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Posted: 4 years ago

You already know what I'm gonna say, interesting, amazing and so gripping, as usual!!😌

This... exactly this was what was missing from the show's track. This whole realisation that veeranshu's whole existence doesn't depend on him being a cheel. Bani did not fall for the cheel rajkumar she fell for the man that veer is!!

Although that realisation is still to come but i have full faith on you unlike mukta ji😂

And this is where step 1 of Markaat's plan fails...he was expecting veer to come running to him when he realises he's lost his powers, although if the rest of his plan works how he wants, things might just go his way...But but but dear writer, mukta nhi toh kya aap toh sunte ho na hmari😂

Seperation nhi chalega hume!! #vani

I wonder if someone from bani's family might just get brainwashed by Jai's words.... It would give us very different dynamic from veer's family. However might singhania's be, they totally support each other and are ready to fight to death for one another. While we already know that things are a little different in Bani's family (when are you gonna introduce the strict taskmaster rule follower and the uptight dad of vanshika??)🤔

Baaki i really liked that veer is ready to lose his powers but not bani. The way bani consoled veer is also very articulately written. Veer doesn't want to go to markaat, because god knows owing a favour to a maniacal psychopath/ sociopath is a death sentence.

( hmm..which category would suryash fall in.. considering he is actually very calculative and cold hearted but then veer is also same..so veer can actually become a psychopath, if he so wants😮 but the way markaat behaves not taking his mistakes on his own shoulders and rather putting the blame on others, sociopath 101)

And i just realised i rather went towards a different tangent, back to the point🤣

So owing a favor to markaat is out of question, who else can grant cheelu baby his powers back..hmm garud?? Or we finally gonna see some more into why aakesh/veer is so connected to narayan..huh??

Now on to bani, for a adi naagin bani is a little too sweet, naive..naive is the word!! She is too naive, she still hasn't got that edge that she would need to control the pit of snakes (literally and figuratively 🤣) that naaglok is.

I want her to get that edge... I want veer to be wowed by bani, not by her beauty, not because the man is half crazy for her..but because she just went and did something that's totally unpredictable and for just for once, i want jai and chandrakala to be afraid of bani..like really afraid!! Veer level afraid!!

I hope you update today as well..kya karu I'm greedy!! ❤️🙈

EDIT- you asked for a long comment na...lo here is it, it's long enough to be a f**king update!! Since you keep me happy by giving updates jaldi jaldi.. I'll keep you happy with long long comments!! Deal??😂🙈



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Posted: 4 years ago

Writer Madam...


Kab update karoge!!!


Waiting Waiting!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

These days the only excitement about naagin 5 is to read this story , I really want to thank you for making my vani heart so happy and excited. Each day I eagerly wait for the new update even after getting disappointed regarding how the makers have disappointed naagin 5.

The whole scenario of embarassed Bani was so much fun to read. It is good to see how their equation has changed from Bani not wanting Veer close to her to the Bani who seems to sit on his lap comfortably wearing his t shirt in the presence of everyone.


I felt so emotional seeing Veer so dejected like he lost everything. The way he said what Bani is to him comparing to her azaadi was mindblowing , could truly feel all the emotions. The way she stood with him and comforted him was so beautiful. I hope Bani finds some way for Veer to get back his powers , cant see our sassy and bold so dejected like this.


Being a true fan of naagin 5 , I am just too grateful to you and I am in awe with that wonderful creative brain of yours , had u been naagin's writer it would have gained high rating, I am so sad ekta doesnt have writers who are not even half talented like u.


keep writing more buddy and best wishes to u always

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Posted: 4 years ago

Feeling sad for Veer ... But pata hai aap jald hi use theek kardonge so feel relax a bit

Superb update dear keep writing keep updating

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Posted: 4 years ago

Chapter 47


Logically speaking, how do you react if a 16-foot-long cobra blocks your way out? Almost longer than the legendary anaconda. It wasn’t up with the hood flashed. Rather in a resting position on the ground. Humans fear snakes for their venom and temperament. She was perched up over the stairs. Even with the stairs being so broad, she easily covered them with her coils.

Veer knew there was no way to cross the snake without getting hissed at and possibly lock up in those deadly coils. Although cobras don’t generally constrict, these naags were different. They could use constriction or use their venom.

“Yeh kya baat hai? Can you move?” Veer asked Bani. The snake simply ignored his commentary. Veer knew he could go all the way to the other staircase but he was also sure that she’s going to block him from leaving. There was that sound of rattle.

Before Veer knew what was happening, He was grabbed by Daksh and Sam.

“Oye, kya hai yeh?” Veer demanded but he was quickly tied to a chair. Veer’s own throne like chair. “Daksh, Sam, kholo ise abhi.”

If Veer was a cheel, he could have torn apart the ropes easily but now that he was just human, Veer couldn’t free himself. The snake moved and set herself on the sofa chair before him. After a moment, it changed back into human form. Her legs over the arm of the chair, Bani checked her nails.

“I think I have finally managed to find black nailpolish good. I never found it really interesting but with this outfit, it goes well.” She was sitting bare feet. Black jeans, yellow off shoulder full sleeved top and her half tied in a bun and half let down. The way she was perched up on the chair, he could swear she was channeling her own inner Veer Singhania.

“Boss, aur kuch?” Daksh asked. She gave him a smile.

“Thanks, Daksh.” She nodded.

“Tum dono ko main dekh lunga, saalon. Dhokebaaz… Tum dono ne party hi badal li?” Veer commented trying to free himself from the ropes but it was a futile effort.

“Yeh kya hai?” Balwant demanded when he showed up.

“Daddyji, kuch nahi. Relax. Aap jaaiye. Main yeh sabh sambhal lungi.” Bani answered with a buttered smile.

“Aise bandh ke kyu rakha hai Veer ko?” Pawan questioned.

“Chachu, dad, kya pati patni ke beech aa rahe ho? Jo bhi hai, let it be. Best we leave it to Bani.” Tapish suggested.

“Tapish bhai, please do interfere.”

“Mujhe pati patni ke beech ‘woh’ nahi banna hai.” Tapish answered.

