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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: J2lover

Makes sense actually!😊 In the show, cheels were defined evil, but their actions never justified that😆

Bani kept talking about cheelon ne bure kaam kiye hai, but woh bure kaam krte hue bss ek scene dikhaaya aaj tak!😆 Strange😆 I just didn't understand that 'insaaf ki devi' wala side of Bani. She doesn't have that strong backing story to become 'insaaf ki devi' or savior of society kind of personality.

Tumhi story is hell of iteration yrr I literally feel like am reading a novel

That ahana chachi angle was so creative! Kaha se laati ho aisi creativity Am so glad, I came across this❤️

Its as if, I don't ever want this FF to end! Its that good

Please keep continuing!❤️


Thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow wow wow...

Fantastic update...

Please continue soon...

Can't wait for your next update...

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow veer is becoming cheel. And they came to naaglok. Waiting to know how they l save Bani and vanshika. Loved it. Too too good.

God this dadi. Y did she do this. Hope they come soon back.

Loved everything..

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Posted: 4 years ago

I always got bad vibes from this dadi and now I hate her🙄🙄.bani should never come back to this prison house after this stunt.


And the vani scenes😍😍you keep giving us these small teasers which are 🔥🔥..can't wait for more vani romance in the next chapters after they are safely back in cheel mansion.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow...This is getting interesting day by day...


The scene where Veeranshu fights Jay and Bani coming and saving..

Felt goose bumps. This could have been one killer scene if the makers would have executed in the show...



“Dhabewale, zara flashback mein jaa aur yaad kar tera kya haal kiya tha maine Satyug mein.” Veer retorted.

“Abh kahani badal gayi hai. Tu marega iss baar.”

“Baat toh hai. Tu mujhe maar dega. Meri sweetheart tujhe badla lene ke liye maar degi. Phir tu marega. Uske baad sweetheart phir se wahi pagalpan karegi khud ko maar dene ki. Hum sabh phir se janam lenge. Cycle continue kar sakte hai hum sabh. I have no problem. Main same kahani dohorane ke liye humesha haazir hun. Jitni baar main apni jaaneman ko pehli baar dekhunga, utni hi baar mera uske liye pyaar badh jaayega.”


--This one really cracked me up ..when I imagined Sharad telling the dialogues..Uff...It would have been amazing.. 😊


Great going ...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Shukriya shukriya aur shukriya ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AliChase

Yaar, tumhare comment padhke maza hi aa jaata hai.

Soch lo, fir lambe lambe comment padne ki na aadat daalni padegi!!😆

Okay, on to the review!!

Sabse phele toh na, veeranshu please teach your brothers some manners. Aise hi married couple ke kamre main nhi aate!! Veer se zyada gussa ponky pr hum readers ko aaya tha!!🤣

Hmm, naagrani shreya and mayank!! Bani will have to deal with both of them as aadi-naagin, not as bani, their daughter!!

I hope they really get a lesson as good as jai did!! Esp. mayank..idk why he's not giving me good vibes!! Shreya still seems like a old traditionalist grandma who can be handled but mayank, till now he has all the makings of a dhokebaaz!! (Maybe ahead we'll see some redeeming qualities in him)

I wonder what else is mayank vrishik hiding in his pockets..magic to trap adi naagin herself. How does he knows this magic and why does he think he needs it. He defo seems a little too powerful than he's supposed to be or should be. 🤨

Maybe you'll be able to change my mind later on on this, but till now he's not in good man category. A man who bullies his own daughter and is so disrespectful of Aishwarya. Nah, i hate bullies.

Shreya kashyap needs to be taught her place. She was a naagrani, she's not one now. I hope the other important naag naagins in naaglok give her good verbal bashing. Very honestly, though out of context for the story, i would like bela to have some spine and show shreya her place. Esp. after her blunder.

*Okay, I'm gonna do it, ye baat dil main bahut time se thi... I've only watched N5 but I've seen clips of other seasons as well and although mouni roy was good, the one's that kinda pulled me in were vishaka (ch that anita played) and shesha. Are we gonna get a glimpse of 2 of them in your story..maybe..hopefully😳😛*

Aishwarya and kushal both need to stop trying to develop peace in the family and choose their sides. Show some backbone!! Kushal esp.

As for bani, i hope she doesn't let this slide. IMO, kashyap's might be her blood family but technically she's formed bonds only with vanshika and Aishwarya to some extent.

Beta bani, go the tough route and make it clear though they are family, they are still not family. You get what I'm trying to say??!!😂

Now coming to veeranshu, your veer has all the makings of a king made to rule the world. Kudos!!

Why do i think that, that eagle grip incident was the garud pankh fullfilling bani's wish. Okay, my theory is that the pankh has actually given veer his powers back and it's not maarkaat playing around. But veer is not able to feel that power because he has somewhat accepted defeat or it has gotten into his subconscious that he'll not get his powers back...khair baaki toh tamasha tumhara hai yr!! Hum toh bas dekhne aaye hai..

Shukla, itni aasaani se toh tu marne se raha. Slowly steadily, cheelu baby is coming back to his form. But before, he actually gets his powers back, he needs to realise ki veeranshu hai kon?? What exactly defines him..his powers..his love for bani.. his wings!!

That reminds me, the list that bani told to mayank..accha hua veeranshu ne nhi suna, nhi toh channe ke jaad pr chad ke baith jaata!!🤣

Bani getting jealous of naageshwari, reminds of bani getting jealous of rani!!🤣

Isse yaad aaya, what exactly would bani do if one day she had to choose between veeranshu and her duties as adi naagin. (I hope we see this arc in your story and i sincerely hope that she chooses the former).

Mayank, you're not even a mediocre level husband let alone one the calibre of veeranshu singhania, the legendary lover *naaglok main toh hai na legendary*.🤭

Now let's come to veer bani 2.0 as i like to call them, sam and vanshika #sahika or samika, whatever suits your boat!!🤣

They've got that frenemies yet best friends turned lovers thing going on and i for one liikkkee it a lott!!

Sam might have just accepted the fact that he loves vanshika, she though is yet to come to that realisation. And unlike the itv trope I'm hoping she gets a very quite, normal yet impactful realisation.

Hide and seek with daddy mayank huh...i would like to place my stakes on samika please!!😆

Aishwarya, the ever constant vani and samika shipper.


Lo and behold it happened again, you gave me an inch with that comment of yours and i took a mile!! Ho gya na ye comment bhi hadd se jyada lamba!!🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Writer madam..


kahaa ho aap..


waiting for your updates!!

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Chapter 57


“Relax, V. Mera expertise hai escape mein. Kyu tension le rahi hai. Abhi toh bas tumhare dad ke saath hide and seek khel raha hun.”

Sam moved around with Vanshika.

“Vanshika, mujhe pata tum yahi kahin ho. Abhi bahar aao.” Mayank tried warn. From the top of stairs, a song started playing. Papa jag jaayega from Housefull. Vanshika put her hand on her mouth to keep herself from laughing out at that.

Mayank quickly went up the stairs and tried to follow the sound but it kept moving. Vanshika saw a remote control in Sam’s hands. Mayank caught the jacket thinking Vanshika was under it in her snake form but turns out it was Rishi’s remote-control car.

Mayank was irritated by now. This boy had by far tried to test his patience.

“Tu haath lag mere, cheel. Tere pankhon se apna ghar nahi sajaya toh dekh le.” Mayank answered.

