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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

NAUC-TSC
EPI- 348
WRITTEN BY- SARTHAK

Scene-1

Shoot for movie was about to begin..and the scene was about sukku and Ajay having some discussion

Roll sound camera and action

Sukku- virat tum aisa kaise Kar sakte ho uss ladki ki kya galti hai Jo tum uske ke saath aisa mazak Karne ki soch rahe ho mai tumhara dost hu par isme tumhara saath nahi de Sakta..

Ajay gave an angry stare for the close up but he fumbled with dialogue..

Director - cut,sir kya ho gaya

Ajay- is suketu gangwaal ki position change karo mujhe sahi nahi lag rahi..isse feel nahi aa rahi kya bakwaas jagah khada kiya hai

Sukku- par mai toh sahi jagah par hi khada tha..

Ajay- oh..director sahab (sarcastically) iss ko samjha dena ki ajay ko beech mai bolne waale log bilkul pass and nahi hai..mera mood kharab ho gaya hai..shooting baad mai karte hai..and he stormed towards his vanity van

Director gave an angry stare to sukku

AD came and told the director he will handle this.

AD- mai janta hu Mr.gangwal aapki koi galti nahi..but please try to understand woh ek established star hai..hamare pass uske nakhre jhelne ke lava koi choice nahi hai

Sukku's insides burnt with anger but he nodded his head in assurance

Scene-2
At uman restaurant

Umesh was checking the accounts when aman came and hugged him

Umesh- kya hua badi khush lag rahi ho

Aman- arrey ladoo baat hi aisi hai..abhi minster sahab ke bete ka phone aaya tha uske ghar par kal party hai dinner ke liye order aaya hai..

Umesh- yeh toh bahut hi acchi baat hai pehli baar ham log party ke liye arrangements karenge ..sab perfect hona chahiye..

Aman- arrey ladoo kyo tension lete ho...vahe guru sab badiya karenge

Umesh hugged her and said - kitna accha lagta hai na apne sapne ko poora hote hue dekhkar

Aman nodded..and hugged him tightly..

Scene-3
Lakshya Academy

Nisha was practicing her shooting when she missed one target...Amar saw her angrily ...

Nisha- sorry sir

Amar- nisha ek baad dhyaan rakho iss tarah ki galtiyaan hame competition mai bhaari pad sakti hai I want everything perfect is it clear

Nisha- yes sir ab koi shot miss nahi hoga and she aimed to hit bulls eye (perfect 10)

Arun (with a smile on his face)- that's true spirit.. Ab 15 shots ke 4 rounds maaro auto apne scores record karo

Nisha nodded and continued her practice

Scene-4
Viraj's cabin

Viraj- yeh kabir bhi na hamara phone hi nahi utha raha hai..koi baat nahi academy ke no. Par call karta hu..

He dialled JDA no.

Receptionist - hello sir Jaipur Dance Academy

Viraj- hello ji mai Mr.Viraj Singh Rathore bol raha hu Kabir ka bada bhai who aapke yaha Assistant choreographer hai kya unse baat ho sakti hai ??

Receptionist - sorry sir par kabir sir ne toh kal hi yeh job chod diya

Viraj- kya!!! job chod diya par kyon???

Receptionist - Sir mai aapko jyada information nahi se sakti but unke promotion ko lekar boss se kuch issues te..

Viraj- okk thanks

Viraj( monologue - toh ab hamara bhai itna bada ho gaya hai ki hamse apni problems chupaye nahi kabir abhi aapke bade Bhaiya hai kisi bhi problem mai aapko akela nahi chodenge hame iss ke baare mai kabir se baat karni hogi)

Scene-5
kn house

Nisha returned home and found that kabir was not there.

Nisha- (to herself) ye kabir nhi aaya abhi tak... yaar iss kabir ke mood ka kuch toh karna padega...soch nisha kaise apne pyaare hubby ka mood theek kara jaye.. kuch to soch...

she started marching in her room all tensed

nisha- idea!!!!!!!!

she did a winning dance

nisha- ab dekhti hu kab tk tera mood esa rhega...

Scene-6

viraj's house

Kabir came viraj's home as vasu called him and saw viraj was sitting on the sofa .

Kabir chose to ignore him so that he doesn't ask anything related to his job.

Kabir was going towards vasu's room when

Viraj - kabir aap please hamare study room mai aaiye hame aap se kuch important baat karni hai.

Kabir had no choice he went to Viraj's study room.

In the study room

Viraj- toh kabir ab batayenge hame kyaa baat hai , kya hua hai aapko??

Kabir- bade Bhaiya mujhe kya hoga mai toh hamesha ki tarah fit hu.

Viraj- accha toh fir aaj hamara call kyon nahi utha rahe te.

Kabir- woh...darasal ..baat yeh hai ki ...mera mobile silent par tha...academy mai bahut kaam tha..

Viraj- bas kabir ab aur kitne bahane banaoge apni pareshani ko chupane ke liye , aaj hamne tumhari academy ke no. par call kiya tha...and hame tumhare job chodne ke baare mai pata chal gaya hai isliye ab poori baat saaf saaf batao

Kabir nodded and told him the entire incident, tears came out of his eyes as he completed by saying that he quit the job.

Viraj hugged him and wiped his tears.

