Nibir SS-when truth came in open pt23 updated on pg86(20/12) - Page 25

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

I luv the sequence. ... so dreamy... m in nibirland...

awwwiieee... nibirland 😳
take me along with u plzzz 😉

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

He took her left hand on his left shoulder and put his right hand her waist , Nisha hold his left hand with her other hand...
(complicated na?read again...😆)

Of course it was complicated - I read thrice and imagined😆

I really love this story. Thanks dear.

lol 😆
I sooo knew it!!! 🤣 🤣
mereko v khud ni samjha me kya likhi!!! 🤣
meri English & describing scene bahut kharab hai!! 🤣
so bear it!!! 🤣

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

nice update

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Lovely!!

Originally posted by: Adeenafari

Awesome fabulous update

Continue soon

thankyou all 😳

Originally posted by: zaara610

Loved kabiraa's daydreaming..

Waiting for next update

please continue soon

awww thanx dear... 😳

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Finally I m here😉 Saru Commenting🤪🤣
Superb update 👏👏👏
Neha I must tell u Tum na bahut badi Dance Master ho 😆
Kitna Kitna Nachwathi ho yaar NiBir ko 😲🤣 Bechare Naach naach ke ab toh unko pathahi nahi hai ki seedhe seedhe kaise chalthe hai ek doosare ka sahara chahiye chlne mein...😲🤣

Bechari Nishu ki toh halath hi nahi hai chalne ki😆🤣 aur chalne ki koshish bhi kitne confusing hai😕 I literally read the follo lines 5 times n did it with my bed too tab jaake samaj mein aaya😆 hw was the scene 🤣🤣🤣

He took her left hand on his left shoulder and put his right hand her waist , Nisha hold his left hand with her other hand...

Song selection excellent...👏
Kya timing se Phone se headphone nikala apne aap😲😆 really??😉 ya NiBir ki hotness ki wajah se yu hi nikal aaya??? 🤣🤣🤣 n perfect lines bhi that Along with NiBir we r also smiling n Blushing ☺️😆

Waise ek baath bata Neha Tu bhi Kya Cv ban rahi hai..😲
Jab Bhi Kabir Propose karne lagtha hai Bell zaroor bajtha hai..😕
Aree Seedhe Seedhe CONFESSION karwa do nahh...

Do write more...🤗 q ki DMM ☺️😆🤣

saru ke bade bade comments

I love reading

nibir ko dance karwana Mara jamn sidh adhikar se chori... yhare ko koi aapatti se?? 🤣

jaa Jake chi patti kha le... 🤣

and that bahahon dale bahen scene complicated?? ikr 🤣
but the best tho 😳 my personal fav ❤️
meine tph boli is se pehle wale post me k mein toh CV bante jaa rahi hu 😆 😆 par koi ni mana... oye tune nahi padhi shayad?? 😲 go n just check page 37 😉 usper tera review padhne me bahut maza ayega!!! 🤣 plzz do check...

Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Awesome update ... 👏 👏 👏
Another song... 😆 😆 😆 ...but loved it ... it was brilliant that kabir realised his love , hope he tell nisha about it soon ...
You have the written the update very beautifully ... 😊
Overall , loved the update ... 😳

hihi I told u.. one more song in part 16 😉

and thankyou so much for appreciating... 😳

This what ur ss awesome writing girl really love it simply awesome writing skills u hv mashaa Allah. Best one

sorry 4 the late comment neha😛

Hey ya all...
Wats up??
I know u guys might b waiting for update but...
Soo sorry...
I m discontinuing the story ...
I know now all will be like "No.. Plzzz don't..."
But honestly speaking i m not in mood to write it anymore !!
Actually na mujhe sabse zyada .. Sabseee zyaadaaa... 2 things achchi lagti hain nibir Ki!!.
1)nibir nokjhok & fights
2) nibir dance...
And mujhe likhna b yahi ata h!! But now this story is going towards end so...
Here will b some emotional & romantic scenes...
Which i m trying hard to write..
But dimag ka dahi ho raha hai yar... Kuch v likhti Hu, then on second thought, mujhe Wo cheez bakwas lagti hai then I delete it!!! Toh...
Now I decided to JUST LET IT BE...
By d way...
YE DISCONTINUATION PERMANENT NAHI HAI...
agar kuch likh payi to pakka promise i'll continue...
Till then...
Goodbye... Syonara...
Keep calm & Love Nibir ❤️

please yaar dont discontinue it and complete it