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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajni786

Deepu-Renu

It's a known fact'.boys are momma's prince and gals are daddy's princess. Today when Renu broke down in front of her Dad''Deepu cud not hold onto his emotions that flooded his heart n it didn't care whether he was a male (as they say'.males normally don't let their tears falls so easily) n he let those emotions take a weeping fall from his eyes. He held onto the drowning Renu who really had lost all hopes of love'laughter n joy. She was getting sucked into the darkness from where she cud see no horizons'.no sunshines neither the reflections of her own pure n pristine heart.

Deepu stood no different to any Dad in this world who loves his child to no ends and protects it from all the evil that endangers it. He comforted Renu and told her that he is right there with her'always n foreva'..that she shud fear no one nor shud she hide away from anyone for she is his fairy princess drapped in the most glowing heart n a gorgeous beauty. He assured her that like always''her daddy will set everything right for her and that hope is the most priceless gift of God whose threads begin from us and the knots are tied at his venue.

It was the most profound moment to see this father-daughter bonding as the father proclaims to his daughter: "Open Ur Eyes my child'..its still not yet over"!!😳😳

Anant-Nimisha

World's one of the most scared bond is that of a brother n sister. It's a very unique bond between a male n a female that is gifted by God. Brothers may do several wrong themselves'..including at times'fiddling around with other gals'.but when its their sister in question'.they will immediately stand in the opposite fence with their protective shields against all the appending swords towards their lovely sister. They may argue'they may fight'..but wen the reasons for the tears in their sister's eyes is someone else rather than themselves''.they'd be the first ones to wipe em off too. Sisters are no different. The love n care they have for their brothers is indecipherable. Despite growing up with the fact they are the birds of a different nest that will one day fly away to its real niche'..she maintains pieces of her feathers amongst her most loved ones so her essence can never be lost from its original nest. Today'Anant n Nimisha were these very examples of this scared n beautiful bond between a brother n sister.

As Anant approached a dejected n scorned Nimisha in the hopes to provide her comfort n caring shoulder to cry upon, he was lead into a world of bitter truth by Nimisha that awaits for him tomorrow. While versing out her suffocation in the kingdom of rules n regulations''she forced open that dormant part of Anant's eyes that prolly cud never have been activated till it was rather late. Navya means a lot to Anant n this fact is no alien for Nimisha but the kind of life that she has lived in her nest of childhood will only become a curse for Navya n in turn for her brother if does not speak today.

No'.she was not really sympathizing with Navya'..she was rather empathizing with her future that will be directly proportional to Anant.

It was a moment of enigma to witness Nimisha take Anant into the upcoming world of reality as she proclaims to her brother: "Open Ur Eyes my dear brother'the reality awaits you"!!😳😳

Rab Raakha,

Shilpa 🤗🤗

PS. On The Request of many readers, below are the links of all my previous posts for Navya


Previous Diary Entry Posts


Anant's 1st Diary Entry
AnYa Hum Tum Diary Entries
Navya's Diary Entry 2
Anant: Kaisi Majbooriyan
Navya's Entry: Emotional Zoo
AnYa Hum Tum Diaries: Kehdo Tum Ho Meri
Diary Entries: Navya, Meeta and Anant
Diary Entries: Ya Rabba
Navya Diary Entries: Tera Chehra
Anant Diary Entry: The Cruelity of Time

Other Non Diary Navya Posts


Nayi Soch...Nayi Dhadkan
Fears of Emotions
Letters Of Maple Leaves
Woh Hamesha Meri Zimedaari Rahegi
The Difference Between Reality n TV
Hum Kadam Tere Sang
Anant to Navya: I Breathe In You
The Quiet Calms Before The Next Storms
Letters of Liquid Pearls
A Smile In Distress
And The Truth Endures Yet Again
Come Let's Build Bridges
A Weapon Called Motherhood



Nice Post...👏👏
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Quite impressive way to show different type of bands which one has to face in their life...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Hi Shilpa,
I have something very different to say which no one has pointed out yet...don't know why😕...I don't even know whether this is the right place,but I am sure you won't mind😳...I noticed a very striking similarity in behavioural pattern of Nimisha and Renuka which I am sure even CV's wouldn't have noticed.."Fear of the Unknown"

Nimisha-...
I completely agree to each and every word she spoke but then I feel that a phobia has set inside her...She is ready to blow everything out of proportion...She has become a rebel...she is seeing only wrong intentions in everything...She is afraid of the suffocation,so the moment a situation is kept in front of her..she retaliates with more speed than the situation demands it.So, more than the real suffocation,it is the fear of suffocation which is making her do these things...
Navya doesn't have that phobia,ignorance is a bliss...she may handle Bajpayee's without thinking much...just the way she handled her mother...Ok,let me put it this way,even Navya was sent to kanpur without concurrence.. did she behave like Nimisha??...So Nimisha is wrong...Navya has her own strengths and she can create an opportunity out of nothing...