Viraj- I am proud of u kabir. Kuch bhi galat Karna ek crime hota hai..par kisi bhi galat cheez ko sehna usse bhi jyada bada crime hota hai. Tumne galat cheez ke khilaaf awaz uthayi iski hame bahut khusi hai.

Kabir nodded and a smile erupted on his face.

Viraj- ek aur baat aaj toh aisa kiya hai aage se koi baat chupane ki koshish mat karna .Tum hamare liye kabhi itne bade nahi hoge ki apni problem hame na batao.

Kabir- okk bade Bhaiya. Vaise mood kharab hone ka ek fayda hota hai mujhe .

Viraj- woh kyaa??

Kabir- arrey meri wifey "jhansi ki rani" mode se bahar aa jati hai.

Viraj- accha abhi batate hai nisha ko..

Kabir- kya bade Bhaiya agar usse pata chal gaya toh aaj aapko dinner mai shahi paneer ki jagah Shahi Kabir Kofta milega who bhi extra masale ke saath

Viraj (laughing)- aap kabhi nahi sudhrenge kabir.

Kabir- kya bade Bhaiya sudharne ke liye thode hi bigda tha...mai abhi jata hu..nisha ke paas woh wait Kar rahi hogi agar thoda aur late hua toh aaj mera kebab banna pakka.

Viraj smiled seeing him because although only for few minutes but he was able to make kabir forget his problems and smile like a free soul.

Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago

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#103

Nauc- tsc

Episode - 349

Written by - mansi

Scene - 1

Kn house

Nisha - ha almost saari preparation ho gyi... bus ek kaam baki h... tyaar hone ka... aaj kabir mai tjhe udaas nhi rehne dungi...

Nisha gets ready and waits for kabir to come. After some time she hear a car stopping outside.

Nisha - lagta h aa gya...

Nisha quickly switched the lights of and hid in the kitchen.

Kabir entered into the living room and found it dimly lit with candles all over. The room was indeed beautifully decorated with ballons. A smile spread on his face.

Kabir - nishaa...

Nisha came out of her hiding bitting her lower lip. Kabir was mesmerized seeing her. She wore that same dress she was wearing when they first met in velvet lounge.

Kabir - nisha ye sab...

Nisha - ye sab kisi special k lie h...

Kabir - kiske lie...

Nisha - mere dearest hubby k lie... vo kya h na aaj kal uska mood achha nhi h... ur mjhse ye dekha nhi jata...

Kabir eyes filled with unsaid tears.

Kabir - m sorry nisha... meri wajah se tjhe kitni takleef hoti h na... mai tjhe kitna pareshan karta hu...

Nisha didn't knew her words would take this turn.she made him look into her eyes.

Nisha - kabir... nhi... tu mjhe kabhi takleef nhi de sakta... na mai teri wajah se pareshan hoti hu... mai tere lie pareshan hu kabir...

Kabir - par mai kya karu nisha... mjhse nhi ho rha h... mai khud ko kaise samjhau...

Nisha could clearly see this isn't going to work. She took him to the sofa and made him sit.

Nisha - kabir... koi itni badi baat to nhi hui h na ki tu esa soche... isse bhi badi mushkile jheli h na hmne... to ise bhi paar kar lenge hm...

Kabir - pehli baar nisha pehli baar maine apne lie kuch kia tha... hmare lie kuch kia tha... mai chahta tha ki tjhe khush rakhu... jda vo rasta tha jo mjhe mere dream tk le jata par ab...

Nisha - mai khush hu kabir... tere sath... tere paas... hm tera dream jarur pura karenge...

Kabir - kaise nisha... bina meri galti k mere sath esa kyu...

Nisha knew it had pricked kabir deep down. She had to do something about it that too fast. She just couldn't see him like this. Kabir put his head on her neck.

Kabir - ( sighing ) mjhse ur nhi hoga nisha... thak gya hu mai khud se ladte ladte...

Nisha embraced him in her arms moving her fingers in his hair and thinking about what to do to free kabir.

Scene - 2

Kirti's office

Kirti was frustrated by now. She wanted to punch rashi right on her face for her rudeness. But instead she calmed herself down.

Kirti - ( monologue ) bhot akadti h na ye... mai bhi kirti gangwal hu... itti aasani se haarungi nhi...

Kirti was trying to think ways to show her talent and skill instead of these stupid kinda work.

Rashi - miss chirpy... kha kho gyi... yha sapne dekhne aae ho kya... chalo jao vo mera sketch lke aao ur ha sambhal k lana.. huh

Kirti nodded and brought her sketch.

Kirti - ( monologue ) ye kya... thoda ajeeb design nhi h ye... iska colour didn't suit... monotonous hota to achha lagta... kitna vibrant colour use kia h...

Rashi - miss good for nothing... come fast... sab tmhare lie wait nhi karte rhenge hmesha...

Kirti increased her pace and handed over it to her. Rashi took it and started walking but due to her high heels and coffee on her hand too she stumbled. Kirti supported her in right time otherwise she would have fall flat on her face. But it was too late to save the designs as they are now soaked in coffee. Everyone saw whose mistake it was but still rashi was blasting on kirti for pushing her.

Kirti - but mam... maine aapko push nhi kia... aap khud hi stumble hui thi...