“Kya dekhu? Sorry, dude, mujhe ladkiyo mein interest hai.” Sam answered Mayank came down and tried to look for the voice. A smoke bomb was set off in the living room everywhere, the smell from the smoke bomb was overwhelming enough to cover their scent.

“Main bol raha hun. Abhi ke abhi saamne aa. Peeche se kya waar kar rahe ho.” Mayank challenged.

“Arrey, daddyji, kuch bhi bol rahe ho? Kabhi suna hai cheel samne se waar karte hai? Nah. Cheel asmaan se hamla karte hai. Sudden ambush.” Sam answered.

Mayank was getting enraged with this chase game. He changed into his snake form and used the heat vision to find where Sam was. He saw another warm-blooded body around. That was confusing. There were two people? The problem with heat vision was that he couldn’t see faces. It only sensed body heat. Naag-Naagins didn’t show up on the heat vision. They were cold-blooded like their animal counterparts. Hence, they can’t bear much cold.

“Daddyji, kahan. Iss taraf.” Sam shouted. Mayank slithered up behind that voice. Someone grabbed him by the tail and pulled back. Mayank switched off the heat vision to see Rishi and Kartik running off. Another smoke bomb had been set off. Mayank switched on his heat vision again and now he couldn’t sense the heat body in the same place. They ran off to some other place. Mayank hissed loudly in anger.

“Dad tumhe maar hi daalenge.” Vanshika was panicking.

“V, shut up, yaar.” Sam shut her up.

Mayank sensed heat body on the floor above and slithered up there. Veer had managed to get Bani out of the room and took her with him. Once again someone pulled him by the tail. Mayank hissed wildly. But he heard hissing back. The whole trap worked. Rishi and Kartik trapped in a snake catcher bag.

“Rishi, Kartik…” Mayank hissed.

Veer grabbed Bani’s hand. The two started running while Mayank was freeing himself.

“Kon hai?” Mayank demanded. He tried to recognize the scent but the Veer had put on a bit too much perfume to let Mayank smell his original scent. Mayank tried to follow them but then He smelled Sam’s scent with Vanshika’s.

“Vanshika…” He called out. In that process, he clashed against someone.

“Ouch!! Mayank, pagal ho gaye ho kya?” Amar shouted at Mayank.

“Amar, hat. Woh cheel ladka hai yahan.” Mayank pushed away Amar and tried to run behind the scent.

While Mayank was behind Sam and Vanshika, Veer and Bani escaped through the door. Rishi and Kartik had found a way to cut through Mayank’s magic. Veer had removed the bel leaves from the door while Mayank was running around looking for Sam.

“Change into your snake form.” Sam told Vanshika. Vanshika did that and coiled around Sam.

Sam changed into his cheel form and flew out of the hiding spot, almost knocking out Mayank in the way. Mayank couldn’t catch Sam in the way with speed he flew out. Mayank ran outside to try and catch them. In that way, he saw Veer running off with Bani. They had already crossed the river ahead of the Kashyap Family property. While Mayank went out to try and catch Sam and Vanshika, his magic lock on the house was cut. Rishi and Kartik were quick to make their escape then.

Mayank was left fuming that. The Singhania brothers had gone off with Bani and Vanshika from right under his nose. Aishwarya slowly showed up with Amar. Aishwarya broke into laughter.

“Bola tha tumse. Yeh cheel aya tha Naaglok mein. Abhi main hallucinate kar raha hun?” Mayank asked.

“Aur maine bhi kaha tha ki tum unse nahi jeet paaoge. He’s an escape artist since his childhood. Bachpan se hi use situations se nikalna aata hai. Chod do, Mayank. Baccho ko jitna zyaada kaske apne se bandh ke rakhne ki koshish karoge woh utna hi rebel karenge. Just because you made them does not mean you can dictate what they want.” Aishwarya told him, patting his shoulder.

“Woh tumhari beti ko leke bhaag gaya. Tumhe gussa nahi aa raha hai?” He asked her.

“Agar Vanshika ko nahi jaana hota toh majal hai ki koi cheel use le jaa pata. Itni der aise hide and seek nahi khelti tumhare saath, Mayank. She wanted to leave and she left. She will come back jab uska kaam ho jaayega. Hum sabh ke liye accha hoga agar hum unhe disturb na kare. Kisi kaam se hi Bani unhe yahan laayi hai. All you need to do is trust her with her decision. Bani ne humesha sahi decisions liye hai. Aage bhi sahi decisions legi. Adi-Naagin hai woh, Mayank. Hum sabh se zyaada use pata hai ki kya karna hai iss situation mein. Why don’t you just leave it to her?”

“Sar pe bitha ke rakha tha Vanshika ko aur abh aise saare rules todte hue aise bhaag gayi.”

“Listen, mujhe parenting kaise karte hai. Yeh mat sikhao. Baap hone ka ehsaas hi tumne use kabh diya hai. Hitler ki tarah jailor banoge toh jailor ki tarah hi treat karegi tumhe. Main uski maa hun. Uski jailor nahi. Use iss baat ka ehsaas dilaya hai ki woh khud apne life decisions le sakti hai. Instead of trying to force my decisions down her throat, I have tried to give her the freedom to choose for herself while letting her know ki chahe kuch bhi ho, main humesha uske saath hun. Har dard uske saath bata hai, har smile uske saath bati hai. Har Khushi mein uske saath khadi rahi hun. Aur har heartbreak par use apna pyaar diya hai. Isiliye mujhe maa hone ki respect, care aur affection deti. Agar tumse baatein chupati hai toh isiliye hai kyuki papa banne ki jagah tum Hilter ho. I don’t want my daughter to hide stuff from me. Accha ho ya bura, I have given her freedom enough that she can share everything with me. Jab galti kiya toh usse daanta hai. Par jab sahi kiya hai toh uska saath bhi diya hai.”

“Saath diya hai? Isiliye toh Naagrani ko tumhe bhi Naaglok mein rehne ka order dena pada.”

“Mayank, na toh tumne kabhi use dad banne ki koshish ki hai aur na hi kabhi ban paaoge. Kyuki you just do not have it in you. Tumhe aata hi nahi hai rishte sambhalna. Ek Rishta toh tumse sambhala nahi gaya, uske saath kya Rishta nibhaoge? Jis ladke ki tum baat kar rahe ho, woh ladka bachpan se Vanshika ke aas paas raha hai. Agar tum pure naaglok mein se chaan kar bhi koi ladka dhundhoge na tabhi unmein se koi bhi Vanshika ko itna nahi samajh paayega jitna woh ladka samajhta hai. Do log ek dusre ko samajhne lage toh Rishta banta hai.”

“Maine koshish nahi ki? Tumne kabhi uss effort ko dekha hi nahi.”

“Sahi toh hai. It is my fault to have high expectations of you, Mayank. Galti meri hi hai. I don’t blame you.”

Aishwarya went back into the house. Amar walked up behind her. Mayank just stood there. Every time she walked away from him, it would break him a little more. He just wanted to be with her but she just wouldn’t let him try and be her other half. He remember when the two were just in love with each other. It was really well. Four years of their marriage was well. It was after those four years that things started to go downhill. Sheshnaag vansh and Takshak Vansh were different from each other. They were different. For four years Aishwarya tried to put aside the differences but they just couldn’t accept her the way she was. They couldn’t accept her career as a doctor among humans. First it was her modern mentality that bothered his family. Then it was her casual-ness with humans. Then it was her career. The way they questioned her parenting was the final straw for her. Over the years, while he was still in love with him, she had developed bitterness.

