Purvir FF-. moh moh k DHAAGE✨✨|INDEX updated| - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Mast hai Piya...purvi aisa hi kuch sunayegi Monday ko...😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it Piya especially purvi saying no against d poisoned ladoo 👏

Waiting for your update!!

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Thank you for your appreciation n encouragement🤗

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Vir ne hi beizzati ki thi naa Purvi ki ab vo hi sabke samne uska samman lautayga..


Fabulous expressions dude 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sxshh

Vir ne hi beizzati ki thi naa Purvi ki ab vo hi sabke samne uska samman lautayga..


Fabulous expressions dude 👏

thanks dear ❤️

While reading ur FF I thought our thoughts match a lot 🤩 hope we'll have a good camaraderie🤗

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Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

thanks dear ❤️

While reading ur FF I thought our thoughts match a lot 🤩 hope we'll have a good camaraderie🤗

I too hope the same.. so finally I got my first forum friend

Cheers 🥂

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Originally posted by: Sxshh

I too hope the same.. so finally I got my first forum friend

Cheers 🥂

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Piyaaa update karo na😳

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Piyaaa update karo na😳

jaldi karti hu 😃

Yeh EDT me bakwaass Karne se fursat nhi mil rhi 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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part 2~toote dhaage

There was silence everywhere untill Pur has left, everyone was shook beyond words

And looked towards Vir who without looking at anyone just rushed towards the car when suddenly he felt something beneath his feet

It was pur's MS he was stunned but grabbed the MS "ab me sab theek Kar dunga baawri" and left...

IN THE HAVELI

(Kids were in the school, Prakashi along with bhurjali n yodha were at the Temple praying for purvir togetherness while MS was still at the Panchayat trying to give a conclusion to this mess along with the panchs.)

Vir enters haveli n rejoices on seeing Pur , he approaches her but is unable to say anything or make an eye contact, he feared himself now as his guilt was eating him away,Vir placed his hand before her n showed her the MS "yo tere jaate wakt gir gya tha"

Pur:(in a depressing voice) Lagta he kanha hi ki bhi yhi marzi he

Vir:(stunned)" yo k keh rhi he Tu baawri... kaisi marzi..."

Pur: vhi Jo aapki marzi bhi he humara Sa...aath...jaisa bhi tha....ab Kuch hi Dino Ka he...hum iss molkki k Bandhan se aazaad hoke yha se chale jayenge humesha k liye isliye iska humare liye koi matlab nhi he!

Vir:(terrified) yo sab k bakke ja rhi he...baawri ho gyi he k !!

Pur: baawre to pehle the Jo Kabhi samaj hi nhi paaye ki Aapke liye hum sirf ek molkki he Aapke bachho ki caretaker usse zyada Kuch nhi par ab Hum or Der nhi Kar sakte!!

Vir: bass Kar !!! Kuch bhi keh rhi he...Tu patni he MERI Mrs. PURVI VIRENDRA PRATAP SINGH !

Pur: (angrily) jhooot !! Agar aapki patni hote to aap humara bharosa Karte naaki humse humara Ch certificate maangte ...Ch certificate to chhodiye Aapne to koi kasar nhi chhodi Hume badnaam Karne ki, kya Kaha tha Aapne BAZARU AURAT ! Kya koi pati apni patni se aise Shabd keh Sakta he...kya koi pati apni patni pe aise ghatiya ilzaam lagata he...kya koi pati apni patni ki jagah ek video pe bharosa karta he!!! Bataiye Hume kon karta he aisa !!!( Pur was now screaming at the top of her voice )

Aapne Hume apni patni sirf Kaha he Kabhi mana nhi...or yeh saaf dikhta he Varna aap humari itni bezathhi Kabhi nhi karte mukhiya ji ! Kam se Kam mukhi hone Ka to farz nibhate humara paksh to sunte par nhi aapko to Hume neecha dikhane se fursat Kaha !!! Aap hi ne sapola Kaha tha na usse, to kyu Kiya uski video pe vishwaass, kyu maan Lia usse sach ??!! Haan hum jaante he humari Galti he Hume aapko sab batana chahiye tha USS sapole par bharosa nhi karna chahiye tha par aapko ek sec k liye bhi yeh kaise laga ki hum USS karan se pya..... Huh kaise soch Lia Aapne yeh !!!!!

Pur looked away as she tried to control the disgust within her, her eyes completely red n face swollen due to flooding tears, she finally uttered her last few words to Vir

Pur: humne socha tha pyar na Sahi Kam se Kam izzat k sahare iss rishte ko nibha lenge par aaj Aapne vo wajah bhi khataam Kar Di Aapne to humari izzat Kabhi Kari nhi par aaj aap apni izzat bhi haar gye he humari nazaron me bas Hume chinta he to sirf bachho ki jab tak hum apna mol or Aapse liye gye saare ehsaan nhi utar dete hum yhi rahenge aapki patni... Maaf kariye aapki molkki bankar Aapke hi kamre me taaki phir se aap humare Ch pe ungli na uthaye...

