Vani FF// The Phoenix (Thread 2 Link in Pg 1) - Page 28

Originally posted by: snigdha1712

Writer madam..

kahaa ho aap..

waiting for your updates!!

Sorry for the late update but abh kar diya

Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Wow wow wow...

Fantastic update...

Please continue soon...

Can't wait for your next update...

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Thanks... hope you enjoy the updates...

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

Wow veer is becoming cheel. And they came to naaglok. Waiting to know how they l save Bani and vanshika. Loved it. Too too good.

God this dadi. Y did she do this. Hope they come soon back.

Loved everything..

Thanks ❤️

Originally posted by: Dmad

Soch lo, fir lambe lambe comment padne ki na aadat daalni padegi!!😆

Okay, on to the review!!

Sabse phele toh na, veeranshu please teach your brothers some manners. Aise hi married couple ke kamre main nhi aate!! Veer se zyada gussa ponky pr hum readers ko aaya tha!!🤣 Veer bechara jabhi romance karne jaata hai uske bhai beech mein aa jate hai

Hmm, naagrani shreya and mayank!! Bani will have to deal with both of them as aadi-naagin, not as bani, their daughter!!

I hope they really get a lesson as good as jai did!! Esp. mayank..idk why he's not giving me good vibes!! Shreya still seems like a old traditionalist grandma who can be handled but mayank, till now he has all the makings of a dhokebaaz!! (Maybe ahead we'll see some redeeming qualities in him) I wouldn't call him dhokebaaz but he's a hitler dad. A little too disciplinarian. He, more or less, has a different harsh upbringing that makes him harsh as a person. He's quite loyal to his ideologies.

I wonder what else is mayank vrishik hiding in his pockets..magic to trap adi naagin herself. How does he knows this magic and why does he think he needs it. He defo seems a little too powerful than he's supposed to be or should be. 🤨

Maybe you'll be able to change my mind later on on this, but till now he's not in good man category. A man who bullies his own daughter and is so disrespectful of Aishwarya. Nah, i hate bullies. Aishwarya and Mayank are a different league. She gives it back. Not that he's always like that but sometimes he's a bit too much control freak.

Shreya kashyap needs to be taught her place. She was a naagrani, she's not one now. I hope the other important naag naagins in naaglok give her good verbal bashing. Very honestly, though out of context for the story, i would like bela to have some spine and show shreya her place. Esp. after her blunder.

*Okay, I'm gonna do it, ye baat dil main bahut time se thi... I've only watched N5 but I've seen clips of other seasons as well and although mouni roy was good, the one's that kinda pulled me in were vishaka (ch that anita played) and shesha. Are we gonna get a glimpse of 2 of them in your story..maybe..hopefully😳😛*

Aishwarya and kushal both need to stop trying to develop peace in the family and choose their sides. Show some backbone!! Kushal esp. I wouldn't blame Kushal for wanting to keep peace. After all it is his wife. Ek naag uski naagin ke khilaaf nahi jaa sakta. He does try to tell her but he can't outright go against her and choose sides. Ek taraf pyaar aur dusri taraf bacche. Dono se hi bohot pyaar hai. He sees what Shreya's point is but disagrees with the way she deals with issues.

As for bani, i hope she doesn't let this slide. IMO, kashyap's might be her blood family but technically she's formed bonds only with vanshika and Aishwarya to some extent.

Beta bani, go the tough route and make it clear though they are family, they are still not family. You get what I'm trying to say??!!😂

Now coming to veeranshu, your veer has all the makings of a king made to rule the world. Kudos!! Mera veeru bachpan se hi raja hai. Balwant ka raja beta 😆 He does act like he rules the world. I used to love the attitude Veer had in the early episodes. That 'yeh puri duniya meri jaagir hai' kind of attitude.

Why do i think that, that eagle grip incident was the garud pankh fullfilling bani's wish. Okay, my theory is that the pankh has actually given veer his powers back and it's not maarkaat playing around. But veer is not able to feel that power because he has somewhat accepted defeat or it has gotten into his subconscious that he'll not get his powers back...khair baaki toh tamasha tumhara hai yr!! Hum toh bas dekhne aaye hai..

