A New Dawn - updated part 7, pg. 13 NEW - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: namita25

Rachna .....dear...a million, zillion thanks to you for the update.................................😊😊😊
you really made my day today............................
yaar I wish MRD would have moved this way........................................................😳😳
I like the way you deal with human emotions...........
Raj's dismay is clearly visible................ he regrets his decision of throwing his coat as it could have provided warmth to Kranti................................
he wants to act instantly to save Kranti's life.......................
so decides to visit SN.........................kudos to his decision................................

I was able to visualize the entire episode.............
loved it...............................







Nams,

Am happy I amde your day.

This is Raj's part alright; just wait for my Kudi to bounce back. 😉

Poet
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Ocean_deep

awesome update....
Keep it up!👍🏼



Thanks Ocean! 😛

Hope you keep on reading.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sasha722

lovely short & cute
suspense is killing
waiting for next update
I just love the character of R & K



Hi Sasha 😊

How are you dear?

Abhi tak toh suspense build-up hi nahin hua ... 😉

Wait and watch!

I love RK too.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sami01

'Have faith in me Kranti. I won't let anything happen to you. Please.'

faith is what can guide anyone in time of distress ......its as if he was reassuring himself too......have faith in me kranti,,,,,i feel was more for himself too ...this beleif of taking her out of harm's way thats what i feel could have kept him going.. i can recreate this scene in my mind...rajs concern in serial when she fell of stairs.....way he picked her up and brought her home from temple......very nice rachna i loved this part😳

Yes Sam, that's why we keep on saying, Keep The Faith! 😊 Yes, he needed to be his own support system because the person who could be watching his back, was unconscious.


Teardrops threatened to brim over but he knew that he could not cry now. He had to take Kranti to safety first.

here we feel depth of raj , his strength his inner turmoils.....he knew he cant break down , he had to be strong for two of them he had to save kranti he had to do it for sake of their souls..for sake of their love...love between raj an dkranti ...i feel was no regular love it started from hatered and a very strong attraction plus pull of destiny ........i am able to see that in ur story ...i am sure u will maintain this beauty of relationship.....rk and their love story ...that pull of destiny as in promo ..he pulled her towards him ...this is what i feel its as if we r also pulled into the spiral of their relationship,into the wave of 5 rivers.....this is how their love is to me its the flow of 5 mighty rivers of punjab which pulls everyone along with it such is its strength and such is its intensity and depth......


Yes, Raj is not an easy person to start with. But the best thing is his heart is not complicated. I also believe that Raj and Kranti are destined to be together, but the path is not easy for them. As for the promo, I loved it 😳 and I believe it's one of the classiest promo ever.

He huddled down beside Kranti's prone form, oblivious to everything else, holding her hand in his and staring at her face.....now am anxious how story will move forward from here...lets hope this test of their love makes them more stronger and more close to each other😳

Sam, they are inseparably linked thru' fate.



I am happy you that you liked the update Sam.

The discussion about 'The Land of Five Rivers' will continue later. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Bonai

thanks & its nice of u that u r continuing the New dawn story. I read the story till part 3 at one go, its nice. with the basic idea intact u all r writing wonders for us and kept alive the spirit of MRD in a proper way in the forum. anyone can easily start as many shows as they want with any of the FFs but definitely with GP. part 3 has ended in a crucial position and in the flashback also i think we r going to get a good dose of RK knok jhok. Please update as soon as possible. great job.



Hi Bonai

Shubho Nababorsho,

Thanks for the back-thumping, but it's such a simple thing dear. Nevertheless, I am glad you are enjoying this bit. It's just a small dedication for my sweet friends at the MRD Forum.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello:

I started to read A New Dawn, I must say you write really well, I have read the updates some many times. Everytime I discover a new meaning to MRD your way. please please do complete your "New Dawn' You have portrayed RK the way I wanted them to be in the serial. Its just too good.

Regards
Water 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi:

DIN TA TO SHEI AKI ACHE, ONNO DINER MOTO, TOFAT KEBOL EKTA BOCHOR CHOLE GIYE, NOTUN BOCHOR ELO. NOTUN BOCHOR, NOTUN SHOPNO, NOTUN KORE DEKHA, SHOPNO GULO SATTI HOK EI AMADER ASHA. SHUBHA NABO BARSHO.


regards
Water 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

its awesum yaar............

u hav xplained raj's worry abt kranti vry nicely.............
while reading it 2 scenes came 2 my mind ..........dat vrat wala scene ven raj helpd kranti 2 cmplt her vrat nd ...........
nd another one ws ven both of dem ver helpless dere in d cave nd raj ws holding kranti nd murmuring agn nd agn.........'kranti main tumhe kuchh nahi hone doonga".....................
thanx 4 such a nice update poetic
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: poetic

Part III

Somewhere in Amritsar

Half and hour later

Raj kept on driving wildly, his mind in turmoil. He didn't know what to do. From time to time, he would turn around to catch a brief glimpse of Kranti, to check whether she was fine or not. She was far from being fine, he knew; her precious life blood seeping away, and she was still unconscious, which was definitely not a good thing. He decided to stop for a minute and decide his next course of action.

