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Chapter 49


“Jay, abh tum kuch bhi karlo, mujhe woh kara paaoge jo tum chahte ho. Mujhe agar kisi ko jawaab dena hai toh woh Bholenath hai. I’m not answerable to you all because tum sabh ne dimag mein bitha liya hai ki baat sunni hi nahi hai.” Bani made it clear to others there. Now that this was infront of them that the one who Bani had married was the incarnation of Aakesh, there was no way to claim that he didn’t love her. The whole question didn’t arise because whole naaglok knew it. Aakesh had died for Nageshwari.

“Main ise nahi manta.” One of them commented. Bani turned to look at them.

“Abhi kaha na, mujhe sirf Bholenath ko jawaab dena hai. Agar unhe koi mushkil hai toh bas abhi sabhke saamne hi mujhe yeh keh dein. Main har ek sawaal ka jawaab dene ke liye tayyar hun.” Bani claimed. “Humesha hi mujhe Bholenath ne sahi aur galat bataya hai. Jab Aakesh ko maar diya toh Bholenath ne mujhe uski saza ki di. Aur agar yeh galat hai toh iski bhi saza denge. Abh tum sabh agar yeh kehna chahte ho ki Bholenath galat hai toh abh main kaise hi samjhau.”

“Bani, ek baar phir soch lo. Ho sakta hai ki iske baad tumhari popularity hi khatam ho jaaye.” Shreya told her.

“Dadi, main aaj bhi kahungi jo humesha kaha hai. Har woh naag-naagin jisne sach mein Naagvansh ke baare socha hai, maine uska saath diya hai. Abh baat popularity ki nahi hai. Mujhe Bholenath ne Sarvasresth Adi-Naagin banaya hai. Aur har mode par main iss baat ko prove kiya hai ki maine Naagvansh ke liye woh sabh kiya hai jo zaroori hai. Agar main Naagvansh ki Adi-Naagin hun toh ek patni bhi hun. Koi meri shaadi par sawaal kare toh khoon jalta hai. Jis din maine apni zimmedari nahi nibhayi us din sawaal karna. Yeh saare bekaar ke sawaal ka jawaab dena hi nahi hai mujhe.”

“Bani, tum galat kar rahi ho.”

“Tum yeh sawaal puchne ka haq kho chuke ho. Tum toh sahi aur galat ki baat mat karo. Tumhare muh se accha nahi lagta.”

Jay had begun to get angry.

“Bas bohot ho gaya, Bani. Acche se koshish ki tumhe sahi raaste pe lane ki abh toh shayad tumhare pati ki tarah samjhana padega.”

Jay moved ahead to attack her. Veer stood up, his rage in his eyes. Bani stopped him.

“Peeche hato.” She told him. The way Bani said it, Veer was surprised. It was not Bani Sharma. It wasn’t Bani Singhania. It wasn’t Bani at all. It was Adi-Naagin. Bani grabbed his throat before he could attack her. “Jo tumhare bas ki baat nahi woh mat karo, Jay”

The troop Jay had bought moved to attack Bani. Bani turned into her naagin form.

“Aakhri warning hai, peeche hato. Abhi tak maine respectfully baat ki hai. Jab main aise attack pe nahi utar aayi toh tum sabh bhi khud ko itna control kar hi sakte ho.” Bani warned them.

“Hume aur sunna hi nahi hai. Bohot sun liya. Aaj tumhe aur tumhare cheel ko yahin maar ke gaadh denge.” They tried to scare her. They were mistaking her for a 25-years old girl.

Bani simply defended herself. She didn’t want hurt her own kind and make the matter anymore easier for Jay to claim she wasn’t loyal to her kin anymore.

“Teri himmat kaise hui humare Veer bhai aur Bhabhi ke baare mein aisa bolne ki?” Sam grabbed him. “Tu gaadhega humare Veer bhai aur Bhabhi ko?”

“Sam, chod do use. Main bhi dekhu ki inki galat fehmi strong hai yaa mere iraade.” Bani told him. The cheels were confused. They were used to Veer’s action. If someone had tried to do the same to him, by now they’d be on the floor dead. Veer didn’t take kindly to anyone rebelling against him.

The way she so easily defended herself surprised Veer. She wasn’t like him. She had controlled her temper for so long especially when he knew how short tempered, she was.

“Tum sabh pagal ho gaye ho kya?” Mayank stopped the dagger that came up at Bani. “Hum mein se kisi ne bhi iss baat ke liye haan nahi kahi ki iss tarah se Adi-Naagin par hamla karein. Woh khud hum mein se ek hai. Yeh Adi-Naagin hai. Icchadhari Naagvansh shuru isse hota hai.”

“Agar irada yeh hota ki inhe Naagvansh ki maryada ki raksha karni hoti toh aise attack karte hi nahi. Starting se hi inhe sirf Bani ko maarne ke liye yahan bheja tha.” Veer commented. Veer showed them the photographs showing those naags with Jay and Chandrakala. “Bhul gaye kya, chote? Tere hi hotel ke upar meri company ne ek floor kharid liya hai. Tere hotel mein aate jaate har person ka photograph aur video recording hai mere paas.”

One of the naags stabbed her.

“Bhabhi….” Sam, Daksh and Ponky went to her. It was a momentary reaction and they grabbed the naag who stabbed her. Veer grabbed his throat.

“Himmat kaise hui teri? Yeh meri biwi hai.” Veer’s anger coursed through his eyes.

Several other naag-naagins were shocked that some cheels were defending Bani. They hadn’t expected it.

“Peeche hato.” Bani told them.

“Kya hai yeh, Bhabhi. Isne aapko maarne ki koshish ki hai aur aap is budhau ki baat sunke le rahi hai. Yeh hota kon hai sawaal karne wala?” Sam was annoyed.

“Peeche hato.” Bani said. They moved away begrudgingly.

“Tu bahar mil kabhi akele. Tabh dikhate hai tujhe ki cheel kya kar sakte hai.”

“Khatam kar do saare cheelon ko yahi.” Jay ordered. They moved to attack the cheel. None of the still had the dare to fight Veer out of fear that Aakesh had made for himself. Bani pushed Ponky behind herself when he didn’t seem to be able to take it alone.

The chaos became a little too much. Bani’s temper dam broke.

“Bas….” She hissed loudly and her smashed her foot against the floor. The hiss was so dangerous that it froze everyone in their spot. The temple started to shake. Bani’s rage moved the temple. The old pieces of stone started to fall down.

“Sweetheart ke gusse ka dam toot gaya hai.” Veer commented. Bani grabbed the throat of one of the naags who tried to brave her.

“Ek baar mein baat samajh nahi aati kya? Bas ka matlab hota hai bas.” Bani hissed at him. Her eyes red in rage. Her skin flashed the red scales with blue-black marks. The ones who had been brainwashed by Jay that Bani had forsaken Naagvansh and its rules were stunned. Till now, they had seen how calmly Bani was trying speak to them. “Main kisi bhi naag yaa naagin ki jaan nahi lena chahti par agar iske baad kisi ne bhi ladai shuru kiya toh khatam main karungi.”

Jay tried to move ahead.

“Unhe dara sakti ho. Mujhe nahi. Main Naagvansh ke saath khada hun.”

“Jay, apne muh se kitna jhooth nikaloge? Zeher toh saare naag-naagino ke paas hota hai but ir presumes instead of a venom sac, you have an organ that spits out lies.” Bani hissed at him. He tried to fight her but was futile. Bani was simply defending herself.

Veer couldn’t understand what she was trying to prove. Why wasn’t she attacking anyone? He knew it was just itching her to attack Jay. He could see the violence dancing under her skin.

“Bani, kya kar rahi ho? Yeh sabh tumhe maarne ke liye nikale hai aur tum bas defend kar rahi ho?” Veer asked her pushing away Jay.

“Tu beech mein aaya hai warna sabh theek tha…” Jay shouted.

“Aye… chup. Jab main apni biwi se baat kar raha hunt oh beech mein mat bol.” Veer growled. Jay tried to bite venom into Veer out of anger but Bani pushed Veer aside.

“Jay, apni limit mein raho. Veer ne tum par pehla vaar kiya hi nahi. Sirf dhakka maara hai. Not even the kind that would throw you against the wall or on the floor.” Bani reminded him.

