Index:
Part 1 ~below
Part 2 ~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156231311
Part 3~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156269957
Part 4~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156316311
Part 5~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156401553
Part 6~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156449202
Part 7~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156525339
Part 8~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156589609
Part 9~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156694175
Part 1~ charitra
Disclaimer this is the first time I've written something dramatic 🙈🙈 Pls give honest feedback
Ps:iss OS me sapole ko chhod Kar sabh +ve he I can't digest Prakashi being -ve
"It's the day, the day where all things would end, vir's anguish, pur's fight, kid's miseries,
Villagers' dilemma , Panchayat's confusion and karan's life..." Thought Vir as he could see
Crowd gathering in front of the Panchayat office, the pedestal, yes that pedestal where he used to give justice to people, being setup for.... punishing his own wife!!?? "What kind of nonsense is this!! There , in the middle of the Panchayat hall ,my wife is standing all alone facing trials n m sitting here listening to all that crap about my wife....who on earth does that??!! Y are we even in a Panchayat ?" Vir angrily enquired to himself but no ans came...as his heart was too weak to bear the ans his mind would give, so he brushed that thought away as now it was of no use and sat on the very pedestal awaiting the panchs' decision.
One of the panchs': Mrs purvi VPS you have been accused of adultery. If you have anything to say from ur side now is the time else be prepared for the punishment...
Purvi: hum Apni safayi me Kuch nhi kahenge kyonki usse koi fayida nhi hoga, humare pati hi humpe bharosa nhi karte to hum Aapse kya ummeed rakhe bas itta kahenge ki Hume thoda or wakt chahiye saboot laane k liye kyonki logo ko aankho dekha hi sach Lagta he or Kuch nhi..."
This sentence sent a shiver down vir's spine
"What would he do if purvi is proved innocent, how would he redeem himself...but if purvi is the one ,his heart would straight away die...
Hey raam ji Kisi bhi pati ko Aisi mushkil ghadi me mat daalna " prayed Vir with hope hanging on the loose end of a string which joined them and their relationship THEIR MARRIAGE
"What an ugly middle position was he in"the villagers too mumbled...
this continuous mumbling n Vir intense thought were broken by another panch as he said his next few words leaving everyone present there opening their mouths in wide shock
"Mukhiyain ji aapko pehle hi 1 week Ka time Diya gya tha Apne aap ko innocent prove Karne k liye par aaj bhi Aapke pass koi saboot nhi he Hum bhi nyayakarta panch he or nyaya me Kabhi deri nhi honi chahiye Aapke or mukhi ji k beech iss stress Ka pure gao pe asar padh rha he hum aapko 1 week Ka or time de the he par Uske liye aapko ek pariksha deni hogi....yeh he ladduon se bhari thaal iske 20 ladduon me se 10 me zeher he, agar Aapne Bina zeher waLa laddu kha liya to aap nirdosh saabit ho jayengi or aapko saboot ekhatta Karne k liye 1 week Ka bhi time milega par agar Aapne zeher waLa laddu kha liya to aap gunhegaar he n yhi aapki saza hogi."
"Yeh aap kya keh rhe he panch mahoday!!" Purvir exclaimed together
Panch: par mukhi ji ma sita ne bhi to Agni pariksha Di thi to phir yeh to mukhiyain he
Ya phir aap hi nhi chahte ki mukhiyain ji doshi saabit ho??
Vir : apni zuban pe Lagaam rakhiye panch mahoday... everybody could sense his rising
Anger n became silent...
"Bhale hi ma sita ne Agni pariksha Di ho par hum nhi denge " a roar came and the center of attraction was again mukhiyain " Hume khudpe bharosa he or hum yeh saboot Apne liye nhi dhund rhe balki mukhiyain hone k naate asli gunhegaar ko saza dilwana humara
Farz he Varna Hume Kisi ko Kuch bhi saabit Karne ki koi zarurat nhi he " her every word hit like a stone to Vir "how could she say these things is it that I Didn't matter to Her or unless she wouldn't say these harsh words"
Pur:"HUM YEH LADDU NHI KHAYENGE, chahe Jo ho Jaye! Yeh humara aakhri Faisla he !!
