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Jessie

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Both the parts(4 & 5) are awesome!!!!!!!!
Dinner conversation was really funny & nice...😆
Woww...atlast Mayank saw dreams abt him in Nupur's eyes...
Thanks a lot for pm..😊

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

thank u guys.🤗..and please all of u who want my PMs please sent me a buddy request because i am not able to sent buddy requests from my account...some stupid errors coming..so please u will have to sent me a buddy request..😊

PART 6:

For the first time mayank was afraid to see into nupur's eyes..

M..ahh..mera mtlb hai k main hoon na, main is k liye dulha dhoond lon ga..ap batayi aunti ap ko kaisa larka chiye.

SB...bus koi aisa jo is jaisi pagal larki ko samjh sake.

N..maa plz itna filmi hone ki zarorat nahi hai

SB...is main kiya filmi hai..tum batao mayank

M..aunti ap isey choriye...main dhoond lon ga..

N...v funny...

Rest of the dinner was in silence, then mayank left and he didnt looked into nupur's eyes again. It took him a lot of time to normalize and he did was able to forger that dream he saw in nupur's eyes.

Next day both pf them were having coffee in thier common room when mayank started his matrimonial service

M..tu nupur batao tumhe kaisa larka psnd hai?

N..mayank please...ab muhje clg main ye sab nahi chaiye

M..oh ho batao na...aisa tu ho nai sakta k tum ne kabhi apne life partner k bare main na socha ho...

N..main ne kabhi nahi socha

M..ye mumkin nahi hai..her larki sochti hai..

N..Haan per main baqi larkyon jaisi nahi hon...

M...pata hai..per ho tu larki hi na..

N...tumhe bht pata hai larkiyon k bare mian..

M..areye mujh se ziada kisi ko nahi pata hoga...pata hia morena main jab meri farewell party hoyi thi tu mre dosto ne mujhe degree di hi...MASTERS IN GIRL's STUDY.."

N...what...??

Nupur started laughing..

M..tumhain yakeen nahi a raha...main kal la k dikhao ga tumhe..

N..nahi thek hai...

M...acha batao na...kaisa larka psnd hai..

N..mayank mujhe nahi pata..

M..lekin

N..acha maa ne tumhe merey lliye larka dhondney ko kaha hai na..tu tum batao tum merey liye kaisa larka dhondho gey..

M..mian?...well main tum tmhare liye iss duniya ka sab se best larka choose karon ga..koi aisa jo tumhain khud se bhi ziada pyar kare ga..

Mayank stood up an started walking in the room and nupur was looking at him

M...koi aisa jo jo tumhare bolne se pehle tumhari her baat samjh jaye ga...koi aisa jo samjh sake k akhir tumhare dil main kia hai...koi bht he strong jo tumhare her dar ko khatam kar de...tumhari life main sirf khushi bhar de...

N...bus bus..itna filmi nahi chaiye mujhe..

M..sorry!..main ne tum se pocha tha na k tumhe kaisa larka chaiye, lekin tum ne nahi bataya, ab tu tumhe meri marzi se hi shaadi karni pare gi..ik aisey larke se jo tummhari ankhen parh sake

N..mayank kisi k ankhen nahi bolti..

Mayank came near to her and directly looked into her eyes

M..lekin tumhari ankhen baat karti hain nupur...

This was the first time nupur saw into his eyes and she was MESMIRIZED....

do comment..😊

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago

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@Jenny..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

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yipeeeeee i m first

ur part was awesome thrie cute talks eyelocks was just

prefectly writen

Edited by jainypatel - 15 years ago

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nerdndproud

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

its awesome.........i send u buddy request plz accept that nd don't forget to pm me coz i love ur os nd eagarly waiting for next part......

