AvNeil FF: Afeemi Hai Tera Mera Pyaar(Part 18,Pg 46//Oct 17) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Nice update
Neil teasing Avni was fantastic
Aww they started romancing being unaware that Bebe is there
Update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: vu1998

Sorry for getting late Shailu..

Well i just loved this one..
Self control...hahaha..
Formula F1... Ye accha tha..
Finally you made hero confess to himself.. Now make him confess that to heroine too...
Bebe... Express train... No horn.. No breaks.. Direct crash...
Their position on bed... I wish i could see them like that..
This was cute, sweet, romantic, beautiful, fantastic, brilliant and what not...

And yeah!! Like Bebe i m also waiting for junior Tillu...
Lots of love..
Vihu..
Update soon.. And this time I'll try to be the first one to comment...

Thank you so much Vihuuu...
Abhi toh heroine bhi confess kregi khud se..
Fir dono ek dusre se..
Ye happy happy story hoga.. Mere se sad sad scene nai likhe jaate.. Depression mein chale jaate h hm..
So sab achha achha hi milega.. Or agar koi twist dimaag mein aaya toh wo bhi...
Love you too... Will update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: aishwarya12joys

Finally read all the chapters of the ff it is awesome. Do update it fast.

Thank you so much for reading this...
Will update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Nice update
Neil teasing Avni was fantastic
Aww they started romancing being unaware that Bebe is there
Update next part soon

Thank you Gurveen..
Will update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Hello guys, I m back...
I have become a daily user.. Daily apni bakwas leke aa jati hoon..
Hahahahahaha.. I was just joking 😆
So here's another update for you all...
I hope you all like it...

Part 6

Bebe was enjoying AvNeil condition.. She thought to make more fun of them and to tease them..

Bebe: Toh Avni puttar, hume kab khush khabri dene wali h tu??

Avni: Bebe, aap jaisa soch rhi h waisa kuchh bhi nai h..

Bebe: Toh kaisa h Bahu?? Jis tarah se tm dono so rahe the wo toh kuchh or hi bayan kr rha tha..

Avni was getting redder by Bebe's teasing.. But now our Superhero came to her rescue...

Neil: Bebe, aap wo sab chhodo.. Aap hume q bula rhi thi??

Bebe: Beta Tillu, Subah k 10 baj gye h.. Tujhe office nai jana kya?? Ya fir romance krne k liye chhutti le rkhi h tune??

Neil: Kya?? 10 baj gye?? Bebe aapko or pehle na jagaana tha.. Main late ho rha hoon.. Avni jaldi se mere liye Poha bana do.. Main abhi aaya...

Avni frowned at Neil's order.. She was just about to reply that she will not make anything for him. But Bebe replied instead: " Tillu puttar, Avni bhi abhi hi so k uthi h.. And nashta ready h.. Bahu ko pareshan krne ki jaroorat nai h.. Tu neeche aaja jaldi se..

And Bebe left after blessing Avni..

Avni(thought): Iss Neil k bachhe ko main batati hoon.. Poha khana h na ise.. Ab main khilaungi ise Poha..

As Neil heard shutting of the door he came out.. In reality he was not getting late at all. It was his idea to send Bebe..

Avni: Itni jaldi ready ho gye tm??

Neil: Q?? Tm nai chahti main office jaoon??

Avni: Maine aisa kab kaha?? Or waise bhi maine toh aajtak tumhe duty pe jaate nai dekha.. Zara apni Joining letter dikhana?? Sach k IPS ho ya fir hume dhokha de rhe ho..

Neil: Ohh, I don't have to show you my joining letter.. Just search on website about Upsc AIR 2, 2013.. You will get the answer.. And i have done my training from LBSNA and field training from Hyderabad.. You can check it.. I don't have to prove anything.. ( Neil said this with attitude and then moved his imaginary collar)

Avni has already done all her research on Neil when she came to take revenge from Dayawanti Mehta... And she is proud of Neil.. But there is no need to feed his ego which is already so high...

Avni: Toh jao na job pe.. Yahan kya khade hoke attitude dikha rahe ho..

Neil's mouth fell open on her remark.. And this time Avni smirked..
She went towards cupboard, took her clothes and was about to move towards bathroom..
In the meantime Neil got back to reality and moved towards Avni and blocked her b/w himself and cupboard..

Neil: BTW, you lost.. You were on my side of bed..

Avni: Oh please, you were on my side.. Your legs were on me..I felt it..

Neil: Haha! Or tmhare heath ka kya jo mujhe gale lagaye hue tha..

Avni: Oh wait, what about your hand? Jo mere kamar pe tha..

Neil: Or tumne bhi toh mere t-shirt ko tightly pakad rakha tha.. Uska kya??

Avni: Toh isme ye kahan se proof hua ki main tumhare side thi?? Tum mere side the..

Neil: Tm mere side thi..
Avni: Tum mere side the..
Neil: Nai tum mere side thi..
Avni: Nai tm..

Neil: Thik h dono beech mein the.. Koi kisi k side nai tha..
Avni: Haan ye sahi h.. Dono beech mein the..