Rashi - chup raho... intern hoke itni jabaan chalati ho... thik se haath pair chalati to aaj ye nhi hota... ab hm clients ko kya dikhaenge... 1 hour m meeting h...

Suddenly their boss came who was watching them.

Boss - ms rashi... why r u screaming... ur kuch bhi ho mjhe ye design 45 minutes m ready chahie... u get that...

Rashi - sir but how will I do it in 45 minutes it took me 2 days to complete them.

Kirti - sir can I try.?

Rashi - ha ha sir... waise bhi isiki mistake thi to sudharegi bhi yhi... ( monologue ) itna aasan thodi na h... kar lene do koshish...

Boss - ok miss kirti... but remember only 45 minutes.

Kirti nodded and rushed to her table.

Scene - 3

Jwala's school

Rishi - are yaar... why can't anyone else can do this... how boring...

Rishi was given the task to adjust all the books of library with series. Suddenly he felt someone behind him and turned.

Rishi - jwalu tum...

Jwalu - ( smiling ) ha mai... tumhe kya lga mai koi bhoot hu...

Rishi - nhi vo maine tmhe dekha nhi

Jwalu - dekhoge kaise mai to abhi abhi aae hu na

Rishi - tm mere sath questionnaire khelne aae ho?

Jwalu - are nhi yaar... tmhari help karane aae hu... waise bhi sports period h ur m not interested so socha library m tmhari help kara du...

Rishi - that's nice...

They both started adjusting the books.

Rishi - pta nhi log itni kitabe kaise pad lete h... mjhse to ek book bhi nhi padi jati... kitni boring hoti h...

Jwalu smiled and shook her head.

Rishi - tm has kyu rhi ho... sahi to bola maine

Jwalu - books boring nhi hoti rishi... tm padte boring tareeke se ho... pta h ye books bhi baatein karti h

Rishi put a book near his ears.

Rishi - mjhe kuch sunai nhi de rha h...

Jwala - ( taking book from his hand) ye book... hmmm (she kept it near her ear and acted as if listening something) ye kh rhi h ki mere sath chalo pichle waqt m ur dekho kitna khubsoorat tha sab... seekho meri galti se taki tmhara future achha ho jae...

Rishi looked at her in amazement as she handed over him the book. She got busy in the work and rishi realised that jwala was indeed a different person. He was about to say something when jwala stopped him.

Jwala - ab thanks bolne ki jarurat nhi h... mjhe ye kaam pasand h

Rishi smiled and turned to pick something.

Rishi - jwalu ye tmhare lie...

Jwalu exclaimed in joy seeing it.

Jwalu - thank u rishi... tmhe kaise pta mjhe ye chahie thi... pta h mai kab se dhund rhi thi...

Rishi - ek baar puch leti to pehle hi mil jati na... I know u love reading Shakespeare... ye hi ek book h jo mai dil se padta hu... warna to...

Jwalu and rishi laughed and realised they indeed have become good friends.

Scene - 4

Kirti's office

Rashi - see... sir maine bola tha na aapko that girl is of no work... abhi tk complete nhi kia... itni careless ladki h...

Boss - ms rashi there is still time...

Kirti came back with her designs and handed it over to them. Boss was looking at her designs intently while rashi was looking a bit shocked. Kirti couldn't control herself.

Kirti - how is it sir?

Boss - it's really very good ms kirti... n u r before ur time limit... still 5 minutes left...

Kirti - thank u sir...

Rashi still looked at her annoyed as they proceed for the meeting and kirti came back.

One of her colleagues- kya baat h kirti... u r really talented yaar... kitna achha design tha...

Everyone praised her and finally kirti thought she did something worth.

Scene - 5

Lakshya academy

Nisha was early today and trying to shoot her target. She can't aim her target, finally she left it.

Viraj - kya hua nisha aaj aapka dil nhi lg rha h practice m... koi baat pareshan kar rhi h to aap hmse share kar sakti h...

Nisha - vo sir... koi esi baat nhi h...

Viraj - hme kabir ki job k baare m sab pta h nisha

Nisha - ( looked at him first shocked and then with guilt) sorry

Viraj - aap dno ko kya lagta h ki aap hmse sab kuch chhupa lenge ur hme pta bhi nhi chalega...

Nisha couldn't say anything and just kept standing staring at the ground like a child.

Viraj - now look up nisha... hm aapko punish nhi karenge... but hmne ye expect nhi kia tha atleast aapse to bilkul nhi nisha... ab btaye aap itni pareshan kyu h

Nisha - kabir... viraj sir... vo ye baat bhool hi nhi paa rha h... itna udaas rehta h... ur mai kitni bhi koshish kar lu... kuch thik nhi kar paa rhi hu...

Viraj - nisha... u only can do something about it... think of something... hmne bhi kal kabir se baat ki thi... par vo kuch jyada hi soch rhe h is baare m...

Nisha - man to karta h use yha se door le jau... taaki uska thoda dhyaan hate is baat se...

Viraj - not a bad idea nisha...

Nisha looked at him confusingly while viraj smiled.

Scene - 6

Market Place

Kabir - ( monologue ) kha h yaar tu nisha... kitta wait karwaegi

Nisha came and hugged him tightly. He was surprised but hugged her back.