"Mukhiyain ji agar yeh aapka aakhri Faisla he to hum bhi majboor he aapko doshi Karar Karne k liye " said the other panch
Pur looked at Vir who was silent, at least on the outside coz inside him was a storm raging he felt like he has lost his ability to judge the world he had never been so torn in his life , not able to comprehend what was happening nor did he had a say this time coz he wasn't the one to make a judgement but instead was the one who was being judged upon...he closed his eyes n remembered his mom's teachings n then looked at purvi. The only thing he could see in her wide angry eyes was a flickering hope crowded by clouds of bitterness, and the most imp thing he forgot...he could see her purity in her eyes! "They were ever so expressive but how couldn't he read them" he cursed himself
The panch was about to announce Pur guilty suddenly a voice was heard "Ruk jayiyeeeee!
Mukhiyain nirdosh he " everyone stared at the young lady coming forward as she asserted" mukhiyain ki koi Galti nhi he vo video morphed he n USS video me Jo ladki he vo me hu " everyone looses their breath on this confession
Pur: yeh Kya keh rhi ho Naina tum ?
Naina: yhi sach he purvi aap bohot achhi he mukhiyain aapki sirf yeh Galti he ki Aapne karan Jaise ladke par bharosa Kiya vo ek no. Ka jhutha insaan he usne sabko dhoka Diya he !
Panch: dekhiye aapko Jo bhi kehna he saaf saaf kahiye ...
Naina : ji panch mahoday me Karan se bohot pyaar karti thi par usne sirf Mera use Kiya he mukhiyain k khilaaf , usne mujhe kisi bahane se purvi se kapde exchange Karne ko Kaha taaki vo video k scenes shoot Kar sake
Or mukhi ji aap dono ko ek Saath Dekh Kar gusse me apna rishta tod le
Pur is shocked beyond words " yeh Kya keh rhi ho Naina humne Karan pe itta bharosa Kiya or usne ...chiii "
Naina : yhi aapki sabse badi Galti thi aap nhi jaanti mukhiyain Karan ne koi mauka nhi chhoda mukhi ji k Mann me Shak paida Karne Ka... Yeh sab usne aap dono se badla Lene k liye Kiya tha or usne to mujhe bhi chhod Diya usse pata Chala aap investigation Kar rhi he.
Hearing to all the sides and seeing the proofs now Panchayat declares Pur as innocent but it wasn't the end instead the beginning after all of this relavation Pur couldn't control her anger seeing everyone rejoicing "aap sab kis cheez Ka celebration mana rhe he" Pur screamed at the top of her voice "humari izzat ki dhajiya udne Ka" Pur lifts the ladduon Ka thaal throws it on the ground "(pointing at the crushed laddus) humare self esteem ki bhi yhi haalat ki he aap sab ne, pehle humare khud k pati humara bharosa nhi karte , phir vhi humari bezathhi kare , Humpe haath uthaya or to or Hume kya Kuch nhi Kaha , phir aap log Jo humare Peeth peeche baate banate ho kya Hume pata nhi chalta phir yeh laddu or !?!?! Kyu de koi ladki Agni pariksha kyu Hume Apne aap ko har Baar Sahi saabit karna padta he mukhiyain hone k bawajood koi humari izzat nhi karta ! Kyu , kyoki hum ek molkki he !?!? Kya yhi ehmiyat he humari aapki life me Aapse samajdaar to bachhe he Kam se Kam bharosa karna to aata he unko aapki Tarah nhi Jo saabit Karne par yakeen kare gao k mukhiya hone k bawajood Aapne humpe haath uthaya Hume Bura bhala Kaha , Aapne dikha Diya he mukhi ji aapke liye hum kya he ab hum iss Panchayat me ek pal nhi rukenge jaha humari itti bezathhi hui" Pur leaves leaving extreme silence behind her none observed such a rage in purvi's eyes before ,
She Didn't needed an Agni pariksha as she herself was blazing like one....
To be continued.....