AvNeil TS-Fragile Love (Part 2 on page 5) *Complete*

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srinithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

how can one even suffer such torture for 3 long years . How had Avni even lived through . so heart wrenching 💔

healing emotionally will take time . and with Neil she will soon recover

you write so wonderfully😭

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kamu_zainaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

A story for the first I felt so connected.
Such a painful one and so emotional and so well written.
My little girl you nailed it again.
You should continue with more parts.

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Very painful yet beautiful update

Thanks Gurveen😳

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Zenab78
So painful and heart wrenching update
But you have penned their heart perfectly
Awesome

Thanks Zenab😳

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: shikhsk
So painful and heart breaking ... really very touchy story.it jus touched my soul.really very beautiful Shibu

thanks Shikha😳

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: vidz2122
realy painfl .. you are a good writtr ... lovd it ... cont it

Thanks Vidhya😳

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Kshailja
This was so emotional and the pain Avni went through just made my heart wrench..
The way you penned it down is awesome..
Feelings of both of them were just perfect according to situation...
Please continue this story...
Ateast make it SS but only if you can...
I will not force but just request..

Thanks Shailja😳
I would have loved to write further, but I am damn busy and also, some stories need an incomplete endings to strike chord to the readers, don't they?😉

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: pri12
This was so painful yet beautiful..Poor Avni...She hates herself..This is because of the trauma of those 3 years..
She is healing slowly physically and emotionally...
Loved it 😳
I am fan of your one liners..Love them :)

Thanks Kulraj😳

Edited by __shibani__ - 8 years ago

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zaara610

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Awesome.. shibuu.. beautifully written.. loved it..😳

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
how can one even suffer such torture for 3 long years . How had Avni even lived through . so heart wrenching 💔
healing emotionally will take time . and with Neil she will soon recover
you write so wonderfully😭

@bold, As I said before, what I wrote was just a glimpse. We have girls, women,and even young boys going through the worst. The saddest part is that we don't even know such people exist😭
@red, thanks😳