AvNeil TS-Fragile Love (Part 2 on page 5) *Complete* - Page 3

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

you just broke my heart in this line this was the first time in three years when a man is turning away from me..

you aren't intruding my privacy. pain is this with men lusting over your body n you begging them to leave.💔

how could it be for Neil to see her in such a wrecked state . my god 💔😭

there could be nothing worse than this that too for 3 long years. death is better than this .

is this an OS ? I thought you were kicking off a fanfic

please continue this ..OK I know it's an OS but this influenced me so much.

Originally posted by: vu1998

Really nice Shibani...

Avneil... No storm is greater than this word...Your OS proves that..

Awesome work dear..

Originally posted by: tuna_star

Awesome os shibu...👏

I was waiting for another of ur writing...

Don't know how to describe how impeccably u described the emotions, the pain and the turmoil AvNeil went through...

Also loved Neela's part in it as well..

Already waiting for ur next work..🤗😳

Originally posted by: kamu_zainaddict

Ayeee shibani tuhh Nikli sabki naani 😆
Kya likha h tune
Goose bumps aaye yar.
Emotions so beautifully penned down here.
Neil avni situation can be imagined ekdum ache se even those red eyes

Something so different and hatke.
No romance no separation no drama
Pure fragile love as u said.
Write more year.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written.

Originally posted by: ShailjaShan

This OS is awesome dude..

Just make it long story only if you can..

Because it's totally different and well written..

Will love to read this story...

The pain and the love which you expressed through words are just amazing..

So do update..

And please inform if you write any other story..

Will be delighted to read more from you..

Originally posted by: Starfish03

Such a unique story, never read anything like it hats off to u for it, it's truly a masterpiece and congratulations for the success I can tell you are a talented writer please carry on writing more on avneil:)

Originally posted by: Gurveen

What a tragic love story
But I think Neil's love will bring back Avni
Amazing

Originally posted by: Deepti_98

This was so beautiful!!!

I had literally had goosebumps reading this one!!!

The plot you chose was completely different and realistic

And the dialogues were beautifully penned down

One could feel all the emotions in this story

This is just amazing

Avni's pain, Neil's guilt was perfectly shown

Keep writing- You have superb writing skills