|Forever| A NiBir Two-Shot! Part 2 Update - Pg.3 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMGGG 👏👏 Hi :) hehehe...Vibhuti the first part is amazing!! :D the way NiBir are both hurt and cant confess due to their misunderstandings...lekin still they wish to be together! sooo cuteee! waitiing for the next part!❤️ btw i loved the way u write this part, please do continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woww it was amazing... Loved it to the core... Please update soon
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hi.. please do continue.. will be waitin for the last part.
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aww...i love the way you have expressed them
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Omg vibz this was awesome now I can't wait to read ur next part... .you have perfectly written their every emotions thanks for the PM dear
Post it soon
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Oh dude pls continue soon waiting for nibir from you...this was awesome...thanks for the pm
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this was so beautiful ❤️
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Thankyou soo much guys:D
Your wonderfull reviews gives encourages me to write:)

Sorry that I am not able to reply personally to all of you :D
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Author's note: I am satisfied with this chapter if really not happy with it.
I hope you guys like this final chapter.

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chapter 2

"Nisha?"

"Kabir not now, please Kabir just Go!" Nisha said not facing him still sitting on the ground on her knees beside the swimming pool.

'Yea of course these two words Just Go' Yea" Kabir said with evident pain in his eyes.

"You will never understand" Nisha said in a murmur. "Never"

"Never understand WHAT? f**king WHAT Nisha? " Kabir shouted not being able to hold himself anymore. He arrogantly pulled Nisha up forcefully "What?''

"Nothing leave me"

"Why are you crying NIsha? For whom tell me ! Why could I see something in your eyes for me when I saw you?" He said leaning and her Brown eyes met his magnificent black ones.

"Kabir please don't do th____"

"You asked me to go and you didn't get back with him"

"Kabir'' Nisha said weakly Turing back to him "Please.."

"I can't , I need to know please"

She looked at him with an anxious face. Her heart breaking. He was in pain, she could see that. He needed to know and she knew he will not let her go without an answer not that day , not that day no!

He has always been her friend. her companion. Someone she could rely on. She could do just anything for one smile on his face. But then did she deserve him? No! she dint. They could not be together, it would not only make him Viraj Singh Rathod's enemy but also will make him stick with someone as ugly as her.

"No. There is nothing." She said in a cold voice! "nothing"

"I will die" He said with a wisper that even she could not hear.

"what?"

"I will die if I don't tell you what you mean to me today!" Kabir said looking straight in her eyes!

"I love you Nisha, always have been always will be" He said looking at her eyes which filled with water.

"I had come to tell you that day that I loved you. But you told me to leave. You know even after all this time I love you. I have tried hard not to, But I end up loving you more. You made a Casanova guy like me a lover, a true lover. All I ever wanted is you. But then you told me to go. I thought you got back with him , you loved him! And now Kirti tells me you never got back with him!'' Kabir said with a small grin.

"Bu.. but I am nothing. I always end you up in trouble ... I am no good looking , I am not beautiful" She said with a sad smile.

" Nisha " He caressed her cheeks with his right hand " You are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. You make me complete. You have those beautiful curls that any guy can die for , you have those wide brown mesmerising eyes and those pulpy rose lips..." He said looking at her lips.

"But I know you don't love me , You don't feel for me"

Nisha was pleased and shocked all at the same time.

"cut it Kabiraa , you don't know how I feel! She said with a large smile.

Kabir looked confused.

"How?'' He asked

' I feel like this"

He gazed at him and brought her hands to carase his soft cheeks. And Her lips met his. The kiss was soft and gentle at first with the tears in their eyes. But it soon turned passionate, he brought his hands to her waist. The kiss was what they had longed for , it had passion, lust , longing , meaning and love. It was Magic. They both finally pulled up breathing hard.

He put his hand on her cheeks

"So I take that as you love me too?"

"Always."

And they huged with her head on his chest. She felt his heartbeat, it seemed forever.

"Nisha why did you let me go?"

"because I taught it was best for you, I taught you dint want someone like me and you would forget me?"

They stayed like that hugging.

"Then why Now?"

"because you just made me realise how special I am, and I could not take it anymore. The pain Kabir. The pain I had. And the pain I realised you has too"

"Oh Smartyyy" He said with a huge grin pinching her nose.

"And also because I know no one would be able to tolerate you except me " She said winking.

"Oh You bet? I can show how many I can get" he said with a curious look !

"And you then bet how I will kill you then" She said angrily and mischievously

"With your beautiful smile?"

"Ah! Cheesy bollywood line! Typical Kabir " She said laughing. They both laughed after a long time with all their heart! She was glad to see his smile back.

"You know I will love you forever" She was smiling softy.

He placed a quick peck on her cheeks.

"Forever"

Edited by -SparklingVibz- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful 👏👏👏
the wait for their union is unbearably too long

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