AvNeil FF: Afeemi Hai Tera Mera Pyaar(Part 18,Pg 46//Oct 17) - Page 34

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome update shailja... somewhere I knew the girl was mithali...omg shocked sid and mithali love each other... so sid is just doing all this to tease avneil...who is sid actually? As mithali said to him "please now tell neil who u r...omg again another shock sid is neil childhood best friend... hahah shailja now I love sid as I know he wont be any harm for avneil. I take back all the bad things I said about sid...haha sid is right neil is in madly in love with neil as sid even said his full name to neil but still neil didn't pay much attention to it...aww loved how neil woke only to witness avni sleeping while her head on his chest with hands around his waist and her mouth open slightly...hayee loved how neil was observing avnis beauty and then how he kissed the side of her lips and how avni closed her mouth in sleep while pouting and mumble neils name making he smile...haha avni smiled in her sleep when neil kissed her pout lips and when she slowly opened her eyes and smiled in trance but then she woke up realising the reality and asked neil what he was doing and neil with his usual reply "apni wifey ko morning kiss... haha they way avni innocently said ""Wo brush krne k baad kiya jata hai ...haha when avni said "But mujhe problem hai. Pehle brush then Kiss and super cop tillu didn't wait for a second and went to brush straight away so he could get a kiss from his wifey.hayee loved how when avni was about to brush and how neil hugged her from behind while his chin was on his shoulder... loved how avni was telling him to move so she could brush and also told him to make coffee for her... but neil was stubborn and didn't move as he wanted a kiss... neils always make me laugh I couldn't stop laughing when he was like "No, first I want kiss. Second, kisne kaha tha itna peene ko. Bewari hote jaa rhi ho tum. And third, Pati parmeshwar hota hai so coffee tum banao... Loved how avni gave an answer back to neil and how she said ... "agar kiss chahiye toh apni bakwas band kro or mere liye coffee banao and mere orders follow kiya kro."... haha neil is right she is such a tease and loved how he started tickling her ...hayee neil is seriously stubborn loved how he was like ""I am waiting. Jaldi se brush karo." While standing behind avni with arms folded couldn't actually imagine him standing like that waiting for avni...haha the way avni remembered last night behaviour and how she saw neil smirking...haha loved it when neil said ""Arey wifey Sorry kyun? I was loving it. Tumhare naughty drunk Avatar se toh mujhe or jyada pyaar ho gya hai." And came closer to avni...avni finally pushed neil out of the bathroom and told him to make a coffee poor girl was embarrassed by her behaviour while neil was smiling... loved it baby u did a fab job even though it was a small part justice was done to it now I cant wait for the next part especially neil knowing sid is his childhood friend update soon and also do try and update your other ff soon lots of love to u

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Posted: 8 years ago
superb upt
loved light hearted avneil
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb concept
read it in one goo
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow a lovely story
Love how you have made avni stand on her own feet and start working.
Loving the romance between the two.
Great job.
Hope you update soon.
Keep writing
Thanks
Sayli
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am loving this FF so very much. Sorry for being silent reader as I came across this story just now and read all the chapters in one go. Superb update .

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