? "
"I don't know sir", she said.

Just then the two others who were going to train with her came rushing.
" Sorry we are late sir ", one of them panted.
" 20 laps round the ground ", he said sternly.
" but sir-"
"25"
The two girls sighed and started their laps.
Amar looked at a surprised Nisha.
"I so respect people but I will not tolerate indiscipline especially from my students."
Nisha have a faint smile and nodded.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kirti felt her heart beat quicken as she opened the door and stepped into the office.
"Where can I find Ms. Rashi?", she asked at the reception.
The receptionist showed her the way to Rashi's cabin. Kirti reached and saw a talk and slender woman working on a few designs.
" Hi. Good ", Kirti said, excitedly," I'm you new intern. What can I do first. "
Kirti longingly looked at the design Rashi was working at. She was hoping to assist her mentor with it.
"Get me some coffee", Rashi said without looking up.
" You mean tell the peon to get you some? ", Kirti asked. She believed that it was not her job to get coffee.

Rashi put down her pencil and looked at Kirti for the first time thoroughly.
" Listen Ms. Chirpy ", she said," You are an intern. So it's your job to get all of us coffee and snacks when we ask you to."
"What about designs and-"
"You really think you'll directly work on designs?!", Rashi said and laughed.
The enthusiasm that Kirti came in with disappeared.
" One latte ", her mentor said," No sugar. I'm cutting down on my sugar intake. "

Kirti nodded silently and turned to go to the cafeteria in the building.
"My family believes in me", she told herself," I must not lose hope. "

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sukku tagged the sets of the movie. He was so nervous he felt like he had butterflies in his stomach.
"There you are", said a man with a writing pad and headphones," You must be Suketu Gangwal. I'm the assistant director of the movie. You should get to know your cast. "
"Sure", Sukku said.
" Why don't you start with the lead? He's in his vanity van down there. "

Sukku headed towards the direction that the assistant director pointed. He found the vanity car of the superstar Ajay Khurana . Sukku became more nervous.

Sukku knocked the door.
"Come in", came the voice from inside.
Sukku cautiously went in.
" So did you finally get me that-"
Ajay stored mid way when he looked up from his magazine to find someone who is not his personal assistant.
"Are you a fan?", he asked and grabbed the nearest photo of himself and signed it.
" Here you go ", he said flippantly and handed the photo to Sukku," I'm sorry but I'm busy with the sitting. "
"Actually I'll be playing your best friend in the movie.", Sukku said.
Ajay turned his attention to Sukku again.
" So you are the new face ", he said as he advanced towards Sukku.
The latter kept moving backwards till he was out of the vanity car.
" Suketu Gangwal", he said.
"Yes", Sukku said with nervousness and happiness at the same time.
" Let me make one thing clear. The director and choreographer might believe that you can become a start and this movie can be a big break but this is still my movie. If you outshine in the movie and shadow my performance I'll make you pay. "

Ajay slammed the door which made Sukku flinch. Sukku was shocked at the way Ajay behaved.
"Don't take it to heart", said a man who was watching everything," He is like that with everyone... Except the fans. He pretends to be nice to the fans but he hates seeing them. "
Sukku nodded.
"I'm his makeup man. Sorry once again."

The man went into the vanity can to do his job while Sukku said outside.
"Something tells me this will not be easy", he said to himself."


A/N - (NOTE BY TEAM) dear readers, we have been getting very less response for our episodes these days. we writers have decided that if we continue to get less response it must not be good enough for u all to read and so we are planning to wrap up nauc tsc i guess it won't be missed much but we writers will surely miss it. if u have any opinion about this please comment on dt and let us know...
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TSC Episode 346

-By Niya (Scene 1 & 4 ) and Nimmi (Scene 2 & 3)

Scene 1

KNH

Kabir reached home and opened the door .. he went and feel on the sofa... he closed his eyes and recalled all the events of the day..

How Amit taunted him.. The way he back answered him... His boss blaming him for his behaviour with Amit ... and then he finally resigned ..

He knew that he was not at fault but he was sad ... he had so many expectations from this job...

He remembered when he got the job.. he remembered telling Nisha that this job will be the base for him to set up his own Dance Academy ...

But today all his dreams were getting shattered into pieces and those pieces pricked in his heart...

He was in his emotional turmoil when he felt Nisha's presence... He quickly looked at his watch and realised that it was time for Nisha to come back...

