AvNeil SS ~ Colliding With Each Other...Again {Pt 7A}

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

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Posted: 7 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: paayaal
Tapasi...I won again!!

oye Payal, koi competition nahi hai 😳. The chapter is going to be updated on Thursday or Friday only.

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

oye Payal, koi competition nahi hai 😳. The chapter is going to be updated on Thursday or Friday only.

Itz between the two of us...I suggest u move to the sidelines...this can get ugly!!😛

Thurday Friday??? Whyyy...😭

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: paayaal

Itz between the two of us...I suggest u move to the sidelines...this can get ugly!!😛

Thurday Friday??? Whyyy...😭

So that people won't miss my updates more. I'll be taking a break for 1-2 weeks, have a family function to attend.

OK, I'll move sidelines. Warna na ghar ka rahungi na ghaat ka.

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#124

Chapter 2:

Nivi..🤗

Finally found my way back to this story today. And I'm so happy that I did. Reading the second chapter was like pouring ice-cold water upon my burning heart. Seeing the real Neil Khanna was like balm to my aching soul. RJ Neil Khanna was such a delight to read. The words used were so beautiful. I could actually feel the longing and melancholy of Neil. The narration of their story took me too back the memory lane.

I had a beautiful smile plastered on my lips while reading this. Thank you so much for making me smile!

Love,

Ashi.

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#125

Chapter 3:

Main aaj bhi usse utna hi

mohabbat karta hoon...

Aur is liye nahi ki koi aur

nahi mili...

Par is liye ki usse mohabbat

karne se fursat hi nahi mili...

Damn! This is so beautiful! Just perfect! Why can't we have this Neil Khanna in the show? Please get him back... I miss him so much! :(

The fun-loving KK is here too. Great! What did they turn him into in the show for a pathetic track?! Well, leave it. No point in crying over spilled milk. So Neil is going to Kashid, to meet his destiny. 😳 But Avni is planning to leave. No worries. I know she won't be able to leave. 😆

I'm off to read the next chapter.

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#126

Chapter 4:

Ali! My sweetheart! He's here to support his friend. Ali & Mitali are married?! Good to see Mitali positive for a change. Loved the way they supported Neil. Ali has kept his promise to Avni. He's the best friend anyone would be blessed to have. Talia is cute too!

Aman? Maddy? Kareena? Who are they?! Does any such character exist in the show? 🤔

Glad that at least you remember them. 😆 Aman-Kareena, a potential storyline wasted. 🥱 Seeing Kareena pregnant & the cute little Talia, I so badly want to see Avni & Neil enjoying all these phases. From pregnancy to parenting.

Beautifully penned down dear. Loved it!

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Ashi3
Chapter 2:

Nivi..🤗

Finally found my way back to this story today. And I'm so happy that I did. Reading the second chapter was like pouring ice-cold water upon my burning heart. Seeing the real Neil Khanna was like balm to my aching soul. RJ Neil Khanna was such a delight to read. The words used were so beautiful. I could actually feel the longing and melancholy of Neil. The narration of their story took me too back the memory lane.

I had a beautiful smile plastered on my lips while reading this. Thank you so much for making me smile!

Love,
Ashi.

Thank you so much, Ashi! I am delighted to know you had a fantastic time in reading the chapter. I miss the REAL Neil Khanna that my grief turned to a strong will to present him the way he actually is. What more a writer can achieve when their readers say that they could connect with his/her characters, means a lot to me.

I'm happy I could be a reason for the smile of your face, best ever compliment I received.

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Ashi3
Chapter 3:

Main aaj bhi usse utna hi

mohabbat karta hoon...

Aur is liye nahi ki koi aur

nahi mili...

Par is liye ki usse mohabbat

karne se fursat hi nahi mili...

Damn! This is so beautiful! Just perfect! Why can't we have this Neil Khanna in the show? Please get him back... I miss him so much! :(

The fun-loving KK is here too. Great! What did they turn him into in the show for a pathetic track?! Well, leave it. No point in crying over spilled milk. So Neil is going to Kashid, to meet his destiny. 😳 But Avni is planning to leave. No worries. I know she won't be able to leave. 😆

I'm off to read the next chapter.

The lines are from Mohabbatein and they are one of my favourite lines from the movie, they evoke a sense of pain and we get a feeling that 'is this love for real? How can someone be love with their dead beloved' but that's how love works, isn't it. If I had the capability to bring back our old and the real Neil, I would have that months before. Alas! We are left with nothing except dreaming of how the track could have been executed better and correctly. As you said, no use of crying over spilled milk. Thanks for the review!

Love,

Nivi

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Ashi3
Chapter 4:

Ali! My sweetheart! He's here to support his friend. Ali & Mitali are married?! Good to see Mitali positive for a change. Loved the way they supported Neil. Ali has kept his promise to Avni. He's the best friend anyone would be blessed to have. Talia is cute too!

Aman? Maddy? Kareena? Who are they?! Does any such character exist in the show? 🤔
Glad that at least you remember them. 😆 Aman-Kareena, a potential storyline wasted. 🥱 Seeing Kareena pregnant & the cute little Talia, I so badly want to see Avni & Neil enjoying all these phases. From pregnancy to parenting.

Beautifully penned down dear. Loved it!

Ali is my sweetheart too and another character of Naamkarann I will always cherish. There are no villains or negativity in my story, rest assured you can read it peacefully. The conflict between leads is more than enough to push the story forward. You will be loving Talia's character in future chapters, I assume. I remember every character of the show whose story had the potential to take the serial forward. AvNeil are going to have every happiness in their life, the last few chapters will be totally dedicated for the same purpose. Thanks for the review!

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