“Bhabhi, yeh sahi nahi hai. Aap bechare Veer bhai ko aise bandh ken ahi rakh sakte. It is not..” The Rs 2000 note was enough to make Ponky change his party, “Boss, aapke orders follow honge.”

“Saale, tu bhi girgit? Itni jaldi change kar diya side?” Veer questioned Ponky.

“Veer, ek dum kadak note hai.” Ponky showed Veer the note.

“Bani, karna kya chahti ho?” Pawan asked her.

“Chachu, maine na sach mein koshish kiya sharafat se baat karne ki but aapke pyaare bigde shehzaade ko aadat hai apne alawa kisi aur ki na sunne ki. So, I had to take matters into a different route. Pucho. Kitni baar acche se kaha ‘Veeranshu, ek baar baat sunlo’ but nahi sir ko interest nahi tha. Baat shuru hui nahi ki inhe bhaag jana hota hai. He’ll leave and show up almost late at night. This has gone for 5 days now. Abh main bhi dekhti hun ki kahan bhaag ke jaayega.”

“Mere kameene bhaiyo ne apni party badal li hai toh kya dad aur chachu bhi kar lenge? Na. Dad humesha mere team mein the aur honge.” Veer told Bani. He turned to Balwant. “Dad, rassi kholiye.”

Balwant moved to untie the ropes but the Bani cleared her throat. Balwant looked at her. Her red naagin eyes challenging him try and untie the ropes. Bani stood up in the most ‘Veer Singhania’ fashion and walked up to Balwant. He was a little tall for her, so she stood up on the coffee table next to him and rested her arm on his shoulder.

“Daddyji, kyu fikar kar rahe hai? Abh aapne apne bete ko mere saath bandh hi diya hai gathbandhan mein toh let me deal with him. Because chahe jo ho jaaye, aaj Veeranshu Singhania baat kiye bina yahan se nahi uthenge.”

“Mujhe koi baat nahi karni.” Veer cleared it.

“Baat toh tum karoge, Veeranshu Singhania. Mujhe challenge mat karo.”

“Bani, iss tarah se baat karna zaroori hai?” Balwant asked.

“Agar aadmi tedha ho toh use tedhi tarah se hi deal karna padega na? Kasam se keh rahi hun. Maine sach mein try kiya ki acche se usse baat karun. Uska haath pakad ke rokne ki koshish ki par haath chuda ke chala gaya. Lunch pe baat karne ki koshish ki but he decided to act mute. 5 din try karne ke baad samajh aaya ki mere patidev ko badtameezi karne ki buri aadat hai. Abhi baat samjhani bhi badtameezi se hi hogi. So, that’s why he’s tied up.” Bani answered.

Balwant looked at Bani for a moment. He had assumed that there was only one like Veer but now he had come face to face with this girl. Both adamant and determined. Both of them temperamental. Both of them were dangerous. They both could go on a rampage if someone pushed the wrong buttons.

“Kya? Zabardasti hai? Mujhe nahi karni.” Veer tried to argue.

“Haaye mere bhole panchi…” Bani said with a look in her eyes, “How you’re presuming that you’ve got a choice. Tum ek baar baat puri karlo toh main chod dungi. Promise.”

“Kyu, Bani? Iska kya matlab hoga? Is it going to solve the problem? No?”

“Tumhe tumhari cheel shaktiya chahiye na?” Bani asked and pulled out a dagger.

“Veer….” Balwant shouted almost scared that she’ll kill Veer.

“Dad, woh Veer ko kuch nahi karegi.” Tapish stopped him.

“Yeh lo. All you have to is make sure it reaches my heart. You’ll be able to have your powers back. I’ll find a way to heal myself. Would take a while but till then you’ll get half of my powers. Uske baad tum cheel ban sakte ho.” She offered Veer.

“What is wrong with you, Bani? Dimag kahin chodke aayi ho kya? Ek baar mein tumhe samajh nahi aata? I cannot hurt you.” Veer shouted at her. Anger dancing in his eyes that Bani even thought he'd do something like that.

“Veeranshu, main tumhe options de rahi hun, tum nahi le rahe. I am not going to die with that. Jay bhi aise meri shaktiya paa sakta hai even if I’m alive. So, main tumhe offer kar rahi hun. Bas itna sa kaam hai. Uske baad you’ll be back.”

“I can’t believe this. Bani, tumse main cheekh cheekh ke keh chuka hun ki meri jaan basti hai tum mein. I don’t know tumhare dimaag mein yeh baat kyu nahi ghus rahi ki main tumhe chot nahi de sakta. Khud toot ke tumhe pura kar sakta par tumhe tod ke khud ko pura nahi karna chahta. I can’t do it. Samajh kyu nahi rahi?”

“Toh tum batao. Kya karun main? Maine tumse kaha ki tum Markaat ke paas chale jaao. Tumhe woh nahi karna. Maine offer kiya tum meri aadhi shaktiya lelo but tumhe yeh bhi nahi karna. Kuch karna bhi nahi hai par shaktiya bhi chahiye. Yeh kaise ho sakta hai? If you want something, you also have to give up something.”

“Bani, baat samajh nahi aati kya tumhe? Tumhare bina in sabkha matlab nahi hai. I don’t know how the hell to explain it to you? I literally took birth for you. Yeh point tumhare dimaag mein jaa raha hai ya nahi? Kya badtameezi hai yeh?”

“Badtameezi? Tumhe yeh badtameezi lagti hai par aise piche 5 dino se mujhse seedhe baat bhi nahi kar rahe ho. Yeh badtameezi nahi lagti tumhe? Tum mujhse zabardasti shaadi karo, yeh badtameezi nahi hai but main tumhe aise roku aur tumse baat karne ki koshish karu. Yeh badtameezi hai? Tum mujhe apni problems share nahi karo yeh badtameezi nahi hai par main tumse baat nahi karun kisi topic par, yeh badtameezi hai? Tumhara yeh kehna ki mera tumpar sabse zyaada haq hai aur phir bas aise hi woh haq cheen lena badtameezi nahi. Par mera iss tarah se tumhe apni shaktiya dene ka suggestion dena badtameezi hai? Tum mujhse meri jaan hi cheen lo, yeh badtameezi nahi hai. Par main tumhe offer karun ki tum mujhse meri aadhi shaktiya leke cheel ban jaao, yeh badtameezi hai?”

