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brilliant update
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loved it do continue soon

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wowowowo amazing part plz cont soon

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Awesome part!!
Plz pm me next time when u update it...
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thank u guys...🤗

PART 4:

Mayank and nupur had really become good fellow beings of each other, but not formally friends. Both of them co odinated with each other academically and now nupur was used to mayank's habit of bringing coffee for her, she had also stopped resisting because according to her she had made her piont clear and mayank was just being sweet. One other thing which nupur had become used to was the welcoming smile mayank used to give her but that day when she entered mayank smiled but very weakly

Nupur was shocked.

N...hii

M..hi..

Nupur was really amazed on mayank's behaviour. Both of them quietly attended thier calss, then they had a free period and nupur as ususall went to h the common room where mayank brought coffee for her. Today he was not at all being naughty or lively. He quietly drank is coffee..
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N..mayank

M..haan?

N...tum thek ho na?

M..HAAN...MUHE KIa HONA HAI?

N..nahi aj tum kuch alag lag rahe ho, tum disturbed ho..

M..nahi kuch nahi..

N..mayank agr tum nahi batana chate tu thek hai, after all i dont have a right to interfere.

M...aj meri maa ki barsi hai...

N...oh..

M...aj 15 saal ho gaye hain meri maa ko mujhe se door gaye hoye....

Nupur was very puzzled, she didnt knew how to talk to mayank, he was looking so sad, but she tried her best to console him

N...mtlb tum sirf 4 saal k they jab

M..haan..

N...tum tumhe un ak chehra yaad hai

M..haan bilkul yaad hai...maa ko kabhi koi bhol sakta hai...lekin smarat ko yaad nahi hai..

N..oh...tu tumhe aj samrat k sath hona chaiye,..

M..nahi wo aj sara din mandir main rehta hai, wahn pe pooja karta rehta hai...mujh se nahi hota ye sab, aisa lagta hai k ku bhagwan ne maa ko chen liya... is liye her saal main akela hi hota hoon, aur akele hi maa ko yaad karat hon..

Nupur could see mayank's teary eyes, but she had never seen mayank like this

M..acha ab main ghr chalta hon, mujh se baqi ki classes attend nahi hon gi

He stood up and so did nupur.

Mayank looked at nupur, she wanted to say something but was not understanding how?..but simply looked into her eyes and again he understood that she wanted to console him

M...its ok nupur...koi baat nahi..tum jo kehna chati ho wo mujh tak phoch gaya hai..

Mayank left and nupur stood there thinking anout myank

Nupur went to the libarary but couldnt concentrate, she understood that she will not b able to attend any class today so she also also went to her home

Shilpa Bhuashan was shocked to see her..

SB..kya hua..aj itni jaldi..

N..haan maa bus aise hi, concentrate nahi ho raha tha..

SB..kia hua?

Nupur placed her head on her shoulder

N..maa aj mayank bht udaas tha?

SB.. kiya hua?

N..aj us ki maa ki barsi hai, bht yaad kar raha tha unhain

SB..oh, kab death hui un ki

N...15 saal pehle...sirf 4 saal ka tha mayank aur keh raha tha k usey us ki ma ka chehra yaad hai

SB..haan beta maa ko bhi kabhi koi bhol sakta hai..lekin beta aj tumhe us k sath rehna chiya tha aur tum jaldi ghar a gayi..

N...maa wo bhi chala gaya hai...keh raha tha k us ka bhai bhi mandir chala jata hai...wo akela hota hai aj k din...mujhe bht fiqr ho rahi hai us ki...pata hai maa wo itna khush rehta hai her waqt k usey aise dekh kar ajeeb lag raha hai...i hope wo thek ho

Shilpa bhushan was slighlty observing changes in nupur..

SB..tu usey ik phn kar lo

N...per main kia baat karin gi

SB..wohi jo muhe se kar rahi ho..

Nupur took out the phn airy and dialed the number

M..hello.

N..umm mayank,..main nupur..

M..haan nupur..

Nupur was looking at her mother constantly

N.. main keh rahi thi k tum thek ho na

M..haan nupur...dont worry

N..nahi wo

Shilpa took the phn from nupur

SB..hello beta main nupur ki mama bol rahi hon shilpa

Mayank was amazed for a moment but was really pleased to hear such a sweet vioce

M..nameste aunti

SB..beta nupur tumhari bht fiqr kar rahi thi...bol rahi thi k tum bht udaas ho is liye maij ne us ko phn karne ko kaha per tumtu jante ho na isi...

M..*laughs*..haan aunty...janta hon..koi baat nhai...mai thek hon

SB..dekho beta maa ki kami tu koi bhi pori nahi kar sakta per itna zarror keh sakti hon tumhain kabhi bhi maa ki kami mehsoos hogi tu tum mujh se baat kar sakte ho

Maynk was so touched by the warmth in her vioce

M..thank u so much aunty

SB..beta tum aj dinner pe ku nahi a jate

Mayank and Nupur both were shocked..

M..nahi auntuy main

SB..dekho beta nupur ne mujhe batay ka tum aj akele ho,,a jao na beta isi bahane main bhi tum se mil lon gi..akhir dekho tu sahi wo hai kaun jis ki nupur itni tarif karti hai..

Shilpa knew it would work

Nupur was hocked at her mothers statement and so was mayank.

M...thek hai aunty..main a jata hn

Mayank didnt knew why did he said yes, may be bcz nupur's name or because he really needed complany or both he couldny undertsand

On the other hand nupur was so so confused, Mayank was first time coming to her home...she was blushing unneccasilry a

and her mother was noticing all...

do comment..😊

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great update dear...............loved the way u r changing nupu's characterr..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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love;ly update dear
really very nice
if u anything write on mayur plz do pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 4 ws awesum re!!👏

thnx 4 d pm!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
very nice part plz cont soon
thx alot for the pm

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