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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am extremely sorry guys i could not update yesterday bcz my internet was not working😡, but now everything is fine, and here i am with my next part😃, and thank u all for ur appreciation..

PART 10:

Mayank and nupur were feeling awkward , and both of then were surprised on thier own feeling, it was the first time when both of them were feeling shy,.

Nupur went to the cupboard and took out her clothes and and headed towards the wash room, Mayank was staring her..

M..nupur ye kapre?

N...ye gunjan k hain, us ne diye hain..

M..Oh..ok, main be change kar leta haon.

He took out his clothes and nupur was surprised..and now she was staring him

M..kiya hua

N...umm...nai kuch nai, thek hai pehle tum change kar lo..

M...pehle ?...nupur sath sath b kar sakte hain.

Nupur was shocked..

N..sath?

M..haan ,,,kyun?

N..umm mayank ..nai wo rehne do, mujhe change nai karna..

M...kyun nai karna..

N..mayank...wo ...tum..

Nupur was fumbling when mayank was struck with something..

M...ik miniute, tum kiya soch rahi ho nupur?...ye suite hai, aur yahan do do washrooms hain...

N..haan?...oh haan!..nai kuch nai..main kuch nai soch rahi thi...

Nupur rushed towards the wash room and locked the door..

Maynk shook his head in disbelief and smiled..

M...ye kabhi nahi badle gi, hamesha ghalat sochti hai..

Nupur came out and mayank had already changed and he was standing in the window looking outside, nupur pulled her wet hair on one side and went to the window, where mayank held her hand, this touch and moment was so awaited that nupur couldnt stop her tears and again hugged maynk.

M...kiya hua nupur?

mayank tried to drew nupur part to look what happened, but nupur resisted..

N..thori dair aise hi rehne do mayank, mujhe mehsoos karne do k main such much tumhare itne pas hon.

Myank hugged her back and after three years she had the feeling of being protected and most of all he had the feeling of bieng close to mayank.

Thier hugged told each other how much they had missed each other and how they lead their life away from each other...they needed no words..

Nupur fianlly after sometime gianed the strength to open her eyes and believe her luck...

M...thek ho?

N...haan..

M..acha nupur!..umm sari raat yahin khare rehna hai?

N...huh?...ahhh nahi..

Both of them moved , but mayank moved towards the bed and nupur moved towards the sofa, and when they realised that they were heading to different "destinations", they turned towrads each oither..

M...kiya?

N...nahi wo mujhe laga tumhe bethna hai tu sofa!

M...bethna hai?...BY GOD nupur!

he started laughing

N...kiya?..hans ku rahe ho?

M..nupur jab main seedhi seedhi baat karta hon tu tum hamesha ghatlat sochti ho, aur jab tumhain sach main hint deta hon tu tumhain kabhi samjh nahi ati...

Nupur couldnt help smiling..

N..nahi...wo..

M...acha tu samjh ati hai..

Nupur was blushing

N...mayank tum..

Nupur was struggling with her words when suddenly mayank picked nupur in her arms.,..Nupur gave mayank a surprised look

M...*with all the innocence on his face*..kiya hua?

Nupur was blushing

N...kuch nahi,.

Myank took her to the bed, removed a bit of hair from her face, nupur's eyes were closed, and was about to kiss her when he himself couldnt belive his luck that nupur was so close to him

M.. I LOVE U NUPUR..

nupur opened her eyes, mayank had said I LOVE U to her several times, and she remembered each and every one of them but this time his voice had undefinable love and pain, thorugh which both of them had gone through, Nupur kissed his teary eyes and then both of them just melted into each other arms.

It was nothing physical , it was all spirtual, the it seemed as if they were penetrating into each other's soul...it was not a physical contact it was pure, passionate LOVE...


do comment...😊
Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
lovely update mahek cant wait to read da part .............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesum update ji!!👍🏼👏
i just luvd it!☺️☺️☺️
thnx 4 d pm & pls update soon!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
awesome update
luved it 😳
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
update soon
and yeah dont forget to add mayur
romance in next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
wonderful update!!!!
Thanks for the pm..
continue soon..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Beautiful update Mehak...thnx 4 the PM.........:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Brilliant update yaar jaani
gr8 i luvd it
do cont soon
luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u guys...😊

PART 11:

Samrat was having coffee in his room when his door knocked

S..NUPUR!..