He plastered a smile on his face and sat properly...

Nisha came inside and sat on the sofa exhausted... Kabir smiled at her.. she was so tired yet she looked so beautiful...

He started cherishing her hair and asked...

Kabir : Kya hua .. aaj bohut practice ki kya ?

Nisha took a pillow in her hand, laced it on Kabir's lap and laid on the sofa keeping her head in his lap ...

Nisha : Haan... vo new trainer aaya hai aaj ussne bohut practice karvai...

She replied and closed her eyes and waited for him to continue the conversation but Kabir just kept cherishing her hair... she felt something weird and looked at him only to find him lost in his own thoughts...

Here Kabir was thinking that how would he hide all that happened in the day because he knew that Nisha can read his eyes and his eyes never lie ...

She understood that something is wrong.. she sat straight and placed her hand on his shoulder...

Nisha : Kabir.. kya hua ?

Kabir came out of his trance and acted if he is normal...

Kabir : Kya hua .. kuch bhi toh nahi.. tu baith main fresh hoke aata hun...

He replied without looking in her eyes confirming her doubts and went inside the room making an excuse...

Kabir came inside the room and shut the door he leaned on the door and talked to himself...

Kabir's monologue : Main tujh se kuch chipana nahi chahta Nisha .. par main tujhe batana bhi nahi chahata.. main nahi chahata ki tu bhi iss baat ke wajah se upset ho ... Pata nahi kab tak tujhse yeh sab chupa paunga...

scene 2

At Gangwal house


laxmi vimla n rupan were seating in courtyard n discussing something...den suddenly vasu came...

vasu - hie everyone kaise ho sab i hope maine aaplogo ko disturb nhi kia...

laxmi - arey vasu ji kaisi baat kr rhi h aap...ye aaphi ka hi ghar h..

vasu- wo mai yha se guzar rhi thi to socha aaplogo se milti chalu...

vimla- bilkul shi socha aapne...aaiye na baithiye...

n she sits wid dem...

laxmi- hum hmare baccho ki hi baatein krre the...sab apne apne kaam se kitne khush h...na

vimla-ha laxmi...apne baccho ko unki life me settled dekh k ek alag hi khushi milti h...
rupan- baki sab ka to thk h lekin meri kirti...
vasu- kirti ko kya hua rupan

rupan- mujhe laga tha ki meri kirti kisi bade farm me job kregi but wo to ek intern ki job krri h

on hearing dis vasu smiles n says

vasu(pointing towards ladder)- rupan agar mai tumhe upar wali seedhi me jane ko kahu to kya tum direct yha se jump kr ke pahuch jaogi???

rupan- ye kya keh rhi aap...aise kaise koi bina saari sidhi(ladder) chadhe upar pahuch jayega...

vasu- to yhi tum kirti k liye kyu nhi sochti...wo upar wali sidi uska dream h aur wha tak pahuchne k liye use baaki ki sari sidhiya chadhna padega...aur ye internship bhi unhi sidhiyo me se ek h ...

laxmi - ha rupan bhabhi vasu ji thk keh rhi h...aur hmari kirti to h hi talented...dekhna bhut jald wo bhi apna goal achieve kar legi...
on hearing der views rupan was not at all satisfied...but put an artificial smile on her face infront of dem...

Scene 3

Kirti's room

After working the whole day but nothing related to designs kirti entered her room...feeling tired sad n exhausted...

bunty- kirti di aap office se aa gye...

kirti(sarcastically)- nhi 1 hr baad aaungi...yhi batane k liye aai thi...

dolly- kirti tera office ka first days kaisa tha???

on hearing first day of office her smile fades away...but she put a fake smile...on her face n said

kirti- accha tha...dolly di...

but her sad face n her fake smile was not unnoticed by cousins dey knew dat something is bothering her...

sukku- kirti jab tujhe jhuth bolna nhi aata to kyu aisi...bhayanak koshish karti h...

kirti- maine kya jhut bola sukku

umesh- yhi ki tera office ka first day accha tha

kirti kept quiet...

jwalu- ha kirti koi to baat h jo tujhe pareshan krri h wrna tu how blah...bolna kabhi nhi bhulti...

dolly- kirti...tu janti h na...tu kitna bhi chahe par hum cousins se tu kuch nhi chhupa sakti...to ab jaldi tells...us

kirti den finally gave up n tell dem the entire story...

aman - to ye baat h...isiliye tu itni udaas thi...

