A New Dawn - updated part 7, pg. 13 NEW - Page 12

Originally posted by: watergirl68in

Hi:

Hello 😊

Hmmmm that was too good. MRD got refreshed in my memory. God I do miss RK. Wish they would work together once again.

Good good. I know how the scenes keep on refreshing our memory every now and then. Will it ever go away from our minds? 😕 I also miss RK a lot. Wonder when GP will work together again and we will get to see them scorching the screen.

You are a fab write. Thank you for continuing with the story. Looking forward to reading more of it.

Thanks a lot 😃 but what makes me happy if my friends here like the story.

Regards
Water

Originally posted by: Sri_Nidhi

Welcome back Poet. Seeing u after long time. Ur back with bang. Excellent update. I hope all our MRD people are back with their FFs . And i need to complete this . Great going....

Originally posted by: sami01

Rajbir caught her instinctively and brought her closer. Her eyes were closed and there were beads of perspiration on her forehead and upper lips.😳 this instinct in rajbir makes my heart skip a beat ...awww i can imagine....the whole scene in front of my eyes...khamosh nigahein aur .....dil kee batein...kaise sirf apne actions se bata jata hai wo....his care for kranti is so visible .....am loving this raj,,,😳.He carefully swung her up on his arms and started walking towards the room. He suddenly felt something entangling his feet and noticed that a corner of the blanket was still in Kranti's hand, which was dragging as he walked.

His frame shook in mirth as he realized that his wife had not let go off the blanket even when she had swooned; no one could win against her. Even in her illness, she was as persistent as one could be.raj jiti jaldi samjh le uta hi acha hai .....because she is tough and she is very persistent person.........hmm iti sari mystries ..how will lt governor take all this........dekhte hain lets see abhi is baar update jaldi milega na... i hope so .............i am loving mrd ka yeh roop keep it up😳

Originally posted by: Bonai

Aha bahat der aaye par durust aaye, thanks for continuing the story, as usual nice piece of writing, liked the last section most and eagerly waiting for the next one, baki sami ne bahat ache se dil ki baat explain kar diya hai.

Yes, better late than never. 😛 I am trying my best to cook up a storm in the next part. Hopefully it should be posted very soon.

As for Sami, uske liye bhi gaana hai - Jo haal dil ka idhar ho raha hai, woh hal dil ka ... 😆

Aur aur last two lines are superb''

Thanks a lot Dear. 😃

Update asap''

Originally posted by: meftal

thanks poetic for continuing the story,loved the last part as sami already explained,a great piece of writing.

Originally posted by: pennu

Woow Rachna... great update...👏

your governer seems to be very cunning than Raj.... loved the way you wrote... "The Lt. Governor leaned back on his chair and rolled his gold tipped pen in his fingers, measuring Raj in the process"... I don't know why but I liked this line very much.... and the "husband" word came from Kranti's tongue...ahh maza agaya... BTW i wonder how will Raj get her wife safe from that governers claws... will be waiting for the next update.... Thank you so much Poetic....

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Good part Poet !!!!

Loved Raj and Gov meeting .... Thats the Raj we like to see .....

And R & K together awesome as usual ....

Originally posted by: manalee

Hi poet , thanks for continuing.really a very nice update.loved the raj -governor part and good to see kranti and raj together.now i think raj will go against the governor to save kranti.thanks for the update,and please update soon.