O tere sang yaara (PART 5 FINAL) UPDATED PAGE 13) - Page 8

it tore my heart into pieces . a wonderful picture of melancholy .😭

Originally posted by: pri12

Shreya I love u for this super long update🤗

It was amazing...u described delivery scenario so beautifully...Neil was dying but all he could think was Avni and their child...He handled her on phone and then their baby came in the world

Then death news came..Everyone was shattered but Avni's pain was beyond that...I love Aman here...He supported his sister like a brother/father would do...

So Neil is faking his death for revenge and Ketan Mehta is with him ofcourse for money...

Please continue soon

Lots Of Love🤗

Wow I never thought somebody would love me for the length of this I thought people must be hating me! 😆 I knew our Neil loves her so much that he would be blinded from anything hearing her pain, even if it is his agony. Im so glad that you liked the way he handled that... i was praying that you guys wont find it too cringy but I thought that was just the beauty in our Neil Khanna you know? And Im so happy I was able to convey her pain... i know her pain would be so bad if it happened on the show for example so i thought i wouldnt be describe the same way as ot would be if you could see her state, i didnt think i could have that power in my writing. Yeah with Neil gone I felt I needed somebody to console Avni and to make her realise that whether he was alive or not she had to live her life for her son at least, Im over the moon you actually thought i wrote his support well... and im so happy you enjoyed the chapter because i was so worried that it was too boring. Yes thats whats happened, his full plan and how it is executed will be explained in the next and final update... of course... i will try and update as soon as I can please watch out for it... all the love
Shreya (or Rey if you'd like which some of my friends call me)

Originally posted by: mehak4

Omg... so long.. but loved it...
It was so emotional. U almost made my cry.. i had to stop my tears ki let me read first.
It seriously pained me, pricked my heart. You have so wonderfully written it,and described all the feelings so beautifully that it plays with our emotions..
Words r less to appreciate your chapter . I am speechless.. too good
Itna kuch bol diya mene.. par lag rha h..ki kuch nhi bola.
I hope ki me kuch kuch bata parihu ki how glad i am feeling.
Keep it up
Love you
Mehak

Im so sorry... was it too long for you? I didnt mean to bore you...
Thank you so much yaar... you are the way too sweet
😆 im so glad that you found it emotional, i never thought i could write emotionally ever... I thought it would just turn out cheesy...
but i didnt mean to make you cry yaar
And all that praise!
Honest to god, i seriously do not deserve all this love and support and compliments you are giving me, i am not a very good writer.
You do not know how happy I feel to hear that my writing could maybe have touched some hearts, its the nicest thing i could ever be told thank you so much my dear.
I honestly cant believe i could do that!
And you have said way way way way more than enough... how dare ypu say you have not said enough! You have brightened up my day and probably said something that will stick in my mind long after today
as something that made me feel so happy.
Watch out for my next and final update,
Thank you so much and love you too,
Shreya (or rey if you want)

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Very painful yet beautiful...

thank you thank you thank you... thank you for the love, the support the appreciation and praise, Im so very glad you liked it... though it may only be a few words, they mean a lot to me

Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter

Im so sorry... was it too long for you? I didnt mean to bore you...
Thank you so much yaar... you are the way too sweet
😆 im so glad that you found it emotional, i never thought i could write emotionally ever... I thought it would just turn out cheesy...
but i didnt mean to make you cry yaar
And all that praise!
Honest to god, i seriously do not deserve all this love and support and compliments you are giving me, i am not a very good writer.
You do not know how happy I feel to hear that my writing could maybe have touched some hearts, its the nicest thing i could ever be told thank you so much my dear.
I honestly cant believe i could do that!
And you have said way way way way more than enough... how dare ypu say you have not said enough! You have brightened up my day and probably said something that will stick in my mind long after today
as something that made me feel so happy.
Watch out for my next and final update,
Thank you so much and love you too,
Shreya (or rey if you want)

absolutely not. . You didn't bore me. I was actually happy to read it. You deserve the compliments. We know how good you write only you don't 😉 . Will wait eagerly for the updates.
Beside this.. read mine too if you like.

Thank u for that looong update ...

Wow!!!!

Shreya... What to say... You squeezed out each and every thought out of my head...

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

it tore my heart into pieces . a wonderful picture of melancholy .😭

So he did all this to fool Daya by bribing Ketan . Why did he ? why ?

It was just playing before my eyes . I couldn't bear the sorrow in it .

Hey , thanks for adding Aman in this . I always wanted him to stay by Avni against all odds . I loved the Aman you portrayed . He is broken yet strong and did what no one could do . Brought Avni to life and made her to realise what was she doing with herself n her son .

You are just more than wonderful ! I am out of words . this is the best part I have read in this story .👏⭐️

Aw thank you so much you are way too sweet... im sorry yaar to tear your heart in to pieces! I didn't mean to! But I'm so glad that my writing could have the power to do that... wow i never thought it could... thank you so much.

Yeah, But im sure all your confusion will finish by the next part as all of the plans and basically confusions are revealed.

Saying it was playing before your eyes for me is such an amazing compliment that makes me feel so happy, because its saying its like it was real... which must be the best compliment for a writer. I dont think i deserve the compliment but it made me feel so extremely happy anyway.

Once you requested to Aman and Avni scenes, I decided I really wanted to add them in because their relationship is rather meglected on the show right now. Im so glad you liked him, you complimented all the things i wanted to come across! Thank you so much i dont know how to thank you to show much I appreciate it.

Thank you so much, Ive been trying to improve my writing as the chapters go so I'm so glad you've liked this one the best. Thank you so so so so so much! This comment has made me soo happy, thank you for all the love and the support and everything.

Thank you, lots of love,

Shreya

Originally posted by: __shibani__

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Thank you, thank you so much! Thank you for the lovely compliments and the love and support