jwala-us rashi ki to mai...

but sukku understands her problem becoz he too was facing similar problems...so he gave signalls to all d cousins through his eyes dat he will talk to her

sukku- kirti...bas itni si baat ki wajah se tune apna muh latka ke rakha h...

kirti- sukku ye tujhe itni si baat lagti h...

sukku- to kya...den he hold her hand n said politely dekh kirti tu jis profession me h na wha hardwork k sath sath patience ki bahut zarurat hoti h...wha na hume aise hi jagah nhi milti...balki hume wha khud apni jagah bnani padti h ..he den took a pause n saw dat kirti was listening him peacefully he den again continued...
aur rhi baat us rashi ki...to tu uske har ek task ko ek naya challange samajh k accept kr...aur use pura bhi kar fir dekhna teri sari sadness kaise coolness me badal jayegi...aur ek baad hmesha yaad rakhna...chahe wo rashi kashi tashi koi bhi ho...wo tujhe jyada se jyada irritate kr sakti h but tujhse tera talent kabhi nhi chhin sakti...
samjhi...

on hearing dis from sukku kirti smiles...

sukku(to himself)- beta sukku kirti ko to lecture de dia but ab tujhe bhi bhut patience rakhna hoga...n den he turns his face towards cousins who were staring at him in shock...

umesh - sukku kya baat h tu to mujhse bhi jyada mature baate krne lag gya n all started laughing while sukku glare at dem...n den later he too joins...after der laughing session...

kirti- how blah...mai sara din thak k aai hu aur kisi ne mujhe khane k liye bhi nhi pucha...how mean...

seeing kirti in her normal mood a beautiful smile appears on cousin's faces...

Scene 4

KNH

Kabir freshen-up and then came for dinner... Dinner was a silent affair where Nisha kept trying to talk to Kabir about what was wrong but he avoided it very easily...

After dinner when Nisha came inside she found the room empty..

"Kabir "

She called him but Kabir she got no response...

She checked the washroom and even that was empty...

"Lagta hai walk pe gaya hoga...Lekin abhi toh kafi late hogaya hai..." she was confused about Kabir's whereabouts

She thought for a while that where could go and then finally she figured out where he would be...

She went to the kitchen and prepared two cups of coffee and went on the terrace...

She was right.. Kabir stood there leaning on the wall of the terrace looking blankly at the sat...

She went and placed the cup of coffee in front of his eyes...

Kabir's chain of thoughts broke with the aroma of coffee.. he took the cup from her but didn't look at her... now Nisha was sure that something big has happened... She was getting impatient now...

Nisha : Kabir kuch toh bol yaar.. kya hua hai.. mujhe dara kyun raha hai iss tarah ?

Kabir : Nisha sach main kuch nahi hua...

Kabir sipped his coffee and looked at the other side... Nisha grabbed the mug from his hand and placed both the mugs aside on the small table that was kept there.. she caught his hand and made him face her...

Nisha : Acha toh yehi baat meri aankhon main dekh ke bol...

Kabir looked down as he knew he wouldn't be able to lie to her... Nisha cupped his face and made him face her again..

Nisha : Kabir.. kya hua hai ?

Kabir caught her hand and told her everything that happened in the Academy...

Kabir : Nisha mujhe iss baat ka dukh nahi hai ki unhone mujhe blame kiya ya mujhe taunt kiya dukh mujhe iss baat ka hai ki main apni kabiliyat ko prove nahi kar paya shayaad.. main..

Nisha placed her hand on his mouth and stopped him for saying anything further...

Nisha : Kabir kabhi aisa sochna bhi mat ki tune apni kabiliyat sabit nahi ki.. Kabir tu shayaad bhul gaya hai ki tere wajah se Sukku aur Alisha ne vo competition jeeta.. team teri wajah se jeeti hai.. Amit ko sirf vo post apni friendship ke wajah se mili hai aur yeh baat maine tujhe pehle bhi samjhai thi... phir kyun tere maan main yeh doubt hai ??

Kabir looked at her feeling guilty and said... Nisha understood what he might be feeling...

She quietly wrapped her arms around him and gave him a hug.. Kabir too hugged her back and rested his head on top of her head...