Aishwarya Kashyap was way too high class to express her bitterness and spill out venom at every instance. She would simply grow ice cold and uncaring. She doesn’t shout or cause a scene, she’ll walk past you like you’re not even worth a glance. They had crossed paths several other time but she would just walk past him like she didn’t even know him.

“Kuch rishton ko waqt rehte sambhalna chahiye hota hai. Warna aur bure ho sakte hai.” Kushal showed up. Mayank looked at him and chuckled. Aishwarya loved her father a lot. They could hardly be a thing she wouldn’t tell her father. She was her father’s favourite child and she lived like a Princess.

“Kya yeh sochna ki meri beti meri baat sune aur samjhe yeh galat hai?”

“Beti ko agar Naag banke samajhne ki koshish karoge toh kaise samjhoge, Mayank? Beti ko papa banke samajhna padta hai. Shreya bhi yahi karti hai. Apne baccho ko Naagrani banke dekhti hai. Usi tarah behave karti hai unke saath isiliye sabh usse aise hi behave karte hai. Amar aur Aishwarya use Naagrani ki tarah treat karte hai, maa ki tarah nahi. Naag banke mat dekho, Mayank. Pita banke dekho.”

After a flying away at a long distance, Sam landed. He put down Vanshika. They were soon joined by Veer, Bani, Rishi and Kartik.

“Tum kya pahado mein exercise karte the kya?” Bani asked Sam.

“Excuse me.” Veer reminded her that he was very much still there.

“Well, if you consider having to fly up and down and climb around the mountains exercise, yes.” Sam answered.

“Tabhi main sochun. You match Eros.”

“Uff… thank you. Mera dil khush ho gaya kisi ne toh kaha that I’m like cupid.”

“Of course…”

Veer cleared his throat.

“Veer bhai, jalo mat. Abh main hot hun toh main kya karun?”

Veer picked up a stone and threw it in Sam’s way. Sam laughed as he ducked it.

“Shirt pehen tu pehle, saale.” Veer told him.

“Kya problem hai? V ki barso purani iccha puri ho rahi hai…” Kartik commented.

“Excuse me, what?” Vanshika demanded. Kartik was fast enough to run and hide behind Bani. “Nahi. Saamne aake bol na. Bani ke peeche mat chup.”

Kartik started running around with Vanshika behind him. Veer laughed.

“Bas kar, V. Kyu bacche ko sach bolne ke liye maar rahi hai?” Bani asked.

“Bani, bakwaas mat kar. As if duniya mein aur koi hot ladke nahi hai ki main Samrat Singhania par mari jaau?”

“Accha?? Not too long ago, tumne almost apne dad ke samne keh diya tha ki Sam is -” Vanshika put a hand on Bani’s mouth.

“Excuse me. Please do beheno ke beech ki baat kisi aur ko nahi pata chal sakti hai. Please sibling code.”

“Well, aapki shirt ya jacket toh nahi utha paaye but we managed to get your shoes.” Rishi threw Sam his shoes.

“Works. Extra clothes toh hum le hi aaye the.” Sam answered. He quickly wore the shoes. Veer passed him a shirt from the bag. Sam wore the shirt.

The six sat down. Sam and Veer drank some water.

“Coming to the track. Abhi we have to still find the naagpash. Hume jo pata hai woh yeh hai ki last toh Vasuki vansh ke Naagraj Vardhan ke paas thi. That was some crazy long ago. Abh use kahan chupaya hai, no one knows.” Bani pointed out.

“Plan kya hai?”

“Quite definitely, Jay ne humare peeche kisi ko lagaya hoga. So, we have to be very careful. Abhi humare paas 36 hours hai. In 36 hours, we have to find it and return back up.”

“Theek hai.”

“Abhi baat yeh hai. Jaise sapera baba ne kaha ki woh Vasuki Naagraj Vardhan ke paas tha. Sheshnaag ghati ke baad hi hai Vasuki naagvansh ki ghati. But beech mein nadi hai jise cross karna hai.” Bani explained as she led them ahead. “Maine Vasuki naagvansh ke Naagraj se baat kiya hai. Unhone mujhe bataya ki wahan ghati mein ek gufa hai. He thinks ki ho sakta hai ki wahan rakha ho. But aaj tak jisne bhi wahan pohochne ki koshish ki hai, woh bacha nahi.”

She led them all ahead and they finally reached the bank of the river. Rishi, Kartik, Vanshika and Sam sat in one boat and it went ahead. Bani and Veer sat in the second boat. Sitting across each other. It was night by the time and moon light was flashing over the river. Veer had to admit, Naaglok was a beauty of nature itself. Even with the amount of snake, it was a bounty of nature. Veer had seen waterfalls in the cheel caves and they were beautiful sight in the otherwise rather gothic designs of the caves. Naaglok was just nature’s beauty. Rivers seemed almost untouched by any kind of impurity.

Veer looked at Bani. She was busy thinking about ahead. The moon’s soft silver light flashed on her. She was in her Naagin human form. Her jewellery flashing softly against the moonlight. Her blue eyes were looking at the waters, deep in thought. Every inch of her was more beautiful the beauty of nature she was sitting around in. The air caressed her hair softly, making it blow. He could just look at her the whole day and not be tired of it. Air over the river was cool. Veer looked at his wrist. The rune might still work. He just sat there. The wind moved the branches nearby and the flowers on the fell over her. It brought her out of the thoughts. She started to removed the flowers from her hair and small water droplets over the trees, fell on her. She squinched her. Veer had no idea how she could manage to look so graceful all the time. She wiped off the droplets that fell on her face and arms. When she was doing that, the leaves fell over her. She looked up at him.

“Yeh tum kar rahe ho kya?” Bani asked him.

“Main kya karun? Tum bas itni acchi lag rahi ho. Socha thode se phool tum pe acche lagenge par phool tumne hata diye.”

“Veeranshu…” She said his name with smile. It made him smile. Veer dipped his hand in the river and splashed water on her. “Veeranshu…” She complained cutely. Veer laughed. She couldn’t help the smile. She splashed water over him. The two laughed as they played together.

“Acha abh bas karo. Bheeg jaayege dono.” Bani told him chuckling.

Veer always thought of himself as the King of the World. He didn’t let anyone treat him otherwise. He was born like that, he was brought by his father like that and hence lived like that. He didn’t see anyone above him. He treated himself like he was walking demigod. He walked like one and behaved like one. Majorly, he had always compared himself to Ares. Violent, a little too out of control, someone who enjoy fights challenges and winning, a little too arrogant, majorly only caring about himself, believing himself to be the best and someone who liked to win by hook or by crook, on the verge of being an alcoholic, vain and someone who enjoyed his popularity. Yet, he worshipped the goddess before him. He was sure that she was his better half. Or maybe his more controlled half. If they were two halves, he was sure Bani was the better half. It couldn’t be possible that he was better than her. No. She was too perfect to be bested by anyone. Even himself who he considered to be the best. He never bowed down and prayed before God but he had no qualms over bending to her will. She didn’t need to try and hypnotize him, all she had to do was say it and Veer would do it in a heartbeat.

They reached the other side. Bani got out of the boat first. Veer was behind her. Bani’s foot slipped. Veer caught her before she would fall. Bani instantly remembered at the mountain house moment when he had caught her from falling. It was a different feeling to be in his arms. She just looked into his eyes. Veer picked her up and went up.

Bani should have told him to put her down but she was little too lost in his eyes. His eyes were magnetic as his attitude. Bani had never been one to fall in love with bad boys but she fell hard for Veer. She didn’t know when his habits had started to get to her heart.

“Waise di abhi chal sakti hai.” Rishi commented as he walked ahead. That brought her back to reality.