“Bani, haan. Sach hai. Mujhe chahiye apni cheel ki shaktiya because uske bina main khud ko nahi pehchaan sakta. I don’t know who the hell I am if I’m not Cheel Singhania. But yeh bhi sach hai ki mujhe tumse bhi pyaar hai. Tumhe khud se dur karke cheel ban bhi jaau tabhi adha hi reh jaaunga.”

“What? That is all you are? Wings and Talons?”

Veer looked at her.

“Bani, you don’t understand -”

“Jiss Veeranshu ko main jaanti hun, he’s never admitted defeat because he’s never accepted it. Even if he seems to be on the losing side in that moment, he’s never accepted defeat. Jaan chali gayi thi par haarna manzorr nahi tha. Jiss Veeranshu ko main jaanti hun, usne apne insaani roop mein ek icchadhari cheel ko almost jaan se maar diya tha. Jiss Veeranshu ko main jaanti hun, who akele saare giddho ko bina cheel bane hara sakta hai. Jiss Veeranshu ko main jaanti hun, he someone who would find a way to win. Even when victory seems to be a far-fetched thought. You didn’t need wings and talons for that. Insaani roop mein agar yeh sabh kar sakte ho, toh kyu tumhe aisa lagta hai ki all you are is wings and talons? Agar tum mein kuch different hai toh woh yeh hai ki tumne har haal mein jeetna seekha hai.”

“Main -”

“Tapish bhai se pucho. Unke liye Veer Singhania is not the same as Cheel Singhania. Unke liye tumhari identity yeh nahi hai ki tum cheel ho. Tumhare saare bhaiyo ke liye tumhari identity yeh hai ki tum unke bhai ho. Cheel or not, you still share the same blood. That no one can take away from you. Daddyji se pucho, unke liye tumhari identity yeh nahi hai ki tum cheel ho, unke liye tum unke bete ho jiske liye woh 1000 gunah karne ke liye tayyar hai. Chachu se pucho, unke liye tumhari identity yeh nahi hai ki tum cheel ho, unke liye tum Veer ho. Cheel or not, you’ll always be Veeranshu Singhania. Cheel or not, you’ll always be Ishana Singhania’s son. Yeh sabh tumse bhagwaan bhi nahi cheen sakte, Veeranshu, toh Markaat kya karega?”

She looked at him.

“Mujhse pucho, Veeranshu. Mere liye your identity doesn’t depend on whether you have cheel powers or not. Mere liye tum mera pyaar ho. Tum mere liye Veeranshu Singhania ho, regardless of whether you can fly or not. Tum mere liye wahi ziddi aur badtameez Veer ho jise humesha apni hi chalane ki aadat hai. No one can take away what you are inside here..” Bani pointed to his chest. “Daddyji ko bura lagta hai ki tum abhi cheel nahi ho but that doesn’t mean you stop being his son for him. He loves you regardless of that. He hates me because I killed his son once, not because I killed a cheel. Shayad who nafrat zindagi bhar rahegi unke dil mein. Mujhe fark nahi padta tum cheel ho ya nahi. Jab cheel the tabhi pyaar hua tha tumse, abh nahi hai phir bhi pyaar hai. Bas tumhe dukhi nahi dekh sakti. Mujhe mera Veeranshu chahiye.”

Veer looked at her.

“Tumhe cheel banne ki zaroorat padi mujhse pyaar karne ke liye? Uss waqt jab gir rahe the, tabh toh cheel the na? Udd ke chale jaate apni gufa mein. Jaan bhi bach jaati tumhari. Trishul par gir ke itne der tak itna dard sehne ke baad bhi kyu phir se mujhse pyaar karne ki himmat thi? Bas cheel nahi rahe toh yeh pyaar bhi nahi hona chahiye. Because if that is all your identity is then shayad tumse kabhi mujhe pyaar hota hi nahi.”

“Bani, yeh pyaar hi toh nahi chut raha mujhse.”

“Veeranshu, tum abhi wahi pagal ho. Wahi sarphire ladke ho jo mera pati hai. I don’t care ki tum cheel ho yaa nahi. Regardless of what you are, Veer, I still love you. Jab tum cheel the tabhi tumse pyaar tha aur abh nahi ho phir bhi pyaar hai. Maine kisi cheel se pyaar nahi kiya hai, tumse kiya hai. How stupid is it to say that I fell for an eagle? No, I fell in love with Veer Singhania. Yeh naam tumhara hai. Cheel or not.”

She rested her forehead against his.

“Please stop running away. Tum mere ho aur main tumhari hun. Who cares in the world ki tum cheel ho ya nahi. I don’t give a damn about it.”

Vanshika walked in soon enough. She chuckled at the sight of tied up Veer. She was wearing a green Slytherin hoodie with black ripped denim. Black and green boots. Black painted nails and hair in a bun.

“I didn’t know you had this kind of fantasy.” She teased him. Veer chuckled.

“Yeh meri nahi tumhari behen ki fantasy hai.” He answered. She removed the ropes binding him.

“Kya? Don’t do that. We’re trying get him not to run away.”

She signalled Sam not to stop her. She pushed Bani a bit back and went to Veer.

“See, I don’t know tumhare saath kya ho raha hai but I need you to get back into your shape. Because mujhe koi company chahiye jo mere saath uss dhabewaale ki pitaai kare.” She told him as she took off the ropes.

“What?”

“He’s cracking up something. I can just feel it. Woh Bani ke khilaaf kuch toh kar raha hai. He has been talking to some naags. Something’s too fishy about it. Isiliye mujhe Bani ko naaglok le jaana hai. Yahan Jay ke saath Chandrakala aur Chandni hai.”

“Usne Bani ko touch bhi kiya na toh jaan le lunga uski.” Veer growled.

“Good. Now that you’re in form. Do us a favour. Mujhe doubt hai ki koi naag-naagin Jay aur Chandrakala ke saath mila hua hai. They’re definitely one of those in the inner circle. Agar pata kar paao toh karna. Since you’re not cheel, they won’t sense you as danger. I just have information that they work at Jay’s restaurant. If you can find them, dhundho unhe. Bani ke liye.”

