AvNeil TS-Fragile Love (Part 2 on page 5) *Complete* - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: kamu_zainaddict

A story for the first I felt so connected.
Such a painful one and so emotional and so well written.
My little girl you nailed it again.
You should continue with more parts.


@bold, I can't express yeh padhke mujhe kitna accha laga😳
@red, would have loved to, but the thing is writing these two parts have made me face a loss aof words, becuase we can't even comprehend ki aise ladkiyon pe kya bitati hai, toh likhu kaise?😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: zaara610

Awesome.. shibuu.. beautifully written.. loved it..😳


Thanks Ritu😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Thanks😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
It's one of the best avneil ff I have read. Give us epilogue please.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: aishwarya12joys

It's one of the best avneil ff I have read. Give us epilogue please.

Thanks dear, but I won't be writing an epilogue
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: __shibani__


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thanks dear, but I won't be writing an epilogue</font>


It's OK keep writing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
This is fabulous dear.
This is a story that stick to the cord!! Heart wrenching!
Felt so connected and it was so real, being a student and on working on a project like this, when you see & realize that people don't have tears left in them, nothing pains them, when you cannot even look in their eyes and they tell you everything literally everything when you try to make them move in their life, live their life, to forget everything just to make you away from them then only tears flows through your eyes, hands clenched... but nothing lessens. It is pain as you said! Some are strong enough to move on but some... they are not!
Hats of to you for this!!!
Marvelous dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: -Lisha-

This is fabulous dear.

This is a story that stick to the cord!! Heart wrenching!
Felt so connected and it was so real, being a student and on working on a project like this, when you see & realize that people don't have tears left in them, nothing pains them, when you cannot even look in their eyes and they tell you everything literally everything when you try to make them move in their life, live their life, to forget everything just to make you away from them then only tears flows through your eyes, hands clenched... but nothing lessens. It is pain as you said! Some are strong enough to move on but some... they are not!
Hats of to you for this!!!
Marvelous dear!

Thanks😳

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