Vani FF// The Phoenix (Thread 2 Link in Pg 1) - Page 21

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

Wow.. Mind-blowing. It's fun and emotional the way veer reacted. Loved each bit.

Veer struggling through and Bani being with him and helping. Hope he gets his powers back soon.

Loved it so.good.the way u explain its awesome.

Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Wow wow wow...

Another super amazing update...

Continue soon...

Thanks ❤️

Oh my my..I'm loving this. This is super se upar..FANTABULOUS.👏👏👏👏.

YOU ARE AMAZING❤❤.

Wow wow wow...

Another amazing update...

You are a excellent writer...

Please continue soon...

Writer madam, you took one day to update....not acceptable as you already left the updates in a cliff hanger... :) As fans, we demand you should update this on a daily basis...

Updates are as usual amazing..

Any plans to update tonight? waiting for next two parts..

Too too good. The way Bani told veer she loves him and explained him who is real veer and cheel powers are gonna come if u try. Wow that's awesome.

And the way Bani s handling naag vansh people. My god this is so so good. I can imagine scenes Yaar. Loved it. So so good.

Pls pls update soon. Waiting waiting to know what happens next.

Awesome Mind-blowing u r . Kudos to u

Braaaavo 👏 i swear this is one of the best stories ive read so far. You've got me glued to your story and honestly throughout the week i desperatley wait for your update rather than waiting for any bts or even the original weekly naagin episode. Mukta ko tumse writing classes leni chahye. I feel more connected to your fanfiction than the original naagin episodes. Wish your fanfiction was in the form of a book, i would have read it in one go ❤️

Please update soon, wait nahin hota 😳

I read multiple times now again. The way Bani explained veer. And veer coming to naag Mandir waah. That's so good. Pls update today only. Please please

Kamal kr diya yr .......

What an amazing update😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Veer the savage cheel is back 😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜

Well done its just amazing one specially part 48 totally worth waiting 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

Bani the adi naagin form mein a gayi Jay tu gya

Oooohhh!! This is getting soo interesting. I loove loovve like really loovve this bani.

Chaa gyi ladki..ohh sorry adi naagin!!😆

The way bani went on to explain to veeranshu was exceptional yr!! I wanted this all along, because this gives us a glimpse into the man veer singhania is..he might be confident as hell, crazzy and veryy powerful but insaan hai ( some part atleast😛) toh insecurities bhi hongi. This peek into his insecurities is really well written. Although still there's lot left to discover in veeranshu, i love how you're peeling those layers back slowly and steadily!!!

Now on to the star of the update, mrs. Bani Veeranshu singhania.

She gets him, like really gets him. She knows what'll make him tick. When she was all like, veer daddyji ke liye tum cheel nhi veer ho, spne bhaiyon ke liye tum veer ho phle, the man wasn't ready to accept. But then his gharwali threw in the ace card. She questioned his love for her and lo and behold, dhatt se jawaab aa gya "ye pyaar hi toh nhi chutta bani" and our sweetheart instantly knew the route she had to take to make cheelu baby understand!!

Although i still think that veer hasn't fully grasped what bani was trying to explain it to him. He has kept all of that side for now, because the dhaabevala is again creating ruckus and that means issues for bani.

Vanshika..tumhara kehna hi kya!! I hope she never regrets trusting singhania boys, ik veer and sam would never betray her but i want daksh and ponky to be on good side as well!!

sam and tapish have always rooted for vani. Now i want the remaining 2 devars of bani baby to root for #vani😳

This reminds me... oho devars and bhabhi bonding was brilliantly written, aren't singhania's veryy rich toh ponky 2000 ki bribe se hi khush ho gya😆. Kya bani itni kanjoosi, pati ki cheque book se cheque kaat kr deti na!!🤭

Chalo aaggey badte hue, the vision...ab cheelon ke baad naagon ka number lga hai kya adi naagin ke haathon marne ka🤣...but bani wouldn't harm/ hurt / kill her naag naagins until and unless she is veeerrry angry and vo tabhi hota hai jab veer ko koi hurt krta hai..hmmm jai ke badbolepann ki vjah se now every naag knows that veeranshu has lost his powers. I wonder..!!

Bani ne jai mathur ka pura ka pura patta hi saaf kr diya aaj...after today, after bani is done with him i don't think naaglok main kahi uski daal galegi!! I hope after this f**king meeting is done with, every naag naagin realises that bani is not someone to mess with.

Bani sweetheart, keep a close eye on your cousin's dad and your daadi. Jinn logon ko pride bahut pyaari hoti hai na aksar unki sahi galat main farak krne ke shakti thodi weak hoti hain!!

I really enjoyed the dialogues yr!! Esp the one where bani is all like "Acha? Meri shaadi par maine aapko bulaya? Ki aap mujhe apna aashirwaad dein aur mere pati ko apna damad banaye?"

Channelling your inner veeranshu or your inner vanshika bani??😆

Is aakesh the voldemort of naaglok!!🤣

Naam suna nhi ki sab ke sab chup. Yes, veeranshu baitho aur tamasha dekho. You deserve it, bani uss 2 takke ke looser ki jam ke lene vali hai and there's no one on this earth who deserves to watch the drama unfold more than you!!😂🤭

Amazing amazing updates. 👍🏼

Loved it. 👏

Bani in Veeranshu style is a treat to read and imagine. 😎

Ponky Ponky , a 2000 rupees Is enough for him to change sides. 🤣

Poor veer , his brothers ditched. 😆

And his father whom he has trust that won’t leave him , is stuck between two strong heads unable to decide sides. 🤓

The way bani and his brothers caged him for a normal talk. 😎

Vanshika is always in her jiju’s side. 👍🏼

Finally she found a way to get back Veers powers. 👏

Bani ....sorry sorry Adi Naagin ..I am impressed by you today. The way you dealt with your clan and backstabber Jay. 🥳🤗

Veeranshu’s entry at the right time , maybe right place .....his entry is always special. 😎🤗

Why do I think that something more is going to happen ?? ( because According to Sams feeling / vision , Bani was covered in blood so there has to be a action sequence ......maybe the end of Jay / Chandrakala is near )

Loved ur fabulous work.👍🏼