“Adi-Naagin, main ya mere saathi yahan tumse ladne nahi aaye the. Yahan iss baat ko samjhane aaye the tumhe ki tum galti kar rahi ho. Ek cheel ko apna saathi maan rahi ho. Yeh naagvansh mein kabhi nahi hua hai.” Mayank made it clear. He wasn’t there to fight Bani. No. He was there to make a wrong into right. If this was turning into something as a conspiracy against Bani, he was walking away. “Abh agar yahan tumhe maarne ki saazish ho rahi hai toh main yahan se jaana chahunga. Na toh maine kabhi kisi naagvanshi ke saath ladai ki hai aur na hi karunga. Usse toh bilkul nahi jisko Bholenath ka vardaan hai. Kyuki agar tumhe vardaan unhone khud unki iccha se di hai toh tum uske kaabil ho. Hum sabh ne 100 saalon ke baad yeh vardaan paaya hai ki hum sabh icchadhari ban sake. Tumhe unhone khud yeh vardaan diya hai.”

“Saazish toh hai.” Bani said with a chuckle. By now, it was clear to Bani that a few of the naags were here just to try and pull down Bani and throw Jay up in the sequence. Now, as that plan was failing, they decided to take the King Cobra route. They tried to run and attack Veer. Bani pushed Veer behind her and faced the naag. The fierce look in her eyes made the stop for a moment.

“Ek Naagin ke saamne uske saathi ko maarne ki himmat mat karna bhari padega.” Bani warned. He tried to attack her but she defended herself. The naags pushed Bani away. He fell over the stairs of the idol.

“Bohot kar liya baat. Abh Adi-Naagin aur uske iss cheel ko hi khatam kar denge.” One of them exclaimed.

“Main phir se keh rahi hun. Peeche hat jaao. Main kisi bhi naag ko maarna nahi chahti. Tum sabh hi naagvansh ke ho aur main Adi-Naagin hun. Kisi bhi naag ki jaan lene ka irada nahi hai mera. Majboor mat karo mujhe.” Bani tried to tell them again. They didn’t bother to listen.

This time Bani caught the attack. Her eyes flared her rage. She grabbed his throat and threw him away. The naag crashed against the wall and fell down. The other naag picked up the trishul and tried to kill Bani with it.

“Bani….” Veer shouted. A certain energy stopped the trishul from even touching Bani. A golden airy energy stopped the trishul from touching her. Same golden light burned from the idol. How could Shiva ever let a trishul hurt someone who was his devotee?

“Trishul se Adi-Naagin ko marne ki koshish kar rahe ho? Woh bhi Bholenath ke mandir ke trishul se? Bewakoofi ki bhi hadd hoti hai.” Bani caught the trishul. She put it back where it was picked up from. Another tried to stab Bani but she stopped it with her magic. Holding back the dagger. She turned into her snake form and coiled around him. The cracking of bone was heard. The naag was old enough but he couldn’t stand the force of nature that Bani was. She hissed violently at anyone else who wanted to try and fight her.

The naags attacking her were the one whom Jay had managed to bribe. They just wanted to kill Bani somehow.

“Adi-Naagin, abh yeh kisi ki maan-maryada ki baat se aage badh chuki hai. Abh yeh saazish hai.” Bela agreed. “Saaf dikh raha hai isse ki Chandrakala ne aapko marne ke liye in sabhko yahan bheja hai.”

“Main phir se warning de rahi hun. Abhi waqt hai Chandrakala ka saath chod do. Main phir bhi use maaf kar du jisne mujhe maarne ki koshish ki hai. Par jisne Naagvansh ke saath gaddari ki hai, use main maaf nahi karungi.” Bani warned for the last time.

The naag had no cover anymore but attacked Bani again. This time she wasn’t defensive. Bani picked up the trishul next to her and impaled the naag over it. As the trishul pierced through the naag, blood spilled over her. Another naag tried to attack Bani and she attacked him with her venom. The naag fell to the ground shaking and writhing in pain. She grabbed another one of the naag by their throat and began choking him.

Veer just looked at Bani in shock. He knew she was capable of intense violence but to see her exactly like this was shocking. He had only heard once that every woman imbibed the element of Shakti. The Goddess. Seeing Bani fight like that only made him believe that. There was no other way to explain Shakti better than this. She’s benevolent but when you cross the line with her, she’s going to kill you. Shakti is the eternal Goddess. She killed several demons. You don’t mess with the Goddess. It is still possible to be saved from the Gods but once you cross the Goddess, there’s no escape. Death will find its way to you in the most violent ends. After all, Shakti was also Kali.

Bani threw another naag off and he fell right at the idol. Knocking over the oil lamp. The oil spilled and set fire to the curtains.

“Bani…” Aishwarya moved but even the fire would stop Bani. It didn’t even touch her. One by one, she hunt down the naags who had forsaken then vow to stay loyal to naagvansh.

“Jo tumne mere saath kiya hai, main use phir bhi maaf kar dun. Par agar samjhane pare bhi tum naagvansh ke khilaaf us Chandrakala se jaa miloge toh ant yahi hoga.” Bani told him. Her hands choked the throat. Crackling of bones was heard and the naag fell down dead.

Bani stomped her foot against the floor, the temple shook with the force.

“Ek baat pure naagvansh ko samjha diya jaaye toh sahi hoga. Jo bhi Chandrakala ke saath milke naagvansh ke khilaaf jaayega, use bhi yahi saza milegi. Main iss baat ko kabhi accept nahi karungi ki naagvansh ke sabse bade dushman se koi jaa mile. Aur naagvansh ke sabse bade dushman Markaat aur Chandrakala hai.” Bani made it clear. The way she stood there, covered in blood, it sent shivers down their spines. No one dared to counter her at that moment. Her eyes still burned with the rage. Bani could accept anything but not betrayal against her clan. She couldn’t forgive Aakesh betraying her and killing naag-naagins and hence killed him regardless of what her insides told her.

“Bani…” Veer touched her shoulder. “Calm down. Relax.”

Even the display of rage and violence didn’t scare off Veer. Veer took the small jugs of water that were kept in the temple so the devotees could pour water over the shivling. He took some water and poured it over her arms and cleaned the blood off her. No one would dare to step anywhere close to Bani. Not even her own naagvansh but the way Veer was so calm against her temper surprised everyone. “Breathe, sweetheart, breathe.”

Veer, himself, was capable of violence that would look worse than this. There would be corpses lying around with organs torn apart. Bani’s violence would fair on the righteous side but Veer’s violence would seem like Ares on a rampage. Violence incarnate. But there’s also an unusual calm with Veer. He had a lot control on his temper.

“Aaj toh main yeh baat prove kar hi dungi ki Bholenath ne bhi mere decision ko accept kiya hai.” Bani answered.

Bani took Veer’s hand. She lit the fire before her. Panditayin had already started to read the mantra. Veer just followed her. The sudden reaction brought him into shock.

“Bholenath, aapke saamne main agni ko saksh maan ke Veeranshu ko apna saathi maan rahi hun. Ek janam ke liye nahi har janam mein. Har shaadi mein 4 zaroori cheezein hoti hai. Ek bharosa. Veeranshu jabse mujhe mila hai tabse leke aaj tak usne mujhe us par bharosa karne ki wajah di hai. Khud chot khake bhi usne humesha mujhe bachaya hai. Dusra, pyaar. Yeh baat toh hai hi ki shayad koi itna pyaar nahi kar sakta mujhe ki jaan deke bhi phir se wahi pyaar ka pagalpan karne ki himmat kare. Veeranshu ko mujhse saccha pyaar hai aur mujhe Veeranshu se pyaar hai. Teesra, dono ek dusre ko barabar mane. Iss shaadi mein Veeranshu ne humesha hi mujhe barabari ka darja diya. Woh respect di hai jo har patni deserve karti hai. Chauta, Dheeraj. Jitna patience Veeranshu ne mere saath dikhayi hai utna shayad koi nahi kar sakta. Har mod par maine use kitna kuch nahi kaha phir bhi usne humesha hi mere liye patience dikhayi hai.” Bani told to the idol of Shiva.