Pur starts leaving but Vir stops her by grabbing her hand "Ruk ja please me jaanta hu merese bohot badi Galti hui he me gunhegaar hun tera or Tu Jo saza degi mujhe Manzoor hogi Pls MERI Zindagi se mat ja baawri Pls me tere Bina....." Stops as he realised what he was about to say but couldn't say it, he didn't knew what had gone into him that he reacted that way in the party n misbehaved with Pur.

"Aapki yhi saza he aap yeh MS Tod dijiye coz humse yeh nhi hoga...nhi he humme itni strength ki iss Pavitra dhaage ko Tod sake or na hi ab isme Bandhe rehne ki himmat"

Vir: nhi !! Yo dhaaga nhi toot Sakta me isse tootne na dunga chahe Tu Kuch bhi Kar le marte dum tak nhi !!

Seeing the hot tears flowing from his eyes Pur started to weaken she couldn't see him like this but she had no choice, Pur tries to break free from him but he doesn't let her n grabs her even tighter hurting her

"Bas kariye aap !! Or kitta dard denge Hume.." Pur cried

Vir released her on realising that his angst was hurting her but he too was helpless, he needed to hold her tight to hold himself..

"Manne maaf Kar de baawri me tanne chot pohochana nhi Chahta tha" said Vir in a soft helpless voice with hope hanging on the cliff edge

Pur: Galti sirf ek Baar Hoti he mukhi ji or yeh pehli Baar nhi he jab aap Hume physically chot pohocha rhe he or aaj k baad Hume chhuiyega mat coz vo haq aap ussi kho Bethe the jab Aapne Hume thappad maara Pls let me go ! Pleaded Pur so as Vir "agar tanne Jane Diya to MERI Zindagi bikhar jawe gi me tarese vinti karta hu manne Akela chhod k mat jaaaa! Again Vir grabs her arm n pulls her closer but Pur pushes him and tries to run away from haveli...

~~~~~~bgsong - bepanah title track~~~~~~

{Toot ke bikhra pada hoon

Saans lena bhi hai sazaa

Jeene mein ab kya rakha hai

Mar raha sau dafaa}

Vir stares at Pur n holds her hand trying to convey his agony through his eyes, the torturous feeling of letting her go, and the immense guilt he felt whenever he looked in her eyes which were flooding with tears all coz of him n his insecurities but Pur even break frees from his hand, the same hand she once wished to hold forever but now everything was changed n would never be the same

{Kaisi ye saazishein

Roothi hai ranjishein

Leti hai karwatein zindagi

Ab kis mod par aakar ruka hoon main

Na koi raah hai na pataa...}

Pur break frees from him n runs towards the gate Vir is left in a state of shock not able to comprehend anything just looking at Pur running away with hot lava flowing from his eyes and takes 2 step backwards not able to withstand the truth

{Saanson ke sarzamin par barshaat la gaye

Ek jhapki mein tere sau khaab aa gaye

Bepannah... bepanah...

Pyaar hai tumse

Bepannah... bepanah...

Pyaar hai tumse}

As Pur steps out of the gate Vir has a flashback of all their memories in a time lapse n looses it all and throws away the vase n lamp kept on the table

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{Hai alag yeh baat phir bhi

Tu mera na kabhi huaa

Phir bhi maine tujhko apne

Dil mein di hai jagah}

It's raining outside as if the heavens are heavy too seeing Thier unbearable Pain of separation...Pur walks out of haveli reminiscing Thier moments

{Tu mera naa huaa

Ab ye yaqeen huaa

Kya thi meri khata

Tu bataa

Jaaun kahaan main ab

Manzil ka na pataa

Thehra hoon iss qadar tujhmein haan}

And then she remembered all the times Vir had hurt her unable to face reality Pur runs on the road aimlessly and then trips n falls n finally breaks down n screams "viiiiiiirrrrr"

{Saanson ke sarzamin par barshaat la gaye

Ek jhapki mein tere sau khaab aa gaye

Bepannah... bepanah...

Pyaar hai tumse

Bepannah... bepanah...

Pyaar hai tumse}

Vir jolts out as if he heard her cry

"Puuurrrviiiiiii" screams Vir at the top of his voice n then finally breaks down taking the support of the table

Both of them sobbed remembering eo n screamed n howled crying out of other's need for Thier survival.....


Bg song link on next pg

Edited by Piyaazzz - 4 years ago

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