AvNeil SS ~ Colliding With Each Other...Again {Pt 7A} - Page 9

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

If this was the case in the show instead of obsession it would have been great . I loved it thoroughly . I never thought I will love phir bhi tumko chahungi 😆 I heard the song for the first time after reading the update . This song was more beautiful than there dar par sanam . I loved it more . Karmic connection is quite strong .

Thank-you for retaining the scene where Neil tries to cheer up Avni . it was such a beautiful scene . Great lines by the dialogue writer !

Waiting for the next update . Hey Ali's daughter is with Khanna's ?

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Thank you so much Sri for such a heartwarming reply, delighted to know you found this chapter endearing. Aww, I made you fall in love with the song, my pleasure. The male version is absolutely to die for, Arjit has a melodious voice (of course, apart from Atif). Then stumbled upon the female version, the lyrics were so touching and apt for Avni I could not resist the temptation of adding it in the chapter.

The scene where Neil tries to cheer up Avni, albeit unknowingly happens to be my favourite scene after this leap.

Talia is with Mitali, her mother. Khanna family is in Canada, mentioned in Chapter 4 too. I hope I have cleared you doubt. Writing the next chapter, I'm not sure when it will be update though. But by the end of May month this story will already reach its conclusion.

Love,

Nivi

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Oops ! I didn't notice that Khanna's are in Canada.

Originally posted by: paayaal

Wow! I think I missed a few ch of this story...*berates self*

I love ur take on the story after the leap. You've kept our fav characters intact & infact paired them up too...

I'm so glad that they have moved on, which is realistic, & that they ve not let Neil isolate himself. They barge into his personal space to keep him safe.

I loved the fact that both Ali & Neil felt the connection to Kashid & Avni too felt that someone dear to her is nearby!

M so grateful to you for making Sayesha a normal 16 yr old who hasn't forgotten her past!

Now that Sunheri & Mishti have bumped into Neil & Neil has become intrigued with Jaan...didi...I can't wait to see how you get them to meet!!

Sorry for being such a late lateef😳

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Don't be apologetic Payal. You know I cherish each one of your views, however late they may arrive.Thank you so much for the love you have shown upon this writing of mine, means a lot to me. Both the pairings apart from AvNeil's, I had a small soft corner for them in my heart. Could not forget them like how the cvs have done, mujhse ye hoga his nahi.

Moving on, not truly. They still remember Avni and memories associated with her, it's just they try to avoid including her in any conversations.

Writing Saesha's character has to be the most difficult part for me, for I hate that double faced brat till infinity in the show. Such sucker she is!

I am stuck with their meeting now, most probably by eighth or maximum by ninth chapter you will have their grand meeting. Surprises awaiting all of you 😉!

Love,

Nivi

Originally posted by: paayaal

Oh I know what you must be going thru trying to imagine Sayesha to be an absolute angel...😆

8th or 9th ch...omg...we have to wait that long for them to meet???

Surprise...I like surprises...esp if they r given fast fast!😉