O tere sang yaara (PART 5 FINAL) UPDATED PAGE 13)

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vidya dasan

@vidz2122

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

thank uu .. for such aa looong update ...

uff that was really looong ...

but no words ...

iloved it ... it was awsm ...😳 ..

this cute family of avneil 😳😳 nishu is really cute

woww ... i loved it ... no words ..

u are great ... gave us such a looong update ...

and its okey if u are stoping this here ... but this is long as an ff dear ...

loved it 😳

hahaha hetal calling vidya 😆😆 .. i love that ...

the part i love most is ... nishu 😳😳 such a cute family ...

include nishu in next ff yar

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Somewhatwriter

@Somewhatwriter

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: mahek28
It is incredibly long this time but dude it is so damn good the beauty of a writer is that ge can make u imagine all those things taking place and omg u just did thati was actually able to imagine all of it... And kudos yr... Tv mei i don't think itna jldi hoga yeh sab although even i would love to see something of this sort but yr u showed me the future ...antaryami ho kasam se pls pls yr come back soon...i just love ur work and post another long ff jldi laro...waise bhi I'm gonna read this again...
#saarepartseksaath

I didn't realise that it would become so long sorry. But thank you sooo mich, you are write, that is the beauty of a writer and so to realise that somebody thinks that I can achieve that is so amazing, thank you so much, thank you. Its even bigger to know you would like to see something like this on tv, thank you so much ot means a lot. Of course, I'll be back as soon as possible with a new long ff, I promise. Pinky swear. Wow, thank you for considering to read t again, it makes me feel so special but good luck... its going to be quite a task since I accidentally made it so long.

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

awesome update
loved it to the core
amazingly written
great work
keep up the work

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Kaia

@babhishahk

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Everything about this story is so beautiful and perfect and very touching. The way you bring out the emotions and everything is so commendable. Good job