Kabir - ( still in same position) kya baat h wifey asj apne hubby p bhot pyaar as rha h

Nisha - aaj ka kya matlab h... mai to apne hubby se hmesha se itna hi pyaar karti hu... balki isse bhi jyada...

Kabir - achha... kitna jyada...

Nisha - apni jaan se jyada...

She tight her hold on him.

Kabir - nisha... ye to bta yha kyu bulaya h tne mjhe...

Nisha - mjhe ghumne jana h...

Kabir - ghumne kha..

Nisha - gola khane...

Kabir smiled at her innocence. Nisha and kabir ate gola, chat and had some cute moments but still sadness evident on his face.

Nisha - kabir yaad h... us din hm lgo ne kitna enjoy kia tha...

Kabir smiled.

Nisha - kabir kuch mangu to dega...

Kabir - kabhi mna kia h nisha...

Nisha - mera kabir lauta dega tu... vo us din wala kabir... jo mjhe hmesha irritate karta rehta tha... mjhe hasata tha... waapas dega mjhe mera kabir.

Kabir smiled and hugged her tightly.

Kabir - ha nisha... (chocked on his emotions)

Nisha too reciprocated and he placed a soft kiss on her hair.

Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

NAUC TSC Episode 350

-By Niya

Lakshaya Academy

Scene 1

Nisha was practicing when she saw Viraj coming on the ground ,she excused herself and went behind Viraj she called him making him stop ...

Nisha : Sir , Kya aap mujhe bas do minute de sakte hai ? Aapse baat karni hai

Viraj : Ofcourse Nisha.. kahiye kya kehna hai aapko..

Nisha : Sir kal jab hum baat kar rahe the apne kaha ki "not a bad idea" but sir idea kya tha yeh toh mujhe samajh hi nahi aaya ..

Viraj laughed and Nisha made a cute frowning face..after a few minutes Viraj stopped laughing and said ..

Viraj : Nisha aapne aaj sabit kar diya ki aap Chote ki patni hai

Nisha : Matlab ?

Viraj : Matlab yeh ki aapne khud hi hume idea diya aur khud hi nahi samajh pai ?

Nisha : Sir aap kya bolna chahte hai saaf saaf kahiye na.. kab se soch rahi hun samajh hi nahi aaya...

Viraj : Ek second

He took out some pamphlets from the pocket of his coat and handed them to Nisha.. Nisha looked at them with a confused expression ..

Viraj : Aapne kaha tha na ki aap Kabir ko inn sab se door le jana chahti hai ? Toh yeh lijiye yeh kuch pamphlets hai koi achi si jagah select kar lijiye aur le jiye unhe inn sab se door..

Nisha looked at him with surprise ...

Nisha : Sir aap toh sach main great ho... Thank you so much sir...

Viraj : Nisha aap hume kyun thanks keh rahi hai idea toh aap hi ka tha , humne bas aapki thodi si help ki hai .. hum apne Bhai ko aise nahi dekh sakte hai.. Jab se Kabir se mile hai unhe sirf muskurate hue hi dekha hai iss tarah unhe chup nahi dekha jata humse...

Nisha could see how much Viraj loved Kabir...

Nisha : Aap chinta mat kariye Sir hume apna pagal Kabir jaldi wapas mil jayega... usse zyada der tak normal raha nahi jata , dekhna uska mood jaldi theek ho jayega...

Nisha said trying to make him smile but Viraj's reply made her blush

Viraj : Bilkul abh jab aap dono akele trip pe ja rahe hai toh unka mood toh theek ho hi jayega na...

Nisha couldn't believe that Viraj was teasing her without saying a word she blushed and left from there making him laugh ...

The entire scene was witnessed by the two other shooters and Amit from the other end of the ground they couldn't listen to Nisha and Viraj's talks but their expressions were clear that they were having some personal talk..

1^st shooter : Lagta hai Madam ne phir apni purani harkatien shuru kar di ...

2^nd shooter : Matlab ?

1^st shooter : Tujhe nahi pata.. Nisha ne Viraj sir ko phasene ki koshish ki thi kafi mahino pehle

2^nd shooter : Really ? Viraj sir ke maan main bhi iss ke liye feelings thi na shayaad ? No wonder sir isse itne zyada ache se treat karte hai...

1^st shooter : shh..vo wapas aa rahi hai baad main baat karte hai iss bare main...

Amit was listening to them very carefully.. He wanted to know everything about this now...

Nisha came and kept those pamphlets in her bag and continued practicing...

Film studio

Scene 2

Sukku was feeling really bad after that day's events but he took a deep breath and went inside.. as soon as he went inside his phone beeped , It was a message from Alisha

"Toh Mr. Future Superstar kaisi chal rahi hai aapki shooting ? ;) "

He didn't know why but there was a silly smile on his face and this happened whenever he got a text from Alisha or a call from her

"Theek hi chal rahi hai , aap bataiye ki aapki choreography kaisi chal rahi hai ? :P "

He went inside the make up room and the make up man started doing his makeup his phone beeped again...

"Bohut boring.. I miss everyone yaar... :'( "

He smiled at her cuteness and replied absent-mindedly

"I miss you too... :( "

The make up man continued his work and Sukku tried practicing his dialogues when his phone beeped again...