Renuka...
Again,I completely believe her,in fact I believe only her and not Gautam at all,but then I noticed that she has this serious inferiority complex,😭she feels that she is not capable enough to be loved by anyone...A very common trait in all the female population...a working woman feels that she is inferior to a house wife because the latter spends more time with her family,while a home maker feels that her working counter part is more capable because she is financially independent...🤔
Over all...we females are expected to be best in everything and we are never allowed to be contend with ourselves..such a big tragedy!!
I can say only one thing to Renuka...a woman is just not a wife,she is a mother,daughter,sister...everything!! So please don't form an impression about youself just because one person doesn't appreciate your presence..Your real appreciation will come from your daughter,so just be patient...u will get ur dues😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanukit007



Nice Post...👏👏
👏👏
Quite impressive way to show different type of bands which one has to face in their life...




Thank u for the kind reply 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: nishkala

Hi Shilpa,
I have something very different to say which no one has pointed out yet...don't know why😕...I don't even know whether this is the right place,but I am sure you won't mind😳...I noticed a very striking similarity in behavioural pattern of Nimisha and Renuka which I am sure even CV's wouldn't have noticed.."Fear of the Unknown"

Nimisha-...
I completely agree to each and every word she spoke but then I feel that a phobia has set inside her...She is ready to blow everything out of proportion...She has become a rebel...she is seeing only wrong intentions in everything...She is afraid of the suffocation,so the moment a situation is kept in front of her..she retaliates with more speed than the situation demands it.So, more than the real suffocation,it is the fear of suffocation which is making her do these things...
Navya doesn't have that phobia,ignorance is a bliss...she may handle Bajpayee's without thinking much...just the way she handled her mother...Ok,let me put it this way,even Navya was sent to kanpur without concurrence.. did she behave like Nimisha??...So Nimisha is wrong...Navya has her own strengths and she can create an opportunity out of nothing...

Renuka...
Again,I completely believe her,in fact I believe only her and not Gautam at all,but then I noticed that she has this serious inferiority complex,😭she feels that she is not capable enough to be loved by anyone...A very common trait in all the female population...a working woman feels that she is inferior to a house wife because the latter spends more time with her family,while a home maker feels that her working counter part is more capable because she is financially independent...🤔
Over all...we females are expected to be best in everything and we are never allowed to be contend with ourselves..such a big tragedy!!
I can say only one thing to Renuka...a woman is just not a wife,she is a mother,daughter,sister...everything!! So please don't form an impression about youself just because one person doesn't appreciate your presence..Your real appreciation will come from your daughter,so just be patient...u will get ur dues😳




Wow Nishi..(I hope u dont mind me calling u that)
I truly enjoyed reading ur take ...Very thot provoking and in a totally different light... and I must say...Ur point is quite valid indeed..👏👏👏👏👏

Nimi:
There is no doubt that she has become a rebel...and truly speaking...she cannot be blamed either...circumstances has forced upon her this rigidness that she showed today to her mom so as to protect her wee bit of freedom that she is getting thru Nikhil...U put it aptly...The fear of suffocation is inadvertently putting her in a questionable stance.
I suppose it is this fear ...this suffocation that she fears for Navya as well...Obviously she doesnt know Navya too well...but she knows her bro n the importance of Navya in his life. Wat she did today was to to make Anant conscious of something thats nowhere in his thinking zone. She only wants the best for her bro and becoz of her very limited knowledge about Navya's way of dealing life...she fears the interests of Navya which in turn will only further affect Anant...and therefore only makes broaden his awareness to the potential lifestyle he will welcome Navya into...
Great thinking here!!

