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Hello guys!! I am Shailja. And I am here so it's obvious that I am AvNeil fan. I have been reading stories on AvNeil since a long time. So, mere dimaag mein bhi kuchh khurafati ideas aa hi gaye.
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This is my first ever write up which I am trying. I will not guarantee ki achha hi hoga.😛
But I will try to give my 100%.
This is three shots or can be extended depends upon how much idea I get.
The story revolves around the latest track where Shweta blames Ananya and Neil do not said anything in her support till now and what will happen after that..
All the characters and everything is taken from Naamkaran. I am just trying to convey my side of story, what I think should happen.
Jhel lena yaar. Or agar bura lage toh chappal juta is most welcome. And haan tolerate my grammatical mistake too..
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The whole family was blaming Avni. Even Neil was not listening to her. She was breaking from inside with each and every insult thrown to her by Shweta. But the thing which was breaking her the most was Neil silence. This time Ali was too trying to state the reality but no one was listening to him.
Neil went out from house angrily and the screeching of tyre was heard few minutes later.
Avni(thought): Neil ne ek baar bhi meri baat sunne ki koshish nai ki. Kya wo sahi mein chahta h ki main uske ghar se chali jaoon.. Wo mujhe culprit samjh rha h.. Jab Neil hi mujh pe vishwas nai kr rha toh main yahan reh k kya karoongi..
Avni wiped her tears and directly went towards her room.
Shweta: Kaisi badtameez ladki h. Itna kuchh hone k baad bhi ghar k inside she is going. (Directing toward Ali) Ab tu yahan kya kr rha h? Uske kamre mein jana h kya tujhe?
Ali make the disguted face at Shweta and stormed outside the house.
Bebe was just silent. She was not able to process all the things that were going around. She held her head and was about to faint but Prakash held her on time.
Prakash: Bebe! Bebe! Aap thik toh hai na?
Prakash carried Bebe to her room and everyone went behind them.
Amol went to Avni's room.
Amol: Di! Kya hua? (Amol was not there when everyone was blaming Avni)
Avni: Amol hume yahan se chalna chahiye. Hum yahan se kahin door chale jaenge. Aisi jagah jaha koi humari mumma ko ya humare parvarish ko bura na kahe. Or waise bhi Neil pe hum bojh nai ban sakte. Tm meri zimedari ho. Or Amol please Neela maa ko kuchh mat batana. Wo hume kahin nai jaane dengi. Ek baar hum kisi achhe jagah pahunch jaye fir unhe or Nanno ko inform kr denge.
Amol understood the gravity of situation and agreed on Avni's decision.
Both silently went out of the house and hired a taxi for Railway station.
Here Neil was in his apartment and flashes of Ali and Avni in that compromising state was coming in his mind. He mindlessly held the glass tighter and it broke and cut his hand. DD came to Neil to talk about the situation. He tried to reason with Neil about that whole fiasco. But Neil dismissed him.
Once Neil's anger cool down, he started realising what he has done.
Neil (to himself): Oh God! Maine ye kya kiya. Avni ne mujhe call krne ki bhi koshish ki thi Maine hi uska call nai uthaya tha. Intact wo police station bhi aayi thi mujhse milne. Jaroor koi bahot important baat hui hogi tabhi wo itna pareshan thi. DD bhi bata rha tha ki uski tabiyat thik nai thi. Maine uski koi baat nai suni. Wo kya soch rhi hogi. Mujhe kuchh krna hoga.
Neil called DD and told him about his plan to find out who is the real culprit and somewhere he knows that Rhea is behind all this.
He set up everything in his flat and called Rhea. When she came to his apartment she saw him in drunk state. Neil purposely called Rhea near him and tried to act intimate. DD was clicking their pic secretly.
Rhea: Neil yahan par ya bed pe?
Neil: Tm kya chahti ho Rhea? (He said seductively)
Rhea: Neil I was waiting for this day for so long. Agar wo Avni humare beech nai aati toh aaj hum saath mein kitne khush rehte. Infact tumhari mom bhi use bilkul pasand nai krti. Wo toh thik hua ki hum dono ne mil k use ghar chhod k jaane pe majboor kr diya. Ab tum or main ek ho sakte h Neil.