"Huh ?"

Sukku got confused reading her reply but when he read his the last message he sent he understood her reaction..

"I mean we all miss you too.. Anyways got to go have to give a shot "

He sighed and practiced his scene.. he was waiting for his shot when his phone vibrated

"All the best .. I know tum best shot doge ;)"

Sukku who was so nervous about his shot till now was completely confident about it after reading her message and he indeed gave his best shot till now ...

He smiled widely while everyone congratulated him and Ajay gave him angry stares but he ignored them and went to the room and mentally thanked Alisha for making him feel confident about himself once again

GangwalHouse

Scene 3

Dolly was sitting in her savouring her butterscotch ice-cream and watching a Comedy movie when Saurav came inside .. he smiled looking at her and went and sat next to her on the bed

Saurav : Toh kya chal raha hai ?

He asked casually

Dolly : Dikh nahi raha TV chal raha hai

Sauvav : Vo toh dikh raha hai but main is ski baat kar raha hun...

He snatched the ice-cream box from her hand and Dolly started cribbing

Dolly : Saurav ice-cream wapas kar

Saurav : Arey Dolly tu alreay adha box khatam kar chuki hai aur khayegi toh bimar pad jayegi

He tried reasoning it and saving himself from her anger but it was of no use

Dolly : Dekh Saurav yeh adhi ice-cream baby ke hisse ki thi abh mujhe mere hisse ki ice-cream khane de

Saurav : Arey kitna khayegi no more ice-cream fruits kha healthy hai, vo ice-cream healthy nahi hai

Dolly : Ice-cream tasty hai aur fruits tasty nahi hote

Saurav : Kisne kaha ?

Dolly : Maine kaha .. abh de mujhe ice-cream wapas

Saurav : Ek second rukh

He went to the kitchen and after a few minutes came out with a bowl which had some evenly cut fruits and whipped cream on it , he knew that Dolly would love it , he went and fed her some fruits and he was right Dolly loved it..

Dolly : Yeh kitna yummy hai...

Saurav : Dekha maine kaha tha na fruits tasty hote hai

Dolly : Haan chal abh mujh yeh khatam karne de

She snatched the bowl from his hand and starting enjoying the fruits

Saurav : Tu bilkul bacchi hai..

Dolly : Haan haan theek hai .. abh don't disturbs me

She kept enjoying her fruits and the movie while Saurav kept admiring her

Viraj's house

Scene 4

Viraj was sitting in his study when Vasundara came inside and called him

Vasundara : Viraj , Beta aap free hai ?

Viraj : Haan Maa.. kahiye kya baat hai ?

Vasundara : Viraj hume Kabir ki chinta ho rahi hai

Viraj understood that his mother is also worried about Kabir's behaviour and it didn't surprise him because she is his mother and a mother knows when her child is happy and when is trying to act happy

Viraj : Maa aapko kis baat ki chinta hai ?

Vasundara : Viraj kal jab Kabir yahan aaya tha bohut alag lag raha tha .. ekdum shaant aur usske chere pe ek ajeeb si udaasi thi

Viraj : Maa , aap yahan aaiye

He caught her hand and made her sit on the chair and he knelt infront of her he replied holding her hand

Viraj : Kal hume bhi laga ki Kabir kuch chipa raha hai issliye humne unse baat bhi ki par chinta ki koi baat nahi hai vo bas aapne kaam ko leke thoda stressed hai aur kuch nahi

Vasundara : Par Viraj ..

Vasundara was not satisfied with his answer her heart was saying that something is wrong

Viraj : Maa, aapko humpe bharosa hai na ?

Vasundara nodded her head positively

Viraj : Toh bas, Humari baat pe yakeen kijiye , Kabir ko sirf apne kaam ka stress hai aur kuch nahi, aur agar koi aisi baat hui jise unhe pareshaani hai toh hum hai unke saath, apne bhai ko koi takleef nahi hone denge ..

Vasundara smiled and placed her hand free hand on his head and blessed him

Vasundara : Hum jante hai aapke hote hue Kabir ko koi pareshaani nahi hogi .. chaliye abh hum chalte hai , Kabir ki fikar ho rahi thi toh socha ki aapse baat kar le abh hume koi chinta nahi hai

Saying so she kissed his forehead and got up to go as soon as she started walking Viraj got lost in his thoughts , Vasundara turned and called him brining him out of his trance

Viraj : Ji Maa...

Vasundara : Raat bohut ho chuki hai aap bhi jake so jaiye

Viraj : Ji hum bas ja hi rahe the

Vasundara : Good Night beta

Viraj : Good night Maa

When Vasndara left Viraj sat on his chair and closed his eyes he felt guilty for hiding the truth from her

Viraj's monologue : Hume maaf kar dijiye Maa , humne aapse jhut kaha , par humne Kabir se promise kiya hai ki hum yeh kisi se nahi kahenge jab tak vo khud sab ko yeh bata na de , aur shayaad tab tak Nisha unhe sambhaalengi aur unhe jaldi ek nai aur behtaar job bhi mil jaiyegi ...

He switched off the lights of the study and went to his room hoping that what he thought would actually become true very soon

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#105

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

NAUC - TSC

EPI - 351

Written by

Nimi...

scene 1
At Gangwal House

Dadaji and moren were sitting in courtyard having der morning tea...

