A New Dawn - updated part 7, pg. 13 NEW - Page 3

aww i lost my huge reply due to my own stupidity.....now i have to rethink what i was writing............

Originally posted by: tetuty66

aha!!......beautiful update Poet!!⭐️
You described wounded Kranti very nicely....👍🏼
Raj's worries were also clearly visible....tears too rolling down...yes he didnt had anytime to waste ......
Glad that Raj quickly remembered SN,so that he can take Kranti to them....
But wont it will be difficult to get a doctor???.....😕😲
umm.....that would be disclosed in next update.....so pls update soon...
I am loving it Poet.....👏👏👏

T2,

Raj didn't cry as yet 😉, I think he is on the verge of doing so though.

Yes it's gonna be difficult to get a Doctor. 😕 Let's see.

Poet

Originally posted by: sami01

aww i lost my huge reply due to my own stupidity.....now i have to rethink what i was writing............

first of all anxiety of raj ...gavie had done wonders during vrat fiasco in showing that urgency and helplessness ..u were able to create same magic............................................his urgency i was able to picture it perfectly....will comment later now am going off to pray as baisakhi satrs here now na.....so will comemnet in detail in a bit

Where are you dear? My YM is 😭 without you.

Happy Baisakhi to your family and you! To your extended family also. 😃😛🤗

You know that's my fave part too and must say, both of them did some acting there. ⭐️

Will wait for your detailed comment though.
😳

Ohooo poetic... along with Raj I am also worried about Kranti... Happy to know that he remembered SN at right time... even if it is little bit risky to took her towards Jalendar.... Hope that Sanjay will manage to get doctor for Kranti.... So our Nirmal is shocked to see this changed Raj... Hope we will also get some chance to see the old Raj and Kranti and their hatered thru Nirmal from you in future parts of this FF.... Thanks for the update... that too soo soon....

Rachna .....dear...a million, zillion thanks to you for the update.................................😊😊😊
you really made my day today............................
yaar I wish MRD would have moved this way........................................................😳😳
I like the way you deal with human emotions...........
Raj's dismay is clearly visible................ he regrets his decision of throwing his coat as it could have provided warmth to Kranti................................
he wants to act instantly to save Kranti's life.......................
so decides to visit SN.........................kudos to his decision................................
I was able to visualize the entire episode.............
loved it...............................

awesome update....
Keep it up!👍🏼

lovely short & cute
suspense is killing
waiting for next update
I just love the character of R & K

'Have faith in me Kranti. I won't let anything happen to you. Please.'

faith is what can guide anyone in time of distress ......its as if he was reassuring himself too......have faith in me kranti,,,,,i feel was more for himself too ...this beleif of taking her out of harm's way thats what i feel could have kept him going.. i can recreate this scene in my mind...rajs concern in serial when she fell of stairs.....way he picked her up and brought her home from temple......very nice rachna i loved this part😳

Teardrops threatened to brim over but he knew that he could not cry now. He had to take Kranti to safety first.

thanks & its nice of u that u r continuing the New dawn story. I read the story till part 3 at one go, its nice. with the basic idea intact u all r writing wonders for us and kept alive the spirit of MRD in a proper way in the forum. anyone can easily start as many shows as they want with any of the FFs but definitely with GP. part 3 has ended in a crucial position and in the flashback also i think we r going to get a good dose of RK knok jhok. Please update as soon as possible. great job.

Originally posted by: pennu

Ohooo poetic... along with Raj I am also worried about Kranti... Happy to know that he remembered SN at right time... even if it is little bit risky to took her towards Jalendar.... Hope that Sanjay will manage to get doctor for Kranti.... So our Nirmal is shocked to see this changed Raj... Hope we will also get some chance to see the old Raj and Kranti and their hatered thru Nirmal from you in future parts of this FF.... Thanks for the update... that too soo soon....

Pen,

Raj's worry is the most normal thing that a person in love will experience. In fact, this makes him almost human.

Yes, I agree it was too risky to go to Jallandhar then.

Future flashbacks will be there for sure, to make the story flow.

THanks for your comments.