Purvir FF-. moh moh k DHAAGE✨✨|INDEX updated| - Page 5

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Thank you everyone for your appreciation n encouragement without you I wouldn't have been able to write these so a giant group hug from my side 🤗

all you, Piya! 🤗

Take a bow!

Write the next part soon??

Piya yr

Kamal kardiye ap

Kash show iska 10 percent bhi dede Hume

Too good 👏👏

Piyu tu manne yo bata ki ya bhurjali kabse bawari ke itne sage hogaye ki uske rishte k liye pray kar rahe h..🤣or ya bawari kabse angrezi m baat karne lagi🤣🤣

But,jokes apart it was fantastic as usual👏.Tu to pro hoti ja rhi h os likhne m👏

Piyaa🤗🤗

Finally read both the parts..❤️ These are so beautifully written..Loved it

Wish our show shows something like this..Bu you made my weekend🤗

Please sowrite more and more..Dil nahi bharta..😆

Originally posted by: sargamif

Piyu tu manne yo bata ki ya bhurjali kabse bawari ke itne sage hogaye ki uske rishte k liye pray kar rahe h..🤣or ya bawari kabse angrezi m baat karne lagi🤣🤣

But,jokes apart it was fantastic as usual👏.Tu to pro hoti ja rhi h os likhne m👏

@underlined arre college jaati he vo ab🤷 sexy bol Sakti he to angrezzi kyu nhi 💁💁

@bold2 (shinchan ki aawaaz me)ab MERI itti bhi taarif mat Karo🙈🙈

Me to frustration me likh Diya bahut dimag kharab Kiya in makers ne 🤣

Next part kab likhogi 😳

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Next part kab likhogi 😳

Or aage kya hoga pata nhi Bache kuche din me 🤔

Well penned 😊😊pls update soon

Piyu update kro naa plsss. 🥺🥺

Waiting to read the next part

It's been such a hectic week end n today too had barely enough time to rest n breath. Updating part 3 idk how it turned out since Mera sar bhi golmol hoke ghum rha he 🤪 hope u all ll like it feedback is most welcomed 😊😊😊

Part 3~ faasle

(MS returned from Panchayat , other family members were still stuck up in a traffic jam due to the sudden shower. On returning to the haveli MS could see nothing , there was complete darkness only some parts n corners of haveli were seen due to the lightning flashes , he stepped inside the haveli wondering y isn't the lights on n then another lightning flash and he saw Vir laying down on the floor crying profusely..)

ms:(shocked) virrrr.... Comes close to him n tries to get him up "Vir beta k hua !! Tu iss halat me ! Bata manne k hua he !! " Vir was still crying as if he didn't heard ms

Now ms screamed "viirr tanne MERI baat Sunai de rhi he !! Uth ib jaldi" makes him sit on the sofa, turn on the lights , makes him drink some water and wipes his face with a wet cloth "ib bata manne k hue tum dono k beech?" Vir lifts his hand up in which he was holding pur's mangalsutra, ms is stunned...in a fraction of sec he realised the situation n after regaining his lost breath softly spoke to Vir " me tare mu se Sunna Chahta hu k hua... batayega manne ?"

ms to himself "main jaanta hu Vir Tu abhi sirf rone k liye kandha chahta he , tujhe bohot takleef ho rhi he par yo bohot zaruri he"

ms shakes Vir "aise bhoot banke khare rehne se Kuch nhi hoga Kuch to bol!! Or purvi Kaha he ?? Bata manne sab Kuch !! " He kept on repeating for it was now necessary for Vir to speak up else he would never be able to...

" Jaise agar sharir k ek hisse me zeher phel jaaye to usse kaatna padta he Varna Pura sharir zehrila ho jaata he vaise hi aatma k bojh ko bhi utarna utta hi zaruri he Varna insaan khattam ho jaata he ! Kaat phenk iss zehrile hisse ko khud se alag !!" Asserted ms strongly

(Vir's breakdown song suggested "main hoon Na sad version")

Finally after all that push Vir spoke and spoke as if he only in this whole universe was blessed with this Ability n surfaced all his fears, insecurities, miseries and sufferings and the unforgettable guilt n remorse he felt for doubting his baawri

ms: tare Saath itta Kuch ho gya tune Kisi ko Kuch bataya kyu nhi Kam se Kam purvi ne to bata Sakta tha patni he vo Tari !

Vir: kaise batata ms aajtak Kisi ne sikhaya hi nhi! Apne Mann ki Baat kaise Kari jaati he mhare ko nhi pata! Cried Vir , "maa or Sakshi dono hi Bina mhare Kuch Kahe mhare Dil Ka haal samaj jaate the to Kabhi zarurat mehsoos hi nhi hui. Bachpan se aaj tak sirf Garv hi hua he aap sabko mhare upar or aaj Mene aap sab Ka bhi sar sharam se jhuka dia... Kabhi haar Ka swaad chakha hi nhi Mene to... Samaj nhi aa rha kaise react Karu or kisse jaaku kahu ki mujhe sambhalo manne zarurat he kyoki aajtak to me hi sab Kuch sambhalta aa rha hu...

Sab Kuch sambhalne k or humesha jeetne ki horh me main jeena bhul gya ms bhul gya jeena or kya fayida iss sab Ka jab me apna pariwar na Bhacha saka...mhara pariwar to Sakshi k jaane se hi toot gya tha par mhari baawri ne usse phir se joda, pyaar se usse seencha, ek 19 Saal ki ladki ne vo Kar dikhaya bachho k liye Jo unka Baap na Kar saka....or mene kya Kiya ....apna Juda hua pariwar ek Baar phir bikher Diya or iss Baar Uske judne ki koi ummeed nhi dikh rhi he ms !