Dadaji- viren wo saxena ji ke order ka kya hua...

Viren- Bauji order to pura ho gya h aaj sham ko uski delivery bhi ho jayegi...

Dadaji - hmm thk h aur wo gehno ki nyi design ka kya hua...

mohan- bauji jaise hi design finalize hoti h hum aapko btate h

viren- bauji kal jaipur patrika me istehaar dene ka aakhri din h dede kya???

bauji- viren lagta h tumari yaadshaat kamzor ho gyi h...vimla ko kaho ki tumhe dawaai k sath sath badaam ka sharbat bhi de...

mohan laughs while viren frowned

dadaji- bhul gye kya kaha tha kabir ne

n den viren remembers ki kabir ne kaha tha ki...jaipur patrika har koi nhi padta...par rikshe...me har koi baithta h...

viren(smilingly)- ji bauji...kal hi mai gangwal jwellers ke posters jaipur k sare riksho k picche lagwa deta hu

dadaji noded...

scene 2

kirti's office

After making dat design...kirti's confidence boosted up n today she entered in office wid full confidence...

as soon as she entered inside...one of her colleague said...
richa- hiee kirti...congo yr... i heard dat yr design was superb...

kirti- thanx richa...

richa- yr kirti tumne to aate hi chouka maar dia... n rashi mam ko kitni badi problem se bacha lia wrna boss to unki band bja dete...

coincidently rashi was passing frm der n she heard der conversation...she became verry annoyed ...n before kirti could speak further she said...

rashi- ms chirpi aaj sirf baat hi krna h ya kaam bhi karna h...

kirti immediately goes towards rashi n said...
kirti- yes mam...

rashi(angrily)-go get me coffee n make it fast...kyuki tumari tarah mere paas time nhi h waste krne ko...

kirti went frm der to bring coffee...

kirti(monologue)- samajhti kya h ye apne aap ko ek to maine ise problem se bachaya aur mujhe thanks kehne ki jagah mujhi pe gussa ho ri..h..man to kr ra ki ye hot coffee uske face pe fek du...den she calm herself n said control kirti control bhul gyi sukku ne kya kaha tha just ignore her n concentrate on yr career...

kirti- may i come in
rashi - come in
kirti- mam aapki coffee...
rashi(angrily)- table pe rakh do...n listen u miss chirpi...dont ever think ki tumne ek design bna lia to tum mujhe nicha dikha dogi intern ho intern ki tarah rho

kirti- excuse me mam...maine as a intern hi apna work kia h aur rhi baat nicha dikhane ki to m not at all interested in dis type of cheap activities...n she left frm der...
rashi(angrily)- kuch jyada hi fadfada ri h ye chidiya lagta h iske par kaatne padenge...

scene 3

At Lakshya Academy

viraj was sitting in his cabin n net surfing to find any clue of kaira in fb n other social websites...he tried his best but he failed to get it...
Being disappointed he took his diary n started writing...

kaira aap kaha h apka phone bhi nhi lag ra...humne aapko dhundne ki har mumkin koshish ki h...par pta nhi kyu hum aap tak pahuch hi nhi paa rhe...plz kaira ek baar humse contact kriye...hume aapki bahut zarurat h ...pta nhi kyu par indino hume aapki bhut yaad aa rhi h...plz laut aaiye kaira

scene 4

Lakshya Academy

Amit while walking in corridor
amit(monologue)- ye viraj sir aur mrs. nisha ka kya chakkar h aur wo dono shooters kya keh rhe the kuch to gadbad h...
n he goes to viraj cabin to discuss about something related to training...
In viraj's cabin
amit- may i come in sir
viraj - aaiye mr. amit
hum abhi aap hi ko bulwane wale the
amit- sir kuch important kaam tha??
viraj- ha mr. amit humne kuch nye guns n bullets mangwaye h training k liye...aap use ek baar check kr lijiye n use corridor k last wale room me shift kra dijiye...
amit- ok sir n he left to do his work of shifting...
while shifting an employe said to amit
employe- sir ye kuch purani CD's h iska kya krna h...
amit- ye to bhut purani lag ri h aur iski condition bhi kuch thk nhi lag ri ek kaam kro inhe dustbin me fek do...

jab wo employe un sari CD's ko fekne le jata h to un CD k box me se ek chip gir jati h...

amit while checking guns...uski nazar us chip pe padti h...

amit- ye kya h???...after a pause...kahin isme kuch important documents to nhi...check kr leta hu...
n wo chip ko apne laptop se connect kr k open krta h...

wo chip...koi aur chip nhi balki nisha n viraj k press conference wali chip rehti h...

amit wo puri press conference(PC) dekh leta h...

After seeing PC

amit(monologue)- oh to ye h mrs. nisha kabir kumar ki asliyat...

Edited by mansi_as18 - 9 years ago

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mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

NAUC - TSC

EPISODE - 352

WRITTEN BY -MANSI

Scene - 1

Kn house

Nisha was flipping the pamphlets given by viraj.

Nisha - kuch samaj nhi aa rha yaar... kha le jau tjhe kabira... koi esi jagah jo tjhe pasand ho yaar...