“Agar iske baad bhi aapko lagta hai ki kisi bhi tarah se mera Veeranshu se pyaar karna yaa shaadi karna galat hai... Toh meri aapse prarthna hai aap aake ise roke. Mujhe pata hai ki Veeranshu aur mere beech kya hai. Aapko pata hai. Shayad itna pyaar kisi se phir na ho paaye. Itna pyaar shayad Nageshwari ko Hriday se nahi hua jitna pyaar mujhe Veeranshu se kyuki uski ek nahi hazaar wajah hai.”

Bani held Veer’s hand and walked around the fire. This much everyone in Naagvansh believed that with how much Bani trusted and had faith in Shiva, he would never turn down anything she asks of him. If she calls to him, he’d always answer back. In some way or the other.

Veer was just too stunned. He hadn’t been expecting this. He was expecting something like Bani going mad angry and breaking down the entire temple in rage. But not this. He never thought she’d someday be so bold to confess that she loves him infront of everyone who had opposed to it. Bani knew her respect and her image before her naagvansh mattered to her a lot. His eyes just froze at him. She was in her human naagin form. Not the ideal bridal finery but Veer didn’t have the mind to think of it. Veer was standing in his black jeans, plain grey full sleeved shirt and jacket.

“Main do phere le chuki hun, Bholenath. Abhi aapko nahi aana mujhe rokne?” Bani asked him. Bani continued with the rest of the phere. Nothing happened which would stop them. “Dekhiye, paanch phere ho chuke. Abh bas do phere bache hai.”

She continued and the seven circles around the fire had finished. Bani looked at the idol. “Agar yeh galat tha, Bholenath, toh meri prarthna thi kia ap mujhe rokne aaye. Saath phere le chuki hun. Abh peeche nahi hat sakti. Aap bhi mujhe bata de ki aapko abhi lagta hai aapne mere zidd ke wajah se mujhe yeh karne ki ijazat di hai yaa aapko bhi lagta hai ki Veeranshu hai mera saathi.”

Bani and Veer stood before the idol. Veer just looked at Bani. He was too stunned. Speechless with how she had suddenly put everything in this way. The bel leaves put over the shivling flew and fell upon the couple. Bani smiled at that. It was considered a sign that he had blessed them.

“Abh kisi ko aur kuch kehna hai?” Bani asked everyone there. None of them could say anything considering the entire belief that Bholenath had himself blessed them together.

“Ho gaya? Ya kisi aur ko aur kuch add karna hai?” Bani asked. The other naags left. Only ones standing were Bani’s family.

“Ek minute. Yeh sapna tha ya tumne sach mein mujhe shaadi ki hai?” Veer asked her. Bani turned and gave him a look. “Kya? Honestly, I’m still registering the shock. Aisa pagalpan sirf main karta hun. Out of both of us, you’re the sane one. I didn’t expect this kind of craziness from you.”

The guys laughed at Veer and his shock.

Jay got really angry and tried to attack Bani. Bani was fast. She bit him. That said, Jay started bleeding. The shock made him fall down and he injured himself further. Jay kept bleeding. It didn’t heal up. He couldn’t understand why he wasn’t being able to heal. His ability to heal himself was gone. He just kept bleeding out. Bani’s hemotoxic venom resulted in the inability of the blood to clot. His own venom was not being able to cut her venom.

“Jay, tumhe pata hai na? Mere zeher ka iss duniya aaj tak kaat nahi banaya hai. Best of luck with it. Abh jabh bhi tumhara khoon bahega and you don’t get it stitched, you’ll bleed out and die.” Bani reminded Jay. The fear poured into his eyes as the realization hit. There was no cure made for the venom that Bani had because no scientist had ever extracted that venom to make an antidote for it. Not to mention, she had three pairs of venom sac in her snake form which meant she could any mix of venoms as she pleased. All three kinds of venoms were present in her and she pleased, she could use them. So, if in a way one became immune to one of the venom, she still had eight other mix of venoms to use and kill. She wasn’t the deadliest for no reason.

“Bani…. Please… mujhe bachao.” Jay begged her. “Main phir se yeh nahi karunga.” Jay begged her.

“Kyu Jay? Tum toh mujhe bol rahe the ki main tumhari baat sun lun, mere liye accha hoga and all that.” A dangerous look in Bani’s eyes and she sat down next to Jay. She just simply sat there. Not helping at all. “Aadhe ghanta mein zeher puri tarah tumhari body mein chala gaya hoga. After that a little prick and you’ll keep bleeding out. Until the outer tissue heals itself.”

Bani got and started to leave.

“Are you really planning to leave him here and bleed to death?” Aishwarya asked.

“Acha hai na. Mar jaayega toh dharti par bhoj kam ho jaayega.” Veer commented.

“Bechara abhi Adi-Naag hai.”

“Bua, abh se mere nazron mein iss Adi-Naag ki koi respect nahi hai. Tumne toh Narayan ki kasam khaayi aur use tod di?”

“Maine nahi todi… Naagvansh se gaddari nahi ki hai maine. Bas tumhe paane ki koshish ki hai. Veer ne bhi aise hi zabardasti tumne paaya hai na?”

“Markaat ke saath ja milna dhoka hi kehlaata hai, Jay. Aur tum apne aap ko please Veeranshu se compare mat karo. Uska koi comparison hi nahi hai. Aasmaan ka koi comparison ho sakta hai kya?”

“Ufff…. Mera dil…” Veer was back to being dramatic.

“Ho gaya?” Bani asked him with a smile. “Chachu, yeh hai Veeranshu.” Bani introduced Veer to Amar. “Veeranshu, yeh mere chachu hai and meri chachi.”

The two shared an odd look.

“You’re not expecting me to get all soft at him, are you? Just because I’ve accepted this marriage doesn’t change ki yeh Aakesh hai.” Amar commented. Bani started laughed.

“Chachu, aap bhi na. Yeh kha nahi jaayega aapko.” Bani said.

“Bani, that is not the part. He’s not exactly the most ideal person. There’s a stark difference between me and him. See, I respect ki tume usse pyaar hai aur usse tumse hai and I’m definitely tolerating him for this warna yeh kaafi badtameez hai. Bohot dekha hai isse. Baccha tha tabhi badtameez tha aur abhi hai.” Amar commented. “And then again. Kisi bhi baap ko uski beti ka aashiq accha nahi lagta.”

Bani laughed.

“Thank you, chachu. I don’t expect you to get all friendly with him but aapne accept kiya hai, yahi kaafi hai mere liye.”

“I’m no one to make decisions for you, meri jaan. Chachu hunt oh itna kar sakta hun ki tumhe suggestion du but I don’t want to make decisions for you on your behalf. You’ve always been free to decide for yourself. Bas itna yaad rakhna ki main humesha tumhare saath hun.” He kissed Bani’s forehead.

“Whatever…” Shreya walked away. She was still sour that his granddaughter married a cheel. Veer and the cheels moved away chuckling.

“Aakesh…” Kushal looked at Veer.

“Veer.” He corrected.

“Ek hi baat hai. Tum wahi bacche ho na jo humesha Aishwarya ke cabin mein baitha rehta tha?” Kushal asked.

“Main ya Sam honge.”

“Jise aapne dekha tha woh Veer hi tha.” Aishwarya explained. “Pure cast ko black paint kar diya tha.”

“There has been several occasions when I had a cast toh pata nahi kabh dekha hoga mujhe.”

“Meri bacchi ka khyal rakhna.”

“Apni jaan se zyaada.”

Kushal patted on his arm and left.

“Congratulations.” Aishwarya hugged the two.

“Excuse the fact that yeh kuch zyaada hi adverse situation mein hua.” Bani said.

“Its okay. Humari family mein normal shaadi kisi ki nahi hui hai.”

All them walked out of Naag Mandir and saw Rishi and Kartik sitting on a bike. They spotted the group and went up to Bani and Vanshika.

“Di, seriously. Hua kya? Dadi looked angry.” Rishi asked.

“Uhmm… Uhmm…. Obvious nahi hai?” Kartik asked pointing to Veer who was standing next to Bani.

“Veer, yeh mere bhai hai. Rishi aur Kartik. Mere chachu ke bete hai.” Bhai introduced.