“Neeche utaro.” Bani told him. Veer sighed in complaint but put her down. Bani blushed and went ahead.

“Iss duniya ke saare bhai ek jaise hote hai. Kebab mein haddi. Accha romantic moment ho raha tha aur tumne disturb kar diya. Ek ghar pe mere bhai hai aur yahan tum dono.” Veer complained.

“Kya? I was just reminding.” Rishi defended himself.

“Haan, pata hai. Bohot acche se pata hai ki kitna remind kar rahe the.” Veer commented dryly. Once they crossed the banks, Bani saw Naagraj of Vasuki Naagvansh. Bani greeted him respectfully. He greeted her and bowed down slightly.

“Vasuki naagvanshi ghati mein aapka swagat hai, Adi-Naagin. Mujhe Khushi hui ki hum aapki madad kar paa rahe hai.” Naagraj smiled at her. Bani smiled back.

“I’m sorry ki aise short notice pe main aise aayi hun. I’m aware ki aapke liye thoda sa mushkil hoga aise accept karna ki yahan do cheel hai.”

“Aapne agar socha toh sahi hi hoga. Aapne pehle hi iss baat ka aashwasan de diya hai hume kia ap cheelon ki zimmedari le rahi hai.”

“Thank you. Aap agar aise humare saath co-operate nahi karte toh humare liye bohot hi mushkil ho jaata.”

“Aap Adi-Naagin. Yeh toh hume karna hi tha.”

Naagraj’s eyes fell on Veer. He had heard of Veer before. Even the cheels themselves were known to be scared of Veer. When Jay was gathering people to try and rally with him to get Bani to leave Veer, Naagraj Rudra had refused to be a part of it out of his loyalty to Sheshnaag vansh’s Naagrani Bela and Adi Naagin. Just as how Sheshnaag and Vasuki would always back each other. Naagraj Rudra of Vasuki Naagvansh was sure to always back Bani.

“Yeh hai Veeranshu. Samrat.” Bani introduced. Veer nodded his head as an acknowledgement. Rudra laughed.

“Toh jo cheel Rajkumar ke baare mein suna hai woh sahi hai. Abhi cheel nahi ho.” Rudra commented.

“Mujhse cheel banne ki shakti cheen sakta hai par mujhmein se cheel ko nahi hata sakta. Woh khoon se aata hai.” Veer answered. Rudra laughed again but didn’t add anything.

He took them ahead towards the rumoured caves.

“Ek baat hai, Adi-Naagin. Aaj tak koi naag-naagin andar jaa nahi paaya hai. Kayio ne koshish ki hai.” Rudra told her. “Koi bhi zinda wapas nahi aaya hai.”

“Try hi kar sakte hai, Naagraj.” Bani hoped.

That was said and suddenly they found themselves attacked by a group of naag-naagins.

“Pata tha.” Bani exclaimed. She changed into her naagin form. There were several naags against. Vanshika, Bani, Rishi, Kartik and Rudra went on fighting them. Sam and Veer just stood back. It was amusing to them.

“Tum dono wahan khade khade tamasha dekh rahe ho?” Vanshika asked in disbelief.

“Abh dekho, hum kuch kare toh hum par naam nahi aana chahiye ki cheel yahan naaglok aake naagon ko maar rahe hai.” Veer commented.

“But agar tumne kuch nahi kiya toh sabh marenge.” Bani commented.

“Alright then. Hato.” Veer pulled out one of the daggers.

“Kya tum akele deal karoge inn sabse?” Bani asked.

“Sweetheart, yeh sabh tumhare Adi-Naag jaise nahi hai. Adi-Naag mein thoda dum hai. Yeh sabh chuze hai.” Veer commented.

Veer moved ahead of them and faced the ones who had come to fight them.

“Aaa dekhe zara kisme kitna hai dum…” Veer started singing.

The naags started attacking him, Veer had started to fight them. Rudra, in that moment, realized why Veer was a dangerous foe. He was fast and quick in his attacks. He’d stab one of the naag and quickly move to another one. He didn’t attack wherever pleased. No, he went for vital organs. The dagger went down till the end into the person. It was his speed. The eagle speed. He was someone who tore through the person. He didn’t just stab them, it is as if he’s tearing through them. A typical eagle like attack. To heal it was a difficult task. More so when it is nicely coated with poisons that are found in vultures. His reflexes were fast. He dodged through the attacks from the naags quickly.

Veer didn’t fight like Bani. No, he fought in his own savage way. The cheel-ness in him is visible in how he fights. When Veer starts fighting, it gets dirty. He attacks viciously like a cheel. It’s a death blow. One stab is easy to heal but when they’re stabbed in various places that viciously, it is a bit too bloody. Veer didn’t have his cheel powers or else he’d have kicked them against the wall of the cave and broken their spine. Even as a human what gave Veer an edge was he still knew where naag-naagins are and where to attack them. He knew their strength and weaknesses. He uses them to his complete advantage.

“Yeh insaan hote hue yeh kar sakta?” Rudra asked in surprised. He then turned to Sam who just sat there. “Tum toh abhi cheel ho. Apne bhai ki madad nahi karoge?”

“Veer bhai apne romance, fight, manmarzi aur orders mein kisi ki interference pasand nahi karte. Especially at this mood. Meri jaan nikal denge.” Sam laughed. “Waise bhi agar laga ki bhai ko meri zaroorat hai toh main join kar lunga. Abhi toh tum tamasha dekho.”

He pulled out a sandwich and started eating it.

“Uss din Jay ke saath fight mein bhi Veer bohot hurt ho gaya tha.” Bani reminded.

“Bhabhi, Adi-Naag aur uske chuzo mein fark hoga. Even if he’s dhabewala, hai toh Adi-Naag. Thoda dam zyaada hai usmein. Yeh sabh abhi bacche hai. Bechare chale aaye marne.” Sam answered casually.

“Abe, sabh akele mat khana.” Veer reminded him between his fight.

“Hai, bhai, aapka khana rakha hua hai.”

10 minutes later, Veer was done dealing with them. Veer felt a bit irritated with the blood on his jacket.

“Kahin saaf paani hai? I’d like wash off this…” Veer said.

“Yahan paas mein Mandir hai Bholenath ka. Wahan mil jaayega.” Rudra suggested.

“Theek hai wahan chalte hai.”

The group walked out of the caves and went to the temple of Shiva. Bani joined her hands before the Shivling. Veer cleaned the blood off his jacket outside, washing it off his hands, legs and face. He walked into the temple. Bani and Rudra both were praying to him. Sam decided to try and meditate for a while.

Veer had always found this habit of his brother’s a little odd. He had noticed that Sam had developed it since he went towards the Himalayas. It did help him stay calm a lot. While he put the spiritual benefits aside, it seemed to have made him a little religious over other Singhania.

“Ghurna band karo.” Sam told his brother.

“Aankhen band hai toh kaise pata chal raha hai? Acche se concentrate kar, chote.”

“I can feel you staring at me, Veer bhai. Main kya aapko baba dikhta hun ki puri tarah concentrate kar paau?”

“Why do you do this?”

“Meditate? Help karti hai mujhe. It helps me control my ability to sense danger. Pehle sirf sense kar paata tha abh develop hoke visions mein dikhta hai. Bachpan mein visions aate the. I had seen badi maa attacked by naag-naagins. It was quite traumatizing aur uske baad kabhi visions nahi aaye but I could sense danger. To know that what I saw was a insight into future. I hated myself for seeing it and thought that I did it. Took a while but dheere dheere uss feeling se free ho paya hun. I guess a lot of it was from meditating. So… bas isiliye.”