“Tujhe pata hai ki Bani ke liye jaan bhi haazir hai.”

“Good. Abh ek aur important baat suno.” Vanshika pulled out a book from her hoodie shirt’s pocket. “Kisiko batana mat but I stole this book from my dad. Takshak vansh mein there is something about manipulating soul energy.”

Everyone got interested in the thing she was telling Veer. She opened a page and showed a rune.

“This is the rune for soul energy manipulation. The exact same rune, I have noticed is there on Sam’s tattoo.” She pointed out at the tattoo of chakra in the faint ink. “Remember Sam keh raha tha ki there is a variant of chakra in the Himalayas? The chakra also uses soul energy and manipulates it. Mujhe itna high level tantric magic toh nahi aata but ask some aghori. They’ll have an idea on how to manipulate soul energy. Markaat aur tumne ek point pe same body share ki hai and so there will be traces of his soul energy inside you. That’s why you were able to pull back your wings even though they didn’t heal. Soul energy often works as a powering agent too. It gives some powers. Agar aghori baba ne manage kiya uss soul energy ko trace karke capture karne ki then you can manipulate it to find a way to get back you cheel powers. Its going to be painful but might as well work.”

“Vanshika, are you mad? This seems way out of line. Its like breaking through nature’s laws…” Bani commented.

“Bani, all the laws have loophole and we all manipulate those loopholes for our purpose. Agar dushman ke plan ko counter karna hai toh uske level tak pohochna padta hai. We’re ourself a break in nature’s laws then why not accept who we are and use it. No knowledge is dangerous if you know how to use it wisely and not abuse it.” Vanshika insisted.

“T-shirt reference, snake.” Sam commented. Vanshika grinned.

“If I’m a snake, I’ll be a snake. Daksh, I need to get this book back before my dad notices. Maine pages mark kar diye hai. Jab tak Naag Mandir pohochte hai, tabh tak padh lo. Uske baad I’ll have to take it back.” She gave Daksh the book. “I’m trust you idiots not to misuse it and I hope ki who din nahi aayega jab I’ll have to regret sharing this with you. Koi khaas image nahi hai meri naagvansh mein. Unhe pata chala ki mein naagon ke jaadu ke baare mein cheelon ko bata rahi hun toh naagvansh se hi nikaal denge.”

“Scout’s honour. Who din nahi aayega jab tumhe regret karna pade.” Daksh promised.

“Last thing I expect from you is honour, so please shut up.”

The boys laughed at that. They went to the car. Daksh got to work as he read on the marked pages. Sam drove them till the Naag Mandir. Everyone got out of the car.

“Two minutes. I’m almost done.” Daksh said. They left him in the car. Veer and Bani walked ahead, talking about something. Sam stopped Vanshika.

“I feel that something bad is going to happen. I saw Bhabhi covered in blood.” He told her. She turned to him in surprise.

“Blood? Bani? Last time she was covered in blood, she had almost killed several cheels.”

“I don’t know what specifically or why but I just saw her covered in blood. Just be careful with her.”

Daksh came out and returned the book to Vanshika. Vanshika put it back in her pocket and went up to Bani who was standing at the stairs of Naag Mandir. She turned back and shared a look with Sam. The two nodded. A silent understanding. She was to take care of Bani and Sam was going to check up with Veer.

Bani and Vanshika changed into their human naagin form and walked ahead into the temple. Naag Mandir was also a common meeting place for all Naag-Naagins. Behind the idol of Shiva, there was a staircase leading down.

“Bani, kaafi saare bade naagon ne ek group bana liya hai. It is something like a rebellion.” Vanshika told Bani as they walked down the staircase.

“But kyu? Maine aisa kiya hi kya hai ki unhe itni problem ho gayi hai. I’ve been quite up with my duties.” Bani wondered.

“Jay ke alawa kon ho sakta aisi harkat karne waala. You know how those orthodox naags are. They call themselves the so-called protectors of naag vansh’s pride and traditions.”

The room underground was lit with fire torches. She saw there around 50 naag-naagins had gathered. Some of them were elderly naags. They saw themselves responsible to keep the respect of Naagvansh. Most often creating troubles.

It gave a gothic feel. The pillars had carvings of snakes upon them. Bani and Vanshika turned into their human naagin form.

Bani saw Bela. She walked up to Bani.

"Mess. Serious mess hai, Bani. Sabhko bhadka ke rakha hai." Bela warned her.

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Chapter 48


Bani should have been smarter. She looked around her and saw the trap laid by Jay. She was naïve before. Bani would choose to call herself rather foolish. Hadn't she learnt anything from human world? 25 years of living in human world and she hadn't learnt the two kinds of humans. Gullible and Clever. Two things in their personality that drives them. Morals and Greed.

Since her childhood, Bani had lived in a fairytale world. She was so imbibed in the stories of Princesses that were loved by everyone and treated everyone with love and care that she had never known the part of a Queen.

"Jis second main yahan se uthi, Jay. You're going to regret this." Bani threatened Jay. Her voice wasn't loud but held that threat sharp. Dangerously close to bursting out into rage.

Bani had been foolish enough to believe that every single person in Naagvansh were her friends. She now learnt that you don't have friends when you're at the top. You have those who are loyal to you and those who are jealous of you.

"Main Bholenath ki kasam kha ke vachan de rahi hun ki jab tak apne aap ko saabit na kar dun, yahan se nahi jaaungi." Bani had given them a word.

"Maa, yeh galat hai. You seriously can't believe his words." Amar tried to tell his mother.

Kashyap Family was an odd mix. One side was Kushal Kashyap, the oldest man in Kashyap Family. He was someone who believed in peace. A man who had firm belief that if one put their human side before, even enemies could be friends. A man of his age with thoughts that were modern. A revolutionist his his thoughts. Other side was Shreya Kashyap. Once Naagrani to Sheshnaag vansh. She was the traditionalist in her beliefs. She firmly believed in not mixing among humans. Those same old prejudices. It was difficult for her to accept the change. Both Amar Kashyap and Aishwarya Kashyap had taken after their father. Both having spent enough time among humans to know that there are ones who are nice and ones who are bad. They had known enough other icchadhari kind to know even they had good and bad in them. Amar and Aishwarya, the siblings were very protective of Bani. Aditi Kashyap with her upbringing was the same old traditionalist. Hence, Aditi and Shreya went with each other really well.