Neil slowly came closer to Avni and whispered in her ears: BTW, I slept peacefully last night after so long..

Avni felt his warm breath on her ears and got goosebumps..

Neil moved back a little and kissed her on the cheek and sprinted towards bathroom..
Avni realised what Neil did and blushed.. She did not tell Neil about this but she also slept peacefully after so long.. She touched her cheeks where Neil has kissed and smiled..

They both got ready and went downstairs for brunch.. (But not at the same time)
Neil was looking as usual handsome and today Avni was looking beautiful with her new hair style (half up and half down and curled, I liked her this style more than the present one..)

Neil came first and was waiting for Avni to come down..
His gaze was constantly fixed on the stairs..

Bebe: Tillu puttar, Avni aa jaegi.. Teri hi biwi h kahin bhaagi nai jaa rhi..
And then they heard Avni descending down the stairs..

Bebe: Le aa gyi.. Kinni soni lag rhi h meri bahu..
Prakash too smiled at this and Shweta was as usual making faces that Avni was getting all attention..

And Neil's gaze was fixed on Avni.. He was awestruck by her beauty.. Today he saw Avni in totally different light because now she is her lady love and he was head over heals in love with her.. He was not able to remove his gaze from her and was unaware of the fact that the family members were looking at him and were smiling constantly..

Prakash: Avni puttar aao.. Jaldi se nashta kar lo..

Avni touched Prakash feet but he just hugged her..
She sat beside Neil and then noticed that he was looking at her without blinking.. She frowned at this.. She thought there is something wrong with her attire.. She looked down at herself but everything was Ok..

Finally when she can't hold it, she asked Neil: Neil, kya hua? Aise q dekh rhe ho?? Koi problem h kya mere kapde mein? Main achhi nai lag rhi kya??
She asked this slowly so that no one else can hear.
But as Neil was not aware of his surrounding, he replied loudly which got everyone's attention.

Neil: Koi problem nai h.. You are looking too beautiful in this dress. Isliye main tumhe aise baahar nai jaane de sakta..

Everyone awe at this and then laughed..
This break Neil out of his trance..
And Avni was once again red as tomato..

Avni: Neil! (She said hushing him)

Neil also realised all this and now it was his turn to get all red..
He lowered his head, smiled stupidly and ran his hand into his hair.. ( His signature step)

Kareena: Meri Super Bhabhi h hi itni beautiful.. Really Bhabhi you are looking damn beautiful today...

Bebe: Ithhe aa puttar, tujhe kala teeka laga doon.. Kahin humari hi nazar na lag jaye tujhe...

Everyone continued with the breakfast.. Neil got a call and went outside to receive it..

On call-
*****
Neil: Haan DD bolo..
DD: Sir ek drug dealing ka case aaya h and kuchh naami log bhi involved h isme..
Neil: Any idea ki kaun kaun h wo log?
DD: Humare area k MLA and yahan k sabse bade businessman ka connection lag rha h.. And someone from our department is helping them..
Neil: Kisi pe vishwas nai kr sakte hum. Politicians se lekar Police officers tak aise kaam krte h.. Or unn kuchh logon k karan pura department and humari democracy question mein aati h..
We have to find out who all are involved.. Get me all the reports related to that case..
DD: Or sir hume bahot hi careful rehna hoga coz iska main dealer Mumbai ka sabse bada Don h..
Neil: Yup, I know that but we have to expose them and get them arrested..
DD: OK Sir.. Jai Hind...
Neil: Jai Hind..
*****
As Neil turned he saw Avni standing there with frown..

To be continued...

P.s- Guys can you please suggest four dhasu name.. A politician, a businessman, a police officer and one gunda...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
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Yippeee I am first again
Once again a fabulous update
Bebe teasing AvNeil and them getting embarrased😳
Avni and Neil fighting with each other over last night...
And Neil kissing Avni and Avni blushing Hayyyee😳
Neil getting mesmerized by Avni's beauty- That part was too good
And once again flushing red, aww😳
Lots of Love
Update Soonish...
Edited by Deepti_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Lovely update Shailja
I loved that you brought Bebe's part in this chapter as well. 😳 she teasing AvNeil is a treat!
I hope kuch toofaan ki sign na ho ye. I won't guess anything. Update soon. In your language I love your daily bakwaas... in my language your daily awesome ideas.
Lots of love,
Zuu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Loved ur this part.ur FF made me happy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
OMG!!! Pehle to main has loon.🤣
It was so funny..
Tillu and Avni... 😆
When they were arguing over who crossed the line... I feel like kissing your hands for such a cute plus romantic scene...
Bebe to hath dhokar unke peeche padi hai.
Haye... Cheek kissi again... I loved it..
Tillu AIR 2 OMG!! I am proud of him
Isn't he too handsome to be a topper... Actually yes!!
I'll Raghuvendra Singh Rathod urf RSR..
That's ok if you don't liked it...😆
It was full on masaledaar episode...
Waiting eagerly for next one..
Lots of love... Hugs... And a flying kiss at the speed of light...
Vihu..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Superb update
Neil was so lost in Avni's beauty that he didn't knew what he spoke
A new trouble in their paradise
Update soon please

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