|Forever| A NiBir Two-Shot! Part 2 Update - Pg.3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Amigoes🤗

Vibhuti here!

This is my first attemp to write on NiBir ! I only wrote once on KriYansh, though I din't like it!😆

This was a planned OS but Ummm I got carried away and made it a two shot.

Hope you like it ! I will upade the final part according to the response. within a week mostly!

Don't Forget to like and comment! :) 😳

Suggestions are welcome 😊


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It has been two Months since he had last seen her, two months since that holi day when he confessed his feelings for her, two months since she had broken his heart. Full two months. Kabir was sitting in the balcony of his new flat. The sun was soaring high and he was as usual lost in his thoughts. "Just go" was the last two words that she had said to him.

He had told her after the day of holi how much he loved her, but he only ended up losing a friend. Nisha as she correctly mentioned "I only love Viraj" only loved him! And ya he had to leave her. She wanted him to and he willingly complied. Since then Kabir had not only managed himself a decent job but also a place to live. But god he missed her soo much even today. And now he was to see her again , all over again. He had received a message from Dadaji to attend Kirti's engagement on the upcoming Sunday. He said No but dadaji won't listen. He finally moved out of the couch he was sitting on and went out to take some decent cloths to attend the wedding.

"He is coming Nishu, Dadaji called him" Kirti said as she dressed for her engagement."So what?" Nisha said putting on her pair of earrings. "Don't fool us Nishu, we know how you have been since he left "Said Dolly di coming from behind.

"Please!" and there was a big thud of door.

He was here. She could feel him. Tears formed in her dark brown eyes as she turned to look into his deep black ones. There he was as tall as ever. As handsome as ever, he was just the same except that his smile that could mesmerise her in a second was missing. He was sad. His eyes clearly showed them.

"Hi Nisha'' he said managing a smile.

"Kabir where have you been" She was far too spontaneous to ask.

"Umm... here only in Mumbai"

Beautiful. She looked stunning.

"soo umm You and Viraj, you guys are back together?"He asked trying not to show his disappointment

"We...I.."

"Hie Handsome" a girl came from behind and eloped Kabir in a hug. "My friend Soa" Kabir said to Nisha.

"Hie" Soha said.

"You don't need to tell me who or whatever she is!" "I don't care mister" Nisha exclaimed and walked out.

"I can never understand her" Kabir whispered to himself.

Nisha walked to the garden. Tears glinting her eyes as she saw Kabir and Soha standing inside holding hands.

No I can't be jealous. She tried to explain herself. I sent him off. I did. He deserves all the happiness he does!

Her heart broke at the taught of seeing him with someone else. She was in love with him how much ever she denied. She loved him ever since they met. He made her laugh, smile. He made her Nisha. The Nisha she always was. But when he had proposed to her she was too stupid to have realised it. She was not sure if she was the right person for him. She always ended him up in some trouble. So she needed a reason. Viraj was the best reason she had and the most convincing one indeed. She need to get away from him, she could not bear to near him. So she asked him to "Just go'' and when he did she cried. She cried the whole night. It broke her. She needed him. She needed Kabir.

Nisha was crying thinking of the pass events, she fell down to her knees near the pool at the part hall moon shining on her. She could not be strong anymore, not after seeing him again.

"Nish...Nishaa" Kabir called her as he saw her crying.

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zainabawoon thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vibhuti this was just so so beautiful yaar! 👍🏼 the angst and the pain from both sides 😭 the thought of kabir having lost his smile 💔 its Awesome pls pls continue and update jaldi se, cant wait to know what happens next 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written dear.. how I wish for a sequence like this in the epi... I absolutely adored it though can't wait for you to update..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice, dear 👍🏼 It's well written - you caught Nisha especially well! Denying that she feels something for Kabir yet, feeling (somewhat) jealous of his friend, though too stubborn to admit it 😆 Aww, and Kabir- someone needs a hug 🤗
He probably was too fast with confessing his love and it caused Nisha to withdraw from him, it's understandable that she was too surprised by it. But not contacting Kabir for two months? Why torture both of you, Nisha? I feel sorry for both of them

Waiting for part two 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow vibhuti beautifully written yaar👏
nishu is tubelight😆so wifey is jealous😉
Good one yaar
thanks for the pm😃
and continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is just amazing, loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing i can feel the raw pain both of kabir and nisha
thank you so much 🤗

btw am niya 🤗

see you at the AT tonight 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So nice vibuthi..👍🏼👏
Eagerly waiting to know what happens next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Vibhuti, really nice start dear! 👍🏼 Continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A huge nibir fan here...Die Hard fan of Mishkat...this story is just waay too much amazing...totally in love with it...pls pm me...when you update and write more on NiBir pls

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