“Tum sach mein Aakesh ho kya?” Rishi asked.

“Tha.” Veer corrected. He didn’t understand why everyone kept calling him Aakesh. “Matlab. Sabh mujhe Aakesh bula rahe hai. 10,000 divya varsh ho chuka hai mujhe Aakesh rahe.”

“Chill, dude, personal kyu ho rahe ho? Naaglok mein sabh aapko Aakesh hi bulayenge because they recognize you as Aakesh. You’re like a 2.0 version.” Kartik commented. “Tumhe idea bhi nahi hai ki Aakesh ki popularity kya hai Naaglok mein. Most of the population is scared. The rest are just those who get a little too interested in Aakesh-Nageshwari stuff. Its like Romeo Juliet to them.”

“Oh. Yeh Romeo Juliet kaha se aaya? Aakesh and Nageshwari story bohot hi alag hai.” Bani commented. “Aur please. Iska ego waise bhi aasmaan se uncha hai. Neeche aane ka sawaal nahi aata tum aur mat udao.”

“Well, honestly speaking, if you had heard of the stuff he can do, you’d be impressed too. Matlab dude almost aasmaan ko control kar sakta tha.” Rishi pointed out. Veer chuckled.

“Things I could do until Markaat took away my cheel powers.”

“Tum cheelon ke Rajkumar ho na?” Kartik asked.

“Haan…”

“Ek minute. Mera idea kaam nahi aaya kya?” Vanshika asked.

“Pura karne ka time hi nahi mila. Hum gaye the shamshaan but wahan pata chala ki Bhabhi is in trouble with this whole stuff. Tapish bhai ne call karke kaha ki unhone office ke aage Chandrakala ko dekha. The office which is above us dhabewale ka restaurant. Toh sabh yahan aa gaye.” Sam explained.

“Kya plan tha?” Rishi asked.

“Well, so to brief up the events that happened in a few days. Markaat Veer ki body mein ghus chuka tha and tried to control him. Woh nahi hua and some how managed to get it back. Uske baad Markaat ne shakti le li. But considering he was inside Veer at some point, thodi soul energy traces toh honge na Veer mein. Toh I suggested them to go to some aghori and manipulate that to get back his powers.” Vanshika told them.

“Vanshika, yeh bacche hai. Inhe kaise samajh aayega?” Daksh asked.

“We’re 17 not 7 ki baat samajh nahi aayegi.” Kartik pointed out. “And do you realize ki ek side se yeh plan is faulty?”

“Faulty? Kaise?” Vanshika asked.

“See, everyone knows this. Markaat se saare cheelon ko shaktiya milti. Unlike us who get it either genetically or after 100 years of penance. Inko janam se milti hai. They’re all cheel by birth. They grow up as cheel. We grow up as human until we hit puberty when we finally get out naag powers. Jeeju ne kaha na abhi ki unki cheel ki shaktiya Markaat ne le li. So, what are the odds that he can’t do that again?”

“What?”

“V, think. Socho. It’s a circle. Its flawed kyuki phir jeeju ki shaktiya tubelight ki tarah flicker karenge. Also, we don’t know ki exactly kitni soul energy hai jeeju mein Markaat ki. Markaat ke paas 12,000 divya varsho ki collected potential soul energy. Even if we consider that jeeju ke paas unke khud ki 10,000 divya varsh ki collected potential soul energy hai. Markaat still had 2000 divya varsh more of the energy. You can’t compete with it so easily. Lets presume ki us mein se 70% kharch ho gayi while they were wrestling for control. Then some more for the whole exiting and entering a body. He’s still left with 20% of the energy. At the end of the day, jo shaktiyan milti hai cheelon ko it comes from Markaat. Jeeju energy manipulate karne mein successful ho bhi gaye toh Markaat use wapas cheen sakta hai. Kyuki we’re using his soul energy. He can control his own soul energy. Especially because’s got the same energy as of the demigods. Aur hume yeh nahi pata ki jeeju ke paas itni energy hai ya nahi Markaat ki that we repeat the whole process again.” Kartik explained.

The cheels and Bani just looked the twins and Vanshika having a conversation.

“Haan but ek half of soul energy manipulate kiya toh we can do the other half too. You know aghoris do that all the time.”

“You do exactly know ki Markaat ke khud ke paas limited energy hogi. He’ll use it scarcely. Chalo maan liya hum yeh yoyo khel bhi rahe hai but if the energy finishes when jeeju loses his power tabh?”

“Haan, but there has to be another way na.”

“V, yeh Aakesh hai. Same soul but different body. He has the same abilities.”

“Main abhi cheel nahi hun.” Veer cut the conversation.

“Ek minute. Beech mein mat aao. Important conversation ho raha hai.”

“V, he could control the sky. Toh possible bhi toh hai ki he can used runes to still control the sky. Not to mention they have some stone that allows this.”

“Gandhak? Haan it works in controlling the sky but abhi cheel nahi hun toh kyu sunega meri?”

“Gandhak sirf cheel rajkumar ki baat sunta hai because it has got its own rune. Gandhak par sky rune hai and that rune reacts to the energy in you. Markaat ne shaktiyan cheen li but the blood doesn’t change. You still have the same blood as that of your parents. The same genetic makeup. Anatomically, you lost your wings and talons but genetically make up abhi same hai. Because you’re all born as cheel rather than becoming cheel after a while.” Rishi answered.

“Toh agar Veer manages to use his own blood then it will make gandhak work the same?”

“Almost. Dekho. Maine sirf aisa suna tha ki Aakesh’s blood used to react to sky and sun runes.” Kartik commented. He took out a scalpel. “Thoda sa dard hoga but it will be fine.”

“Oh, hello? Kya? Yeh dissection kar rahe ho kya?” Bani asked.

“Di, aap thodi der baad apne lover form mein aa sakte ho? Ek minute.” Rishi asked.

Kartik carved two runes over his wrist.

“Ow…” Veer winced. Red blood oozed out from the carved rune but after a moment turned golden.

“Bro…” Kartik and Rishi both gave each other hi-five.

“If the sun rune works on him, he has to have some part of Garud’s line in him.” Vanshika commented.

“Hai. Isiliye cheel Rajkumar tha. Dono Garud aur Arun ke vansh side equally hai.” Veer explained.

“Good. Toh suno. I’m not sure but maine suna hai ki there is some kind of island of birds off coast of Mumbai. I have heard ki wahan ek energy block hai. That might help you. The only way to get you back your powers if you get it from somewhere else instead of Markaat. Gandhak use recognize kar hi lega. Yeh dono runes should help you control gandhak.” Rishi suggested.

“I really don’t know ki tum dono ko yeh sabh kyu pata hai.” Bani commented.

“Kyuki we’re talented, di. Abh aapke bhai hai toh thoda uss level tak aana hi padega na.” Kartik said.

“I hadn’t imagined ki hume kuch naag help karenge.” Daksh commented.

“Well, humne bas apne jeeju ki help ki hai. So, next time you need second opinion on magic, please do contact us.” The twins said together.

“Mujhe laga ki saare naag uss dhabewale ki tarah honge.”

“Adi-Naag? Na na…. Unlike him, some of us are actually useful.” Rishi pointed out. “Mujhe toh tabhi doubt hua jab woh humare ghar aa gaya. Oh, by the way, agar yeh successful hota hai please hume details dena ki exactly kya hua.”

“Main bata dungi.” Vanshika assured.

“Great then, Bani di. Aapki shaadi par congratulation. Please… itni jaldi hume uncle banne ka shauk nahi hai toh please do be careful.” The said. Bani hit them on the head. They laughed.

“Tum dono ke license bhi hai bike chalane ki?” Bani asked.

“Di, yeh kya hawaldar jaise puch rahe ho. Itni raat ko kon check karega. Even if they do, hum bol denge ki Veer Singhania humare jeeju. Sawaal hume rokenge.” The twin chuckled. All the boys and Vanshika laughed. Bani rolled her eyes at them. “Anyway. All the best, Jeeju. Humari naak mat katana.”

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Chapter 50


It was already morning by the time they reached the island. The Singhanias and Vanshika reached the island. Veer hadn’t been here since he was five. Before that he was here as Aakesh. He remembered the island as Aakesh.