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Fiza

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

brilliant part<5 n 6> mehak

totally amazing work

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

beautiful update mehak
love mayur convo
awesome part
keep it up

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

thank u for sending me the requests guys...😊and wow above thousnd views...🥳

PART 7:

mayank and nupur were looking at each other when the bell rang, both of them were a bit embarrased but then went for thier class.

At off time, mayank and samrat were about to leave on thier bike when mayank saw nupur standing on the road, waiting for an auto.

M...samrat neche utar..

S..kia?

M..bike se neche utar..

S..lekin ku?

M...nupur ko auto nahi mil raha tu main usey ghr chorne ja raja hon.

S...bhai tum phir se..

M..samrat tu utar raha hai ya tujhe neche phenkon..

Samrat got off from the bike

S..acha tru larki k liye mujhe chor k ja rahe ho?, usey auto nahi mil raha tu mujhe kaise miley ga?, mian kaise ghr aaon ga?

M..wo tu khud soch.

Maynk stoopped his bike in front of nupur..

M..at ur service ma'am

N...mayank tum..

M...yar tum mujhe dekh k her waqt shock ku ho jati ho?..khair chalo betho main ghr chor deta hon..aur is se pehle k tum formalities shoro karo main bata don k main nahi mano ga...so sit...

Nupur knew mayank wouldnt listen, so shesat on the bike.This was the first time she was sitting on the bike, she wa a bit scared and was confussed whether to put her hand on his shoulder or not, she was thinking

M..mujhe pakr lo, nahi tu gir jao gi..

It felt as if maynak meant something else but she put her hand on his shoulder

N..waise roz tu tum gari pe atey ho?

M..haan aj waise hi bike ka mood hua tu bike pe a gaya..

Mayank dropped nupur at her home and also went to meet shilpa but soon came out where he heard some vioces

yaar aj tu kisi larke k sath ayi hai...waise hai tu bht kamal ki item, haan lekin us ki borhi maa hai na sath us k...burhiya tapak jaye phir tu rasta saaf hai...arey ik dam tekhi mirchi hai...aur tujhe tu pata hai mirchi ko tu dekh k hi pyass lag jati hia tu kha k kaisa laga tha..

This was the limit, mayank didnt say anything to them but gave those boys a good dose of fight, all of them dissappered.

Next day nupur in college she saw a bandage on mayank's hand

N..ye kia hua?

M..wo darwaze main hath a gaya tha...

N..hath a gaya tha ya kisi pe hath uthya hai...

Mayank recognized the tone of her voice..

N..main ne sab kuch khirki se dekh liya tha...tum apne ap ko samjhte kia ho?, kia zaraot thi itna hero bane jki..in sab batton ko ignore nahi kar sakte they

M..dekho nupur yahan mumbai main ye sab ignore karte hon gey, lejkin hamre moerna main kabhi ye sab ignore nahi hua..

N..mayank tum itney emotional ku ho jate ho..main apni problems khud solve kar sakti hon

This line really made mayank loose his temper

M...tum apne ap ko kia samjhti ho nupur?, ho kia tum...bolo ho kia tum,?, tumhe lagta hai k sari duniya ka muqbala akele kar lo gi...pata bhi hai ye duniya kaisi hai...sari dunia kia tum ik insaan ka bhi muqbala nahi kar sakti...tum ku wo sab pretend karti ho jo tum ho hi nahi....bht kamzoor ho tum nupur...bht kamzoor.

These were the words she never wanted to listen from anyone..this reality she never wanted to face..

N..bus mayank, u have no right to talk to me like this..

M...i know i dont have a right but need to understand urself atlest..

Nupur wanted to say more but her tears didnt ket her speak, mayank wnate to say something but Nupur went from there, he even left the college and reached home.

Her neighbour told he that her nmother was taken to the hospital. She rushed towards the hospital and there she saw that her mother was admitted in the CANCER WARD...she felt the whole world shkaing .she rushed into the ward and was bout to say something when shilpa said

SB..mayank ko bulao nupur...

do comment..😊

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago