FF:Pyaar ka ek un dekha ehsaas(prt-7,updt on pg14)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi gusy on sepcl. request on tetutly and all my friends i've writeen a FF where RAJ got shot and kranti becom doctor of r very own RAJ are PLz PLZ hold on mujhe maarna mat arte dahut hi damake daar scene hain here it goes pzl give ur true suggestion, comments , anything y want so here is goes the first part pL let me know u like it or not or i futher cont. itor now here it goes::
update on page 1: part 1
pg3: part 2
pg 5: part 3
pg7: part 4
pg 9: part 5
pg 11: part 6
Pg 14 : part 7
ENJOYY
PYAR KAA EK UN DEKHA EHSAAS
Who tofani raat jase kabhi naa katam hone wali raat bangayi thi KI us raat main AAJADI ke saat saat pyaar kaa bhi ek andekha saa rag gul gaya tha .

AAJADI ka josh har tarf dekne to mil raha tha har jaga krantikariyo ki gativediya bargayi thi is ke chate angrejo nahi har taf kalfeu laga rakha tha har gar ki talaashi lijarahi thi, kisi par bhi jara sa shaq hota ho use wahi goli maar di jati

Asi tofani raat main kya ho gaa koi nhi janta tha najane who kaha hain kis haal kiss haal main hain us ka koi pata nahi , lekin main us ke liye itna kyu paresaan ho rahi hoo who jaha bhi jaye kuch bhi kare mujhe kya hum dono ke bich sirf NAFRAT kaa ristha hain aur main sirf us se nafrat karti hu, mera pyaar sirf aur sirf mere DESH ke liye hain to main uske bare main kyu socho lekin do din se us kaa kuch pat nahi pata nahi kaha hain who kahta hain ki who mujse pyaar karta hain aur apne desh se bhi us ne yeh bhi kaha tha ki use maut kaa kauf nahi hain who marne se nahi darta , aur humrai madat karma chata hain kya who wakeyi hi DESH se pyaar karta hain ya yeh bhi us ki koi chaal hain lekin jo maine uski aankho main dekha fir who kyat ha pahle baar maine uske aankho main pyaar dekha wph pyar jo mere liye tha ek esi chamak dekhi jo ek sache Krantikati ek annkho main hoti main desh pe marmitne ki chamak kya who wakyehi badal gaya hain kay uske bauji ki beyjati ne wakyi use badal diya hain kya use sach much sahi aur galat ka fark pata chal gaya hain kya usne jo kuch kiya who sirf aur sirf apne bauji ke liye kiya lekin who hain kaha koi nahi jaan ta yeh hi soch soch kar KRANTI pareshan ho rahi thi ki achana bijali karki aaur tej hawa chalne lagi ki achana se parde se uljkar RAJVEER ki tasveer niche girgaye who gabraagyi mathe par pasenaa sasae tej hoti jaarahi thi ek ajeeb c bechani thi use use RAJVEER ki tasveer utayi gabrahi awaaz main kudse hi baate karahi thi

K: tum kaha ho RAJVEER wapis aajjao jaha bhi ho sahi salaamat wapic aajayo

Tabi LAAL haveli ka pichla darwajaa kulaa kaalle kapre main dakaa huyaa koi dabe paau andar aarha tha chaaal larkarhi thi zameen par khoon tapak rah tha aur who sidaa kranti aur RAJVEER ki kamre ki aur barha achan darwaje par dastak huyi

TAK TAK TAK????

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gusy this just the intro
next part is no process and update soon so pzl guy read and give ur comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Pari
Thanks for starting this story. It seems interesting alright 👏, only one issue -this was a small update.
I hope the next part will be a little bigger. 😉
So kranti is waiting for Rajbir to co me home who has been gayab for 2 days. The story starts post Raju becoming a KK herself so he must be out somewhere with some other KK group in some mission.
Kranti recognises his love for her but what about her? And who is this person who has entered the lal residence through the back door and walking towards RK's room?
Please do update soon. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Hi Pari

Thanks for starting this story. It seems interesting alright 👏, only one issue -this was a small update.
I hope the next part will be a little bigger. 😉
So kranti is waiting for Rajbir to co me home who has been gayab for 2 days. The story starts post Raju becoming a KK herself so he must be out somewhere with some other KK group in some mission.
Kranti recognises his love for her but what about her? And who is this person who has entered the lal residence through the back door and walking towards RK's room?
Please do update soon. 😊

thanks dear for liking it and wait karo yaar sabar ka fall mitha hota hain but promise jada wait nahi karwayo gii pahle update shotr isliye thi ki i doubt ki pata nahi ki pasand aayea yaa nahi agar nahi aya to jada likna nahi pargaa 😆
anyways lot of suspese , excitment , KK activites and lots of romances is coming to ur ways
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well then pari bring it n. I am sure all our friends will love reading it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wah pari dear bahut achha abhi jaldi mein hoo wapas aakar aur praise karungi

bye n keep writin dear muaahhh👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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every one seems to be on a writing spere in this forum what a fantastic writers u all r yaar now how much can one praise all u writers out there yaar👏 simply great. plz update soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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vry nice yaar.......
i m sure woh rajveer hi hai par scene aage bhi continue karo,..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx
its really beautiful
plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was fantastic dear👍🏼. Please continue writing.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ potice, simran, ekta, shuti, sirf thanks a ton dear for ur commets , well next part is coming soon so for mean while peatience coz next part is going to be more excited '' and i really want to thank all my frimnds its all becouse os u guys i'm start riting dear , coz every body is soooo talented over there
so once again THANKS guys

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