Nisha : Kabir.. I know ki yeh tu iss job ke zariye apni Dream Academy ka sapna pura karna chahta tha aur tujhe aisa lag raha hoga ki yeh sapna abh tut gaya.. but Kabir har kisiko dusra auka milta hai.. aur tujhe vo mauka jaldi milegi.. jaise mujhe mia.. but TRUST YOUR SELF Kabir.. agar tu hi apne talent pe shaq karega toh phir apna dream kaise pura karega ?? Promise kar ujhe tu Kabhi apni kabiliyat pe shaq nahi karega...

Kabir had no words to express what he was feeling.. he felt blessed to have Nisha in his life.. she understood him without words... He hugged her tightly and kissed the top of her hair...

Kabir : Nisha I promise main aage se kabhi aisa nahi kahunga.. and jab tak tu mere saath hi mujhe yaakeen hain ki main dream bhi pura kar hi lunga...

They broke the hug and smiled looking at each other... he started tugging her hair behind her ear...

Nisha : Kabir.. yaad hai shadi se pehle jab humne terrace pe coffee pi thi ? Tab humne socha tha ki panga liya hai toh abh deal kar hi lenge aur aaj dekh hum kahan se kahan pohunch gaye... Kitna fark hai na uss raat main aur aaj ki raat main...

Kabir : Haan... uss raat ki coffee bhi better thi..

Kabir was back to his K panti.. Nisha was happy seeing him becoming normal but she acted as if she is angry..

Nisha : Kabir ...

Kabir : Janta hun bohut K hu .. baar baar ek baat bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai..

They both laughed and then went to the room after finishing their coffee..



A/N : Maha Epic again 😆

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EPISODE- 347
WRITTEN BY- SHIBU