N..main ja rahi ho samrat

S..kahan ja rahi ho?

N...samrat main JD k pas ja rahi hon

S..nupur lekin..

N..samrat please, agr main thori dair main wahan nahi phonchi tu wo zarror mujhe dobara dhondhna shoro kar de ga, aur is waqt per hum us ka mujhe pe shaq afford nai kar sakte...

S...lekin nupur mayank?

N...wo so raha hai, is liye main jaldi se a gai hon, agr wo uth gaya tu mujhe jane nahi de ga..
.tum please mayank aur gunjan samjha dena, main phone karo gi..

S...apna khayal rakhna..

she smiled and left when gunjan came from behind..

G...good morning samrat..ummm main soch rahi thi k di aur jiju ko utha den, phir hum logo ko plan b karna hai k agey kia karna hai..

S...haan, lekin chasmish nupur chali gayi hai..

G...kahan?

S..JD k pas

G...JD k pas mtlb?

S..chasmish us ka jana zarrori tha, wo nahi jati tu JD ko shaq ho jata, us ne kaha hai k wo sham ko milne aye gi..

G...di tumhre samne chali gayi aur tum ne usey jane diya?

S..chasmish, tum samjh nahi rahi ho..

G.. jiju ne usey nahin roka?

S..mayank ko bhi nahin pata, wo so raha hai..

G,..tabhi!..warna jiju kabhi usey nahin jane detey, jaise tum ne jane diya...

She left and samrat was there standing and gunjan's words were ecohing in his mind!!

Nupur reached JD's home..

JD.. tu a gayi Mrs. Sharma ?

N... a gayi hon, tu hi nazr a rahi hon na!...

JD...hmmm...ye bhi hai....tu kaisa kaisa guzra kal ka din?

KAL KA DIN!...these words brought all the moments of yesterday in her mind, samrat's smile, gunjan's hug and mayank's closeness, tears dewelled in her eyes

JD... bhikran ban k bethna kafi mushkil hoga na, tumhare ansoo bata rahe hain k kaisa guzra hoga tumhara din..

He was laughing loudly and nupur was happy on his condition, in three years for the first time nupur was enjoying JD's laughter.

N...wahan police ko tumhari dealing company pe shaq ho gaya hai, aur shiyed un k pass mera photo bhi hai...agey kia karna hai mujhe bata dena

This gave JD a shock, now he had to think something concrete, nupur was her most effecent dealer..

N..aur haan, main apne outhouse main ja rahi hon, subha tak mujhe disturb mat karana, pehle hi main tumhjare liye bht overtime kar chuki hon..

Gunjan ran towards mayank's room and started banging it, mayank woke up and saw nupur was not there, but he opened the door

M...gunjan kiya hua?..ro ku rahi ho?

G..jiju samrat ne di ko wapis JD k pas bhej diya hai...

Samrat entered.

S..mayank actually nupur ki baat thek thi, chasmish samjh nahi rahi hai..

G,....tum samjh nahi rahe ho, aur samjho gey b kaise, di tumhari lagti kiya hai..

M...GUNJAN!...please...

S..its ok mayank!..

M...lekin samrat tum ne usey jane ku diya?

S..mayank is waqt JD ka shaq him afford nahi kar sakte...

M...haan per nupur mujhe bata tu sakti thi..

S..us ko pata tha tum utho gey tu jane nahi do gey..

M..haan shiyed!..per agey k barey main sochna pare ga., us ko wahan se nikalna hai

G...di JD k khilaf ghwahi de sakti hai k wo drug dealing karta hai.

S..ye itna asaan nahi hai..

M..samrat thek keh raha hai, aur agr JD arrest hua tu nupur b arrest hogi..

G...ku..?

M... wo JD ki main carrier hai, court ko kaise prove karen gey k nupur apni marzi se ye sab nahi karti..majbori main hi sahi NUPUR DRUG-DEALING KARTI HAI!

and for the first time all three of them realized that it was not that simple!!...

do comment..😊





Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome <3 Update soon =)

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