The birds flew down at him and flew around him. Sometimes sitting on his shoulder and sometimes flying around him. One of the birds tried to grab his shirt. Veer gave a sad look. He whistled in response. The bird fell silent at that, almost as if feeling sad with him. The swallow rubbed its head against Veer’s forehead. Veer gave a sad smile.

“They understand you?” Bani asked.

“Haan. Main unhe samajh sakta hun aur who mujhe samajh sakte hai.” He told her. “They wanted me to fly with them.”

Veer had a sad smile at that. A familiar crow flew towards Veer.

“Kakot?!” Veer recognized it quickly.

“Bas. Accha hua yaad raha.” Kakot commented.

“Yaad kaise nahi rehta. Mere sabse acche dost the.”

“The?”

“Ho.”

“Yeh behtar hai.

“Dekh ke aaya hun. Markaat aur Shakura dono badali gufa mein so rahe hai.”

“Aas paas koi aur cheel hai? Markaat ne pehra toh lagaya hi hoga na.”

“Jiss raaste pe tum ho, wahan nahi,”

Veer turned to the swallow bird and whistled something. The bird quickly flew away.

“Bhaga diya cute se bird ko? Kya, Veer bhai?” Ponky complained.

“Bhagaya nahi. Use kaha hai ki saare panchiyo ko bata de ki agar humare aas paas koi cheel ho toh hume aagah kar de.” Kakot explained.

“Kya baat hai, Veer bhai. Kya plan banaya hai.” Ponky was impressed. The boys looked at him.

“Shut up.” All of them said together.

They reached an old temple of Narayan after a while of going through the forest. The moment they crossed the temple’s boundary gate, Veer felt an odd feeling. He had his memories of Aakesh but not everything. First, he got back all the memories related to Nageshwari. Then some related to those that he learnt. A few other memories that were close to his heart. Yet, when he stepped inside the temple, he felt an odd feeling. The Deja-vu. There were a species of birds that Bani never saw anywhere. Not even a photograph of those kind of birds. They looked more beautiful than macaws and peacocks. They were small. Almost smaller than parrots but larger than swallow birds.

Veer tried to think if he had been here before as everyone entered the temple. The Gandhak patthar just kept spinning around the place confusing everyone. They started to look for anything that could suggest that the energy block was here.

“Veeranshu, sabh theek hai na?” Bani asked noticing how he looked.

“Haan. Just thinking.” Veer answered. Bani joined the boys in looking around.

He noticed a large shadow. There was a storm but still the shadow was unmissable. He saw it and tried to fly through the storm towards what seemed to cause the shadow. He saw the large wings. The way in the dark sky, the white silver lightning cracks. It seemed as if golden light was flashing over the stormy clouds. He tried to fly ahead but the storm made it a bit difficult. The storm generally allows them to fly a little higher than they can normally. But this was even higher. He just looked up. He noticed a golden feather falling down.

It spun crazily around storm like a leaf in the storm. He tried to get the feather and, in that process flew over the temple. As if something turned an off switch, the wings disappeared. He turned back human and started to tumble down towards the ground. His eyes regardless stayed on the golden feather. He fell down through the trees, the branches scratching him. One of the branches scratched his face but his eyes stayed on the feather. It landed on top of a tall tree. A red wood tree.

He fell on the ground but considering her fell through the branches, the force of the fall was lessened. The pain on hitting the ground was considerably less. He could have died if he hit the ground straight from the height he fell from.

A crazy smile appeared on his face. He tried to open his wing but it wouldn’t work. He walked out of the temple, scared and tried to open again. This time the wings came out. He tried to fly into the temple but fell down again as a human. After a few tries, he realized that the temple takes away his powers of shapeshifting. Still determined, he started to climb up the tree but kept falling down.

He kept trying to climb up but constantly fell down. The whole night, he tried to keep climbing up, not accepting defeat even once the whole night.

“Aakesh…” He heard his father. At that he realized it was close to dawn and went out flying back to the caves.

Veer went out of the temple as the memory came back to him. He reached a familiar spot. He looked around. He began to remember some memories he didn't remember before.

“Tum Aakesh ho na?” A man asked him. He was sitting on a stone, leaning against a tree. He was beautiful. Aakesh had never seen a man look so beautiful. As if the sunrise in physical form. He wore a yellow dhoti. His hair was long and came down till his shoulders. A few rings on his fingers. He had atla colouring his palms. Even with him not being exactly the description of masculine, he was still beautiful. No man could match that beauty. He had a flute in his hands. Aakesh didn’t know him.

Aakesh was tending to a small bird. He had just removed the arrow that struck the bird. The bird cried in pain. Aakesh pet the bird and put a medicinal paste around the wound. He had taken the turmeric from the temple and some other herbs. Aakesh ran his thumb over the bird’s head soft and whistled to the bird, assuring him that the pain would go away.

“Haan.” Aakesh answered to the man. The man walked up to the bird who seemed to be in so much pain. The man pet the bird with his fingers. There was an odd kind of grace to him. It wasn’t kingly. Aakesh had seen kings. The bird whistled to him about pain and he whistled back.

“Theek ho jaaoge…” Aakesh told the bird. The man sat down and played the flute. The tune was so beautiful. Aakesh had never anyone play it so beautiful. The man played the flute for the bird. Slowly putting it to sleep with how soft and enchanting the tune was. It had to be enchanting if it put the bird to sleep. Aakesh put the bird in a nest that he made for the birds. He continued to play the flute. It was as if all the birds would sing to his flute. Aakesh was surprised.

After a while he stopped playing.

“Tum bansuri acchi baja lete ho.” Aakesh told him.

“Dhanyawad.” He chuckled at that. “Maine suna hai ki tumhe kisi bhi cheez ka bhay nahi hai.”

“Darr kamzoro ke liye hota hai.”

“Nahi. Darr unke liye jo kisi cheez se pyaar karte hai.”

Aakesh raised his eyebrow.

“Pyaar? Jisse bohot pyaar tha wo maa thi. Abh maa bhi nahi hai.”

“Toh tumhe bhay isiliye nahi hai kyuki tumhare paas kuch aisa hai hi nahi jise khone se tumhe lage ki tum kho gaye ho.”

“Baba ko apni izzat bohot pyaari hai. Apni takat bohot pyaari aur apni satta bohot pyaari hai. Un mein kuch bhi meri nahi hai. Izzat ka kya matlab hai. Koi tumhe accha samajhta hai aur koi bura. Dekhne wale par nirbhar karta hai.Takat tabh tak hai jab tak jaan hai. Satta hai jabh tak takat hai. Main sirf use dhundh raha hun jo mrityu ke bhi pare hoti hai. In sabh ke pare ho.”

“Hai aisa kuch jo sabke pare ho. Iss sansaar ka sabse khoobsurat ehsaas hai.”

“Kya? Bhakti? Suna hai maine. Pandit kehte rehte hai. Bhagwaan ki sharan mein chale jaao Aakesh, tumhe sabh kuch mil jaayega.” Aakesh laughed at that. The man chuckled.

“Sachai hai usmein parantu shayad woh tumhare liye nahi hai. Jo tumhe chahiye woh shayad,” He put his pointing finger on his chest, where his heart was hidden inside the rib cage, “yahan.. hai.”

“Dil? Woh shayad nahi hai mere paas.”

“Hai. Isiliye iss panchi ka dard tumhe samajh aa raha tha.”

“Woh alag baat hai. Aur tum jo keh rahe ho woh alag hai. Aisa koi nahi hai jo mujhe apne kaabu mein kar sakte.”

“Ek din toh hoga. Uss din tum woh sabh kar jaaoge jo tum nahi karte. Ek din tumhe aisa kuch zaroor milega jo tumhe sabse pyaara hoga. Tabh darr ka ehsaas hoga. Use khone ka darr.”

He tried to climb up the tree top to get the feather.

"Nahi chadh paaoge, Aakesh."

"Aur tumhe yeh lagta hai kyuki?"

"Kyuki kuch cheezein takat se nahi milti. Jiss pankh ko tum paana chahte ho, woh Garud ka pankh hai. Aise hi nahi milti. Dil mein use paane ki kaamna ke saath use paane ke liye prerna bhi honi chahiye."