Shukla, itni aasaani se toh tu marne se raha. Slowly steadily, cheelu baby is coming back to his form. But before, he actually gets his powers back, he needs to realise ki veeranshu hai kon?? What exactly defines him..his powers..his love for bani.. his wings!!

That reminds me, the list that bani told to mayank..accha hua veeranshu ne nhi suna, nhi toh channe ke jaad pr chad ke baith jaata!!🤣 WOh toh hai. Veeru toh pure form mein aa jata ki bas...

Bani getting jealous of naageshwari, reminds of bani getting jealous of rani!!🤣 Bani is possessive even though she called Veer super possessive. She sees Veer and all she thinks is that he has to only look at Bani the same way. If it had been Aakesh, she wouldn't have been that jealous. Par apne Veer ko Nageshwari par marta dekh kaafi jal gayi 😆

Isse yaad aaya, what exactly would bani do if one day she had to choose between veeranshu and her duties as adi naagin. (I hope we see this arc in your story and i sincerely hope that she chooses the former).

Mayank, you're not even a mediocre level husband let alone one the calibre of veeranshu singhania, the legendary lover *naaglok main toh hai na legendary*.🤭

Now let's come to veer bani 2.0 as i like to call them, sam and vanshika #sahika or samika, whatever suits your boat!!🤣 Well, ship name toh socha nahi maine abhi tak. Wasn't getting a good one but Sahika sounds good.

They've got that frenemies yet best friends turned lovers thing going on and i for one liikkkee it a lott!! I don't know why but I'm somewhat a sucker for it. That school romance is something. This frenemies who have a thing for each other is definitely my weakness in romance as much as I have a weakness for bad boys type.

Sam might have just accepted the fact that he loves vanshika, she though is yet to come to that realisation. And unlike the itv trope I'm hoping she gets a very quite, normal yet impactful realisation. I'd say she hides it. She knows she has feelings for him and she did have it at one point 'well there a reason why she knows sam is a good kisser 😉' but she denies is because of how her dad had been during her childhood about naagin and cheel stuff. While she was younger she did want to impress her dad like all the girls do.

Hide and seek with daddy mayank huh...i would like to place my stakes on samika please!!😆 Sam would give a run for his money. The in house rule breaker and the hitler dad. I'm gonna enjoy them together on a table without getting handsy. Especially with how really troublemaking Sam can get.

Aishwarya, the ever constant vani and samika shipper. Yeh toh hai. She's always enjoyed Sam and Veer's company so naturally a shipper.

Lo and behold it happened again, you gave me an inch with that comment of yours and i took a mile!! Ho gya na ye comment bhi hadd se jyada lamba!!🤣

Originally posted by: snigdha1712

Wow...This is getting interesting day by day...

The scene where Veeranshu fights Jay and Bani coming and saving..

Felt goose bumps. This could have been one killer scene if the makers would have executed in the show... I wish they could have had it.

“Dhabewale, zara flashback mein jaa aur yaad kar tera kya haal kiya tha maine Satyug mein.” Veer retorted.

“Abh kahani badal gayi hai. Tu marega iss baar.”

“Baat toh hai. Tu mujhe maar dega. Meri sweetheart tujhe badla lene ke liye maar degi. Phir tu marega. Uske baad sweetheart phir se wahi pagalpan karegi khud ko maar dene ki. Hum sabh phir se janam lenge. Cycle continue kar sakte hai hum sabh. I have no problem. Main same kahani dohorane ke liye humesha haazir hun. Jitni baar main apni jaaneman ko pehli baar dekhunga, utni hi baar mera uske liye pyaar badh jaayega.”

--This one really cracked me up ..when I imagined Sharad telling the dialogues..Uff...It would have been amazing.. 😊

Great going ...

Sharad would have nailed it. Yaar, main pagal ho jaati yeh sochke ki yeh dialogues Sharad kitne amazing tarah se bolta. ufffff

Omg. The way u ended. God it's so scary. Hope veer is fine. Pls pls update soon. Cliff hanger. God.