The independent side of a snake meant that they weren't a group. Naag-Naagins had learnt to live in groups and work together but majorly still had that independent factor. They didn't stand together in a team. The dynamic was different. Stark in contrast with the cheels. There, being in a family meant that till last breath, you're meant to stand with each other. Anyone abandoning the troop was declared outsider. Naag-Naagins didn't have that team work factor. They worked independently.

"Shreya, bhagwaan bhi har ek ko apna saathi chunne ka pura haq dete hai." Bani's dada, Kunal tried to tell his wife.

"Abhi bacchi hai, Kushal. Bas 25 saal dekhe hai. I have seen 77 years. Apni bacchi ka accha bhala chahti hun." Shreya argued.

"25 saal ki hai, Shreya. Tumne usse bacchi samajh rakha hai. She's old enough to make her decisions. Don't try to make them for her. Tumhari nazar mein Jay ho sakta hai Bani ke liye sahi but Bani ko kya chahiye yeh sirf use pata hai. You don't choose a life partner for someone else with your pre-requisites. You and Bani are two different people. The kind of person you see as an ideal partner might not be the same as hers."

"Kushal, mujhe yeh argument karna hi nahi hai. Bani kisi insaan ki nahi ek cheel ki baat kar rahi hai. Cheelon ke ghar mein rehke, cheelon ki tarah sochne lagegi."

"Mom, yeh aapka imagination hai." Aishwarya countered.

"Tum toh yahi kahogi. Khud hi un cheelon ke baccho ke saath waqt barbaad kiya hai." Mayank, Vanshika's dad, commented.

"Cheel hi sahi but atleast unhe apne baccho ki parwa hoti hai. Kisi jungle mein aise akele nahi chod jaate." Aishwarya retorted. "Aur mere baccho ke life mein interfere mat karo."

"Yeh tumhari bacchi nahi hai, Aishwarya. Yeh Naagvansh ki Adi-Naagin hai. Sabse pehle Naagvansh aata hai jab sar pe aisa taaj ho toh. Uske baad hi kuch aur." Mayank commented.

Aishwarya broke into fit of temper and grabbed his throat. Amar and Aditi tried to pull them away.

"Phir se keh ke dekho. Bani meri beti hai. Use kisi ne chua bhi na toh sach mein ek ek ki jaan lelungi." She threatened.

"Bua." Bani held her hand and made her sit.

"Tumhe gussa nahi aa raha? Yeh sabh tumse tumhari life ke decisions lene ka haq cheen rahi hai." Aishwarya asked.

"Gussa? Bua, khoon jal raha hai. Look around the room. Kitne log dikh rahe hai aapko jo actually mein naagvansh ke maan-samman ki raksha ke liye khade hai? Seriously dekh ke batao." Bani questioned. She had learnt from her mistake. "Mushkil se kuch hai. Everyone had made up their mind on what is right and what is wrong. Khud ka rang kaala hai par durso par kheechad uchal kar durso ko kaala bata rahe hai."

In that moment, Vanshika could feel Bani become a stone. She wasn't the same soft Bani. She pulled up her walls.

"You're just going to sit here and let them walk over you?" She asked.

"Even the nature has a calm before the storm. I let myself believe that I could pull down a pit of snakes with understanding, love and respect but I forget that a part of them is animal. And in nature, you cannot stay at the top without the show of dominance. I am waiting for someone to come and save them. They've messed with the wrong fire, bua. Bholenath ki kasam khaayi hai, bua, use toh main pura karungi. Yaa toh abh yeh sabh khud mein samjhenge ki main kon hun ya phir main samjhaungi apne tareeke se." Bani's tone was dangerous. She turned to look at Jay.

"Before we move forward, Jay. Thank you. Tumne aaj mujhe bohot hi important seekh di hai. Mujhe humesha lagta tha ki humare naagvansh mein koi galat ho hi nahi sakta. We're all together. Acche se samjha diya hai mujhe ki yahan bhi khud ke liye sochne waale hai. Abh toh bas Bholenath se hi prarthna karo ki tumhe bachane woh aaye."

"Tum mujhe nahi maar sakti, Bani. Main Adi-Naag hun. Yeh baat tumhe samajh nahi aa rahi thi ki Adi-Naagin ka joda Adi-Naag hai." Jay countered.

Bani raised a hand to silence him.

"Jay, mind your tone. Tum kisi apne aise hi naagin se baat nahi kar rahe. Tum Adi-Naagin ke saamne khade ho. Jise Bholenath ne khud sabse pehle icchadhari hone ka vardaan diya hai. Tum mein aur mujh mein bohot difference. Don't try to think that you're on the same level as me." Bani told him. She had an odd calm for someone who was extremely temperamental.

Bani's eyes were stuck on the idol of Shiva. He was sitting in his peaceful meditation. The calm in him reflected in Bani. Like she was trying to control the chaos in her.

"Bholenath, aap mujhe mujhse zyaada jaante hai. Mere gusse mein sabh hi barbaad ho jaata hai. Jab aag lagti hai jungle mein toh bekasur jeevo ko bhi jala ke jaati hai. Main nahi chahti ki kisi bhi bekasur naag-naagin ko mere gusse ka shikaar banna pade. Abh aapse meri request hai ki aap hi inhe bachaye. Saare naagon ke rakshak toh aap hi hai. Aapne naagon ko Garud se bachaya hai toh abh Adi-Naagin se bhi bachaiye." Bani prayed to the lord.

Bani's eyes turned red.

"Ek baat yahan sabh samajh le. Abhi tak bohot acche se samjhane ki koshish kiya hai maine ki mera Veeranshu se shaadi aur mere naaglok se vafadari dono alag cheezein. Bohot samjhaya ki aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi hua hai ki maine apni zimmedari bhuli hai. Mujhe koi zoo nahi chalana tha ki hunter ki awaaz se dara ke sabhko control karun. Mujhe laga ki agar ek hissa hum sabh mein insaan ka hai toh baat samajh aa jaayegi bina kisi ko chot pohochaye hue." She said.