"Hai na. Jeet ka junoon. Jitne ja junoon hai aur wahi karunga."

The man laughed.

"Agar sirf junoon kaafi hota jeetne ke liye toh har insaan vijeta hota. Jeet prerna ke wajah se hoti hai. Konsi prerna hai jiske khaatir tum har hadd paar kar jaao."

Veer looked around to see if he’d somehow see that man again.

“Kya, Veer? Satyug mein ek insaan ko dekha tha. Woh tumhe phirse kaise dikhega?” Veer rolled his eyes at himself.

Veer looked at the tree. Could the feather possibly still be there?

“Kakot, ek kaam karoge? Upar jaake dekho ke waha koi golden pankh hai ya nahi.” Veer told Kakot.

“Main le aau kya?”

“Na. Bas dekho aur mujhe batao ki waha hai yaa nahi.”

Kakot flew up towards the tree and returned.

“Hai. Itna khoobsurat hai ki maine kabhi aisa pankh dekha hi nahi.”

Veer smiled. Veer touched the trunk of the tree. He recognized a few scratches over the bark which was caused by Aakesh’s dagger. The tree was so old. Some woodpeckers made their home in the bark. Veer tried to climb the tree. He remembered that since the first meeting, every dusk to dawn, when Aakesh tried to climb the tree, he’d be there. Something it would annoy him and sometimes his conversations were amusing.

“Veer…” At the temple, all of them started looking for Veer.

“Yeh gaya kahan?” Balwant questioned, a little irritated that his son sudden went missing. Bani remembered the memory. She ran out. When she found the tree, she saw Veer, almost half way up the tree.

“Veeranshu…” Bani shouted.

“Veer, kya pagalpan hai yeh? Neeche aa.” Balwant shouted but Veer continued to climb up. None of the cheels could fly up.

“Daddyji, yahan na toh meri naagin ki shaktiyan chalengi aur na hi aap mein kisi ki cheel shaktiya. Mandir ke chaukhat ke baad hi shaktiya wapas aayengi.” She told him. “Veeranshu, please neeche aao. Gir jaaoge.”

Veer was adamant. He had gone almost halfway up. As Aakesh he couldn’t come this far. Veer whistled a tune. The tune that the special species of birds here would sing. He caught the habit of whistling it as a coping mechanism when he felt he was in a dangerous situation. Dangerous even for him. These birds only sang two tunes. One of the tunes, Markaat whistled. The other Veer whistled. The birds sang it with Veer. Veer grinned at that.

“Thanks, yaar. Help ho rahi hai.” He thanked the bird. Even if he couldn’t understand that particular species of bird, they understood him.

“Veer, please neeche aa jaa. Sach mein wahan se gira toh marr jaayega.” Tapish tried to tell him.

“Tapish bhai, please baith jaao. Veer bhai neeche aane se rahe nahi. We should rather focus on putting something so that if falls, he doesn’t die. Koi trap hi laga dete hai.” Sam suggested.

“Chup.” Balwant silenced Sam. “Veer, main tujhe bol raha hun tu abhi ke abhi neeche aa. Gussa mat dila mujhe.”

Veer kept climbing up.

“Veeranshu, please. Upar ki tehniya kamzor hoti hai. Tum gir jaaoge.” Bani tried to tell him. She was super worried.

“Woh neeche nahi aane wala. Aakesh ko humesha se hi wahan jaana tha.” Kakot pointed out.

“Par wahan hai kya? Itni zidd se upar chadhta rehta hai.” Bani complained.

“Bachpan mein bhi jab mom hume yahan laati thi, tabhi use yahi ped chadna hota tha.” Tapish complained. “Pagal hai yeh.”

“Veer, sun le. Neeche aa jaa. Chod de jo bhi hai wahan.” Pawan tried to convince Veer.

“Abh jis height par hai, Veer bhai, wahan tak awaaz bhi na jaaye shayad.” Sam commented as he sat down. “Baith jaa. Jabh dil bhar jaayega. Khud hi aa jaayege.”

Veer could almost see the golden feather now. It was within his eye-sight. The only problem was that it was on the weak branches. There was no way he could climb there. He’d fall down and kill himself. Veer tried to think of how to reach there. Only way is to jump up, grab the feather and as he fell, somehow grab a branch. Veer whistled while trying to think of how to get it. He was almost around 50 feet above the ground.

Veer’s madness often drove Balwant mad. He had no idea how the boy had survived 27 years with his crazy antics. Someday it is flying acrobatics. Someday it is cycling on the barrister of the stairs. Someday it is bike racing through rocky roads. Someday it is street fighting. He’s crazy. Every other, he’d do something crazy. Today it was climbing till the top.

“Mera beta hi meri jaan ka dushman ban gaya hai. Heart attack dila ke hi chodega.” Balwant growled. Tapish wanted to laugh but controlled himself because if he laughed, Balwant was going to kill him.

Veer took the gandhak out of his pocket and tried to hit the branch that the feather rested on so it would fall down and Veer would catch it. Stone hit the target but didn’t break the branch. The stone fell down but Veer gave no damn. All the Singhanias jumped out of the way when Gandhak fell down, out of fear that the stone would go out of control again. Bani caught it.

“Abe, pagal ho gaya hai kya? Kisi ke sar pe lagegi.” Pawan shouted. Veer looked down and laughed at the sight. Balwant looked damn angry.

“Ballu toh pura mood mein aa gaya yaar.” Veer muttered. “Ballu ya pankh?” Veer tried to think which one was more important in the moment. He looked up at the feather and then down at Balwant.

“Ballu toh humesha hi gurrata rehta hai. I’ll go for the feather.” Veer decided. This time Veer took a dagger. It was sharp and would most probably cut the branch.

Veer threw the dagger. Slowly, as if floating down, the feather began to come down. Veer waited for the exact moment and jumped from the branch he was standing on to grab the feather. He started falling through the branches.

“Veeranshu…” Bani shouted, her heart stopped when she saw him falling down.

“Veer…” Balwant shouted.

Falling though, his foot got stuck between some branch and he dangled upside down. Veer sighed in relief. But more than that, there was a victorious grin on his face. The feather was in his hands. He looked at the feather. It was beautifully golden as if made of gold and so soft that he could swear that even swans would be jealous of how soft the feather was.

“Now the question is. How do I get down?” Veer wondered. Kakot flew up and sat on the branch where his foot was stuck. He tried to get himself to hold on to another branch but wasn’t happening. After several tried, his foot untangled itself from the branches and he went down falling further.

“Veeranshu…” Bani panicked. He was about to fall off the ground when a group of eagles grabbed hold of him. Just managing to keep him from falling. Veer quickly caught hold of a branch. The eagles flew around Veer till his reached the ground.

“Wahan meri maiyyad ki planning kar li, jo shehzaade sahib neeche aa gaye?” Balwant shouted at him. “Neeche gir jaata toh?”

“Nahi gira na, dad…” Veer showed the feather.

“Pankh lene upar takh chad gaye the? Sarphira tha hi abh lagta hai tera mental balance hil gaya hai. Koi pagalkhane ko call karo.”

“Tum theek ho na? Chot lagi hai kya kahin? Kya hai yeh, Veeranshu? Matlab pankh lene utne upar tak chad gaye?” Bani scolded softly checking the injuries.

“Bani, ek baar dekho dhyan se ise.” Veer told him.

“Bas kisi suparn ka pankh hai. Toh kya?” Pawan asked.

“Chachu, aisa sirf ek hi suparn hai jise Narayan ke mandir ke upar se udne ki ijazat hai.” The comment made Bani shocked. “Koi panchi bhi mandir ke upar se nahi udte. They go around the temple. Humare cheel ki shaktiyan bhi chali jaati hai yahan. Toh guess karo kiska pankh ho sakta hai. Agar Satyug se survive kiya hai iss pankh ne then it isn’t an ordinary one.”

“Garud…” Bani whispered. Veer grinned.

“Sweetheart meri smart hai.” He teased.

“Toh kya kar loge iska? Dream catcher banaoge?” Balwant asked annoyed at his antics.

