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vidya dasan

@vidz2122

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

it took 2 hrs for me to complt ... hehehe ... 😆 ... but i loveee looongg updates ... anywway

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOOO UUU
MAY GOD BLESS AND KEEP U STRONG

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOO U"

this is my school sng ..
and commg back to story ... is really suprb ... cute ... neil is sooo good ...is he alive ??? i didnt undrstand that hspital scene .that doctr nurse convo ...
its really sweet ... their phn convo iss to sweet .. update soon

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Somewhatwriter

@Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Superb update
Everything was going smooth but this dayawanti has to come in between
I really Neil is fine
Update soon please

Thank you so much... Thank you for commenting and showing so much love and support. Of course I will update soon I hope the story will go the way you will like. lots of love,

Shreya

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Somewhatwriter

@Somewhatwriter

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: shikhsk
First of all belated happy birthday to you dear.hope you find ur Tillu in real life soon.coming to update it's too adorable n emotional.jus love every bit of it

Thank you so so so so so so so so much... you are being way too nice. you have just made my day! Hm... it might be too soon for that but if I did find my own tillu then it would be like a dream... thank you so much, I'm so very happy that you liked it and I ould write to a standard that could be seen as emotional, I didn't think it was very good and I thought it was too long and boring, thank you so much... I'm sorry about the weird labelling editing things, its all fixed now...

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shikha

@shikhsk

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter

Thank you so so so so so so so so much... you are being way too nice. you have just made my day! Hm... it might be too soon for that but if I did find my own tillu then it would be like a dream... thank you so much, I'm so very happy that you liked it and I ould write to a standard that could be seen as emotional, I didn't think it was very good and I thought it was too long and boring, thank you so much... I'm sorry about the weird labelling editing things, its all fixed now...

U r most welcome sweetheart.yes it was lil difficult bt believe me I enjoyed reading ...It was not dat difficult...pls update soon

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pri12

@pri12

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Shreya Belated Happy Bday...May ur all wishes come true...

This was the best party u gave

I loved the update...It was emotional romantic and heartbreaking and then at the end Neil is Alive 🥳

Yayyy He will come back to his Nishan and wifey

plz continue soon

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Amaira Rathore

@Amaira_Rathore

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

What an amazing story...

Read all the chapters in one go...

Waiting for your next update..

Please continue and update asap!!!

Enjoyed Reading your work😉

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

wonderful 👏⭐️😭

heart ripping !💔

show some Aman Avni scenes Na

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

awesome updates
read all the parts in a go
emotional & beautiful update
avneil were so adorable & cute
heart wrenched when i found that neil died...ah but now i'm happy
neil will surely come back for his avni & beta
avni's gut feeling was so accurate
waiting for next update
cont soon plz

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Somewhatwriter

@Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: vidz2122
it took 2 hrs for me to complt ... hehehe ...😆... but i loveee looongg updates ... anywway
<font color="#ff0099">"HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOOO UUU
MAY GOD BLESS AND KEEP U STRONG</font>
<font color="#ff0099">HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOO U"</font>

thisis my school sng ..
and commg back to story ... is really suprb ... cute ... neil is sooo good ...is he alive ??? i didnt undrstand that hspital scene .that doctr nurse convo ...
its really sweet ... their phn convo iss to sweet .. update soon

2 hours! Im so sorry to make it so long and boring but thank god you enjoy long updates otherwise i would have really wasted your time na? Aww thank you so much all these birthday wishes have made me feel over the moon and that is such a sweet song! So cute... Thank you so much so glad you liked it and found it noce, i didnt know whether this chapter was any good or not, but you guys always make me feel so nice, thank you... hmm maybe you will understand as the story goes on in the next update?

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Somewhatwriter

@Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: shikhsk

U r most welcome sweetheart.yes it was lil difficult bt believe me I enjoyed reading ...It was not dat difficult...pls update soon

ok thank god it wasnt rhat difficult, im so happy you could still manage to enjoy it, i will try and update very soon this time...
Thank you!