Veer left one of the sandwiches on the plate where fruits were kept. They were put as prasad for him.

“Veeranshu, yeh sandwich yahan kyu rakha hai?” Bani asked him.

“Kyu? Tumhare Bholenath sandwich nahi khate kya?”

“Tum seriously unhe sandwich Chadha rahe ho?”

“Arrey problem kya hai? Aghori baba toh humara kiya hua shikaar bhi Chadha dete hai. Toh yeh phir bhi veg sandwich hai.”

Veer just shrugged his shoulders.

“Ajeeb ho tum.” Rudra commented.

“Relax, dude. Agar unhe accha nahi laga toh sorry but mere paas koi fruits nahi hai. If he doesn’t mind junk food, I’ll replace the sandwich with junk food. No problems.”

“Please. Use ignore karo. Pagal hai.” Bani told Rudra.

Veer just shrugged his shoulders.

After they ate something, all of them returned to the caves. They saw a large snake protecting the doorway. It hissed violently at the sight of the six. Bani turned into her snake form and turned as large as the snake itself. As soon as the snake saw the blue black markings over her, proving her as Adi-Naagin, the snake moved aside.

They entered ahead. It was kind of a temple itself. Statues of snakes everywhere. Veer saw a certain marking around the whole place. It was extremely familiar to him. Bani was about step ahead but Sam stopped.

“Ek minute.” He pulled her behind.

Sam picked up the fruit he took from the temple and threw it ahead. The fruit was hacked right off the middle clean. Bani stumbled a bit. Sam had rolled the apple but it started floating in the air. Almost flying up.

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Chapter 58


Veer touched the marking trying to remember where he had seen it last.

“Veer baba, aapke liye koi aaya hai.” Ramesha kaka called him while he was sitting around his brothers. All of them trying to pass their exams. Even as a fifteen-year-old, Veer had the same walk.

“Kon hai, kaka? Ek toh mujhse yeh history yaad nahi kiya jaa raha. Saala Aurangzeb ne kahan se kahan tak raj kiya iska main kya karun?” Veer exclaimed irritatedly. “Khud toh mar gaya saala hume marne ke baad bhi torture kar raha hai.”

Sam laughed at that. Throwing the history textbook on the dining table irritatedly, Veer walked ahead to the gate. Veer saw an old man. Well, he was a cheel. He looked old indicating that he was actually really old. Must have lived for around 200 years. He looked damn fragile. Veer sighed.

“Kaka, kuch pani aur khaane ko le aao. Dekhke lag raha hai yahin marr jaayenge.” Veer told Ramesh kaka. Ramesh kaka nodded and left. “Kon ho, bhai? Dekho koi problem hai toh baad mein aana abhi zara Aurangzeb apna mukadma chala raha hai mere dimaag mein.”

“Aapko kuch batana tha.” He requested, almost shaking.

“Abe… Calm down. Thoda saans le le.” Veer held him and made him sit on a chair. “Arrey dada, kisi aur ko bhej diya hota. Kyu khud chale aaye? Waise hi halat tight ho rakhi hai. Saans ki hi tangi lag rahi aapke body mein. Saans le lo pehle.”

“Yeh aapke liye hai. Kisi aur ko mat dena. Sirf aap hi ise padh sakte hai.” The old man gave him a scroll.

“Scroll dene itne dur chale aaye? Kamaal hai aap bhi.” Veer opened the scroll and saw a marking. He was confused. It seemed like an old scroll. It seemed to show a temple with some traps in the temple.

“Prince of Persia kind of video games ke liye abhi time nahi hai, dada. Exams aa rahe hai. Pass nahi hua toh Tapish bhai mujhe kaccha kha jaayenge. Bahar jaana band ho jaayega mera.” He complained.

“Yeh zaroori hai, Rajkumar.” The man insisted. Ramesh kaka gave him some food and water. The man seemed starving enough to eat in a hurry. Veer laughed at how the man ate the food.

“Aaram se, dada. Murga kat ke biriyani ban chuka hai. Kahi bhaag nahi jaayega. Dheere dheere khao. Pata chala nivala gale mein aur jaan hawa mein.” Veer laughed and looked at the scroll.

“Yeh sirf cheel Rajkumar ke liye hai. Kisi aur ko na dikhe iss baat ka khyal rakhiye. 300 saal se maine isko bacha ke rakha hai. Aapke liye.”

“Mere liye?”

“Mere pariwaar ko ek aghori ne bataya tha ki ek Rajkumar aayega jise mujhe yeh dena hai. Who Rajkumar baccha hoke bhi taaj pehnega. Sirf use hi yeh dena hai.”

“Dada, main baccha thodi na hun. 15 saal ka hun.”

“Veer baba, unki umar ke hisaab se toh aap bacche hi hai.” Ramesh kaka pointed out. Veer gave him a look.

“Kara do bezzati meri.” Veer taunted. Ramesh kaka looked away but the smile didn’t go away. “Has lo. Mera bhi din aayega.”

“Veer baba, din kya raat bhi aap hi ki. Aap Veer baba hai humare. Sabh kuch aapka hi hai.” Ramesh kaka teased.

“Haan. Theek hai bas aap jaao.” Veer shook his head. If this man hadn’t been his butler since childhood, Veer would have already kicked him out for trying to taunt him. None of the other house staff would dare to do that. Regardless, Veer loved the man.

“Shiv mandir hair. Iss mandir ke teen zaroori hisse hai. Pehla hai verandah. Isse paar karne ke liye tezi, soch aur santulan ki zaroorat hai. Kayi tarah ke chaaku aur patthar hawa mein jhulenge jinki dhaar bohot teez hai. Dekhke paar nahi kiya toh sar kat jaayenge. Dusra hai seedhiya. Koile ki tarah jalti hui seedhiyan. Inhe paar karne ke liye himmat aur sehenshakti ki zaroorat hoti hai. Teesra hai Sarp jaal. Chausar ka bichauna hai. Use khelke aur jeet ke hi aage badh sakte hai. Uske baad hi anth tak pohoch sakte hai.”

“Dada, thank you ki aap itne dur se aaye iss Prince of Persia paper version dene ke liye. Thoda araam kariye. Iski fikar mat kijiye. Jaise aapne kaha hai waise ise sirf main hi rakhunga. Abh main apne Aurangzeb ke paas lautu? Kal fail hua toh Tapish sach mein mujhe maar denge. Pichle do history ke exam mein bas passing marks aaye hai. Woh bhi aage waale se chaap ke. Iss baar better nahi hua toh meri maiyyad nikal jaayegi. Daksh toh hai chugli karne wala. 2 saal tak yaad dilayega Tapish bhai ko ki main fail ho gaya.”

“Ruko.” Veer told them. They all looked at Veer.

“Kya hua?” Bani asked.

“Tum sabh yahin ruko. Main jaata hun. I think I know how to cross this.” Veer told him. Veer tried to think of way how to cross the invisible trap. He knew there were blades swinging but how would he see them?

“Akele jaaoge? Toh hum sabh yahan baithke kya kare?” Bani asked him.

“Bani, I know the traps that are set in there.” Veer told her. Everyone was shocked.

“Tumhe kaise pata ho sakta hai? Pure naagvansh mein kisi ko nahi pata.” Rudra asked.

“Well, kisi aghori ko inn traps ke baare mein pata tha. He had mapped it out on a scroll. Uss scroll ko ek cheel ke haath diya tha use safekeeping ke liye aur kaha ki mujhe de. Usi cheel ne bataya mujhe.” Veer answered.