But u r mind-blowing. The way veer and Sam got Bani and vanshika out. It's so funny and awesome.

Veer knowing how to go to naagpansh and going through traps. Wow awesome.

So eager to know what happens next.

Update soon please

Wow...

Amazing just amazing...

Continue soon...

Eagerly waiting for your update...

Oh god! Why did you stop!😲 It was one of the most fascinating cliffhanger ever in the storyy!👏

I feel the story is nearing its end! Climax lagg rha hai! Naags Vs Cheels fight sorts!😈

Am super intrigued yrrr! Please update soon!❤️

Amazing update.loved how sam veer helped bani V escape that prison house..and those scenes of veer getting mesmerized by bani in the moonlight😍😍..and veers comment about aurangazeb🤣🤣..the final fight was also very good

.but please you have to publish the next chapters today itself..you can't leave it at a cliffhanger like that please..I'm getting worried for veeranshu🙄.

Great Job Dude!!!

Itne serious situation pe bhi humor laate ho naa.. that is quite impressive.

I can understand the frustration of a student who struggles with history..That one was hilarious...

The way you explained the traps and how they crossed it..Uff...(In Veer's style)...amazzzing yaar....

aur wait nahi hogaa...

waiting for today's update!!

So, samika and vani escaped the jailor mayank.

With this update you've given us a little more insight into his mind but i still don't get this man.

He seems a little too wound up for me. I mean I don't get his motivation and reason for this hitlergiri!! Apni beti ke saath kre, smjh main aata hai (i mean ek haq toh hai na uska vanshika pr)..bani ke saath??

Most importantly, the thing that is kinda not letting me come to terms with both of them is that on one hand they're all parampara, pratishtha and anushasan and on the other hand they're undermining and trying to lock up adi naagin!! Bani might be their daughter, she's still adi naagin!!

So, their actions rather than seeming like of someone who's conservative and wants best of naaglok, come across as them (shreya and mayank) thinking that bani either doesn't deserve the title or that they know more than adi naagin and they know the best.

*As for me thinking that mayank could turn dhokebaaz, it was kinda on the track ki how does he know magic to trap adi naagin and why does he need it. I hope bani questions him regarding this*

Waah mere samrat, baap ki naak ke neeche se beti bhaga le gya🤣

That whole escape scene was ahmazing. Rishi and kartik are a treat to read. Though i wanna know ki ye itna magic jaante kaise hai??🤨

Mayank needs to understand that loving and respecting a person is not enough, you have to work on that love on that relationship. You need to adjust acc. The relationship because needs of every relationship are different.

That whole boat scene was soo dreamy!!😍 Uff..itv needs to learn romance from Veeranshu Singhania!!

Naag rudra seems sorted but like all he also thought that veer's ruthlessness and his savagery lies in his cheel side!! Though the very next second cheelu baby proved him wrong😆

Awwww...veer offering sandwich to bholenath.🤭 Bani, itni badi bhakt ho ye nhi pta ki baba ko mitti bhi shraddha se chadao na toh apna lete hai.

Cheelu baby, hum bhi sochte the school mai!! Fayeda kya hai ye sab jaan kr😂

Khair, that's a rant for another day.

I have a feeing that the aghori that gave the scroll to that old cheel is the same one who allowed entry to cheels in naag temple aka our very own bholenath!!😊

I loved the concept of veer walking behind bani so that his feet wouldn't burn. It's not bani's powers that make her soo strong. No, it's her faith, her vishwaas in her bholenath. She believes in him so strongly that he has to come to help her out!!!

I badly want veer to realise that it was sakshaat narayan who he had a covo with as aakesh!!😆

The chausar with real naags and vani as pawns reminded me of harry potter and the sorcerer's stone!!!👏

Jay, you ultimate coward!!

I mean even with naag mani, he just couldn't fight from the front, could he??!! What would pulling veer in accomplish. There's no way you're leaving alive outta here, and if by chance you are, it would have to be without naag mani.

Vaise bhi by the time bani and everyone else is done with you na, you'll be begging for death..

Baaki, ending on such a cliffhanger is not done yr. 😆