"Baat toh abhi bhi wahi hai, Adi-Naagin. Naaglok ke dushman, unn cheelon ko apna pariwaar maan liya hai aapne. Yeh humare Naaglok ke niyamo ke khilaaf hai. Yeh hum sweekar nahi kar sakte. Humari Adi-Naagin ka pati ek cheel ho yeh hume manzoor nahi." One of the elder naags told her.

Bani walked down towards him. She stood before him. She seemed like a girl of 25 years against a man who seemed to be around in his sixties. It was a sign that he was really old. Naag-Naagins age very slowly from the age of 26. Snakes shed old skin and similarly, even naag-naagins shed their old skin and gain a new one. Which is what makes them look young for a long time.

"Acha? Meri shaadi par maine aapko bulaya? Ki aap mujhe apna aashirwaad dein aur mere pati ko apna damad banaye?" Bani questioned him. He was taken aback in the way she spoke. He looked at Jay. "Use kya dekh rahe hai? Mujhse baat kijiye? Woh mujhe apne joda maanta hai par mujhe khud usne 4 baar maarne ki koshish ki hai. Pehli baar ek teer se mujhe maarne ki koshish ki. Dusri baar ek cheel ko mere paas bhejke mujhe maarne ki koshish ki. Teesri baar mujhe koi mayavi ras deke apne kaabu mein karne ki koshish ki. Chauti baar mujhe Chandrakala ke saamne chod diya jab maine apni kechuli badli thi. Panchvi baar tilasmi gufa mein band karne ki koshish ki. Usi tilasmi gufa mein jahan jaane se saare naag-naagino ko sadiyon se hidayat di hai. Apne jode ko Jay agar itni baar maarne ki koshish kar sakta ho toh aap kya hai uske liye? Ek second bhi nahi lagega use aapki jaan lene mein agar thoda sa bhi uske soch se alag aapne kuch kiya toh."

There was silence in the room.

"Aap sabhko lagta hai ki meri wafadari sirf iss baat se prove hogi agar main apne 'so-called jode' se shaadi karun? I guess aap log samajh nahi rahe hai. Meri shaadi already ho chuki hai. And quite definitely, meri zindagi mein mera sirf ek hi pati ho sakta hai. Aap sabhko lagta hai ki maine saare cheelon ko accept kar liya hai toh kabhi puch lena kisi cheel se ki cheelon ke gufa mein 14 cheelon ko kisne maara hai. Veeranshu mera pati hai aur haan main usse pyaar karti hun. Abh ek aur baat sabh acche se samajh le. Agar main puri tarah cheelon ke saath ho jaati toh tum sabhko abhi Chandrakala aur Markaat ne dhul mein mila diya hota. Chandrakala ko abhi tak naaglok se dur maine rakha hai."

"Baat toh abhi wahi hai ki tumne ek cheel se pyaar karne ki galti ki hai." Someone else said.

"Ek baat toh main clear kar dun. Bhagwaan ne har jeev ko apna saathi chunne ki azaadi di hai. Point 1, main nahi maanti ki mere liye Bholenath ne Jay jaisa joda chuna hai. Aur chuna bhi hai toh mujhe pata hai unhone mujhe khud apna saathi chunne ki azaadi hai. Is janam mein toh kya agle saath janam tak Veeranshu mera saathi hai kyuki unse sach mein woh kiya hai jo ek saathi karta hai."

"Woh cheel tumhara saathi hai?" Mayank asked her. He pulled one of the naags before her. "Iski beti ne bhi yahi kaha tha ki woh giddh usse bohot pyaar karta hai. Ise aaj tak apni beti ki laash bhi nahi mili. Sabh khaa gaye." He then showed her two more naagins. "In dono ki betiyon ko bhi yahi laga ki cheel unke saathi hai. Maut bhi itni darawni mili thi unhe ki zinda noch khaya. Abhi lagta hai ki tumhara cheel tumhara saccha saathi hai?"

"Toh aapke kehna chahte hai ki Jay mera saccha saathi hai aur isse shaadi karne se meri wafadari saabit hoti hai. Kyuki usne Naagvansh ke rules follow kiye hai? Usse shaadi karun jisne mujhe 5 baar maarne ki koshish ki hai? Yeh mera saccha saathi hai? Isne jisne khud yeh qubool kiya hai mere saamne ki use koi aisa chahiye jo uske saamne jhuke, uske neeche rahe? Uski baat patthar ki lakeer maan kar rahe? Iske saath jo apne saathi ko barabari ka darja bhi nahi de sakta? Yeh mera saccha saathi hai?" Bani questioned.

"Galti hui thi, Bani. Abh mujhe samajh aa gaya hai." Jay tried to defend himself.

"Chalo yeh sabh chodo. Meri shaadi aap sabh Jay se karana chahte hai kyuki aapko lagta isse mujhe yaad aa jaayega ki Naagvansh ki zimmedari kya hai? Uss insaan ke saath rehne se jisne khud hi har hadd paar kar di? Yeh khud bhi toh do cheelon ke saath milke mujhe maarne ka plan bana raha tha? Ek hai Cheelon ka kul-guru aur dusra Markaat ka sabse wafadar saathi. Yeh toh bohot rules ke according hai."

"Wahi purani baat hai, Bani."

"Adi-Naagin se baat kar rahe ho, Jay. Jab tak bolne ki ijazat na di gayi ho, apna muh band rakho." Bani shut him up.

"Tum sabhko lagta hai ki Jay bohot rules follow karta hai na? Yeh sabh chodo, Jay. Hum dono ne ek din plan banaya tha ki baarudi surang tak Veeranshu ko leke jaayege jahan dhamaka hoga. Wahan dhamake mein Veeranshu mar jaayega. Uss waqt maine kaha tha tumse ki wahan kitne hi saanpo ki jaan jaa sakti hai. Tumne kaha tha ki Veeranshu ko marne ke liye kuch saanp mar bhi jaaye toh tumhe fark nahi padta. Maine tabhi tumse kaha tha ki Jay hum kisi bhi bekasur saanp ko apne plan mein nahi phek sakte. Tabh tumne kaha tha ki tum unki jaan bachaoge. Kaha the tum, Jay?"

