FF:Pyaar ka ek un dekha ehsaas(prt-7,updt on pg14) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Arey wah Pari thu ne tho kamaal kar diya yaar....
Go on dear we all are with you....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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pari sweety it was great👏👏👏,mazaa aa gaya.... yaar update jadi karna please .............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waiting 4 new suspense romance activity's off KK n more things to reveal
in the coming story⭐️

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ pennu, namrita, sasha thansk a ton dear thanks n sure will soon update jsut a little bit correction is left with in hour i'll update next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

Aur andar kranti apne hi kayalo main dobhi thi

K: rajveer ka bhi do din se kuch pata nahi hain yaha tak ki RAHIM CHACHA ko aur saatiyo ko bhi nahi pata , pata nahi kaha hain kesa hain, kah batak rah hain , kya kar raha hain

kranti shayad yeh soch soch kar pareshaan ho rahi thi ki use us din raj se who sab nahi kahna chahiye tha jab RAj unke milne ki jaga par aya tha to ??. ?????.

K: tumhe kya lagta hain tum ake hume kaho ge kit um, humare saat ho to hum tumpe viswas kar le ge , tumhare bathe sunkar hum daar jaye ge , mat bulo ki hum KK hain aur hum maut se nahi daar te , hum to maut ko apne hateli main le kar chate hain , bal ki daar te to tum ho ,,, sach se, sach ka sammna karne ki hi,at nahi hain tum me , darr te ho tum chale jayo hum sab main se koi bhi tum par viswaas nahi karne wal.

Aur who kese bhul sakti hain jo rajverr ne usse jo kah ta us ki eke k baat jo uske muu se nikal rahi thi , ki us ka ek ek lawz sidha KRANTI ke dil par ghar kargye the

R: tumhe kya lagta hain ki mujhe mauth ka khuf hain , main jhoot bool rah hu, yeh sach hain ki maine zandagi mine bauth se galtiya ki hain, galt logo ka saat duya lekin main bhi apne desh se utna hi pyaar karta hu jitna kit um karti hoo mere indar bhi jaan dene kaa jasbha hain main mauth se nahi darr ta kisi cheez se nahi daar tha aur janti ho yeh himaat mujjh main kese aayi tumhari waja se , haa sirf tumhari waja se tumhare pyaar ki waja se kyu ki agar us din us goro ne bauji ki basati nahi ki hoti aur tum ne unhe jawaab nahi biya hota to ajj main yeh kabhi nahi jaan pata ki main abhi tak galaat loga kaa saat derah ta

Maine abhi tak jo kiya apne BAUJI ke liye kiya ek achaa beta hone kaa farj nibhaya , lekin kya sahi hain aur kya galt yeh tum ne mujhe sikhaya . aur isley main tumloga kaa saat dena chahta hu, tum saat hogi tab bhi nahi hogi tab bhi main is deh ki aazadi ke liye larooga jo raastha tum ne dikaya haim ab us se pich nahi hatu ga chaye fir akele hi sahi , kyu ki main tum se bauth pyaar karta hu , pyaar karta tha, pyaar karta hu, aur humesha karta rahugaa is baat kaa afsoos muje humesha rahe gaa jis waqt hum eek dosre ka saat denchayi us waqt hum dono akle hain lekin who din jarro aye gaa kRANTI jab hum dono ek saat ho ge zindagi ke har moorpar .

Is baat ko 15 din ho cuke te KRANTI apne kranti kari saatheyo ke saat apne kaam me lag gayii

aur dosri taf RAJ kya kar rah tha , kis se mil tat ha , kya chal rah tha us ke dimaad main who nahi jaanti thi use bas it na pat ta ki ab who bhi ek KTRANTIKARI banchuka ta

magar pichle do dino se jab us ka koi ata pata nahi , who kaha hain , kesa hain, kiske saat hain , kya kar rah ahin , koi nahi jaan ta tha to KRANTI ko fikar hone lagi pahle baar use RAJ ki kami mahsoos hone lagi thi , who yeh samjh hi nahi paarhai thi ki us ke us ki yeh fikar sif apne pati ke likye nahi balki yeh fikar to us ka pyaar hain jo who RAJVEER se karti hain najane kab se par jis ka ehsaas use ab ho raha hain. Lekin ek KRANTIKARI hone ki waja se us ka dimaag use pyaar karne ki ejaazat nahi de rah ta

Dil aur dimaag ki isi jado jahad main thi who mano khud se hi lad rahi hoo tabhi ek baar fir darwaze par das kak huyi

TAK TAK TAK TAK!!!!!!!!!!!

Kranti hosh main ayi aur achaanak se huyi is aawaz se gabraagyi !!!!!!!!!!! Aur samgayi huyi sochne lagi ki

K: itne tofani raat main khun hoga

gabrate huye darwaaza kolaa apne saamne ek kale kapre main liptha 6 feet lambe aadmi ko dekh kar KRANTI daar gayi

K: khun ho tum ? maine pucha khun ho tum jawaab kyu nahi dete ??????

KRANTI ne haath us ki taf baryaa kapra hatane ke liye aur tabhi us admie ne us kaa haat pakar liyaa ?..

K: choro muje choroo aaaaaa choro!!!!

aur jese hi soormachane lagi tabhi us admin e us kaa muh bandkardiya use andar kich har darwaaza band kardiya

isi bich haatha payi main kRANTI ke haat se us aadami ka kapraa hat gaya aur kranti us admi ko dekh kar choak gayi!!!!!!!!!!!!

K: hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh😲

TUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ok guys this is its for today part third will be update soon so plz read and give me ur comments

wating for ur replies

so till then read it and ENJOY IT 😳

Edited by pari29 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THANKS for ur comments 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its superb dear
plz cont soon
thanx
its really very nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lovely Pari read both the parts right now.
Now who is this person who just came in I am sure it is Raj.
Great going carry on soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good one Pari. Loved reading about Raj's transformation into a KK and RK working together.

SO its seems that Raj is back and Kranti has seen him.

Waiting for 3rd part now.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Good one Pari. Loved reading about Raj's transformation into a KK and RK working together.

SO its seems that Raj is back and Kranti has seen him.

Waiting for 3rd part now.

thanks dear i really feel so honored next parst will be soon updated 😊

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