“Jo bhi hai. Main tumhe akele nahi jaane de raha.” Bani made it clear.

“Rishi, Kartik, smoke bomb hai abhi?” Veer asked.

“Haan.” They gave him a smoke bomb. He set it off in the long passageway. They could see invisible blade cutting through the smoke. Veer could see exactly where the blade were and at what interval they hacked through stuff. It was fast. Clearly no snake could slither that fast. It needed someone who was good had acrobatics. No one other than cheels could go that fast with acrobatics. Aerial acrobatics were their thing. Especially Veer’s. He was the one to do that kind of stunts.

“Samajh mein aaya. Tum naag ise paar nahi kar paaoge. You don’t have that speed. Only cheels do. This is almost like flying through the air. Kisi bhi naag ke bas ki baat nahi hai. Only cheels know how to fly through the stuff with dodging the blades. We can’t even see the blades.” Veer tried tell Bani.

“Veeranshu, pagal ho kya? Tumhe akele jaane dun?” Bani asked.

Some blades spinned and some went back and forth. Veer had enough of flying expertise to manage getting through it.

“Bani, don’t be foolish. You can’t possibly know how to fly.”

“Woh mujhe nahi pata. But main tumhe akele nahi jaane de rahi.”

Veer sighed. If he was adamant then so was she.

“Fine. Ek kaam karo, naag bano and coil up around me.”

Bani did so.

“Veer bhai, I just saw Jay sending more of naag behind us. Aap aur Bhabhi aage jaao. Hum sabh unhe yahan rokte hai.” Sam suggested.

“Theek hai.” Veer nodded.

Veer floated up in the at the moment he stepped ahead. He was disbalanced and barely missed the blade. He felt as if he had forgotten how to fly. When he lost his wings, he almost lost himself. The pain and the heartbreak weighed him so much that he forgot how to balance himself. He was floating in the air like a broken paper kite. No control on the flight. Veer felt irritated. The blade cut his arm.

“Aaahh…” He exclaimed. Bani’s snake head peaked up in worry but Veer pushed it back inside his jacket. “Stay put, Bani.” Veer told her. He balanced himself in a safe place. Blades going back and forth next to him.

Veer took a deep breath and calmed himself. He closed his eyes. To fly, one has to let go off the burden that weighs them down and makes one heavier. The disappointment of losing against Markaat was weighing him down. The taste of defeat.

His ego weighed him down from being able to be free. The pain of the loss of his cheel powers. The sudden question at himself as to who he was if he wasn’t a cheel. All of them were weighing him down. He no longer felt like the free bird that never carried weight. All the time before, he was a free bird. He never let his past weigh him down and make an impact on his present but this had weighed him.

Veer closed his eyes. With each exhale, he decided to let go off the pain. If he didn’t have wings. Then so be it. Its alright. He didn’t have wings. He would still love the sky. A bird caged in a golden cage doesn’t carry bitterness against the sky for being unable to spread its wings. It still carries that undying love for the sky. Veer thought of the sky. The feeling of flying through the air as he remembered. His first love. Flying. The taste of freedom. Being so free. The love of the sky. He tried to remember that feeling of air brushing through him. The wind coursing through his wings. Free from any attachment that keeps you tied. The gliding. The rush of speed. The fast cut turns.

“Yeh chota sa eagle bhi tumhari tarah hai. Bas abhi abhi toh it has realized how the running air feels like. Udna seekha hi nahi hai. There is a pull of the wind which picks on the inside avian soul of his but the fears and inhibition grabs him. Pankh hai par udna nahi aata. Tumhara bhi same hai. You know that you can fly and set yourself free but you’re too scared to do that.” Veer remembered that he had once told Bani that. Trying to teach her how to fly. To let go off things that scared her. Now he himself had forgotten how to fly.

“All it takes to fly is a leap of faith.”

Veer opened his eyes and let himself imagine having his wings backs. Going left and right, dodging the blades, making swift turns, Veer managed to cross the corridor. The moment he crossed it, he fell down.

“Uff… bas thodi der ude aur phir gir gaye.” Veer teased. Bani returned to her human.

“Oh my god!!” Bani exclaimed. Bani hugged him tightly in excitement. “Mujhe almost laga ek point pe ki bas khatam. Tumse nahi hoga.”

“Excuse me. Itna bhi underestimate mat karo.”

“Tum almost bhul gaye the ki kaise udte hai.”

Veer gave her a smile. “I never thought that what I advised you would have to come back to me. Remember pahadi pe I took you to the eagle’s first flight? Same thing. Bas I let go off the worry that maybe I’ll never find my wings anymore. Abh nahi aaye toh nahi par udna seekh liya hai. All it takes is a leap of faith to fly.”

“Veeranshu Singhania aur philosophical baatein kuch match nahi karta.” Bani teased. He laughed. The two went ahead. There were steps leading ahead.

“Bani, these steps are burning hot. We can’t cross it without shoes. Aur shoes pehenke andar nahi jaa sakte kyuki mandir hai.” Veer told her.

“Mandir?” Bani asked.

“Haan. Yeh koi purana mandir hai. Shiv mandir koi.”

Veer put an aluminium foil, in which he had earlier put the sandwich in, on the step and it burnt black instantly. Veer took a deep breath. If it too burning feet to win, he’d do that. He put his foot but it burnt so harshly that Veer had to step back. He kept trying but he couldn’t move ahead. The burn was too bad to try. But every time he put a foot. The mark would appear and it wouldn’t burn on that step. In exactly a minute, the mark would disappear and would get back to burning the sole away.

Bani stopped him. “Veeranshu.” Bani pulled him back.

“Bani, pagal ho kya? Pair jal jaayenge tumhare. I don’t want you to burn your feet. Its fine if I burn my feet. Its alright. Ek kaam karo. Tum mujhe dekhte rehna. Main tumhe dekhte rahunga. Jalan pata hi nahi chalegi.” Veer suggested. He tried to walk up ahead while looking into Bani’s eyes but yet it burned harshly. Tears almost formed in his eyes. Bani pulled him back. She made him sit and healed his feet. “Aaaahhh…” He winced.

“Kyu? Bade Romeo ban rahe the.” Bani taunted him.

Bani turned around. She joined her. If her faith on her devotion was true, she’d get through this. Veer wasn’t someone who backed out with a bit of pain. Veer had a high pain tolerance generally with his own violent nature. His determination to win was stronger than pain but if it burned him, this was no ordinary heat.

“Bholenath, aap par yakeen karte hue aage badh rahe hai. Jo bhi ho, mujhe sweekar hai.” Bani prayed. Bani put her foot on the step. It was hot and burnt slightly but not bad. She thought of her greatest strength. Her devotion to her God. He was her savior and her god. He’d be the one to help her cross the path ahead.

Veer was shocked. Veer put his foot exactly on the mark that was left from Bani’s foot. Naturally, her foot was smaller and the edged still burned but he could bear that. Bani just walked up. Not even a word of complaint.

“Aakesh, kabhi kabhi aise raste aate hai jeevan mein jahan hume apna rasta banane ke jagah pe kisi aur ke dikhaye raste pe chalna hota hai. Bas uske peeche chalte raho. Awashyak nahi hai ki humesha tum hi aage chalo aur humesha tum hi rasta banao. Kisi aur ko rasta dikhane do. Roshni ka matlab hi yeh hai ki tum akele nahi ho. Saath hai koi. Jab tumhara rasta tumhe jala raha ho to kisi aur ke dikhaye raste pe chalo. Wahi tumhe bacha sakta hai.” Veer suddenly remembered the man by the temple telling him.