All this time Neil was conscious and Rhea was thinking that he is drunk and can't form anything what she is saying.
As Rhea said about Avni leaving the house he got shock of his life. He jerked Rhea away and shouted "What?"
Rhea was shocked and scared as hell, "Neil, w..wo... "
Neil: Kya kaha tumne? Avni ghar chhod k jaa rhi h??
Rhea: Nahi meine aisa kuchh nai kahan. Tumne galat suna h Neil. Asia kuchh nai h.
Neil didn't bother to hear her and ran out of his apartment to stop Avni.
He went to his house as fast as possible and directly went to their room. He opened the cupboard and saw it empty. He searched for her suitcase but was not able to find out.
He started calling out: Avni! Avni!
Everyone came out hearing Neil.
Prakash: Kise khoj rha h puttar??
Neil: Papa wo Ananya.. Ananya kahan h? Uske Kapda bhi nai h kamre mein or na hi uska suitcase h.
Shweta: Thanks God! Wo ladki humara peechha chhod k chali gyi. Aisi characterless ladki humare ghar ki bahu banne layak nai h..
Neil: Mom! Stop it. Aap Ananya ko aise kaise bol sakti h. Aapko bhi pata h uss ladki ne humare parivar k liye kya kuchh nai kiya h. Or aap uske character pe question kaise utha sakti h. Ek aurat hoke dusri aurat pe aise ilzaam kaise lga sakti h aap.
Neil called DD and order him to show those pictures to the family members.
Everyone was shocked after seeing those pics of Neil and Rhea so close to each other. Even Bebe was disguted with her Tillu.
Neil: Mom, Dad, Bebe!! Humesha ek aurat ko hi q agni pariksha deni hoti h. Humesha uspe hi q sawaal uthaya jaate h? Aisa bhi toh ho sakta h jaisa hum dekh rahe ho wo sach na ho. Humesha ek aurat ko hi q misunderstood kiya jata h?
Everyone was silent and just listening to what Neil was trying to justify.
Bebe: Tillu! Mujhe maaf kr de. Mere kuchh samjh nai aa rha tha uss waqt. Please tu meri Ananya bahu ko wapas le aa.
Neil: Aap chinta mat kriye Bebe, main Ananya ko kahin nai jaane doonga..
Neil asked DD to find about any flights booked on Ananya or Avni's name. And called some police officers to check bus stand.
DD: Sir Ananya ya Avni kisi naam se koi flight booked nai h.
Police officers too called and informed him that Ananya is not on the bus stand.
Neil: Bebe main Ananya ko lene jaa rha hoon. Wo pakka railway station gyi hogi. Main aapki bahu ko leke aaunga. Aap chinta mat kro.
Bebe: Main bhi tere saath chalungi Tillu. Main yahan aise nai baith sakti. Teri maa ne kya nai kaha uss masoom so bachhi ko or maine use roka tak nai. Kya soch rhi hogi meri bachhi.
Neil: Thik h Bebe. Jaldi chalte h.
Bebe: Ruk ja Tillu. Oye! Madam Madonna, aap bhi chaliye. Kitna kuchh galat kaha tumne uss bachhi ko or usne uff tak nai kiya. Tm bhi use dhoondhogi humare saath.
And finally, Bebe, Prakash, Shweta and Neil went to railway station to search Ananya. ( Or Neil apni Avni ko khojne nikal pada)...
To be continued...
Index :
Part 1- Page 1
Part 2- Page 3
Part 3- Page 5
Part 4- Page 6
Part 5- Page 9
Part 6- Page 11
Part 7- Page 13
Part 8- Page 14
Part 9- Page 17
Part 10- Page 20
Part 11- Page 22
Part 12- Page 25
Part 13- Page 28
Part 14- Page 32
Part 15- Page 35
Part 16- Page 39
Part 17- Page 43
Part 18- Page 46
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