"Tum khud bhi Veer ko wahan se bacha ke le gayi thi."

"Tumne suna tha kyu, Jay. Veeranshu ne hum dono ki jaan bachayi thi. Jis plane crash mein sabh ko mar jana chahiye tha, uss plane crash se hum dono bina kisi kahroch ke bach nikle. Veeranshu ne hum dono ko bachaya tha. Naagvansh ka hi niyam tha na? Jisne tumhari jaan bachayi ho uska respect karna chahiye hume. Usne humari jaan bachayi isi khaatir maine uski jaan bachayi. Uss person ko marne chod deti jisne kabhi meri jaan bachayi thi? Kahan ka respectful behavior hota?"

The questions Bani was throwing at him was proving him guilty on several occasions.

"Main maanta hun ki mujhe galti hui hai par mujhe samajh aaya aur abh main sahi raaste par aa chuka hun. Tumhara cheel? Woh abhi wahi hai. Jise kisi ki fikar nahi, kisi ka lihaz nahi. Tabhi toh uski cheel ki shaktiya bhi cheen li hai."

Bani laughed. "Tumhe kaise pata Jay? Yeh baat toh sirf Markaat, uske saathi aur Singhanias jaante hai." Bani questioned.

Jay dug his own pit by opening his large mouth.

"Abh tum kahoge ki tum Chandrakala ke saath mil gaye kyuki tum behek gaye. Uska saath de rahe the mujhe marne ke liye kyuki tum behek gaye. Tum cheel aur morni ke saath mil gaye kyuki tum behek gaye. Uss cheel ko azaad kar diya jise naagon ne bandh ke rakha tha Markaat ka saath dene ke liye? Kisi icchadhari naag-naagino ne nahi. Khud original naagon ne use wahan bandh ke rakha tha. Tumne use azaad kiya kyuki tum behek gaye."

"Yeh jhoot hai."

"Sharam karo, Jay. Bholenath ke saamne Naag Mandir mein jhoot bol rahe ho? Agar tum sach mein naag vansh ke saath ho toh phir yeh..." Bani pulled out a single feather that was stuck on Jay's jewellery. "Yeh kya tumhara hai?"

Jay's insides shook. Bani was not in a good mood. She was done with his shit and now had started to call him out on his bullcrap. Bani looked at closely.

"Ek minute. Yeh toh suparn ka pankh hai, right? Tumhar paas kaise aaya? Tum jaante ho kya kisi suparn ko?" Bani asked with a fake curiousity.

Jay was scared now. She played well. Jay presumed that Veer had managed to train Bani really well. To him, it wasn't a possiblity that she could manage to be this clever on her own. No.

"Yeh sabh tum mujhe phasne ke liye aur khud ko sahi batane ke liye kar rahi ho." Jay shouted.

"Awaaz neeche rakho, Jay. Tum Adi-Naagin se baat kar rahe ho. Baat karne ki tameez mat bhulo. Mujhse jab baat kar rahe ho, toh yeh baat dimag mein rakh lena ki main Sarvasresth Adi-Naagin hun. Jise Bholenath ne sabse pehle icchadhari hone ka vardaan diya tha. Toh apni awaaz unchi karke mujhse baat mat karo. Tumhare liye accha hoga." She warned him with a dangerous tone.

"Aur agar tum sabhko lagta hai ki main saare cheelon ke saath ho gayi hun toh bas ek baar kisi cheel se puchna ki cheelon ki gufa mein 14 cheelon ek saath kisne maara tha. Pata chal jaayega. Agar main apni zimmedari naagvansh ke liye bhul jaati toh maine kabhi Chandrakala aur Markaat ke baare mein kaha hi nahi hota."

Jay felt the plan flop badly. It didn't even come close to a wedding scenario.

They heard someone whistle from the edge. Everyone turned around and saw the cheels appear into the room they were all talking in. Veer whistled a tune. Not the same as the one Markaat whistles but it was still whistling a tune. Behind him were the cheels.

"Kya baat hai. Jeeju ne time pe entry maari hai." Vanshika almost whistled.

"Thanks, yaar. At the end of the day I have my Saali to depend on to back me up." Veer grinned and gave her a fist bump.

"Cheel Naag Mandir mein kaise aaye?" One of the naags questioned.

"Veeranshu?" Bani was herself shocked.

"Bani, tumne cheelon ko ijazat di yahan aane ki?" Jay tried to pin it on her.

"Aisi galti sweetheart sirf ek baar karti hai." Veer answered. He walked up towards Jay and Bani and stood before them, pushing away Jay from Bani.

"Kya swagat nahi karoge humara?" Veer asked everyone. "Suna hai ki kisi ko problem hai meri aur Bani ki shaadi se."

"Tum yahan aaye bhi kaise, cheel?" One of the naags asked.

"Mandir ke darwaaze se? Aur kahan se aaunga?" Veer asked. The cheels laughed at that. Sam, Daksh, Ponky and a few other cheels came up. One of the cheels pushed away Jay and set a chair for Veer.

"Baitho, Veer." He offered. Veer grinned and sat down.

"Haan. Abh batao. Kya problem hai tum sabhko?" Veer asked.

"Veeranshu, what is this about? Main handle kar rahi hun." Bani told him.

"Pata hai, sweetheart, par yeh shaadi hum dono ki hai. Tumse sawaal kar rahe hai matlab mujhse kar rahe hai. Aur meri aadat nahi ki main peeth peeche se waar karu, iss dhabewale ki tarah. Jo bhi kehta hun, jo bhi karta hun, saamne se karta hun." Veer answered. "Agar sawaal humari shaadi par utha rahe hai toh its only fair that we deal with it together. Waise toh mujhe pata hai tum kaafi ho sabse deal karne ke liye but something I might want to get clear."

"Veeranshu, tum jaao. Main dekh lungi."

"Bhabhi, aap toh jaante ho Veer bhai ko. Jo ek baar decide kar le. Wahi karte hai." Sam pointed out.

"Kya kar rahe ho, yaar? Pehle introduce toh kara lete hai. Yeh hai humare cheelon ke sartaaj, Veer Singhania. Humare Veer bhai. Urf Aakesh 2.0."