When he saw Bani walking ahead, he remembered that. Had the man already known this? But how could he have known what was supposed to happen now? Maybe he had just said it as a piece of advice.

Once they crossed the stairs, Veer checked her feet if they were burnt badly. To his surprised it wasn’t that bad. A bit of burns, yes, not as bad as his had been earlier.

“Shayad tumhare Bholenath ko tum zyaada pasand ho. Tabhi mere pair jal gaye but tumhare nahi jale.” Veer teased her.

“Baat vishwas ki hai. Tumne hi kaha tha ki yeh Bholenath ka mandir hai. Toh unke mandir mein unhe yaad karke aage jaayenge toh kaise pair jalenge. Also, shayad jitna tum vishwas karte ho usse bohot zyaada vishwas mujhe hai. Utna vishwas unhe mujhepar hai ki main sahi hun. Bas.”

The two reached the final stage. The chess board was placed there.

“Aaah… itne waqt baad koi aaya hai yaha.” There was a hissing voice. “Aaj lagta hai khana mil hi jaayega.”

“Kon ho tum? Saamne aao.” Bani demanded. A giant half snake and half man showed up.

“Naag? Bani, zara isse bhi bata do tum Adi-Naagin ho. Musibat hi khatam. Aage chale jaa sakte hai.” Veer told Bani.

“Adi-Naagin ho ya Adi-Shesh. Kisi ko aage jaane ki ijazat nahi hai jab tak mujhe chausar mein na hara de.”

“Yeh bohot zyaada ho gaya, babe. Adi-Sheshnaag ko tum rokogi? Aise badi badi baatein main bhi nahi karta.”

“Tum apna muh band rakho.”

“Tch tch tch…” He made that clicking noise to her. “Tumhe problem kya mere bolne se? Bhagwaan ne muh diya aur azaadi di hai bolne ki toh uss gift ka istemaal karna banta hai. Jalo mat. Mujhe pata main kaafi logical baatein karta hun.”

She hissed at him. Veer rolled his eyes.

“Dude, chill. Itna offend kyu ho rahe ho?”

“Veeranshu, chup karoge?” Bani commented. “Pehle yeh socho ki iss game ko jeetna kaise hai. Apna dimaag baton mein nahi game mein lagao.”

“Yeh samajhdar lagti hai.” The naag commented.

“Of course. Biwi meri hai.” Veer added with a grin. Bani glared at him and Veer shut up.

Bani noticed that as his ludo pieces were real naags. Not those fake snake pieces but real once. They looked starving. At that hunger, they weren’t going to care she’s Adi-Naagin. They’ll eat her up. Chausar was a strategy game. They had to think as individual pieces and as group pieces. Bani was good at making individual strategies. She was good as an individual player. Veer could never go wrong in making strategies as a group. He knew which piece is supposed to be used where.

“Veeranshu, hum dono ko ek conclusion pe aake aage khelna hoga. I’ll focus on taking individual pieces to the end. You check with the individual pieces around the board. Tum dekho ki konsa piece kabh move karna hai. Unhe end tak main pohocha dungi.” Bani told him.

“Done.”

The two did a fist bump. The board was large and Veer and Bani were live pieces on the board. If the snakes get to them, they’re dead meat.

Veer and Bani started playing with the naag. The naag was clever. A strategist at the best. Veer and Bani together were no less. They made a formidable team. 20 minutes of playing the game, the two were finally able to reach the end. Once they stepped there, the board and the naag disappeared. A large Shivling came to view.

Veer’s watch beeped.

“Bani, kechuli raat.” Veer told her.

“Shit. Naaglok ke saare protective wards toot chuke honge.” Bani exclaimed. Shining brightly with a purple light was an arrow.

“Naagpash.” The duo said together.

“Bholenath, shukriya.” Bani thanked her God and then took the arrow with her. The cave started shaking at that.

“Run…” Veer grabbed her hand and began dragging her with him. She ran as fast as she could. The cave started to collapse behind them.

The moment everyone reached out of the cave, the entire cave collapsed into nothing.

“What the hell, guys? Kya kiya tum dono ne?” Rishi shouted in surprise and fear.

Bani showed them the arrow with a smile.

“Damn, dude. Naagpash.” Kartik exclaimed.

“Bani…” Rudra looked up at sky. It had started to get black. Even the moon had begun to disappear. It had started to turn black and golden. The same as Chandrakala’s magic.

“Chandrakala naaglok pohoch chuki hai.” Bani said.

Rudra managed to them past the place and to Sheshnaag valley quickly. He saw all the naag-naagins of Sheshnaag vansh gathered. At the other side of the river, there was Chandrakala. Her aids had managed to even get into the river cutting between the entrance to Sheshnaag valley.

“Tumhe main kabhi jeetne nahi dungi, Chandrakala.” Bani roared.

“Tum haar chuki ho, bahu rani. Naagmani toh mere paas aa chuka hai.” Chandrakala laughed. Bela clenched her fists.

“What the hell? Yeh iske paas kaise aaya?” Bela demanded.

“Dadi ne galti ki Jay par vishwas karne ki jo maine pehle ki thi.” Bani explained.

“Bani, yeh galti nahi rahi. This is a huge problem. Naagmani ki rakhwali meri zimmedari hai. To know ke mere apne naagvansh ke logo ne kisi ko naagmani ka pata bata diya and didn’t even bother to inform me ki humare alawa koi hai jise naagmani ka pata hai.” Bela got angry.

“Bela, abhi gussa karke koi matlab hai kya? Hume abhi ke liye iss mushkil ne nipatna hai.” Bani tried to tell her.

“Mujhe sach mein laga ki Adi-Naag humare saath hai.” Shreya tried to explain herself.

“Aapko aisa laga? Main aapki bohot respect karti hun, dadi, but this is not an acceptable excuse. Main kya jawaab dun pure naagvansh ko ki naagmani Jay ke haath kaise lagi? I can’t say that you made a mistake and that’s why this happened. At the end of the day yeh meri responsibility thi. Main Naagrani hun Sheshnaag vansh ki. Mujh par responsibility thi ki main uski rakhwali karun aur use kisi galat haathon mein na jaane dun.”

“Abhi waqt hai, bahu rahi. Humari taraf aa jaao. Shayad tumhe baksh dun. Aaj kechuli raat hai. Tum kamzor ho. Bacha nahi paaogi khud ko.” Chandrakala taunted.

“Main unn saare naag-naagino ko aakhri mauka de rahi hun. Chandrakala ka saath chod de. Iske baad bhi agar kisi ko yeh lagta hai ki unhe uska saath dena hai toh main, Adi-Naagin, unhe naagvansh ke gaddar karar kar rahi hun.” Bani announced.

“Aur Naagvansh sabh kuch bardaas kar sakta hai par gaddari nahi. Gaddaro ke saath waisa hi suluk kiya jaayega jaise kiya jaana chahiye.” Bela added.

“Cheel….” Sam commented. “Veer bhai, iske saath cheel bhi aaye hai yahan tak. Markaat ne bridge tod di hai. The bridge of magic jo cheelon ko andar aane ki ijazat nahi deta. Ek baar pehle tod chuka hai. Phir se tod diya hai.”

“Saare cheel peeche hat jaaye toh accha hoga.” Veer made it clear.

“Veer Singhania, abh tum order dene ke layak nahi rahe cheelon ko. Tumhare paas toh cheel ki shaktiya hi nahi hai. Toh Cheel Rajkumar kaise?” Nikhil came ahead laughing.

