A New Dawn - updated part 7, pg. 13 NEW - Page 6

Originally posted by: sami01

aww very nice but will comment in detail when am a bit less overwhelmed.......with emotion .. how i miss my raj...and ofcourse kranti too as there is no raj without kranti and viceversa...

Overwhelmed is a big word Sam 😳. A big 🤗for you.

Don't hurry, take your time and comment.

I just hope you like the story.

Great work Rachana but a short one yaar. All our forum writers are wonderful .

Hi:

Thank you for the update. Its too good :-).

Please do not stop writing, I am glad that you can take time out from your busy schedule and find time to write. When ever I feel low or bogged with too much work I take a break by reading "A new Dawn", it lifts my spirit and am ready to face the world.

Please lekha ta shesh koro :-)

Regards
Water :-)

new part updated, good, saved, para hoye gele aschi with comments.

Originally posted by: Sri_Nidhi

Great work Rachana but a short one yaar. All our forum writers are wonderful .

Sri, thanks for your bit. And yes, everyone is simply wonderful over here.

Originally posted by: watergirl68in

Hi:

Thank you for the update. Its too good :-).

Please do not stop writing, I am glad that you can take time out from your busy schedule and find time to write. When ever I feel low or bogged with too much work I take a break by reading "A new Dawn", it lifts my spirit and am ready to face the world.

It's an honour for me. 😊

Please lekha ta shesh koro :-)

Regards
Water :-)

Water,

I intend to finish the story alright, just don't want to do nainsaafi with it.

Korbo, Lorbo, jeetbo! 😆

Originally posted by: Bonai

new part updated, good, saved, para hoye gele aschi with comments.

Kothaye gelo comments? Me still waiting. 😳

Originally posted by: poetic

PART IV

Shaking his head in disbelief, Raj sat down on the chair nearby. Running his fingers through his hair, he nearly whispered

'Sanjay, I will never forget the sight all my life. Kranti lying injured in that tunnel, bleeding profusely. At that goddamn moment, a realization struck me. That I had to keep her alive, not for her sake, but for my own selfish motives. I realized that I couldn't live without her. All the days of bickering and driving each other insane were like a haze ' they had no shape, no sound, no meaning. Though we were away from each other for so long, yet it's like an unknown bind that we share. I have always known deep inside my heart that she is there for me, maybe not with me, but definitely with me. So the idea of her being away ... '

Getting up from his seat, Raj started pacing frantically,

'I can't let her get away from me Sanjay. I haven't given her anything at all. Even our marriage was a sham. We got married to get even with each other. Look where it has brought us. I couldn't even protect my wife.'

marvelous description ⭐️⭐️⭐️, so passionate yet very natural, good timely realization, just loved it 👏

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He knelt down on the floor, on the side she was facing, his eyes searching for hers, which were now closed, carefully guarded by her eyelashes, resting on her cheeks. Not believing his luck, he traced his finger lightly across her right cheek, almost expecting her to flinch. Tears welled up in his eyes as he felt the warmth seeping through her skin. It was as if his prayer had been answered.

Sanjay and Nirmal stood near the doorway, taking in the scene in front of them. After a few brief minutes, Sanjay pulled Nirmal away. It was like intruding on someone's personal moment.

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describe the feelings of Raj's character so well, last two lines showed how you are taking care of every minute details so beautifully.

I love ur Raj's character its so perfect. We always wanted the shows character to shape up this way, the sensible, mature and normal way. but now we are getting it through the stories. I wish we could have a daily dose of the stories, arrey dont be panic we know how much time & effort needed to present such wonderful writeups. so take ur time.
ei chap r madhye kaj kammo mathae tule abar suru theke parlam, darun darun prasangsha karar bhasa nei. khub bhalo lagche parte.
May be telling u again first Part of the FF is something, i like to read it whenever i get time. It has every sorts of emotion within it. great going dear.

Very well written Rachna... 👏👏👏

poetic it sona pe suhaga
dat ur back
Ur part 4
I really cant express the way u describe
Rajbir feeling his sympathetic understanding, his love,
emotion, passion
I could visualize R feeling when holding his hand
waiting 4 next update soon