He stopped near a lamp post and looked around. It was already dusk and there was nothing around. He seemed to be stranded in the middle of nowhere. Alighting from the car, he rushed to the back seat. The dark red splotch on Kranti's left shoulder tore at his heart and he touched the spot feebly. The clot was sticky and warm; her dress had got stuck to the wound and was damp. Raj ran his fingers through his hair, he looked at Kranti's face and felt like howling. Her face had lost colour and her lips were a pale shade of light pink. Raj wished that he had not thrown his coat away; it would have kept Kranti warm at least for some time. He bent down slightly and kissed the top of her head and murmured

'Have faith in me Kranti. I won't let anything happen to you. Please.'

He was distraught when they were caught in that cave remember. He was as frantic ................

Teardrops threatened to brim over but he knew that he could not cry now. He had to take Kranti to safety first.

Good to know that Raj was emotional and caring... not like that Rat....... 😡

Closing the door behind him, he stood outside the car, staring at the horizon in front of him, weighing his options.

Lahore was not a possibility at all; the police would search there first. And Amritsar was a deadly zone for Kranti. Where could he take her now? Rawalpindi was too far away and he would have to travel a lot, which was definitely not good news for either Kranti or him. His mind raced as he tried to remember all his contacts, the one he could trust, while his heart grappled with emotions.

An idea suddenly clicked and Raj felt more alert. It was a risk that he was determined to take. It was the only plan available to him.

Good.........he can think in dire circumstances

He entered the car back again and turned on the ignition, praying to God that He assists him in his endeavor. It was necessary to protect a life.

IT was well in the evening when his car entered the borders of the British division of Jalandhar. It was a great risk he knew to bring Kranti to Jalandhar, since the town was the headquarters of both Jalandhar Division as well as District and was teeming with Britishers all around. Yet this was not going to be the first spot that the British would search for Kranti. They wouldn't imagine Kranti in Jalandhar in the first place. And he knew only two people in this town.

His childhood friend, Sanjay and his wife, Nirmal, who also happened to be Kranti's cousin sister.

Like him, Sanjay also belonged to a family which aspired to be gifted the Raibahadur tag by the British Government and hence when he fell in love with Nirmal and wanted to marry her, his family was not at all happy. Nirmal was a commoner's daughter after all. Also there were certain misunderstandings from the point of view of Nirmal's family too, and Kranti's maternal aunt was not at all happy with the prospect of their marriage. That left the couple with only one choice and that was to elope.

All hell had broken loose in the two households once the news of their elopement and marriage came through, and being the son of such a prominent personality, Sanjay found it difficult to find sustain a livelihood in Lahore. The two had then shifted to Jalandhar where one of Sanjay's friends had offered him a respectable job. Since then, Rajbir had visited the two in Jalandhar twice or thrice; he liked Nirmal and knew that she was the best thing to have happened to his best friend.

And that is where he was presently heading to. Sanjay and Nirmal's safe abode.

Oh!! SN live in Jullundhar ........................

Sanjay and Nirmal's residence

Jalandhar

Around 9 p.m.

Sanjay was sitting in the verandah going through the newspaper once again. Dinner being over, Nirmal was busy inside arranging the kitchen. It was pleasant and a cool breeze was blowing. It was a small house in which they were staying, but both Sanjay and Nirmal were contented. They had seen hard times, and couldn't have asked for more.

This was their favourite time of the day. After dinner, Sanjay would sit down in his favourite chair, overlooking the small garden at the back of their small house, feeling happy and relaxed. Nirmal would join him soon and the two would spend some idle time together, chatting generally about the day and their lives. A time well spent in happiness and laughter, before calling it a day, in preparation of the next day.

It was just another night when a car came and halted in front of their small verandah. Both Sanjay and Nirmal were surprised. Their surprise gave way to amazement and then happiness when they realized that it was Raj's car. Sanjay sprang down the small flight of stairs to greet his friend, who opened the door hastily and climbed out. Nirmal also followed Sanjay down the steps. But they were frozen in their spots when they realized that Raj's dress shirt was soiled with blood.

Seeing Nirmal with Sanjay together, Raj opened the back door of the car, the only words that came out of his mouth was

'Kranti's hit by a bullet. Needs a Doctor now. There's no time to lose.'

Raj sensed complete shock and disbelief in the faces of his friend and his wife. He turned around and his eyes pleaded to them.

The heartfelt pleading spur both Sanjay and Nirmal to action and within minutes, Kranti was inside her sister's household. Raj carefully carried her in his arms and laid her down on the bed. Sanjay ran to find a Doctor while Nirmal washed Kranti's wound cautiously. She was herself shocked and at wits' end. She loved Kranti a lot and was disturbed to see her in such a state. But this was the time for action, Nirmal knew and any sort of weakness on any of their part could prove fatal to Kranti. She needed to change her sister's dress which was heavily blood stained, but Raj just simply refused to budge. He huddled down beside Kranti's prone form, oblivious to everything else, holding her hand in his and staring at her face. Nirmal had never seen him so vulnerable earlier.

Hmmmmmmmm my doe to the rescue.......... good for her.

Was this the same Rajbir who hated her sister in the initial days of their acquaintance?

Yeah .......was it really? 😉

?????.

Correspondence through the heart ..................... all four of them, SN and RK for one another!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
Edited by skeptical - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Poet.........sorry for d late reply😔.........actually I've just read d 1st part only so couldn't comment earlier......will comment later......... I mean after reading d 2nd n 3rd part.
For d 1st part I can say tht I loved Raj's determination to bring kranti back👏 n l
oved his attitude when he said tht he would like 2 stay with his wife😳....(very well said...raj)👍🏼
Very well written dear 👍🏼

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