“Kaise hai yeh? Itni badi cheez mere haath lagi aur yeh dream catcher ki baat kar rahe hai? Ajeeb baap hai mera.”

“Haan kyu tu beta ajeeb hai.”

Vanshika laughed.

“Perfect jodi hai baap-bete ki.” Vanshika commented. Everyone laughed. She took the feather from Veer. “By God, kya Khazana hai though. I can’t even imagine.”

“Well, If I had my old wings, I could put this in place of the lost feathers and I’d have got new feathers like this one.” Veer said.

“Pankh nahi hai tere paas abhi, Veer. Toh kyu gaya itne upar ise lene?” Pawan asked. Veer then looked at the feather and then at Bani. He gave it to Bani.

“You know how when one of the eyelashes fall down, they call it a wish granter. Humare cheelon mein maante hai ki Garud ke pankh work as wish granters. So, agar tumhari koi wish hai toh puri ho jaayegi. Like it you could ask for it as a weapon and it would become one.” Veer told Bani.

“Veer, tu khud bhi toh ise istemaal kar sakta hai na.” Tapish asked.

“Tapish bhai, Aakesh tha tab aasmaan mein udd raha tha. Toofan tha toh bas I was gliding through the stormy winds. Aur bohot upar tak pohoch gaya tha. Tabh mujhpar ek shadow aayi. Really huge. Like utna bada bird exist hi nahi karta. Almost golden in its shine. Jaise suraj leke chalta ho pankho mein. Took a while but I realized ki bohot uchayi par it was Garud soaring through the air. It was just my luck ki mujhe dikha. Warna it is impossible to even catch a glimpse of it. Tabh yeh pankh seedha neeche gira.” Veer started telling Tapish, “Bohot koshish ki uss din chadne ki aur pankh paane ki but couldn’t. Next day jab yahan aaya toh ek panchi zakhmi halat mein tha. I was tending to the bird jab eka admi mujhe mila. Alag hi baat thi unmein. There’s no way to describe him. The kind of grace that no one could manage to have”

“Veer, point kya prove karna chahta hai?” Balwant asked.

“Mujhe ek din kaha ki har jagah pe jeet takat ked um par nahi jeeti jaati. Kabhi kabhi it depends on what drives you to win. Sometimes you don’t win even if you put your everything at risk and gamble but you win even when you have nothing to lose but still have something to win for. Meri sabse Azeez cheez mere wings the, Tapish bhai. I lost them. And at this point, I have lost hope to get them back. Subah se dhundh rahe hai. Kisi ko mila koi tareeka? Nahi. But I have the only thing I can’t bare to lose…” He looked at Bani. “Toh bas, agar tumhari koi wish hai toh puri kar lo. It can’t give me something jo Markaat se judi hai. Cheelon ko shakti sirf Markaat deta hai. And I’m not going back to him for it.”

“Sabh mein se mujhe hi kyu? Tum Sam se bhi toh utna pyaar karte ho.”

"Kyuki mere paas Sam ke liye kuch aur hai." Veer explained. He turned to Veer and gave him the ring and brooch that belongs to Cheel Rajkumar. "Abh se meri jagah tu Cheelon ka Rajkumar."

"Veer bhai, yeh kyu kar rahe ho? Main aapki jagah lun?" Sam asked.

"Yaad hai bachpan mein hum dono ko wahi same cheez chahiye hoti thi. Bas. Yeh bhi aisa hi hai."

"Veer bhai, mujhse nahi hoga. Mere liye humare boss humesha aap hi rahe hai."

"Accha kal toh team badal li thi aur Bani ko join kar liya tha."

"Bhai, agar aap raja hai humare toh aapki patni toh us rishte se humari rani hui na. Bas isiliye."

"Yeh saala 2000 mein hi bik gaya. Isse zyaada toh iski pocket money hai."

"Jo kaat di gayi thi. Dad ki favourite wine ki last bottle thi. Use main pi gaya toh bas gusse mein dad ne kaat di meri pocket money. Aisi kangaal halat mein 2000 bhi bohot hote hai." Ponky defended himself.

"Veer bhai, phir bhi. Main aapki jagah nahi le sakta. Aap Tapish bhai ko bol dijiye." Sam said moving back. "Bachpan se hum dono ne ek hi khilauna pasand kiya. Dono ko wahi cycle chahiye thi. Wahi soft toys chahiye thi but kasam se, Veer bhai, ek second ke liye kabhi aapki jagah lene ka thought nahi aaya."

"Tu mera bhai hai, yaar, mera dost hai, meri jaan bhi hai. Tu aur main humesha se sabse close the. Remember humne pact banaya tha ek point pe? Jab kuch aisa ho jo humare liye important ho woh ya toh tere paas honi chahiye yaa phir mere paas."

"Bhai, this isn't something I want. Please. Aapki jagah lena nahi chahta. Hum sabh ne uss din itna celebrate kiya tha kyuki aap Cheelon ke Rajkumar bane the. Daksh aur Ponky toh humesha hi aapki parchaayi banke ghume hai. Parchaayi bane the toh kisi aur ke saath kaise chale jaaye?"

"Daksh, Ponky, tum dono hi batao. Agar Sam Cheelon ka Rajkumar bane toh tum dono use support karoge, right?"

"Veer bhai, hum Sam ko toh support karenge kyuki woh bhai hai humara after all par Cheelon ke Rajkumar hum sabh ke liye bas aap hi hai." Daksh agreed.

"Saalon, tumhara apna bhai ban raha hai. Thoda toh excitement dikhao. Main toh phir bhi cousin hun. Yeh. Yeh Samrat, yeh tumhara apna bhai hai." Veer commented.

That landed Veer a tight punch from Daksh.

"Daksh..." Pawan stood between them.

"Iss baar bol diya. Phir se mat bolna. Ek baar mein bhai bolte ho aur dusre pal mein paraya kar diya? Ek baat batao. Kab kisi ne yeh kaha hai ki hum ek dusre ke bhai nahi hai? Kabhi kisi ne point out kiya ki hum sirf cousins hai? Kisi ne? Maine? Sam ne? Monil ne? Ponky ne? Kabhi bhi? Aisa kaha ki aap humare apne bhai nahi hai?" Daksh was severely offended that Veer had the audacity to say that only Sam was his own brother.

"Itni si baat pe senti ho gaya?" Veer asked.

"Aapne toh phir bhi Daksh se yeh kaha ki aap cousin hai uske. Mujhe toh seedha apni jagah lene ko keh diya. Main kya karun?" Sam asked him.

"Tu samajh kyu nahi raha? Tujhe bhi pata hai aur mujhe pata hai ki agar time se kisi ko Cheelon ka Rajkumar nahi banaya toh mushkil ho jaayegi. Uss Dhabewale ne apna bada sa muh khola aur unn cheelon ke saamne keh diya ki main abhi cheel nahi hun. Abh jaldi alag tamasha shuru ho jaayega. I can't let that happen. Aur agar koi hai jo mere jaisa hai woh bas tu hai."



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Acha, guys, though a question. Should I start posting the story on Wattpad as well? Like have them with a bit more mature scenes since IF has some restrictions? Let me know...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

Oh my my..I'm loving this. This is super se upar..FANTABULOUS.👏👏👏👏.


YOU ARE AMAZING❤❤.


Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Wow wow wow...

Another amazing update...

You are a excellent writer...

Please continue soon...


Thank you... sabhka comment padne mein maza aata hai yaar. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdha1712

Writer madam, you took one day to update....not acceptable as you already left the updates in a cliff hanger... :) As fans, we demand you should update this on a daily basis...


Updates are as usual amazing..


Any plans to update tonight? waiting for next two parts..


Okay... daily update dene ka try karungi 😆. Aaj ka update toh kar diya.


I like to leave everyone on a hanging note so you come back to read next part na 😈

Thanks yaar for liking the story and reading it ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

Too too good. The way Bani told veer she loves him and explained him who is real veer and cheel powers are gonna come if u try. Wow that's awesome.

And the way Bani s handling naag vansh people. My god this is so so good. I can imagine scenes Yaar. Loved it. So so good.

Pls pls update soon. Waiting waiting to know what happens next.