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Scene 1</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">*Next Day*</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sukku was rehearsing his
dialogues when the AD came and told him that his scene was ready and that he
should join him for the shoot.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sukku was scared </font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sukku- (in mind) Maine camera ko
face kiya hai, par Ajay Sir ke saath shooting? Hope ki main koi gadbad na karu.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He went and stood with the unit,
but was surprised to see Ajay missing.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sukku- (to one of the crew
members) Ajay Sir kaha hai?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">CM- Unka humesha se aisa hi
hai...woh kabhi tim pe nahi ate...(shaking his head in disappointment)Main aapke
liye chai lau?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sukku- Ji nahi..thanks.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sukku sighed in relief. He was
happy that he was getting some more time to rehearse. He sat with the other
actors rehearsing, when there was a sudden commotion.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sukku-(confused) Kya hua? Itni
bhag-daud?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Actor1- Shayaad Ajay Sir aaye honge...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sukku- (looking at his watch, in
shock) Itna late?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Actor2- Aaj toh jaldi aaye
hai...waise to 11 baje tak unka naamo-nishaan nahi hota...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sukku looked at Ajay, who had
just entered the surio. The director was instructing him, but Ajay didn't gave
a damn about it. He was ordering the make-up man and was more worried about his
make up.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Actor3- Aise shock mat ho... Just
remember one thing, all that glitters isn't gold...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Scene 2</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Kirti entered her office. Her
mind was just remembering Sukku's words and that had somewhere consoled her.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">She went in Rashi's cabin. Rashi
looked at her and frowned.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rashi- You are 5 minutes late...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Kirti-(apologetic) sorry mam,
traffic...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rashi- (interrupting her, annoyed)
yeh Mumbai nahi hai ki bahut traffic hai...Don't make excuses, you get that? Go
get my coffee...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Kirti- Yes Mam...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">After some time Kirti returned
with the coffee, but when she was about to open the door, she heard Rashi speak
to someone...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rashi- Meri intern naa? EKdum
lazy...bas bahaane dhoodnti hai...Dekhpo, abhi tak coffee leke nahi aayi...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Kirti couldn't control her tears,
but made a attempt and knocked on the door. She heard Rashi say come in and
entered the cabin. Rashi was talking with someone on the phone. Kirti gave her
the coffee and she continued sipping it, while Kirti waited for the next order.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Scene 3</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The actors were waiting for Ajay
to get prepared. Ajay then gave a brief nod and the shoots started. Ajay went to
Sukku</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">ajay - I hope you rember what I
had told you, Mr. Gangwal... Don't you dare challenge me... Just remember, I am
Ajay Khuranaa...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sukku just nodded and through her
corner of her eyes, noticed that the other actors ave him a sympathetic look,
knowing that he had to face all this.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Scene 4</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Kirti was trying to manage 10
charts all together and match with Rashi's speed. They had to attend a client
and Rashi had told to bring 6 charts with her. But Kirti couldn't as the charts
were rolling and about to fall any time. Rashi walked very fast an urged to do
so, not sparing her a mere glance.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rashi- Can you make it fast Miss.
Chirpy? Mrs. Sharma is one of our important clients aur tumhare wajah se I
don't want her to get angry... You get that?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Kirti-(trying to balance one of
the charts) yee..ss.. Ma...aam</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rashi- then speed up.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">They reached near Rashi's
carandthe driver oped the back seat for her. Kirti was about to step in, but
was stopped by Rashi.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Rashi- Tum driver ke saath betho...
Go!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Kirti nodded and sat on the
passanger seat, with the charts in her hand. Not being used to such rude
behaviour, the diva looked outside the window, hoping that with the speed of
the car, her negative thoughts would vanish from her mind.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Scene 5</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">*Lakshya Academy*</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The girls were 10 minutes early
than the reporting time. Amar came and ordered</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Amar- 30 rounds of the ground!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The girls started their rounds
without arguing. After they had completed 20 rounds. Viraj came. He looked at
the girls in shock.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- (to Amar) Kal humne dekha
ki yeh sab 25 laps kar rahi thi, aur aaj 20 se jyaada rounds maare hain inhone...
Mr. Amar, they are girls and you should respect that.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Amar- But sir, physical excersie
is improtatnt for practices, and I have asked them to take 30 rounds of the
ground.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- (in shock) 30! Mr. Amar,
you better stop this type of behaviour. 30 is too much...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Amar- Sir but..</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- (interrupting him, to the
students) Girls, stop!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The girls stopped. All were
panting and they had a relaxed smile on their face. The ground was too big
and they were too tired.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- Go, have a break.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">All nodded happily and went to
the canteen. The peon came and told Nisha that Viraj was calling her, so she
left.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Scene 6</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">*Viraj's cabin*</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nisha- Sir, may I come in?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- Ji Ms. Nisha...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nisha entered the cabin, and saw
that Viraj was trying to call someone.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- Yeh ladka bhi na...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nisha- Kya baat hai Sir?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- Kabir humara phone nahi
uthaa raha...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nisha knew the reason for Kabir's
ignorance.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- Kya baat hai Ms. Nisha?
Aap dono hume kya chipa rhe h?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nisha- Kuch nahi Sir... Woh Kabir
todha stressed hai...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- (concerned) Sab kuch thikh
hai naa?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nisha- (trying to avoid) Ji
bilkul...Aap usse jaante ho naa, jiss baat ki tension honi chahiye, uss baaat ki
fiqar nahi karta,par baaki cheezon ki tension leta hai...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- (knowing that she is lying)
Hmm... thikh hai...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">They were interrupted by an
employee.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Employee- Sir, may I come in...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- Yeh Sahil, you may...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Employee- sir, actually...main meri
family ke saath outstation jaa raha hoon...Isiliye yeh leave application...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- (taking it and signing) So
you are joining back after 3 weeks?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sahil- yes Sir.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- No problem.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sahil- Thank you Sir.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nisha- Sir, ab main bhi chalti
hoon...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Viraj- Thikh hai...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Scene 7</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">*Market*</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Dolly and Vimla were in the
market, buying vegetables, when they heard someone call Dolly. They turned and
looking at the person, Dolly rolled her eyes.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Leela-Arrey Dolly beta? Tum
market mein?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Dolly- Nahi Mummyiji, main abhi
mall mein hoon, meri cousin ki shaadi ke liye dress select kar rahi hoon...aapko
chahiye, toh ek kharid lungi...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Leela- Par inn dino khud ko aisi
taqeef dena, acchi baat nahi hai beta...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Dolly- buri baatein jab saamne
ho, toh acchi baatein kahan yaad aati hai...MUMMYJI?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Leela- Beta, pata hai Sumeet
tumhare aur tum dono ke bacche ki kitni yaad karta hai?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Vimla- Ji pata hai naa, bahut
yaad karta hai isiliye toh baccha itna hichkiya leta hai, ki Dolly ko aisa
lagta hai, jaisa baccha andar naach raha ho... Chale Dolly, itni dhup mein tu
khadi rahega, Toh TERE bacche ko taqleef hogi...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Dolly was surprised to hear her
mom back answering, that she didn't realize that Vimla had pulled her away from
Leela.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">~~~~~~~~~~</font>



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