She kept thinking and flipping them. Suddenly she saw a place and squealed.

Nisha - he bhagwan... how can I forget... manali... he wanted to go manali only...

She then remembered the day and his found smile. Her eyes got filled with tears.

Nisha - kabir I promise mai teri whi wali smile waapas lake rahungi...

Kabir who just entered.

Kabir - kya waapas lake rhegi nisha... kuch kho gya kya...

Nisha immediately hide the pamphlet and turned to him.

Nisha - kuch bhot important kho gya h kabir...

Kabir - kya ho gya nisha... bol na... mai help karu...

Nisha - ( smiled at her husband's innocence) teri help k bina vo cheez milegi bhi nhi...

She just went and hugged him tightly nuzzling in his chest. He didn't understand anything but just kept her in his embrace. After all she is the only one giving him solace in tough times.

Scene - 2

Studio

Sukku was trying to remember his lines which was getting difficult for him as every now and then some or the other people were disturbing him with lame excuses.

Finally the shot time came and sukku has to deliver his dialogues. But as he didn't remembered them he fumbled.

Director - cut... what is this suketu can't you remember these simple dialogues... do u know u r wasting my time and producers money... it's the 5th shot god damn it... just go and learn them by heart.

Sukku felt humiliated as all were eyeing him while ajay was smirking and saying something bad about him.

Sukku nodded and left to rehearse and control his emotions.

Scene - 3

Gh house

Ramesh - laxmi... kha ho yaar...

Laxmi - kya hua ramesh tm ese kyu chilla rhe ho... kuch hua kya... sab thik h na... nishu... thik h... bunty... sukku... bolo na ramesh.

Ramesh - laxmi relax me yaar... tum itna ghabrati kyu ho... mai to bus ese hi baat karne k lie tmhe bula rha tha... ur tmne to poori ramayan suna di...

Laxmi - tum paagal ho kya ramesh... koi ese chillata h kya... pta h kitta darr gyi thi mai...

Ramesh - ( made her sit ) laxmi... kabhi jra apni chinta chhod kar apne is maasum se pati par bhi dhyaan d lia karo...

Laxmi - ramesh... tmhe har waqt mazak hi sujhta rehta h na...

Ramesh - ise mazak nhi romance kehte mrs laxmi ramesh gangwal

He held her hand lovingly while she blushed.

Laxmi - mjhe bhot kaam h ramesh... tm yha baitho mai jaa rhi hu...

She said and turned to left when ramesh held her hand again.

Ramesh - abhi naa jao chhod kar ki dil abhi bhara nhi...

Dolly who have just returned from office entered.

Dolly - chachu how romantics... ha

Laxmi eyed ramesh while blished too.

Laxmi - kuch chahie kya dolly beta...

Dolly - nhi nui chachi... mai to ese hi aa gyi.. you two continues...

She left laughing.

Scene - 4

Viraj's house

Viraj was in his study when his phone rang.

Viraj - hello nisha... is everything ok...

Nisha - aap ese kyu puch rhe h... mai bina musibat k bhi phone kar sakti hu

Viraj - ha hme pta h... fir bhi... achha btaeye... kabir se baat ki?

Nisha - kha sir... abhi to jagah hi decide ki h...

Viraj - aap kitni slow hai nisha...

Nisha - aapko kya lagta h sir aapka chhota bhai koi seedha sadha sa bachha h jo mai use khi bhi le jaunyti ur vo chala jaega...

Viraj - offo nisha... achha ye btao ki kha jana h hm ticket karwa dete h aapki ur chhote ki...

Nisha - uski koi jarurat nhi h... hm manali jaenge...

Viraj - matlab... kaise jaenge...

Nisha - vo mai aapko baad m btaungi... lagta h kabir aa gya...

She hurriedly cut the call leaving viraj confused.

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

NAUC TSC EPISODE 353

-By Niya

KNH

Scene1

Kabir was sitting in the living room wondering about what to do , he was getting bored alone at home and had nothing to do.. he went to the kitchen and had some water...

He came and sat on the sofa with his phone in his hand , he started seeing the pictures in his phone gallery , he came across a picture of his and Nisha that was clicked on his birthday by the cousins , both their faces were covered with cake , he giggled and swiped the next picture , It was a picture of Nisha that he had secretly taken a few days ago when she was savouring her delicious coffee with him on the terrace , He smiled widely and cherished the picture , the next picture he swiped was a picture of Suketu and Alisha with him that they clicked on the competition day.. his smile vanished somewhere and was replaced by a pain ..

"Kash meri kismat achi hoti.. sab kuch hassil karke bhi kuch nahi hai aj mere pass.. meri kamiyaabi ka credit kisi aur ne le liya .. jo main deserve karta tha vo kisi aur ko mil gaya.. "

He said and threw his phone in a corner of the sofa and laid on sofa putting his weight on the left side of his body , he rested his head on his left hand and saw a picture of Nisha on the opposite wall ...

"Nisha yaar.. aaj ke din tu chutti nahi le sakti thi kya.. hum pura din saath main spend karte... akele kitna bore ho raha hun "

He said looking at her picture.. "Chal chod main jake thoda so leta hun ..."

As soon as he was about to go he kicked the coffee table making some papers fall from the table , he started picking them up and that's when he came across some pamphlets ...