Renu
I may not be able to fully concur that she is having any inferioty complex...but I can say that she certainly has been pushed into a state of decreasing self confidence. Somewhere she always yearned to live a life from her heart...where she cud like Navya do somethings from the wishes of her heart...but time n era in which she was brought up...never allowed for that n d confidence which she had in her kept taking a dip slowly down the curve. She was rather forced by the implications of the society n parental strict regulations to lead a life on contrary to her wishes. So when she gets married to this guy...she is not sure of her own self that she is even worthy of this guy coz she has not really explored her ownself per say...Gautam is totally a different story but his actions are only reiterating her own doubts about herself that she had been building in her since childhood and with now her marriage on the verge of falling apart...she has lost that final bit of confidence in her as well...She feels dejected n hope now is a something that she has not faith left in since from her very childhood ...her every hope had only been crushed to pieces n this one being the final nail in coffin...
I do whole heartedly agree to the bold underlined part tho and m sure Deepu being the father to the rescue will make her realise just that!


thank u for the lovely reply hun 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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A Glittering post, Shilpa...🤗
Renu -Papa scenes were stirring...Papa was so empathizing, and, full of solicitude...Renu, is, devastated and, is unable, to comprehend, rationally, blaming herself, for, everthing, that has gone wrong...She, seems to have, bowed down, before destiny...I can, perceive, how traumatizing, it must be...Gautam, is ,incriminating her,so ridiculous ...he was, never there, for her , when, she needed him, the most...utterly, disgraceful, demeanour..
Nimi, seems to have, mutated, completely, Agree, it can be stifling, but, will retaliating, be the key..and ,regarding Navya, she is right to say so, but, I feel, Navya, will be able, to handle things, in a better ,manner, coz, she has, more acumen, endurance, and, is ,pragmatic...And, a bro-sis bond...it is,unmitigated,...
Edited by Aanchal15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice post 👏...loved d way u depicted deepak and renu 's phase ...wow d feeling dat all fathers faces ...every dad tries his best to giv der child d best in d world ...n abt brother n sister bond ..anant and nimisha portrait it very nicely n ur words completed der scene ...

lovly post ...
keep posting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shilpa beautiful post..🤗The show stealer for me yesterday was Renu-Deepu scene..So touching, so poignant..

Renu seems to have given up, she is just a broken shell now, the vibrant, full of life Renu has been lost somewhere..As she told Navya, she wishes this was all in her head after all..But how long could she ignore what was right in front of her?? There is only so long you can stay in denial..She has accepted her fate and the very same realization has crushed her..She was feeling so low and dejected because she thought she couldn't satisfy Gautam's needs and hence he had to look elsewhere for the same.. She was putting herself down, she was blaming herself, thinking she wasn't good enough, or beautiful enough, or special enough, to hold her husband's interest..My heart went out to her today, I wanted to give her a tight hug and tell her that its not her shortcomings but her GFN hubby's shortcomings which was ruining their marriage..Her father did the needful..Deepu is a gem of a father..He gave her support and reassurance when she needed it most..It was so moving how he told her that she is beautiful, she is special, and everything will be alright..The whole scene was very emotional for me too, seeing how Deepu couldn't control his own tears seeing his daughter cry was so very touching..Daddy-Daughter bond is always extra special, no matter how old the daughter is, for the father she will always be daddy's little princess, and the overwhelming need to protect and sheild your daughter from everything thats bad never ceases..Vice versa dad is the one man who the daughter can always go for advice,support..For Deepu too, the most important thing today was to protect his baby girl, to give her a shoulder to cry on, and to assure her everything will be okay, and Renu too finally let her guard down and shared all her insecurities and troubles with the one man she trusts, and relies on, the most in the world..

Moving on to Nimmi,I actually couldn't see anything wrong with Nimmi's demands today..She did not want to go to the wedding because she had plans with her fiance- Whats so wrong in this?? Again she has full right to get to know the person she has to spend the rest of her life with..All the fault lies in the age old orthodox views of the loonie clan..It is beyond me why they think knowing your partner well before marriage is a bad thing, if anything it will only work towards strengthening your relationship really..Loonies aur unke loony khayalat..Nimmi kudos to you for asking a solid question to Anant-What will Navya feel like when she has to live in this cage, she doesn't even know what awaits her..So true really!! Nimmi keep delivering this jolts of realization to your lovely brother from time to time, he needs them desperately..