Baawri ki kya Galti he iss sab me...Sach hi to keh rhi thi vo Mene aajtak usse patni Ka koi haq ya darja na Diya ,ma Ka darja bhi bachho ne khud hi Diya tha usse Mene na...kya Kuch nhi Kiya Mene...koi kasar na chhodi usse chot pohochane ki or aakhir me ab usse mukhiyaini ki izzat bhi na de saka !! Yaad he ms ek Baar gao me development ko Dekh Kar aapne Kaha tha ki "yo to ram rajya he or Tu mhara raam " aaj manne yo lag rha ki me raam se ravan ban gya hu Ms aaj mujhe apni Galt...nhi paapon Ka andaza hua he !

MS who was looking for an opportunity to speak finally got one "me abhi tak chup tha kyoki mhare ko laga tujhe Apne seene se Dard Nikalna chahiye par yo baat taari bikul galat he Tu bhale hi raam na he par Tu Kabhi ravan nhi ho Sakta...tu Vir he Vir or haar ya jeet SE nhi koshish se Zindagi jee jaati he tujhse yo paap to hua he or iska sirf ek hi hal he prayashchit....

Suddenly ms n Vir are interrupted by family members who came from the temple along with Pur who was unconscious!?!? Vir rushes towards her "baawri !! Maa k hua isse !!??"

Prakashi (tensed): pata nhi Vir Hume to purvi haveli k bahar road par behosh padi hui Mili hum sab to khud hi itte hairan pareshan the isse aise Dekh Kar ...

Without wasting a single sec Vir carries a drenched Pur in his arms n takes her to their room....

EVENING... IN PURVIR'S ROOM

Pur had a severe fever n Dr had given strong injections to Pur so that she sleeps through the night. Vir knocks the door n Sudha replies "ab aap aa sakte he mukhi ji humne Pur k kapde badal diye he " Vir comes in n sees his baawri in deep peaceful sleep n wonders the last time he had seen her like this.

Sudha: mukhi ji hum jaante he ki humara yeh kehne Ka koi haq nhi banta lekin hum yeh jaanna chahte he ki itta sab Kuch Karne k baad aap USS Karan ko kya saza denge? Humara to uska naam Lene se hi khoon khaul rha he hum yeh soch bhi nhi Sakte aap pe kya beet rhi hogi !

"USS sapole ko pehle hospital se discharge hone do phir usse Aisi saza dunga ki revari to kya Aas pass k Kisi bhi gao me koi aisa neech kaam Karne ki nhi sochega" asserted Vir with determination as hard as a mountain but now his focus was on his baawri n giving justice to her.he signals Sudha to go n then started changing the cloth on pur's head in regular intervals as she still had temperature. Vir notices pur's head sliding on to the side of pillow n fixes it as a result his hand gets entrapped btw the pillow n her face n he's once again mesmerized, this had become his routine , getting lost in her N smiling like an idiot while going into his own Dreamland but now those dreams...no longer existed as thier place was occupied by haunting nightmares from the day they went to the social party....but these thoughts stand nowhere near his aesthetically beautiful baawri....Vir stared her as if the clock stopped ticking "she even manages to look so enthralling when unconscious" Vir held his breath

{Khayalon Mein Lakhon Baatein Yun Toh Keh Gayaaaa

Bola Kuch Na Tere Samne

Oooo Hue Na Begaane Bhi Tum Hoke Aur Ke

Dekho Tum Na Mere Hi Bane}

Vir caressed her cheeks n fixed her hair strands leaving no chance to admire her angelic beauty n implanted a tender kiss on her forehead

{Afsos Hota Hai Dil Bhi Yeh Rota Hai

Sapne Sanjota Hai Pagla Hua Soche Yeh

Hum The Mile Tumse Na Jaane Kyun

Meelon Ke Hai Faasle Tumse Na Jaane Kyun

Anjaane Hai Silsale Tumse Na Jaane Kyun

Sapne Hai Palko Tale Tumse Na Jaane Kyun}

Vir moves his face away as a lone tear escapes from his eyes even after so much control n removes his hand as her touch made him soo weak he could never imagine.

The urge to love her more n more...to the moon n back...to the end of this universe was getting stronger n stronger with each passing sec n the most amazing part he couldn't control it how much or hard he tries

"Na Vir tera koi haq na he baawri pe....vo tujhse rishta tod chuki he tere liye yo sochna bhi paap he... Par iss Dil ko kon samjhayega yo Dil to sirf tujhse pyaar karna Chahta he baawri tere Saath hasna , Rona ,ladna ,tujhe manana Chahta he , tujhme khona Chahta he or tujhe paana Chahta he ,tere saare aanso peena Chahta he ,tere saare ghav bharna Chahta he..."

{Hooooooohh

Kaise Bataaye Kyun Tujhko Chaahe

Yaara Bata Na Paaye

Baatein Dilon Ki Dekho Jo Baaki

Aankhein Tujhe Samjhaaye

Tu Jaane Na, Tu Jaane Na

Tu Jaane Na, Tu Jaane Na}

"Mhare ko tujhse pyaar ho gya he baawri !"

Vir gently kisses pur's hand n then places it on his forehead n sobs to eternity.....