Awesome Mind-blowing u r . Kudos to u


I like to think that Bani's a character that needs growing. Mere hisaab se Bani, as a naagin, is still in her Satyug when times were very different. But slowly she's growing to understand that she needs to mould according to the time.


I always wanted to see Bani and Veer's emotional bonding while they have their sizzling chemistry. So, I try to write that way.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sumbalkhattak

Braaaavo 👏 i swear this is one of the best stories ive read so far. You've got me glued to your story and honestly throughout the week i desperatley wait for your update rather than waiting for any bts or even the original weekly naagin episode. Mukta ko tumse writing classes leni chahye. I feel more connected to your fanfiction than the original naagin episodes. Wish your fanfiction was in the form of a book, i would have read it in one go ❤️

Please update soon, wait nahin hota 😳


Thanks ❤️

I genuinely always wished that the original Naagin could have a bit more of mythological elements because Naag-Naagin are a large part of the mythological stories I've grown up listening to. Toh I try to add those elements to my story.

I hope you keep enjoying.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: afnashahid

Kamal kr diya yr .......

What an amazing update😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Veer the savage cheel is back 😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜

Well done its just amazing one specially part 48 totally worth waiting 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

Bani the adi naagin form mein a gayi Jay tu gya

Abh toh Jay ki daal galne se rahi nahi kahin bhi. 😆

Veer isn't 100% back but returning slowly.

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Originally posted by: Dmad

Oooohhh!! This is getting soo interesting. I loove loovve like really loovve this bani.

Chaa gyi ladki..ohh sorry adi naagin!!😆

The way bani went on to explain to veeranshu was exceptional yr!! I wanted this all along, because this gives us a glimpse into the man veer singhania is..he might be confident as hell, crazzy and veryy powerful but insaan hai ( some part atleast😛) toh insecurities bhi hongi. This peek into his insecurities is really well written. Although still there's lot left to discover in veeranshu, i love how you're peeling those layers back slowly and steadily!!! Main kya karun I'm just too obsessed with Aakesh and Veer.

Now on to the star of the update, mrs. Bani Veeranshu singhania.

She gets him, like really gets him. She knows what'll make him tick. When she was all like, veer daddyji ke liye tum cheel nhi veer ho, spne bhaiyon ke liye tum veer ho phle, the man wasn't ready to accept. But then his gharwali threw in the ace card. She questioned his love for her and lo and behold, dhatt se jawaab aa gya "ye pyaar hi toh nhi chutta bani" and our sweetheart instantly knew the route she had to take to make cheelu baby understand!! Cheelu baby ka pyaar hi toh hai jo use abhi tak mentally theek rakha hai. Bani understands that Veer loves her but I always presume she never realized the intensity in his heart because she's never longed for anyone like he had. He pines for her and that is why everything about her matters to him.

Although i still think that veer hasn't fully grasped what bani was trying to explain it to him. He has kept all of that side for now, because the dhaabevala is again creating ruckus and that means issues for bani. Although Bani is capable of handling issues on her own but Veer use apna adha-ang, ardhangini kehta hai so he wants to be her A Team. That's why he shows up. He knows Bani is capable. Bas main yeh dynamic dekhne se reh hi nahi paati. Show mein toh dikhne se raha nahi toh yahan hi sahi

Vanshika..tumhara kehna hi kya!! I hope she never regrets trusting singhania boys, ik veer and sam would never betray her but i want daksh and ponky to be on good side as well!! I started off with her character as someone who on the outsides matches her lifestyle with that of cheels but is a Naagin. These guys all have attended the same school and are the same rich brats so I like to see that side but still having that naagin-cheel vibe.

sam and tapish have always rooted for vani. Now i want the remaining 2 devars of bani baby to root for #vani😳

This reminds me... oho devars and bhabhi bonding was brilliantly written, aren't singhania's veryy rich toh ponky 2000 ki bribe se hi khush ho gya😆. Kya bani itni kanjoosi, pati ki cheque book se cheque kaat kr deti na!!🤭 Ek saath mein apne pati par itna haq jatayegi toh Veeranshu khushi se hi mar jaayega 😆

Chalo aaggey badte hue, the vision...ab cheelon ke baad naagon ka number lga hai kya adi naagin ke haathon marne ka🤣...but bani wouldn't harm/ hurt / kill her naag naagins until and unless she is veeerrry angry and vo tabhi hota hai jab veer ko koi hurt krta hai..hmmm jai ke badbolepann ki vjah se now every naag knows that veeranshu has lost his powers. I wonder..!!

Bani ne jai mathur ka pura ka pura patta hi saaf kr diya aaj...after today, after bani is done with him i don't think naaglok main kahi uski daal galegi!! I hope after this f**king meeting is done with, every naag naagin realises that bani is not someone to mess with. Bani's made it clear ki boss kon hai aur jald hi they'll all bend down to her. Majorly they all underestimate her thinking she only had a few years of being a naagin. So, they try to take her casually. Abh nahi lenge.

Bani sweetheart, keep a close eye on your cousin's dad and your daadi. Jinn logon ko pride bahut pyaari hoti hai na aksar unki sahi galat main farak krne ke shakti thodi weak hoti hain!! Bani ki family ka dynamic hi aisa hai. Her dadi cares about her but since she was Naagrani, everything to her is secondary when compared to her pride as one of naagvansh. Jaise insaano mein prejudice aur traditions roots into the older generation so strongly, waise hi I like to think ki Naaglok mein bhi hai. That's why I am enjoying to explore. Its a whole society of people who are half snakes and half humans. Woh hona toh chahiye.

I really enjoyed the dialogues yr!! Esp the one where bani is all like "Acha? Meri shaadi par maine aapko bulaya? Ki aap mujhe apna aashirwaad dein aur mere pati ko apna damad banaye?"

Channelling your inner veeranshu or your inner vanshika bani??😆 I guess a bit of both.

Is aakesh the voldemort of naaglok!!🤣 I like to think Aakesh's reputation preceeds him. That's why they're all scared of him. Voldemort nahi toh Bellatrix hi sahi 😆

Naam suna nhi ki sab ke sab chup. Yes, veeranshu baitho aur tamasha dekho. You deserve it, bani uss 2 takke ke looser ki jam ke lene vali hai and there's no one on this earth who deserves to watch the drama unfold more than you!!😂🤭


Abhi toh drama bacha hai. Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost.... 😆

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Originally posted by: Andetheres

Amazing amazing updates. 👍🏼

Loved it. 👏

Bani in Veeranshu style is a treat to read and imagine. 😎 I like to see that side too. Like Bani being Bani Veeranshu Singhania. Veer's better half.

Ponky Ponky , a 2000 rupees Is enough for him to change sides. 🤣 Waise toh Bani ki naagin aankhen hi kaafi hai Ponky ke liye but decided to be nice and give the baby a lollipop. Abh lollipop toh lollipop hota hai chahe kitna bhi ho🤣

Poor veer , his brothers ditched. 😆 Kismein itni himmat ki Bani ko cross kare when she's in mood with her patidev

And his father whom he has trust that won’t leave him , is stuck between two strong heads unable to decide sides. 🤓

The way bani and his brothers caged him for a normal talk. 😎

Vanshika is always in her jiju’s side. 👍🏼 I've got to think now ki Veer-Vanshika bonding better hogi ya Meera-Veer ki. Jeeju-Saali or Bhabhi-Devar. Because I like to think all Cheel bros are TaRa shippers. Gives me a good idea for a part

Finally she found a way to get back Veers powers. 👏

Bani ....sorry sorry Adi Naagin ..I am impressed by you today. The way you dealt with your clan and backstabber Jay. 🥳🤗

Veeranshu’s entry at the right time , maybe right place .....his entry is always special. 😎🤗

Why do I think that something more is going to happen ?? ( because According to Sams feeling / vision , Bani was covered in blood so there has to be a action sequence ......maybe the end of Jay / Chandrakala is near )

Loved ur fabulous work.👍🏼


Thank you ❤️

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Wow mind-blowing. The way Bani tried to explain naags during fight calmly..and then she fighting them with anger. Wow it's awesome. Loved it

And she getting married with veer before everyone and talking to bolenath. Loved it.

And veer story regarding garuda and he getting pankh. Awesome mind-blowing it is.

Waiting to know what happens next.

Update soon please

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