"Abe, yeh 2.0 kya hai? I'm the exact same person. Haan matlab kaafi updates hai from Satyug but the same person. 2.0 nahi, chote." Veer corrected. He pointed to Bani, "Nageshwari..." then pointed to Jay, "Hriday..." and finally to himself, "Aakesh."

That almost silenced all the naags. They didn't have much guts to face Aakesh. They had only heard of Aakesh's madness. To want to test it would be scary.

"Why are you raining on my parade?" Bani asked Veer.

"Sweetheart, main sirf tamasha dekhne aaya hun. Please. With all due respect, meri jaan, take your stage." Veer leaned back on the chair.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdha1712

This is getting amazzzzzzzzzzzzzzing!! Its been intriguing also!!


Best part of this fiction you are giving two parts in a go!! Jaise yeh log hume bi-episodes dete hai. I also do that 😆


Very well researched and the way you are explaining by combining with mytho is commendable!!


Dont mind if I am asking this questions ...not sure , if I had missed something while reading...

1. yeh markaat kaa maksad kyaa hai? Jungle has a rule. There's always a bigger predator than you out there. Even though eagles are on top of food chain, humans can hunt them down. So, no one out there in the jungle who is completely free of any kind of predator. Markaat wants to be the one who has no competition or no other greater than him.

2. What does he want to do with Veer? His own physical body is severely burnt after he was cursed. All the cheels are cursed that they get weaker during the day and sun burns them (not severely as it burns Markaat's physical body but some burn is there) but Veer is the only one who doesn't get weaker or burnt by the sun. So he wants to get control of Veer's body.


Stalkers could have followed this, series would have reached around 70 episodes...kaash aisa hotaa..


Great Job!!


Thanks ❤️

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Originally posted by: Dmad

You already know what I'm gonna say, interesting, amazing and so gripping, as usual!!😌

This... exactly this was what was missing from the show's track. This whole realisation that veeranshu's whole existence doesn't depend on him being a cheel. Bani did not fall for the cheel rajkumar she fell for the man that veer is!!

Although that realisation is still to come but i have full faith on you unlike mukta ji😂

And this is where step 1 of Markaat's plan fails...he was expecting veer to come running to him when he realises he's lost his powers, although if the rest of his plan works how he wants, things might just go his way...But but but dear writer, mukta nhi toh kya aap toh sunte ho na hmari😂

Seperation nhi chalega hume!! #vani

I wonder if someone from bani's family might just get brainwashed by Jai's words.... It would give us very different dynamic from veer's family. However might singhania's be, they totally support each other and are ready to fight to death for one another. While we already know that things are a little different in Bani's family (when are you gonna introduce the strict taskmaster rule follower and the uptight dad of vanshika??)🤔 I haven't introduced him completely but a glimpse. Bani's gonna need a different way to tackle him.

Baaki i really liked that veer is ready to lose his powers but not bani. The way bani consoled veer is also very articulately written. Veer doesn't want to go to markaat, because god knows owing a favour to a maniacal psychopath/ sociopath is a death sentence.

( hmm..which category would suryash fall in.. considering he is actually very calculative and cold hearted but then veer is also same..so veer can actually become a psychopath, if he so wants😮 but the way markaat behaves not taking his mistakes on his own shoulders and rather putting the blame on others, sociopath 101) I have a strong liking for the trope where the villain and anti-hero are almost similar except for that one point difference in them. Veer does have the capability but the side of him that comes from his mother, keeps him off being a murdering psychopath who kills for fun and the second reason he isn't a psychopath is the one we love the most. VAni Heart.

And i just realised i rather went towards a different tangent, back to the point🤣

So owing a favor to markaat is out of question, who else can grant cheelu baby his powers back..hmm garud?? Or we finally gonna see some more into why aakesh/veer is so connected to narayan..huh?? That is toh suspense. Although I'm not writing suspense 😆

Now on to bani, for a adi naagin bani is a little too sweet, naive..naive is the word!! She is too naive, she still hasn't got that edge that she would need to control the pit of snakes (literally and figuratively 🤣) that naaglok is. 😆 I'd agree with calling it a pit of snakes. It starts with how Bani is starting off. She was in Satyug where clans were very loyal to each other and a part of her still lives there. Satyug was supposedly the golden age. That's why Bani's a bit naive regarding her clan. She's going to learn.

I want her to get that edge... I want veer to be wowed by bani, not by her beauty, not because the man is half crazy for her..but because she just went and did something that's totally unpredictable and for just for once, i want jai and chandrakala to be afraid of bani..like really afraid!! Veer level afraid!!

I hope you update today as well..kya karu I'm greedy!! ❤️🙈

EDIT- you asked for a long comment na...lo here is it, it's long enough to be a f**king update!! Since you keep me happy by giving updates jaldi jaldi.. I'll keep you happy with long long comments!! Deal??😂🙈 Pakka Deal!!!



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Originally posted by: Janeavneil

These days the only excitement about naagin 5 is to read this story , I really want to thank you for making my vani heart so happy and excited. Each day I eagerly wait for the new update even after getting disappointed regarding how the makers have disappointed naagin 5.

The whole scenario of embarassed Bani was so much fun to read. It is good to see how their equation has changed from Bani not wanting Veer close to her to the Bani who seems to sit on his lap comfortably wearing his t shirt in the presence of everyone. I love that too. I think we're all a bit mushy when the girl wears her guy's shirt. I'm not different. its just a different feeling.


I felt so emotional seeing Veer so dejected like he lost everything. The way he said what Bani is to him comparing to her azaadi was mindblowing , could truly feel all the emotions. The way she stood with him and comforted him was so beautiful. I hope Bani finds some way for Veer to get back his powers , cant see our sassy and bold so dejected like this.


Being a true fan of naagin 5 , I am just too grateful to you and I am in awe with that wonderful creative brain of yours , had u been naagin's writer it would have gained high rating, I am so sad ekta doesnt have writers who are not even half talented like u.


keep writing more buddy and best wishes to u always


Thank you so much ❤️

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Feeling sad for Veer ... But pata hai aap jald hi use theek kardonge so feel relax a bit

Superb update dear keep writing keep updating


Thanks ❤️

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