Once again, great job with the post, you are one talented writer..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aanchal15

A Glittering post, Shilpa...🤗

Renu -Papa scenes were stirring...Papa was so empathizing, and, full of solicitude...Renu, is, devastated and, is unable, to comprehend, rationally, blaming herself, for, everthing, that has gone wrong...She, seems to have, bowed down, before destiny...I can, perceive, how traumatizing, it must be...Gautam, is ,incriminating her,so ridiculous ...he was, never there, for her , when, she needed him, the most...utterly, disgraceful, demeanour..
Nimi, seems to have, mutated, completely, Agree, it can be stifling, but, will retaliating, be the key..and ,regarding Navya, she is right to say so, but, I feel, Navya, will be able, to handle things, in a better ,manner, coz, she has, more acumen, endurance, and, is ,pragmatic...And, a bro-sis bond...it is,unmitigated,...

hey aanchuuu...🤗
lovely reply as always...
Renu was totally devasted n lost all hopes n confidence in herself...she needed a dose of comfort...reassurrance ...n resurrection...and Deepu was there to provide her just that
Nimi does seem to have gained some spine in her now with the sense of Nikhil by her side...How far that will go and how much of a justice will that provide her...only time will tell...but wat she told Anant was rather very important...Anant needed to get this awakening call...Coz whether or not Navya can handle the family or not...Anant needs to do his part atleast to enable her transition into the family smooth as well...it works both ways!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: harini2010

nice post 👏...loved d way u depicted deepak and renu 's phase ...wow d feeling dat all fathers faces ...every dad tries his best to giv der child d best in d world ...n abt brother n sister bond ..anant and nimisha portrait it very nicely n ur words completed der scene ...

lovly post ...
keep posting

thank u for the lovely reply...
@ bold...so very true 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: laddoo598

Shilpa beautiful post..🤗The show stealer for me yesterday was Renu-Deepu scene..So touching, so poignant..

Renu seems to have given up, she is just a broken shell now, the vibrant, full of life Renu has been lost somewhere..As she told Navya, she wishes this was all in her head after all..But how long could she ignore what was right in front of her?? There is only so long you can stay in denial..She has accepted her fate and the very same realization has crushed her..She was feeling so low and dejected because she thought she couldn't satisfy Gautam's needs and hence he had to look elsewhere for the same.. She was putting herself down, she was blaming herself, thinking she wasn't good enough, or beautiful enough, or special enough, to hold her husband's interest..My heart went out to her today, I wanted to give her a tight hug and tell her that its not her shortcomings but her GFN hubby's shortcomings which was ruining their marriage..Her father did the needful..Deepu is a gem of a father..He gave her support and reassurance when she needed it most..It was so moving how he told her that she is beautiful, she is special, and everything will be alright..The whole scene was very emotional for me too, seeing how Deepu couldn't control his own tears seeing his daughter cry was so very touching..Daddy-Daughter bond is always extra special, no matter how old the daughter is, for the father she will always be daddy's little princess, and the overwhelming need to protect and sheild your daughter from everything thats bad never ceases..Vice versa dad is the one man who the daughter can always go for advice,support..For Deepu too, the most important thing today was to protect his baby girl, to give her a shoulder to cry on, and to assure her everything will be okay, and Renu too finally let her guard down and shared all her insecurities and troubles with the one man she trusts, and relies on, the most in the world..

Moving on to Nimmi,I actually couldn't see anything wrong with Nimmi's demands today..She did not want to go to the wedding because she had plans with her fiance- Whats so wrong in this?? Again she has full right to get to know the person she has to spend the rest of her life with..All the fault lies in the age old orthodox views of the loonie clan..It is beyond me why they think knowing your partner well before marriage is a bad thing, if anything it will only work towards strengthening your relationship really..Loonies aur unke loony khayalat..Nimmi kudos to you for asking a solid question to Anant-What will Navya feel like when she has to live in this cage, she doesn't even know what awaits her..So true really!! Nimmi keep delivering this jolts of realization to your lovely brother from time to time, he needs them desperately..

Once again, great job with the post, you are one talented writer..👏

Tanuuu🤗…..ahhh dear!!!!...Ur replies are just so subtle….so simple n to the point…

Renu-Deepu scene was truly poignant n profound….it makes u realize how we gals …no matter how old we become….we will always be daddy's little princesses…and who cared wat others think of us….for daddy's …we are the most beautiful….most special. A bond so beautiful….so caressing!!

Nimi….I agree as others have mentioned….have become rebellion to some extent….today she rebelled….but in the right context….She is on the verge on getting married to a person her family chose for her….she has every right to know wat she is getting herself into….n thus due to the constant constraints on this….she only cud bear till so long…and she finally had to break out some day….Today she did….but wat I am glad about is that she versed out her reasons for rebel in clear words for Anant n also redirected her agony …her suffocation towards his relation with Navya….so true it is?? Has Anant really thot whether Navya can handle this loony clan of his?? Whether or not Navya can …is totally another ball game….but Anant shud atleast prepare her if nothing he can do to change them….b4 he commits her to this life long relationship!!!😳

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