“Iss saale ko toh main…” Sam clenched his fists.

“Great. Aakhri warning main de chuki hun. Abh iske aage sabh tum logo ki galti jiske saza toh tumhe milegi.” Bani made it clear. Vanshika threw Bani a bow. She put the naagpash on the bow and stretched it.

The moment Bani launched it. A large smoke emerged out of it. Black smoke almost covering the other side. As the smoke reduced, each tendril of the smoke started getting converted into a snake. Millions of snakes started to coil around all of the enemies. Some of the cheels ran away scared. The naag-naagins tried to wrestle the snake but was just in vain. The snakes started biting them. Viciously hissing and biting them. Injecting their own venom which matches Bani’s venom since she had launched the naagpash. The venom that snakes contained was the same as Bani’s own venom and just as potent.

Veer was standing at the edge. Jay wasn’t accepting defeat like this. If his side was losing, he’d make Bani lose something more valuable to her. Jay grabbed Veer and pulled him into the water.

“Veeranshu…” Bani shouted. Bani couldn’t enter the water now because the snakes released from Naagpash were all filled in the river.

“Adi-Naagin.” Several naagins pulled her away before she jumped into the river.

“What the hell are you doing? Kya kar rahe ho? Veer wahan paani mein gir gaya hai.” Bani tried to free herself but she couldn’t.

“Veer bhai…” Sam jumped right into the water.

“Samrat…” Aishwarya and Vanshika shouted but it was a little late. Sam had already jumped up to defend his brother. The snakes started pulling Sam but he didn’t give up. He continued fighting them and trying to get to his brother.

Jay grabbed Veer’s throat and tried to pull him into the water. Veer tried to help himself, kicking and fighting but he couldn’t match the strength of Jay in water. He could feel the decreasing oxygen in his lungs. Cheels have hollow bones allowing them to take in more oxygen than humans. The air is filled into those hollow structures giving them oxygen to breath at high altitudes.

“Aaj tu bachke dikha, Veer Singhania.” Jay challenged.

“Jay, chodo use. Main bol rahi hun agar Veer ko kuch bhi hua toh tumhari jaan le lungi main…” Bani raged. Her rage was making the snakes way more vicious. They coile dup around Sam. Sam pushed away Jay even with the snakes biting him. It was burning him from the inside but he was determined.

Jay was thrown away and Veer tried to free himself but the snakes grabbed him. The fact that Jay had Naagmani with him was what kept him alive even the snakes biting him. The naagmani would keep filtering the poison.

“Chodo mujhe…” Bani struggled but there was no way they were letting Bani get there.

Jay coiled his tail around Veer’s throat, choking him. Sam stabbed on the coils to free Veer. Veer continued to stab on the coils. The snakes were biting both Sam and Veer. Bani’s temper had blown all the snakes out of control and they were close to burning out everyone.

Chandrakala tried to escape but the snakes went on to bite them. Almost shouting in pain, she felt her tissues burn.

Bani was weak as she was changing her snake skin. There was no way she’d be able to get through the whole river filled with snake alive without her Adi-Naagin strength. Since she was changing her snake skin, the snakes wouldn’t recognize her as Adi-Naagin until the process was finished. All of her skin was itchy as the old snake skin started wilting. Her body felt weak and she had to see Veer almost struggling.

“Nahi, please mujhe jaane do. Mujhe Veer ko bachana hai.” Bani shouted angrily. Bela ordered them to leave her.

“Uske pati ki baat hai.” Bela tried to tell them.

“Naagrani, yeh Adi-Naagin hai. Kechuli raat hai woh pehle hi kamzor hai. Mar sakti hai.” Someone said.

“Veer ko kuch bhi hua toh waise bhi main marr hi jaaungi. Woh mera pyaar hai, meri zindagi hai, meri saansein hai. ABhi toh woh cheel bhi nahi ban sakta. Please mujhe jaane do.” Bani tried to tell them.

Vanshika was about to jump in bu Mayank stopped her.

“Pagal ho kya, Vanshika?” He asked.

“Haan, dad, pagal hun main. Yeh jo paani mein woh mere dost hai. Bachpan se leke aaj tak har jagah pe mera saath diya hai. Aaj jab zaroorat hai toh main peeche hat jaau?” Vanshika shouted back at him.

“Hum mein se abhi koi bhi iss kaabil nahi hai ki iss rudra tandav ko roke. Bani ne Naagpash chala diya hai. Sabhko maarne ke baad hi tandav rukega.” Mayank tried to explain it to her.

“Dad, agar waha Sam aur Veer ki jagah mom hoti toh kya tabhi aap yahi kehte?” Vanshika asked.

“Aishwarya mera joda hai who baat alag hai.”

“Alag kaise hai, dad? Wahan Sam hai. Jab kisi se help ki umeed nahi thi ki koi mujhe sahi prove kar paayega jab maine uss naag ko maar diya tha toh Sam ko dhundhte hue Himachal chali gayi thi kyuki even if it is the darkest time, Sam humesha mere help ke liye tayyar rahega, iska full confidence tha mujhe. Bohot ladai karte hai hum dono. Bohot zyaada. School mein har din ladayi ki hai par jab mujhe sachmein zaroorat hoti thi Sam humesha mere saath raha hai.”

“Mera pati hai, Veer. Main use kaise apni aankhon ke saamne marta dekhu?” Bani asked trying to free herself.

Bela tried to go and enter the water but naagins stopped her.

“Naagrani, aap aisa nahi kar sakti hai. Aap Naagrani hai. Aapko agar kuch ho gaya toh pure Sheshnaag vansh ki Raksha par mushkil aa jaayegi.” They tried to tell her.

“Kam se kam mujhe toh jaane do. Please…. Mera pati hai who. Mera pyaar hai. Mera janam janam ka saathi hai. Jisne sirf mere liye janam liya. Why don’t you understand?” Bani tried to free herself.

The naag-naagins were right in their place. They saw the greater good of Naagvansh. It would be foolish to let Adi-Naagin die like that. The last time she died, it was utter chaos. All the cheels had started to attack naag-naagins and no one to protect them or guide them. Aakesh’s father had rained death after the death of his son. Everywhere naag-naagins were lying dead.

“Veer!!!” Bani shouted.

Mayank just stood there. He just saw his daughter struggling to free herself to go help them. Amar and Aishwarya decided better and jumped inside the water.

“Amar… Aishwarya…” Shreya shouted. The two tried to get to Sam and Veer, swimming through the pool of snakes. Amar punched right on Jay’s face and the coils came free off Veer’s neck. Veer coughed, trying to breath. Amar tried to fight Jay and keep him away even while the snakes had started to bite him. Aishwarya had tried to get Veer and Sam to the banks but the snakes kept pulling three of them into the water. Soon enough. All of them were coiled by snakes, unable to move at all. The slow poison working through the blood. It had started to paralyze the victims. Jay was being saved because of the naagmani.

Sam, Veer, Aishwarya and Amar were pulled up on the opposite bank where Chandrakala was dying in intense pain. Her skin burning away and blood flowing away freely.

Mayank tried to go and help them but he got coiled himself. Anyone who tried to help was being taken into the coils.

Next thing that Bani saw had completely shaken her soul. Vanshika was about to jump ahead and help them but the blast was so large that it threw off everyone on the bank a few feet away. All of it was engulfed in flames.

“Veer…” Bani shouted, almost falling down. She just watched the flames completely take in all of the other side of the bank.

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