"Yeh kya hai ?"

He picked the pamphlets in his hand and started flipping them...

" Kisi jagah ke pamphlets hai shayaad ... "

He found one pamphlet that had a circle mark on it he saw it carefully it was a pamphlet of Manali and various places to visit there ..He then remembered that Nisha was flipping something when he came yesterday and hid it as soon as he came ...

"Oh.. toh yeh chupa rahi thi mujh se "

He shook his head and kept the pamphlets in the place and went inside the room

Lakshaya Academy

Scene 2

Nisha was busy practicing and she missed her shot.. Amit came to her and started yelling at her ...

Amit : Dhyaan kahan hai tumhara ? Shot kaise miss kar diya tumne ?

Nisha was surprised at his behaviour she tried defending herself

Nisha : Sir , maine jaan bhuj ke nahi kiya hai... I am sorry

Amit : Sorry my foot ... I don't want to hear a word from you .. practice pe dhyaan do...

Nisha had tears in her eyes while the other shooters smirked ... Viraj who was passing by heard Amit yell and came to see what the matter was ..he saw that Nisha was having tears in her eyes and Amit kept yelling at her ...

Amit : Jab practice pe dhyaan hi nahi dena toh practice karne aati hi kyun ho.. ?

Viraj : Ek minute .. Amit kya hua ? Aap iss tarah inpe chila kyun rahe hai ?

Seeing Viraj that Amit's anger started raising but he tried to keep calm...

Amit : Shot miss kar diya inhone apna...

Viraj : Itni si baat ke liye aap inpe itna chila rahe hai ki inki aankhon main aansu tak aa gaye ?! Nisha , humare cabin main jaiye , hum wahan aake aap se baat karenge

Nisha nodded her head and did as he told , once Nisha left Viraj turned to Amit

Viraj : aur Amit , hum iss tarah ka bartav yahan accept nahi karenge .. please dhyaan rakhiyega aage se ...

Saying so he left and even Amit left in anger

Kirti's office

Scene3

Kirti was busy in some work that Rashi had given her when the boss came there and Kirti immediately got up and wished him

Boss : Ms. Gangwal , Uss din aapne jo kaam kiya usse main kafi impressed hun...

Kirti : Thank you sir

Boss : Don't thank me , you deserve this appreciation but remember yahan tumhare liye bohut sare competitors hai and I know that you have the calibre to beat them all

Saying so he left and Kirti smiled thinking that her boss had noticed her hard work and had some trust in her , she clapped her hands in happiness and sat to finish her work ...

Rashi who had noticed the scene from far was burning in anger and jealously

Rashi's monologue : Ms . Chirpy bohut khush ho na boss se taree sun ke .. jitna khush hona hai ho lo , iss khushi ko jaldi gaam main badal dungi ...

She smirked and went to her cabin sipping her coffee

Viraj's cabin

Scene 4

Nisha was waiting in the cabin for Viraj , her tears weren't ready to stop flowing from her eyes ... she heard the door knob twist and she wiped them immediately

Viraj came and sat on his chair , he offered Nisha some water and tissues to wipe her face

Viraj : Aap kyun Amit ki baton pe dil pe laga rahi hai Nisha ?

Nisha : But sir , unhone kuch galat bhi toh nahi kaha na .. meri hi galti thi ki maine shot miss kar diya ...

Nisha looked down feeling guilty

Viraj : Nisha galti aap ki nahi thi , hum jante hai ki aap thodi disturbed hai Chote ke baare main soch ke aur agar aapne aaj ek shot miss kar diya toh bhi koi badi baat nahi hai, yeh koi competition thodi hai aur agar aap galtiyaan nahi karengi toh seekhengi kaise ?

Viraj said trying to reduce her guilt a little but it didn't seem to work so he thought of diverting her mind

Viraj : Waise aapne kya socha , kahan leke jayenge aap Chote ko ?

He asked and Nisha's expression's immediately changed to excited one and he felt happy that his plan actually worked

Nisha : Sir , hum Manali jayenge.. humne kuch mahino pehle socha tha ki hum family trip pe jayenge but phir itna sab kuch hogaya aur humare mind se hi slip ho gaya ...

She said and made a sad yet cute face

Viraj : Theek hai .. toh hum Manali main sare arrangements kar denge

Nisha : Nahi sir , aap kyun ..main ...

Viraj stopped her in between

Viraj : Nisha please hume yeh karne dijiye, humne jo bhi kiya aapke aur Chote ke saath iss trip ke zariye hum apne guilt ko kaam karna chahte hai, ek chota sa gift samajhiye isse humari tarah se ...

Nisha tried arguing but Viraj some how convienced her

Viraj : Toh kab nikal rahe hai aap log ?

Nisha : Pata nahi sir, abhi tak toh maine Kabir ko iss bare main kuch bataya bhi nahi hai ...

Nisha said and scratched the back of her neck making Viraj facepalm

Viraj : Nisha sab se pehle jake Chote ko maniye and hume call karke batana ki aap log kab nikal rahe hai .. hum baki ke arrangements kar lete hai tab tak ...

Nisha nodded and left to her house hoping that she would convenience Kabir and this trip will help Kabir to forget his pain

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